13 社会正能量与志愿者招募 中考英语满分作文赏析

13 社会正能量与志愿者招募

NO.1

（2022·重庆·中考真题）

科学研究发现，快乐可让我们身体更健康、思维更敏捷、心态更阳光。独乐乐不如众乐乐。某英语网站以“传递快乐”为主题发起故事分享活动，请讲述生活中你通过传递快乐（直接或间接的），感染他人的小故事。

要求：

1. 80-120词；

2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

参考信息：

1. 起因，经过；

2. 结果，感悟；

3. ……

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【满分作文赏析】

       A study shows that happiness can make people healthier in mind and mental. Our positive mood has an influence on others. I want to share my experience with you.

       I have a good friend and her name is Lucy. She was so short that other classmates always laughed at her. She was very upset. At that time I always told her some funny stories to cheer her up. And to become tall and strong, I also taught her to keep a healthy diet and do some exercise. Little by little, she became confident.

From this experience, I learn that happiness is important and it can bring us a lot like a more sunny mindset.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“传递快乐”为题写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称和第一人称，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段讲述自己传递快乐的经历；最后表达自己从这次经历的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

NO.2

（2022·天津·中考真题）假如你是李华，请你给美国笔友David写一封信，讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。

（1）上周五，一棵树被大风吹倒，挡住了道路。

（2）王红看到后，捡起地上的树枝，又去移动树干。

（3）树干太沉，她搬不动。

（4）人们过来帮忙。

（5）你认为……

参考词汇：被吹倒be blown down   挡住block   树枝branch   树干trunk

要求：

（1）词数：80~100个。

（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Dear David,

How are you? I’d like to share a story with you.

Last Friday, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【满分作文赏析】

Dear David,

How are you? I’d like to share a story with you.

Last Friday, on Wang Hong’s way home, she saw a big tree was blown down by wind and it blocked the way. After Wang Hong saw it, she picked up the branches on the ground and then moved the trunk again. But the trunk was so heavy that she couldn’t move it by herself. When other people saw what she was doing, they were moved by her and came to help her. Finally, they succeeded in moving the trunk away.

I think she is a very kind person. And from this story, I learn that we should offer to help when someone needs help. It not only helps others, but also makes ourselves happy.

Do you have a story to tell? Hope to hear from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文要求根据题干中的提示内容讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受，可适当增加细节。

2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。第一段和最后一段已给出，第二段具体描述她做好事的过程；第三段描述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

NO.3

（2022·陕西·中考真题）学校是个大家庭，这里充满了欢声笑语、爱与温暖。你们学校即将举办以 “School Is a Big Family”为题的英语演讲比赛。请根据下列要求，从结构图的三个方面写一篇英文演讲稿。

参考词汇：

be patient (with), care about, encourage, share, help, understand, love, have fun, ...

要求：

1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；

2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；

3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；

4.词数：不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。)

Good afternoon, everyone!

I am glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “School Is a Big Family”.

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Thank you for your time!

【满分作文赏析】

Good afternoon, everyone!

I am glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “School Is a Big Family”.

First, my math teacher is patient with me. She helps me to study math better. Second, my classmates help me a lot. I’m not good at sports. My friend Li Yun helped me with running and I ran faster. Also, I care about my teachers and classmates. One day my English teacher had a cold and I told her to drink more hot water. She felt warm and thanked me.

I believe if we understand and help each other, our school will be a better place.

Thank you for your time!

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文以“School Is a Big Family”为题，并结合提示内容写一篇演讲稿，可适当增加细节。

2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段重点描述同学和老师对我的帮助，以及我对他人的帮助；第三段进行总结。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

NO.4

（2022·福建·中考真题）假定你是李华，近日你校开展了以“热爱劳动，珍爱粮食”为主题的实践活动。请你结合以下图示，用英语给笔友John写一封信，分享活动过程和感受。词数80左右。

注意事项：

1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。

Dear John,

How is everything going?

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Yours,

Li Hua

【满分作文赏析】

Dear John,

How is everything going? I’m glad to tell you my one-day experience in rice fields.

On June 18, my classmates and I went to the community farm. When we arrived, we visited the farm and watched videos on farming. Then we worked together with farmers. Some learnt to harvest rice. Some helped to carry rice while others picked ears of rice from the fields. Through the activity, I’ve got the pleasure of hard work and learnt to value each grain.

Have you had any experience of this kind?

 Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据图示内容，以“热爱劳动，珍爱粮食”为主题写一篇作文。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主。人称以第一人称为主。写作时需涵盖要点，包括日期、地点、活动和感受，可适当发挥使行文连贯，确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。

NO.5

（2022·山东泰安·中考真题）让青少年利用课余时间参加志愿者服务活动，对其成长具有重要意义，可以帮助他们学习新技能，增强沟通能力和社会责任感。暑假将至，请根据下面表格中的内容提示，以 “My Volunteer Work Plan” 为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你选择的活动项目及活动计划，并谈谈参加志愿者服务活动的意义。

要求: 1. 可选择表格中的1-2个活动项目，也可自拟活动项目；

2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，词数80-100；

3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。My Volunteer Work Plan

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【满分作文赏析】

My Volunteer Work Plan

The summer holiday is coming. I am going to do some volunteer work. I will help to clean up the city park. Of course, I will ask more people to join me. I will call up my friends and ask them to come. We will pick up the litter, the plastic bags and other waste things. I hope our city will be more beautiful. Besides, I am going to visit sick kids in hospital. I love children and enjoy getting along with them. I will sing for the kids at the city hospital to cheer them up. I hope they can be better soon.

Not only do I feel good about helping other people, but also I get to spend time doing what I love to do. All in all, I will enjoy myself in the summer holiday.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己的暑假期间的志愿者计划。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般将来时，人称采用第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段介绍自己的志愿者计划以及打算做些什么事情；第二段表达自己做志愿者的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

NO.6

（2022·四川眉山·中考真题）本周日上午，一些外国学生将到三苏祠参观，现三苏祠急需招募十名志愿者。假定你是李华，请写一封电子邮件推荐自己。要点包括：

1. 自荐目的：成为志愿者；

2. 个人信息：身份，年龄，性格（外向、善于与人相处），本周日上午有空；

3. 个人优势：擅长英语，……；

4. 表达期望：获得机会并能做好，请本周五前回复。

注意：

1. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

2. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；

3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。

参考词汇：三苏祠Sansu Temple

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am glad to see your notice Volunteers Wanted. Some foreign students…______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【满分作文赏析】

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am glad to see your notice Volunteers Wanted. Some foreign students will visit Sansu Temple this Sunday morning. I’m willing to be a volunteer.

Let me introduce myself to you. I’m a middle school student aged 15. I’m an outgoing girl/boy who can always get on well with others. As for the time, I will be available this Sunday morning. My oral English is so excellent that I have no difficulty communicating with foreign friends. More importantly, I know a lot about Sansu culture. I’m sure I can help them have a better understanding of it.

I believe I can manage it if you give me a chance. Please reply to me by Friday!（103 words）

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容，写封邮件自荐成为三苏祠的志愿者，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍自荐的目的，自己的信息和优势，以及自己的期望。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。