人教新目标中考英语复习--话题写作--社会热点与劳动实践（课件）

人与社会话题十社会热点与劳动实践话题写作·第一步 细审题 定要点·第二步 分段落 列要点·第三步 扩句子 润加工·第四步 连句子 成短文·第五步 查全文 得高分［2022 福建］假定你是李华，近日你校开展了以“热爱劳动，珍爱粮食①” 为主题的实践活动。请你②结合以下图示，用英语给笔友John 写一封信③，分享活动过程④ 和感受。词数80 左右。第一步 细审题 定要点⑤定要点：活动的时间、地点、内容、感受。注意事项1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。Dear John,How is everything going? _________________________________________________________________________Have you had any experience of this kind?Yours,Li Hua第二步 分段落 列要点首段：开门见山，引出话题：用一句话说出自己在田间劳动的一日经历。中间段：详细介绍活动的时间、地点、活动内容和感受。结尾：用Have you had any experience of this kind? 这句话来呼应首段（已给出）。【易错句】 I’m glad tell you me experience in rice fields.【一般句子】 I’m glad to tell you my experience in rice fields.【美化句子】 1. _______________________________________________________________________第三步 扩句子 润加工首段I'm glad to tell you my one-­day experience in rice fields. 活动时间和地点【易错句】 In June 18, I and my classmates go to the farm.【一般句子】 On June 18, my classmates and I went to the farm.【美化句子】 2. ____________________________________________________________________________中间段 On June 18, my classmates and I went to the community farm. 活动内容【易错句】 Some learn to harvest rice. Some help to carry rice, others pick ears of rice.【一般句子】 Some learned to harvest rice. Some helped to carry rice, and others picked ears of rice.中间段 【美化句子】 3. __________________________________________________________________________________________________Some learned to harvest rice. Some helped to carry rice while others picked ears of rice from the fields. 活动感受【易错句】 After one-day work, we were tired, and we felt happy. And I came to realize that we should save food from now on.【一般句子】 After one-day work, we were tired, but we felt happy. And I have come to realize that we should save food from now on.中间段 【美化句子】 4.__________________________________________________________________________________________________Through the activity, I've got the pleasure of hard work and learned to value each grain. 在单词拼写和语法正确的前提下，把适合自己水平的句子连成完整的短文。第四步 连句子 成短文优秀范文Dear John,How is everything going? I’m glad to tell you my one-day experience in rice fields.On June 18, my classmates and I went to the community farm. When we arrived, we visited the farm and watched videos on farming. Then we worked together with farmers. Some learned to harvest rice. Some helped to carry rice while others picked ears of rice from the fields. Through the activity, I’ve got the pleasure of hard work and learned to value each grain.Have you had any experience of this kind?Yours,Li Hua亮点点评 when 和then 表示时间上的衔接，使文章更加紧凑。“Some...Some...others...” 展现不同的人开展不同的活动。依次检查：人称、时态、文体、主题是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。第五步 查全文 得高分［2022怀化］国家提出将 “劳动教育（labor education）”纳入中小学国家课程方案，请结合自身的劳动经历，谈谈你对劳动教育的看法。内容包括：注意事项1. 文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名；2. 包含以上表格内所有信息，可适当发挥；3. 词数：80 左右；文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。It’s reported that labor education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________It's reported that labor education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think it's necessary, because it is good for our health and we can relax from the hard study. I usually do labor at home such as doing the dishes, sweeping the floor and taking out the rubbish. At school I often clean the classroom and water flowers. I can not only keep healthy, but also develop good habits from it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________As for how to run the course in our school, I have some ideas. The school can offer different kinds of labor classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow plants. What's more, the school can also hold competitions about the labor skills to see who is the best. Such activities will make our school life more colorful and meaningful. I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term. I believe I will do well in it.