2023届高考英语二轮复习英语写作指导课件

这是一份2023届高考英语二轮复习英语写作指导课件，共26页。PPT课件主要包含了够多少美，held，that， know ，did，However，Therefore等内容，欢迎下载使用。
DISCUSSION: What is a gd writing？ Hw t catch the experts' eye?
DISCUSSION: What is a gd writing？ 1. Cntent: everything needed is included which is related t yur view.(内容要完整) （内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人家给的是文字提示，可以用笔在试题处标出1,2,3,4，如果人家给的是图，那要先看懂图的意思，六个图都要看看再动笔，不要看了一个马上就写。）
DISCUSSION: What is a gd writing？
2. Structure: * Put the cntent int different paragraphs(分段)* Gd beginning and ending(好的开头结尾)* Well rganized and smthly develped (结构合理,行文流畅)
3. Language: * N Chinglish (避免中文式英文)* N Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误)* With exactly used wrds and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)
高考英语评分原则： 1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点， 应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。要求准确，通顺。 4. 鼓励写出新颖词汇,顺畅连接和复杂结构。
高考英语评分原则： 5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。英，美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 6.如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。 7.词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。
Hw t write a gd cmpsitin？
一.Adpt a variety f sentence patterns
一.Adpt a variety f sentence patterns 使用较丰富的句式
1.They even threw rubbish int the lake. They ttally ignred the nticeable sign "N littering" nearby. (使用V-ing形式)
They even threw rubbish int the lake, _____________ the nticeable sign "N littering" nearby.
ttally ignring
Nt lng ag I wn the first prize in the English cntest_______in ur schl.(12 山东)
2. Nt lng ag I wn the first prize in the English cntest. It was held in ur schl. (使用过去分词)
3. T his surprise, the little girl knws s many things. (使用主语从句)4. Peple suggest that the cnference be put ff. (改被动语态)
_________________________ the little girl knws s many things.
What surprises him is that
___________________the cnference be put ff.
It is suggested that
the little girl knws s many things.(形式主语)
It is surprising that
5. He did nt knw what had happened until he read the news in the newspaper. (使用强调句型)6. I passed the physics exam because f yur help. (用虚拟语气）
_______________he read the news in the newspaper _____ he knew what had happened.
_______________________the physics exam _________________yur help.
It was nt until
I culdn’t have passed
but fr/withut
__________ he read the news ____he _____ what had happened.(倒装句)
7. I wn’t believe what he says. (使用状语 从句)8. The girl is spken highly f. Her cmpsitin was well written. (用定语从句)
_______________________________he says, I wn’t believe.
The girl______________________________is spken highly f.
N matter what / Whatever
whse cmpsitin was well written
二. Use prper linking wrds (使用恰当的连接词）
Hw t write a gd cmpsitin？
常用连接词:
1.表文章结构顺序：first f all, firstly, first, at first, secndly , secnd , and then , next, in the end, finally , at last, t begain with...
2. 表并列补充关系： what's mre , besides, mrever, futhermre, in additin, as well as, including, nt nly... but als...
3.表转折对比关系：hwever, n the cntrary, but, while, althugh+clause, in spite f, n the ne the ther 表因果关系：because, as, s , thus, therefre, as a result, 表换一种方式表达：in ther wrds, that is (t say)
6.表举例说明：fr example, such as, fr instance7.表达自己观点：as far as I knw, as far as I'm cncerned ,in my pinin, persnally, as t me...
8.表总结：all in all, in shrt , in a wrd , in summary, in brief , generally speaking, as yu knw, as is knwn t all...
第二节 书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社的编辑写一封信，表达你对现在使用的英语材料的看法，内容主要包括：优点： 1. 话题广泛； 2. 图片丰富； 3. 有助于提高 学习兴趣。 建议：适当降低词汇难度。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使用文连贯； 3. 开头语已你写好，不计入总词数。
practice :2012年高考英语辽宁卷—书面表达
As a result; In additin ; T begin with ; Hwever
使用恰当的连接词 Use prper linking wrds
Dear Editr, As a student reader, I am writing t talk abut the English textbks published by yur huse. These bks have many advantages. _________ , ne f them is that we can find a variety f tpics, such as science, culture and histry. These tpics, I think, are very ppular with us students.
T begin with
In my pinin; Therefre; Hwever; what's mre
_____________, alng with the texts there are many beautiful and clrful pictures, which can help us understand English better. Even the students wh used t dislike English have turned ut t be interested in the subject. _________, sme f the texts have t many new wrds and expressins which are hard fr us. __________, I'd like t suggest changing them int easier nes.
三. Avid Changlish
Hw t write a gd cmpsitin？
Avid Chinglish!1) My English is s bad. 2) There has a highway cnnected with Beijing.3) Thugh she's almst 40，but she still plans t cmpete.4) My camera was lst in yur htel. 5) I'm Lihua, a new student f yu.
LanguageLanguage
1. My ability t read English passages is slwly. 2. Only by this way, can we keep up with therstudents.
3. My English level is cmmn and I can't speak verywell. 4. Besides, I think speaking English is as imprtant as writing English.5. There are sme advice in teaching English.
Please learn t assess yur cmpsitin when yu finish it frm nw n.