15 征稿作文 中考英语满分作文赏析

15 征稿作文

NO.1

（2022·广东广州·中考真题）你校将兴建新图书馆，学校英文报以“My Green School Library”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿，介绍你所设计（design）的绿色图书馆。

注意：

1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；

2.词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）；

3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

My Green School Library

I want to design a green school library.

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【满分作文赏析】

My Green School Library

I want to design a green school library. It is green. It is built entirely from renewable resources. It is round. When you sit inside, you will feel very warm. It is composed of waste paper and solar panels. All its energy comes from the sun. You can read all kinds of books in it. You can also listen to music in it. If you are tired, you can also rest inside.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文主要以“My Green School Library”为题，并根据题干中的思维导图介绍你所设计的绿色图书馆，可适当增加细节。

2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。主要是根据思维导图中的提示描述自己设计的绿色图书馆，写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

NO.2

（2022·湖北宜昌·中考真题）假如你学校的校园广播《英语之声》栏目以“I love ________”为主题征稿，请你投稿。

稿件内容：

◆热爱的主题

◆热爱的理由

◆适当的感悟

稿件要求：

（1）请补全标题；

（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；

（3）词数80词左右。

I love ________

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【满分作文赏析】

I love reading

I love reading very much. I remember it was five years ago that I became interested in reading. At that time, I joined a reading club online. I was glad to find there were so many books for me to read. My teacher encouraged me to read different kinds of books, and then share my feelings with other readers. I found great fun sharing ideas. Ever since then, reading has been my favorite hobby.

From reading books, I can not only learn a lot from them, but also open a new world for me. It makes me relaxed and brings me a lot of fun. I think more and more people will love reading in the future.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我喜欢阅读”为题写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段先引出自己喜爱的事情，接着描述自己喜爱它的原因和经历；第二段描述自己从中得到的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

NO.3

（2022·江苏苏州·中考真题）《苏州日报》英文专刊以“Practice makes perfect”为题向中学生开展征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1. 你对该谚语的理解；

2. 你生活中的一个事例（例如：运动、乐器、家务、学习等方面）；

3. 你的感悟，

注意：1. 词数100，短文开头已给出，不计人总词数；

2. 内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；

3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。

Practice makes perfect

Have you heard of the saying “practice makes perfect”? I mean ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【满分作文赏析】

Practice makes perfect

Have you heard of the saying “practice makes perfect”? I mean that we should practice unfamiliar things again and again. We’ll be able to perform it perfectly.

The practice of learning English is a good example. We are not living in an English speaking country. So, in order to learn it well, we need extra practice, such as reading English books, going to English corners, or communicating with foreigners. You can’t master English just by sitting at your desk. As another example, if we want to be skilled in using the computer, we also need to practice using it. Some children become little experts in computer, just because they play with it everyday. On the contrary, if we just stick to books, we will still feel confused when using computers. Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that practice makes perfect.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“熟能生巧”这句谚语展开描述。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段引出主题，介绍自己对这句谚语的理解；第二段从学习英语以及学习使用电脑这两个方面，解读这句谚语。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

NO.4

（2022·浙江温州·中考真题）假如你是陈华，你的英国朋友Tracy在她学校成立了中国音乐社，她在为社团成员安排下学期的活动，写邮件征求你的意见。请根据她设计的活动（见下表）回复邮件，提出你对这些活动的看法和理由，并为她补充至少一项活动。

注意：(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；

(2)词数：110词左右；开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Tracy,Glad to hear from you. It’s great to know you’ve got a Chinese music club in your school.

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Hope you’ll enjoy Chinese music and have fun.

Yours,

Chen Hua

【满分作文赏析】

Dear Tracy,

Glad to hear from you. It’s great to know you’ve got a Chinese music club in your school.

Listening to traditional and modern Chinese music is a good way for the club members to know more about Chinese music, because they can experience the beauty of Chinese music personally. Sharing stories of Chinese singers can help them better understand the background of the songs, so it’s surely a meaningful activity.

Besides, you can introduce various Chinese instruments to the club members in different ways. There are many traditional musical instruments in China different from those in western countries. They can learn about Chinese culture through these instruments.

Hope you’ll enjoy Chinese music and have fun.

Yours,

Chen Hua

【解析】

1.题干解读：题目要求根据Tracy为中国音乐社所设计的活动来回复邮件，要提出你对这些活动的看法及理由，并补充一项适合该社团的活动。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称为主，时态采用一般现在时。邮件正文可采用四段式：第一段用已给出开头引出话题；第二段给出自己对Tracy设计的活动的看法及理由；第三段补充合适的社团活动；第四段用已给出的结尾收尾。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。