专题32 读后续写之如何续写故事开头-2023年高考英语一轮复习 精讲与精练资料（教师版）

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专题32 读后续写之如何续写故事开头
《考点•题型 •技巧》

考点导航

1.开端布局方法1：副词突显动作等
2.开端布局方法2：形容词短语表明心态
3.开端布局方法3：非谓语动词的烘托
4.开端布局方法4：使用从句
5.开端布局方法5：使用介词短语
6.开端布局方法6：对话或独白
7.开端布局方法7：介绍人物身份
8.开端布局方法8：情绪烘托
9.开端布局方法9：背景烘托
10.开端布局方法10：人物动作特写
11.开端布局方法11：声音效果传情
12.开端布局方法12：设问激发思考

一个好的故事开头就好比是一堂成功的课的导入，能够迅速抓住学生和老师们的兴趣，并且愿意听下去，跟着授课老师的思路走。一个好的故事开头就好比是一个带着香味十足的诱饵，诱使读者上钩并且饶有趣味地看完。而一个拙劣的故事开头，定会让读者大倒胃口，恹恹欲睡。可见，写好一个好故事的好开头是多么的重要。那么在时间紧迫的考场上的英语读后续写的过程中，如何写出靓丽的开头呢？我们可以从语法手段和写作涉及的内容来具体涉及故事的开端。
【题型分析】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I am a doctor, so I love my job. I always have, but I feel particularly proud to do it at the moment. With COVID-19 sweeping through Wuhan, people are avoiding hospitals as possible they can. However, pregnant women still need to come into the hospital. Babies still need to be born.
Right now, it is even scarier for these women, as they have to come in on their own, often feeling frightened. Their families are separated from them due to safety measures. We’ve always provided physical support, but now we are doing so on a different level — we also have to keep them company and offer emotional support. Unfortunately, some of the women have caught corona-virus, and being at the hospital puts me at risk. Personally, I feel protected because we have full personal protective equipment, which we wear all through our 13-hour shifts. You don’t know if someone is carrying corona-virus or not.
I didn’t want to put my family in danger by bringing the virus home and possibly passing it on to them. As a single parent to my children, Xiaohua, 12 years old, and Xiaoyong, 9, I realized I had to make a very tough decision about my family’s safety when the country went into lockdown. Giving up work wasn’t an option for me. I wanted to be able to look after the women who were feeling poorly and very scared, but I could not leave my little angels behind either.
At this point, my sister suggested that the children stay with her and her husband for the time being and leave me to my hospital duties. I thought it was a great idea, so we set a date for her to pick them up. When I explained the situation to my angels and told them they needed to stay with their aunt for a while, they both seemed upset, but agreed to go. On the day I saw them off, they kept looking back at me until they were too far to be seen.
注意：
1、续写词数应为150左右；
2、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After that, my workload increased because some of my coworkers fell ill.
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A week later, it came to Xiaoyong’s birthday.
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【参考范文】
After that, my workload increased because some of my coworkers fell ill. We had to work double shifts and my life was dedicated to nothing but work. Every day I came back home completely exhausted and fell asleep. As soon as I woke up, I needed to go to the hospital. I poured all my efforts into my patients, which was very rewarding. However, it troubled me that I didn’t have time for my own kids. Xiaoyong was going to celebrate his birthday soon. I had to do something to make up for him.
A week later, it came to Xiaoyong’s birthday. I made a video call to them from the hospital. I greeted them on the screen with my mask and goggles on, they recognized me at once, shouting excitedly. I took the phone to the hall where my coworkers sang “Happy Birthday, Xiaoyong!” They also encouraged him to be strong, and a grin appeared on his face. My children’s understanding and my coworker’s support gave me a warm feeling, and I believe nothing could ever truly separate me and my beloved ones. We are sure to win.
【写作分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者是一位有两个孩子的单亲母亲，也是一位助产士，在新冠疫情期间，在工作和家人之间难以抉择，最后选择去医院工作，把孩子交给前夫照顾。
【写作步骤】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“之后，我的工作量增加了，因为我的一些同事生病了。”可知，第一段可描写作者在医院的工作越来越忙，没时间照顾孩子，作者想要在孩子生日的时候弥补孩子。
②由第二段首句内容“一周后，到了小勇的生日。”可知，第二段可描写作者和同事一起在医院祝孩子生日快乐，孩子很开兴。
2.续写线索：工作——烦恼——弥补——庆生——鼓励——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①致力于：was dedicated to / was devoted to
②回家：came back home / returned home
③打视频电话：made a video call / video-called
情绪类
①烦恼：trouble / worry
②兴奋地：excitedly / with excitement
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1]. I poured all my efforts into my patients, which was very rewarding. (由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]. However, it troubled me that I didn’t have time for my own kids. (由that引导主语从句)
检测训练

1、阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.
Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them.
One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy -his name was Bernard-had interested her very much.
“I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don't see what he can do.”
After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.”
“So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.”
For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish(完成).”
The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. “I tell you what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn(爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When Mrs. Meredith heard of John's idea, she thought it was a good one, too.
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With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.
【范文】
When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, she thought it was a good one, too. So, they went to the local supermarket together. They bought a bag of corn and some special bags for popcorn. When they got home, they made a lot of popcorn and put it in the special bags. With the popcorn, they went to Bernard’s home. They told Bernard how to sell the popcorn. Bernard and his parents were very grateful. And the Meredith family also felt very happy to help this family.
With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. He took the popcorn around to the houses and sold all his popcorn. He earned a lot of money. Then, he wanted to be self-dependent. Therefore, he asked Mrs. Meredith to teach him how to make popcorn. After that, not only did he sell popcorn, but he also added cream and salt to the popcorn to make it taste better. Bernard grew up to be a remarkable man. He did not forget the help of Meredith’s family, and he also did what he could to help those in need.
【解析】本文是根据短文进行续写，使之成为一个完整的故事。
1.认真读懂所给提供的材料:善良的Meredith一家住在一个小社区里，他们想帮助一个贫困的家庭。那家的男主人生病卧床，女主人要照顾丈夫、无法外出赚钱，家中的小男孩Bernard也做不了什么事情，生活十分困难。后来，Meredith的孩子想出了一个主意--制作爆米花，让Bernard去卖爆米花。
2.根据所给材料确定文章主题:Meredith如何通过制作和卖爆米花帮助Bernard一家摆脱困境的。
3.续写部分和前面的文章衔接得上，并且与原文情节发展和人物性格相一致，故事情节的向后延续发展要合乎情理。
4.根据第一段首句When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, she thought it was a good one, too.(当Meredith太太听到John的主意时，她也认为这是个好主意)可以针对如何实现制作爆米花这个提议展开构思；根据第二段首句With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.(一切准备就绪后，Bernard开始了他的新生意)可以针对Bernard如何通过卖爆米花让家庭摆脱困境展开构思。
5.续写的语言要尽可能与原文的语言保持风格上的一致。文章时态以一般过去时为主。应使用自己熟悉的句型和短语进行写作，考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。作文要层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，切合题干要求，句子结构准确，适当补充信息，使篇章结构连贯。
2. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I took a job as a receptionist for a veterinarian weeks ago. As an enthusiastic animal lover, I accepted the position on the condition that I wouldn’t have to assist with any wounded animals. I couldn’t bear to see any creature in pain.
At the end of my first week, we were about to close the office for the day when a young man in his thirties ran up to us holding a severely injured Doberman pinscher puppy in his arms and begging us to save his life. The four-month-old pup had been hit by a car.
The doctor and I rushed back into the operating room immediately. The poor creature was in critical condition. The only place the skin was still attached to this poor little animal’s body was around one shoulder. The vet worked tirelessly for what seemed like hours, stitching him back together again. That was the easy part. The puppy had broken multiple bones, including his spine. If he was lucky enough to survive the next few days, we were quite sure he would never walk again.
The day forever changed my life. The veterinarian instructed me, and I became his assistant in all things medical. One of my first jobs was to give that Doberman puppy daily physical therapy. I moved his tiny legs on a regular basis to keep his muscles from weakening.
Weeks went by until one day, I felt this little fighter push back ever so slightly. And he continued to push back till he could finally use his legs. What a miracle!
Day by day, the little fighter made a little bit progress until the vet called his owner telling him that his puppy was ready to go home. Having accompanied the puppy for several months, I could imagine how excited and relieved the young man was. And I was sure he would took good care of. Two days later, the puppy was taken away by his owner.
1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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About a year passed, I walked into the clinic’s crowded waiting room.
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I went on to be a vet tech for 14 years, and since retirement, I’ve volunteered at a no-kill animal shelter.
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【参考范文】
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About a year passed, I walked into the clinic’s crowded waiting room. I called the name of the next client. Suddenly, a huge Doberman who had been standing quietly with his owner on the opposite side of the room broke loose and rushed toward me. I found myself pinned against the wall with this magnificent dog standing on his hind legs, his front paws on my shoulders, washing my face with abundant and joyful kisses!
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I went on to be a vet tech for 14 years, and since retirement, I’ve volunteered at a no-kill animal shelter. Being a vet technician and volunteer at a no-kill animal shelter, I succeeded in saving more animals, which often made me think of the grateful huge Doberman. Although many years have passed, I still shed tears in amazement at the display of love and gratitude the dog had for me. All the dogs knew they had been rescued by me and they were grateful to me.
【写作分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在一家兽医那里找了一份前台接待员的工作，在作者工作的第一个星期结束的时候，诊所里来了一只受重伤的杜宾犬小狗，作者成为了兽医的助手，照顾好了小狗。一年后杜宾犬再次来到诊所，热情地亲吻作者，作者退休后仍然在一家不猎杀动物的收容所做志愿者，仍然为这只狗对自己的爱和感激而流泪。
【写作步骤】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“大约一年过去了，我走进诊所拥挤的候诊室。”可知，第一段可描写被作者救治过的杜宾犬再次回到诊所的事情。
②由第二段首句内容“我做了14年的兽医技师，退休后，我在一家不猎杀动物的收容所做志愿者。”可知，第二段可描写作者成为志愿者后的所作所为以及感悟
2.续写线索：作者走进候诊室——杜宾犬向作者表示感激——作者退休成为志愿者——作者感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
走进：walk into/step into
继续：go on/continue to
时间逝去：pass/ go by
情绪类
感谢：gratitude/be grateful/ appreciation
快乐：joyful /happy
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1] Suddenly, a huge Doberman who had been standing quietly with his owner on the opposite side of the room broke loose and rushed toward me. (运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] Being a vet technician and volunteer at a no-kill animal shelter, I succeeded in saving more animals, which often made me think of the grateful huge Doberman. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
3、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A Vacation with My Mother
I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my mother---loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.
David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout(放哨) while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh…I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any chances.
On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections(反对). If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. ______________

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We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. ______________
【范文】
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Thinking of this tent, Mom suggested that we go camping in the next village in excitement, with her eyes glittering. Considering her enthusiasm, we all agreed. When the door of our car opened, Mom stormed out instantly and urged us to put up the tent. David and I were asked to pick up some branches to build a fire. And when we came back, Dad and Mom had already lain down the grass comfortably in front of the tent, talking merrily with a local boy at our age, who kept glancing at this tent curiously. Soon we learnt that the boy in rags even didn’t have a home to live in. Of course, Mom “forgot” to take this tent with us again.
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. And we also had a nice time living with my grandparents during that trip. But what impressed me most was that tent, which was forgotten deliberately by Mom. Though she did love going camping, she presented that poor boy with this tent out of sympathy. It was Mom that made my childhood colorful. And it was also she that showed me the true meaning of giving.
【解析】这是一篇读后续写。短文叙述了作者的母亲很健忘，一家四口自驾旅游去祖父母所居住的地方，途中发生了有趣的事情。
【详解】
首先，根据文章当中第二段内容比较开心的基调，第一段的故事情节应该比较偏向正面感情色彩，例如：我们在露营过程中一起搭建帐篷的开心时光或露营过程中的趣事(尤其是前文有铺垫妈妈是个forgetful的人，这一点也可以埋下伏笔来表达后面过程中由于妈妈健忘而带来的趣事)(也有同学在此处描述了露营过程中对其他陌生人提供帮助，来集中体现nice这一个点);
其次，第二段开头说来描述欣赏风景： 此处可以用一些描述景色环境的表达来烘托下氛围，但是第二段不能仅仅只能有景色描述；例如：这里可以实写和虚写结合的方式，看到景色(同时回忆往事)，最终把故事的落脚点放在“家人的感情”“亲情”“生活的乐趣”“与妈妈一起的趣事”等等角度都可以的;当然也有同学描述与陌生人的相遇，引出了陌生人的善意这个主题;总之这次的话题比较开放，情节可以写的角度比较多;
再次，除了情节方面的内容以外，以下几个方面是考生需要着重关注的得分点：字迹清晰程度，语法多样性和句式丰富性，衔接成分的使用，语言的场景恰当程度;高考英语写作中，考生所采用的句型结构一定程度上影响了老师对考生写作水平的判断;说到语法丰富性方面，例如在作文中用到从句结构、强调句、非谓语结构等。尤其应该注意的是：避免句型单一化，如通篇使用定语从句，这样反而使阅卷老师觉得该考生对句型掌握的不够充分。应该在文章写作中有意识地多使用不同的句型结构。
【点睛】
文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: 虚 拟 语 气 和 with 复 合 结 构 Mom suggested that we go camping in the next village in excitement, with her eyes glittering. Considering her enthusiasm, we all agreed. what引导的主语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句But what impressed me most was that tent, which was forgotten deliberately by Mom.
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
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My school had a tradition during the ninth-grade graduation: a beautiful gold and green jacket (the school colors), was awarded to the student who had maintained the highest grades for nine years.
I had been a straight A student since the first grade and had looked forwards very much to owning that jacket. My father was a farm laborer who couldn't earn enough money to feed five children. I was given to my grandparents to raise. There would never be a school sports jacket for us. This scholarship jacket was my only chance.
One day in May, I happened to overhear in the office. Mr. Schmidt, my history teacher, and Mr. Boone, my math teacher arguing about me. “I refuse to do it! I don't care who her father is；her grades can't match Martha's at all. I won't lie or falsify (伪造)records.” said Mr. Schmidt angrily.
But Mr. Boone's voice sounded calm. “Joann's father is not only on the Board (董事会), he owns the only store in town: we could say it was a close tie and…”
Shaking and sad, I, waited a few minutes and walked away.
The next day when the principal called me into his office. “Martha,” he said, “There's been a change in policy this year regarding the scholarship jacket. This year the Board has decided to charge fifteen dollars, which still won't cover the complete cost of the jacket. So if you are unable to pay the money for the jacket, it will be given to the next one in line.”
Standing with all the dignity I could find, I said，“I'll speak to my grandfather about it, sir, and let you know tomorrow.” I cried on the way home.
注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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By the time I got home, my eyes were red and swollen. I found my grandpa in the bean field.
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I dragged into the principal’s office the next day, sad and disappointed.
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【参考范文】
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By the time I got home, my eyes were red and swollen. I found my grandpa in the bean field. Sensing something wrong, he asked me what happened with great concern. I murmured the principal’s words, a surge of regret gnawing at my heart. I really hated to see my gray-haired Grandpa’s disappointment. Grandpa’s eyes rounded in disbelief. Time ticking by, he heaved a long sigh, “My child, an award bought can’t be called an award.” I nodded understandingly. But who knew how reluctant and bitter I was?
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I dragged into the principal’s office the next day, sad and disappointed. My head still lifted with dignity, I tried to fight back the tears, stammering, “I cannot…afford the jacket, sir.” Staring into my eyes, the principal suddenly grinned, “I have good news for you.” I looked at him in confusion. “The board decided that an award cannot be bought just for the sake of winners’ dignity.” His eyes brimmed with smiles. I pinched my hand only to find I was not dreaming. Only at that moment did I believe that Mr. Schmidt and my grandpa were right: never can awards be falsified or bought. (162 words)
【写作分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的学校在九年级的毕业典礼上会奖励一件漂亮的金绿色的夹克给9年来成绩最好的学生，作者一直是优等生，渴望得到那件夹克，但是偶然听到Mr. Schmidt老师和校长争论夹克到底给她还是Joann。后来祖父告诉作者买来的奖不能叫奖。校长最后也把夹克奖给了作者。
【写作步骤】
1.段落续写：
①.由第一段首句内容“当我回到家时，我的眼睛又红又肿。我在豆地里找到了祖父。”可知，第一段可描写作者告诉了祖父发生的一切，祖父告诉作者买来的奖不能叫奖。
②.由第二段首句内容“第二天，我拖着沉重的脚步走进校长办公室，既伤心又失望。”可知，第二段可描写作者伤心地告诉校长自己买不起夹克，但是校长最后还是把夹克奖给了作者。
2.续写线索：找到祖父——告诉发生的事——作者心理情绪——祖父叹息感慨——走到校长办公室——告诉校长买不起——校长更改主意——作者得到夹克
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.低声说：murmur/ say in a low voice/ mutter
②.看着：stare into/ look at/ watch
情绪类
①.难以置信：in disbelief/ incredibly/ unbelievably
②.失望：disappointment/ despair/ frustration
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1]. Sensing something wrong, he asked me what happened with great concern. （运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]. I pinched my hand only to find I was not dreaming.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句作find的宾语）
[高分句型3]. Only at that moment did I believe that Mr. Schmidt and my grandpa were right: never can awards be falsified or bought.（运用了部分倒装句和由that引导的宾语从句作believe的宾语）
5. 阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was an Art lesson. Rachel sat at the desk watching her classmates busy preparing the water jars and paints. She understood why Mrs. Weston asked her to sit down and got Lisa to fetch everything for her. It was always a disaster when Rachel tried to do Art!
Rachel sighed and reached out to dip her brush in some black paint and—oh, no! She knocked over the jar. The water spread across the desk and drowned the paper. Lisa called Mrs. Weston to see what Rachel had done. Rachel went red in the face. She jumped to her feet to get a cloth. Her chair fell over backwards. She turned round and her paintbrush caught Lisa across the face, giving her a black moustache. Lisa was so surprised that she fell back against a wire bookstand. It came crashing down and the books went all over the floor.
How clumsy (笨拙的)! Rachel thought as she went home on the bus. The bus stopped outside her house. She jumped up and her elbow (肘部) knocked a woman’s hat right over her eyes. Oh, no! Rachel said sorry, got off and ran indoors. Mum wasn’t in the kitchen but lay in bed as she caught an awful cold. Rachel offered to make a cup of tea but Mum would rather wait for Dad. Rachel sighed. She understood Mum was afraid she would spill (溅出) it.
“But would you go to Mrs. Willow for some cold cure?” asked Mum. Rachel turned to the door at once. “But Rachel, Mrs. Willow’s house is full of beautiful things, so if she asks you to come in, you’d better say no.” Rachel sighed and ran out.
Mrs. Willow was an old lady with white hair and sharp blue eyes living in an old house. She opened the door and invited her in. Rachel said why she came and that she preferred to wait outside remembering her mother’s warning. Mrs. Willow insisted Rachel come inside. Rachel took a deep breath and stepped in. She looked round Mrs. Willow’s sitting room and saw at once why Mum had been worried.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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There were beautiful things everywhere—pretty china figures(瓷雕) and delicate vases.
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With a smile Mrs. Willow comforted her saying it had been broken before.
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【参考范文】
Possible Version One:
There were beautiful things everywhere—pretty china figures and delicate vases. Rachel stood very still, afraid of knocking something over. Mrs. Willow handed Rachel a small brown bottle. Rachel couldn’t wait to get away, feeling any minute there would be a disaster. She thanked her and turned to the door when something brushed against her leg. Rachel was so surprised that she jumped backwards. It was a cat! But her elbow hit a vase and it fell to the floor, broken. How awkward!
With a smile Mrs. Willow comforted her saying it had been broken before. Rachel sighed and stared at her. “I did, when I was young. You couldn’t have been as clumsy as I was,” Mrs. Willow said, her sharp blue eyes shining. “Keep telling yourself you are a swan and it will work.” Rachel doubtfully said that several times. After they cleared up the vase, they drank tea from china cups and ate cakes off delicate plates and Rachel didn’t break another thing. It was a kind of magic. Rachel smiled.
Possible Version Two:
There were beautiful things everywhere—pretty china figures and delicate vases. All the treasures seemed to boast a long history and thus priceless. “Wow, it is really a land of wonder.” Rachel couldn’t help admiring the elegance of the china figures and vases. Mom’s words echoing(重复) in her mind, curiosity still got the upper hand(占上风). She reached for one of them, but unfortunately, the vase slipped off her hand and lay in pieces on the floor. Her heart missing a beat, she felt terribly worried.
With a smile Mrs. Willow comforted her saying it had been broken before. Rachel sighed and stared at her. “No worry at all. It’ll be perfect after being mended,” Mrs. Willow said, her sharp blue eyes shining. “Nobody grows up without being clumsy.” Rachel let out a long sigh and for the first time she felt good about her clumsy self. She believed what Mrs. Willow said must have the same magic as her special cold cure. To her amazement, she returned home with the bottle of medicine safe and sound.
【写作分析】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了Rachel是一个笨拙的人，总是会破坏周围的东西，一天Rachel的妈妈生病了，妈妈想让她去Mrs. Willow家要一些感冒药，并嘱咐她Mrs. Willow家里有很多精致的东西，最好不要进她的家门。
【写作步骤】
1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“到处都是美丽的东西——漂亮的瓷器和精致的花瓶。”可知，第一段可描写Rachel进了Mrs. Willow家门后，行为举止很拘束，最后还是打碎了一个瓶子。
②由第二段首句内容“威洛太太微笑着安慰她说，它以前也坏过。”可知，第二段可描写Mrs. Willow安慰了Rachel并很好地招待了她。
2.续写线索：Rachel害怕打碎东西——迫不及待想离开——感谢Mrs. Willow——撞到了花瓶，花瓶碎了——Mrs. Willow安慰Rachel——打扫花瓶——享受好的食物
3.词汇激活：
行为类：
①迫不及待：can’t wait to do sth./be eager to do sth.
②打扫：clean up/sweep up
情绪类：
①害怕的：afraid/frightened
②感谢：thank/be grateful
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1]
Rachel was so surprised that she jumped backwards.（so…that…引导结果状语从句）
[高分句型2]
After they cleared up the vase, they drank tea from china cups and ate cakes off delicate plates and Rachel didn’t break another thing.（after引导时间状语从句）
6、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（追赶）。
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to show down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that zxxk once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.

注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
【范文】The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul and Becky got out of the car immediately to give the help. With nothing on the hand, they didn't dare to fight against the wolf. However, they still approached to the wolf bravely. At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, howling angrily towards Paul and Becky. Mac then jumped off the bicycle and was ready to fight against the wolf. Then came the deadlock.
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf. Mac's friends also jumped off their bicycles and joined the fight with the wolf. More and more cars stopped. Some drivers took out the sticks from the cars, and some took out the knives, even the guns towards the wolf. In the meanwhile, the wolf might feel the people's threats around, so it began to step back slowly. Soon, it ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance.
【解析】
本文主要讲述了Mac在骑自行车前往阿拉斯加的途中，被一只狼追赶的故事。时态要考虑以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。同时要兼顾字数的要求，不要过多，关键词列出5个以上，需要均匀分布在两段中。考生要注意几个关键信息和情节变化并结合给出的内容提示进行合理构思。
7. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I am a doctor, so I love my job. I always have, but I feel particularly proud to do it at the moment. With COVID-19 sweeping through Wuhan, people are avoiding hospitals as possible they can. However, pregnant women still need to come into the hospital. Babies still need to be born.
Right now, it is even scarier for these women, as they have to come in on their own, often feeling frightened. Their families are separated from them due to safety measures. We’ve always provided physical support, but now we are doing so on a different level — we also have to keep them company and offer emotional support. Unfortunately, some of the women have caught corona-virus, and being at the hospital puts me at risk. Personally, I feel protected because we have full personal protective equipment, which we wear all through our 13-hour shifts. You don’t know if someone is carrying corona-virus or not.
I didn’t want to put my family in danger by bringing the virus home and possibly passing it on to them. As a single parent to my children, Xiaohua, 12 years old, and Xiaoyong, 9, I realized I had to make a very tough decision about my family’s safety when the country went into lockdown. Giving up work wasn’t an option for me. I wanted to be able to look after the women who were feeling poorly and very scared, but I could not leave my little angels behind either.
At this point, my sister suggested that the children stay with her and her husband for the time being and leave me to my hospital duties. I thought it was a great idea, so we set a date for her to pick them up. When I explained the situation to my angels and told them they needed to stay with their aunt for a while, they both seemed upset, but agreed to go. On the day I saw them off, they kept looking back at me until they were too far to be seen.
注意：
1、续写词数应为150左右；
2、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After that, my workload increased because some of my coworkers fell ill.
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A week later, it came to Xiaoyong’s birthday.
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【参考范文】
After that, my workload increased because some of my coworkers fell ill. We had to work double shifts and my life was dedicated to nothing but work. Every day I came back home completely exhausted and fell asleep. As soon as I woke up, I needed to go to the hospital. I poured all my efforts into my patients, which was very rewarding. However, it troubled me that I didn’t have time for my own kids. Xiaoyong was going to celebrate his birthday soon. I had to do something to make up for him.
A week later, it came to Xiaoyong’s birthday. I made a video call to them from the hospital. I greeted them on the screen with my mask and goggles on, they recognized me at once, shouting excitedly. I took the phone to the hall where my coworkers sang “Happy Birthday, Xiaoyong!” They also encouraged him to be strong, and a grin appeared on his face. My children’s understanding and my coworker’s support gave me a warm feeling, and I believe nothing could ever truly separate me and my beloved ones. We are sure to win.
【写作分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者是一位有两个孩子的单亲母亲，也是一位助产士，在新冠疫情期间，在工作和家人之间难以抉择，最后选择去医院工作，把孩子交给前夫照顾。
【写作步骤】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“之后，我的工作量增加了，因为我的一些同事生病了。”可知，第一段可描写作者在医院的工作越来越忙，没时间照顾孩子，作者想要在孩子生日的时候弥补孩子。
②由第二段首句内容“一周后，到了小勇的生日。”可知，第二段可描写作者和同事一起在医院祝孩子生日快乐，孩子很开兴。
2.续写线索：工作——烦恼——弥补——庆生——鼓励——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①致力于：was dedicated to / was devoted to
②回家：came back home / returned home
③打视频电话：made a video call / video-called
情绪类
①烦恼：trouble / worry
②兴奋地：excitedly / with excitement
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1]. I poured all my efforts into my patients, which was very rewarding. (由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]. However, it troubled me that I didn’t have time for my own kids. (由that引导主语从句)