08 建团百年与中国巨变中考英语满分作文赏析

08 建团百年与中国巨变

NO.1

（2022·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·中考真题）中国共产主义青年团已经走过了百年历程。作为新时代青年中的一员，未来属于我们，希望寄予我们，奋斗的青春更美丽。请以“How to Make Myself Better”为题，谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己。

要求：1.字迹工整，段落清晰，表达清楚，语法正确，行文连贯；

2.思维导图中的提示词仅供参考，可适当发挥；

3.词数：80-100词。

How to Make Myself Better

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【满分作文赏析】

How to Make Myself Better

As a teenager, I think I should work harder to make myself better.

First of all, it is important to live healthily. I will eat more fruit and vegetables. I will also take exercise every day and get enough sleep. What’s more, I should work hard at all my subjects. I’ll not be afraid to face challenges any more and try my best to solve the problems. Besides, it is necessary to have a good relationship with family and friends. Last but not least, it’s our responsibility to take care of our parents. I’ll also do what I can to help other people.

By doing these, I will make myself better and better.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文以“How to Make Myself Better”并结合思维导图中的提示词写一篇文章，介绍如何成为更好的自己。

2.写作指导：本文以一般将来时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段引入话题；第二段从不同的方面介绍如何成为更好的自己；第三段进行总结。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

NO.2

（2022·四川·乐山市教育科学研究所中考真题）在中国共产主义青年团成立100周年之际，你校将开展“如何成为一名优秀学生”的征文活动。为此，请你给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，并倡议越来越多的同学入团。内容包括：

1.爱国爱家，了解团史；

2.与人和睦相处，乐于助人；

3.努力学习，养成良好习惯；

4.锻炼身体，保持健康。

注意：

1.词数80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。

4.参考词汇：the Communist Youth League of China ( CYLC ) 中国共产主义青年团；anniversary n.周年纪念日

This year is the 100th anniversary of the founding of the Communist Youth League of China. Our school will hold an activity about how to be an excellent student. I think we should do the following things.

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【满分作文赏析】

This year is the 100th anniversary of the founding of the Communist Youth League of China. Our school will hold an activity about how to be an excellent student. I think we should do the following things.

First of all, it’s important to love our country and family. Thanks to them, we can live a happy life. Learning about the history of the Communist Youth League of China is necessary for us. Secondly, we should get on well with our teachers and classmates. Especially, when people are in trouble, we should be ready to help them. In order to achieve our Chinese Dream, we should try our best to study hard and get good habits. Finally, we should keep healthy by exercising.

In a word, if we are strong, our country will be strong. So I hope more and more junior school students will join the Communist Youth League of China.

【解析】

1. 题干解读：题目要求写一篇短文，倡议同学加入中国共产主义青年团；要求包含所有提示内容。

2. 写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时为主；采用第一人称口吻；可采用3段落格式，第一段：文章已给出；第二段：阐述从4个方面（团史、与人相处、学习以及健康）倡议同学们入团；第三段：总结全文。

NO.3

（2022·内蒙古赤峰·中考真题）近年来中国发生了翻天覆地的变化，取得了很多世界瞩目的成就，例如航空航天技术的一步步突破、杂交水稻的成功培育、两届奥运会的成功举办……

某英文网站正在开展以“厉害了，我的国！” 为主题的征文活动。请你以“China makes me feel surprised”为题目，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文投稿。

要求：

1. 选择中国发展中一个让你感到惊讶的事件进行简单叙述，并写出你的感受；

2. 书写规范，要点齐全，条理清晰，可合理发挥；

3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名，否则不予赋分。

参考词汇：aerospace industry 航空航天工业；spaceship 宇宙飞船；develop hybrid rice 培育杂交水稻；Beijing 2008 Olympics 北京2008奥运会；Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics 北京2022冬奥会

China makes me feel surprised

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【满分作文赏析】

China makes me feel surprised

In recent years, great changes have taken place in China and many achievements have attracted the attention of the world. For example, two Olympic Games were held successfully. It really surprised me. China successfully hosted the 2008 Summer Olympic Games and once again introduced China to the world. China has developed rapidly since then. The Winter Olympic Games were successfully held this year. And many Chinese athletes won gold medals. As a Chinese, I am very proud. Also I feel excited for the strength of the motherland.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“China makes me feel surprised”为题目，选择中国发展中一个让你感到惊讶的事件进行简单叙述，并写出你的感受。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，一般过去时为辅。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时选择一个中国取得的成就进行简单叙述，并写出你的感受。注意语句通顺，无单词语法错误。