小升初作文讲解及范例（课件）外研版（三起）英语六年级下册

这是一份小升初作文讲解及范例（课件）外研版（三起）英语六年级下册，共15页。

一、介绍你和家人上学或上班的方式 I g t schl n ft.My sister ges t schl n ft,t. My brther ges t schl by bike. My father ges t wrk by car. My mther ges t wrk by bike.二、介绍你和朋友各自上学的方式。 I g t schl by bus. My friend Amy ges t schl n ft. Jhn ges t schl by bike. Mike ges t schl by Subway. Sarah ges t schl by bus.
三、看图，说说你怎样去电影院 I g t the cinema. I start frm here. G straight fr five minutes. Then turn left at the library. G straight fr ne minute. The library is n the right.四、读读下周末你和朋友的计划 I’m ging t have a busy weekend with my friends. On Saturday mrning,we are ging t g shpping. On Saturday afternn, we are ging t the park. On Sunday mrning,We are ging t g fishing. On Sunday afternn,we are gingt climb muntains. We will be happy.
五、说说这个星期天，你和家人的安排。 I am ging t have a busy Sunday with my family. We are ging t the z n Sunday mrning. We are ging t see elephants. On Sunday afternn,we are ging t visit my grandparents. We are ging t clean the rm fr them.六、说说你和你家人的爱好。 I like flying kites. My father likes diving. My mther likes playing the vilin. My brther likes riding a bike. My sister likes listening t music.
七、介绍你和你朋友的爱好。 I like diving. My friend Jhn likes flying kites. Amy likes cllecting stamps. Zhang Peng likes playing ftball. Chen Jie likes riding a bike.八、介绍你一家人的职业和上班地点和方式。 My father is a teacher. He wrks in a schl. He ges twrk by car. My mther is an accuntant. She wrks in a bank. She ges t wrk by bus.
时间：mrning. Mnday, weekend, June. summer, last year, Hliday. 8:00
地点：my hme, schl, classrm, n the street, bkstre, library, museum, plice statin, cinema, supermarket, hspital. park/z,
角色：family, myself, teacher, nurse, dctr, wrker, neighbr, classmate, friend, pet（fish，bird，dg，panda, mnkey…）
事情：hbbies, dream, exam, lve, pllutin, mney
动词：teach/study (learn), play, smile/cry, help, rain/snw, tuch, sing/dance
名词：party，city，clthes，sun/mn, statinary/tableware, clr, fd/fruit/vegetable, pht/picture, plants/animals,
形容词：happy, sad, tired, bred, excited, warm, cl, ht, cld, sunny, rainy, snwy, windy, clrs, healthy, clever/smart, big/shrt/lazy/clean, beautiful,

审题，抓点造句，成文改错，誉写
Hw t write the expressin?
写作技巧小结：　　 认真审题抓要点。　　 确定人称和时态。　　 理清思路搭结构。　　 多用简句少长句。　　 巧用连词树条理。　　 拼写正确字工整。　　 全面检查不犯错。
12年大联盟作文在小学六年的英语学习中，你参加过不同形式的课内外活动，请你用英语写一篇文章，描写你印象深刻的一次活动以及你的收获，题目自拟。　　要求：1、全文60词左右 2、文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
第二步-定人称&定时态
11年大联盟作文　　　每一个人都有自己的理想,或大或小,心中都有追求,以我的理想(My Dream) 为题, 用英文写一段话, 字数60字左右 My Dream
11年大联盟作文　　09年天河省实写作：用5个句子，说一说你的暑假计划
一般将来时 will/be ging t +V原
注意：一篇作文可以不止一种人称或一种时态但要定好主要的人称和时态。
My favurite系列My favurite seasn is summer.··········· I like summer best.
中间部分使用时间词语或一些表顺序的词衔接：
如写Last Weekend　　　I was busy last weekend. On Saturday mrning, ······ In the afternn, ······ On Sunday mrning, ······ In the afternn, ······ . In the evening, I ······ I was very happy last weekend.
1）be动词和行为动词： 同一个句子只能出现一种（现在进行时除外）错误： I was went t the park last Sunday. (把was去掉)2）like + 动词ing形式。 I like ging shpping. (注意like 后面紧跟的动词一定要加ing)3）三单句子： She ges t schl n ft every day. 动词后加s(或es)!4）There be句型There is a bird and tw mnkeys in the tree. (用there is 而不是there are)
On Sunday mrning, it is sunny and warm, my mm takes me t the park, there are many flwers and plants. Yu can hear the bird is singing. Yu can see the fish is swimming in the pl. I play with my little sister. We are happy.
讲故事，先描述时间，天气，然后说地点，事件，简单明了。
介绍人物 描述姓名，年龄，高低 胖瘦 爱好 职业 如何上班，或者如何跟你一起做事情。
I have a gd mther. Her name is Lily, she is 32 years ld. She is tall. She is thin. She is very kind. She is a nurse. She likes apples and meat. She always ges t wrk by bike. She ften reads bks with me. I lve my mther.
She/ he /it has 他/她/它 有 /he/ it likes 他/她/它 喜欢
描述爱好，或者最喜欢的东西。注意like后面跟动名词形式,或者名词的复数形式。
I have many hbbies. I like swimming, because I can swim in summer. I like drawing pictures, I like drawing rabbits. I like playing cmputer games. I like singing, my favrite pp star is Dngfang Shenqi. I like watching TV. What abut yu? What’s yur hbby?
描述最喜欢的物品，从颜色，形状，大小，味道，或者用途。e.g. My favrite fruit is range. It is range, it is big and small. It is sweet and sur. I like eating ranges.