人教新目标中考英语复习--话题写作--传统文化与节日（课件）

人与社会话题七传统文化与节日话题写作·第一步 细审题 定要点·第二步 分段落 列要点·第三步 扩句子 润加工·第四步 连句子 成短文·第五步 查全文 得高分［2020 福建］假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友David 对中医很感兴趣。请你结合以下图示，用英语写一封电子邮件① ，向他②推荐即将③ 在你校举办的“传统中医进校园” ④的宣传日活动，说明推荐理由，并请他关注线上相关信息。词数80 左右。第一步 细审题 定要点⑤ 定要点：时间、活动、联系方式、原因注意事项1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。Dear David,I’m pleased to know that you’re interested in Chinese medicine. _____________________________________________________________________Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua第二步 分段落 列要点首段： 引出主题，即“传统中医进校园”。确定“传统中医进校园”的宣传日活动的时间和地点。中间段： 介绍宣传日活动内容。介绍“传统中医进校园”的宣传日活动内容：听报告、看展览和看一部《李时珍》的电影。结尾段：活动的意义和联系方式。指出本次活动的意义，提供学校网址给David。活动时间和地点【易错句】 It is going to take place in July 31, 2020.【一般句子】 It is going to take place on July 31, 2020.【美化句子】 1. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第三步 扩句子 润加工首段I'd like to share with you some information about Traditional Chinese Medicine Day in our school, which is going to take place on July 31, 2020. 活动一【易错句】 On that day, a doctor gives us a talk on Chinese medicine.【一般句子】 On that day, a doctor will give us a talk on Chinese medicine.【美化句子】 2. ______________________________________________________________________中间段 On that day, a famous doctor will give us a talk on Chinese medicine. 活动二【易错句】 There is going to have a show about its development.【一般句子】 There is going to be a show about its development.【美化句子】 3. ______________________________________中间段 There will be a show about its development. 活动三【易错句】 We will can watch the film call Li Shizhen.【一般句子】 We will be able to watch the film called Li Shizhen.【美化句子】 4. _______________________________________中间段 The film Li Shizhen will be on. 活动意义和联系方式【易错句】 The activities are very interesting. This is our school address www. intelschool. com.【一般句子】 The activities will be very interesting. This is our school website www. intelschool. com.结尾【美化句子 】 5.______________________________________________________________________________________________________I'm sure the activities will be very helpful to you. I hope you can visit www. intelschool. com. 在单词拼写和语法正确的前提下，把适合自己水平的句子连成完整的短文。第四步 连句子 成短文优秀范文Dear David,I’m pleased to know that you’re interested in Chinese medicine. Now, I’d like to share with you some information about Traditional Chinese Medicine Day in our school, ① which is going to take place on July 31, 2020.On that day, a famous doctor will give us a talk on Chinese medicine. And ② there will be a show about its development. Also, ③ the film Li Shizhen will be on.I’m sure the activities will be very helpful to you. I hope you can visit www. intelschool. com and ④ have a better understanding of traditional Chinese medicine.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua亮点点评： ①过渡句，引出本文的主题。②③用And 和Also 分别引出这次活动的具体内容，使文章条理清楚，逻辑性强。④用衔接词and 来升华文章的主题，与首句相呼应。依次检查：人称、时态、文体、主题是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。第五步 查全文 得高分［2022 三明质检］“中国红”在本次冬奥会中频频出现，让世界再一次感受到了中华文化的魅力。假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 对“中国红”很感兴趣，请你根据以下图示，用英语在QQ 中给他留言，介绍“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现，词数80 左右。注意事项必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数。Hi, Peter! I’m glad that you’re interested in Chinese red. I would like to tell you something about Chinese red.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hi, Peter! I'm glad that you're interested in Chinese red. I would like to tell you something about Chinese red. Red is the favorite color of Chinese people. It stands for happiness, warmth, and we believe that it can bring us good luck. Chinese red is popular with us. We use many red objects in the important events or on special occasions. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________For instance, at a wedding, you can see the red wedding dresses. The wedding room is also decorated with red paper cuttings. During the Spring Festival, you can see Chinese red around you. The houses are filled with red lanterns and Chinese knots. Children will get red packets for best wishes as well. Obviously, Chinese red plays an important role in China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I truly hope I can help you understand better about Chinese red. And I hope you can come to China for a visit one day!