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中考书面表达题贴近学生实际生活，紧密联系热点话题，写作话题真实从而让考生有话可写。书面表达情景实用性程度高，各地试题都符合同学们的认知水平和日常生活经历，题目设计关注学生成长，注意培养其良好的道德品质和健全的人格。北京冬奥会无疑是今年的火爆热点之一。
考点详解
社会主义核心价值观和贴近学生学习和生活的话题是近几年主要的写作内容。要想写出好文章必须提高审题能力。
第一，审清楚要点中考作文一般要写两三个要点.不要漏掉任何一个∶
第二，审清楚需婴的时态，一般要用一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时三个时态;
第三.审清楚要使用的人称，在写作中要正确使用人称代词的主格、宾格，以及物主代词.特别注意人称、数和性别。
写文章首先要具有统一性，即所写内容要紧扣主题.注意人称、时态和文体一致，详略得当。其次还要注意文章的连贯性。文章的前后要连贯，衔接要自然，要学会用恰当的句子和逻辑关系组织材料，使文章中心突出。恰当地运用连接性词语也会使文章很好地起承转合，层次清楚，内容流畅。另外，恰当使用名言警句也是提分的好方法。
真题再现
一、电子邮件
1．（2021·内蒙古呼和浩特·二模）根据中文和英文提示，用英文写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的邮件。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你叫李华，你们学校为配合北京申办冬奥会，倡导人人都做文明中学生。请你根据以下提示，给你的英国笔友Peter写一封邮件，告诉他你认为做个文明中学生什么是重要的，你通常是怎么做的，以及你的感受。
提示词语respect, say hell t, wait in line
1.What is imprtant fr a middle schl student? (Being plite t ther? Fllwing rule? …)
2. What d yu usually d?
3. Hw d yu feel?
Dear Peter,
Hw is it ging? At my schl we’re talking abut what we shuld d t be a gd student. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Anything new at yur schl?
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Peter,
Hw is it ging? At my schl we are talking abut what we shuld d t be a gd student.
T be a plite middle schl student, I think we have t d a lt f things. First, it’s imprtant fr us t speak plitely. We must respect the thers. Secnd, we can’t thrw rubbish everywhere. We must thrw them in the rubbish bins. Littering is nt a gd habit. Every time I g t the park, I always pick up the litter and put it int the bin. I think if we all d s, the wrld will be cleaner. Anther imprtant thing is that we must fllw the rules. There is n dubt that waiting in line is the imprtant rule. I never rush int the bus. Waiting may be a happy thing. I ften feel happy when I d smething that is better fr us. I think being a plite middle schl student is prud.
Anything new at yur schl?
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。作文内容围绕你认为做个文明中学生什么是重要的，你通常是怎么做的，以及你的感受三个方面展开描写。
2.写作指导：本文用第一人称来写作，时态采用一般现在时为主，短文的开头和结尾已经给出，在中内容具体说明做个文明中学生哪些事情是重要的；自己通常怎么做一名文明学生；以及自己做一名文明学生的感受。叙述完整，条理清晰。
2．（2021·北京海淀·二模）假如你是李华，你的美籍朋友Peter得知北京奥组委正在招募2022年北京冬奥会（Beijing 2022 Winter Olympic Games）志愿者，他发邮件邀你共同申请。请你写一封邮件回复：是否同意，以及你的理由。
提示词语：apply（申请），be gd at, cmmunicate, have a try
提示问题：·Will yu jin Peter in applying fr a vlunteer psitin?
·Why r why nt?
【答案】[例文]
Dear Peter,
It’s always great t hear frm yu. I’m mre than happy t jin yu in applying fr a vlunteer psitin in Beijing 2022 Winter Olympic Games. Yu knw, I’m gd at English, which makes it pssible fr me t cmmunicate with peple frm ther cuntries. I’m really lking frward t the unique experience.
Let’s have a try. And I can’t wait t discuss the applicatin details with yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读：本题为电子邮件写作，要注意标准的电子邮件格式。题目已给出问题提示，要求以提示为思路，写出回复彼得关于冬奥会志愿者申请邀请的邮件。
2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一人称，时态应用现在时。写作内容大致分为两部分，即你是否接受他关于冬奥会志愿者申请的邀请，以及你对此的理由。文章应层次分明，思路清晰，态度鲜明，不要出现单词拼写及语法错误。
二、书信作文
3．（2021·青海西宁·中考真题）假如你是王宁，你想成为2022年北京冬奥会（Winter Olympics）的志愿者。请用英语给组委会写一篇80词左右的自荐信。开头已给出，不计入总词数。文中不得出现真实校名和姓名。
内容包括：
1.个人信息；
2.自身优势（爱好特长、经历等）；
3.你将为此要做的准备；
4. ……
Dear Sir,
I have heard that sme vlunteers are wanted in the 2022 Winter Olympics in Beijing.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Dear Sir,
I have heard that sme vlunteers are wanted in the 2022 Winter Olympics in Beijing. I am writing t apply fr a psitin.
My name is Wang Ning, aged 17, a senir high schl student. My favurite sprts are skating and swimming. It helps me have a keen mind t reprt smething at a fast speed and have a strng bdy t wrk day and night. I want t get the wrk f interpreter, because I’m gd at Chinese and English. What’s the mst imprtant is that I used t be a vlunteer fr the University Games, which gives me a lt f experience related t games. If I get the wrk, I will wrk hard, make sme cntributin t 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games.
I am lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Wang Ning
【详解】
1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示内容，写一封自荐信，申请成为2022年北京冬奥会的志愿者，要包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态多采用一般现在时，讲述经历时用一般过去时。要在信件中写清楚自己的个人信息、优势、将会做的准备，并适当补充要点。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
4．（2021·河北·石家庄创新天卉学校八年级期末）2022年将在北京和张家口举行冬奥会。为了确保冬奥会(Winter Olympic Games)圆满成功，组委会发起了志愿者(vlunteer)招募活动。假如你是第四中学的学生李华，希望能成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信，表达你的意愿。
内容提示：
1.Intrduce yurself；
2.Yur advantages(优势)；
3.Yur prmise.
要求：
1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2.词数80个左右；
3.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇：fluently流畅地；athlete运动员；be suitable fr适合
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I’m a by f furteen years ld frm N.4 Middle Schl. I wuld like t wrk as a vlunteer fr 2022 Beijing-Zhangjiaku Winter Olympic Games.
My spken English is gd and I can cmmunicate with freigners fluently. What’s mre, I have ther advantages. I’m especially fnd f sprts, familiar with Beijing, gd at cmmunicatin and always glad t help thers.
I’m willing t prvide the best service fr every athlete in Winter Olympic Games. Therefre, I think I’m suitable fr serving the Games.
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd ffer me the chance t be a vlunteer. Thank yu!
Yurs faithfully,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求以李华的名义向冬奥会组委会写一封申请成为冬奥会志愿者的申请信。内容包括：个人信息、自我优势及承诺。
2.写作指导：文章以一般现在时、第一人称为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时按要点分段叙述，第一段介绍个人信息及主要意图；第二段介绍自我优势；第三段作出承诺；最后一段可用申请信常用语结束全文。
5．（2021·江苏南京·八年级期末）
1. 对所有要点进行陈述，详略得当，并适当发挥。
2. 词数 80 词左右，文章开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
An applicatin letter
Dear Sir/Madam:
I’m writing t apply fr the vlunteers fr the 2022 Olympic Winter Games Beijing. I think wrking as a vlunteer means a lt t me._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank yu fr yur kind attentin and I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu sn.
Li Ha
【答案】例文：
Dear Sir/Madam:
I’m writing t apply fr the vlunteers fr the 2022 Olympic Winter Games Beijing. I think wrking as a vlunteer means a lt t me.
All ur Chinese are hsts fr this special event. I have a rich understanding f Chinese histry, s I will nt nly be a vlunteer, but als a carrier f ur splendid culture. What’s mre, I am gd at English s that I can express myself fluently and clearly in English. Als, I was a vlunteer f the sprts meeting held in ur prvince. I will be able t slve different kinds f prblems that may happen in the Games. Green envirnmental prtectin has becme the cmmn cncept f the Olympic Games. I hpe ur vlunteers’ clthes are made f recycled materials. I believe I can be a qualified vlunteer. I will value it and d all I can if I culd be accepted t be ne.
Thank yu fr yur kind attentin and I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu sn.
Li Ha
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于书信文写作。要求表格中提出的问题，进行写作陈述；保证内容完整，条理清晰。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主；时态采用一般现在时为主。写作时承接书信的开头，第二段描述自己的特长、优势证明自己的能力，如何帮助2022年冬奥会变成一个“绿色”冬奥会，以及表述自己会珍惜这次志愿者机会；最后一段短文已经给出。
Dear Peter,It’s always great t hear frm yu.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
Vlunteers Needed!
The 2022 Winter Olympic Games will be held in Beijing and Zhangjiaku. In rder t make the event a great success, vlunteers are need! We als hpe t make the event a green ne.If yu want t be a vlunteer, please think ver the fllwing questins carefully.
1. What makes a gd vlunteer?
2. What will yu d t help make the event successful? (Shw yur vluntary experiences t prve yur abilities)
3. Hw can yu help the game becme a green ne?
We hpe mre vlunteers can jin us! If yu’d like t try, please write t us!