人教新目标中考英语复习--话题写作--学校生活（课件）

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·第一步 细审题 定要点
·第二步 分段落 列要点
·第三步 扩句子 润加工
·第四步 连句子 成短文
·第五步 查全文 得高分
[2021 福建] 假定你是学校英语报小记者李华，上周①学校开展了“English Day”活动② ，请你④ 根据下面的海报和学生参加活动的数据写一篇报道③ ，介绍活动情况以及同学们的感受② 。词数80 左右。
第一步 细审题 定要点
English Day Time: 2:00 p. m.—4:30 p. m. June 18th Place: In the schl hall Learning by: Singing Cmpetitin Cking Shw Strytelling Jin us!
⑤定要点：时间、地点、活动内容、参加人数比、同学们的感受
1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。Our Schl English DayOur schl English Day was a great success. ________________________________________________________
第二步 分段落 列要点
【易错句】 Itheld in the schl hall 2:00 p.m.—4:30 p.m. n June 18th.【一般句子】 It was held in the schl hall n June 18th. It lasted frm 2:00 p.m. t 4:30 p.m.【美化句子】 1. ______________________________________________________________________
第三步 扩句子 润加工
It tk place in the schl hall frm 2：00 p．m. t 4：30 p．m. n June 18th.
活动一Singing Cmpetitin 50%【易错句】50% students take part in the singing cmpetitin.【一般句子】50% f the students tk part in the singing cmpetitin.【美化句子】 2. ______________________________________________________________________
Half f us students tk part in the singing cmpetitin t shw urselves.
活动二Cking Shw 30%【易错句】30% students went the cking shw.【一般句子】30% f us went t the cking shw and tasted dishes.【美化句子】 3. ______________________________________________________________________
30% f us went t the cking shw where we tasted many delicius dishes.
活动三Strytelling 20%【易错句】There are 20% students like the strytelling part.【一般句子】20% f the students had a gd time in the strytelling part.【美化句子】 4. ______________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________
20% f the students enjyed themselves in the strytelling part because there were s many great stries.
【易错句】They learned a lt and thught learn English well is very imprtant.【一般句子】We learned a lt n the schl English Day. We realized the imprtance f learning English.【美化句子 】 5. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We nt nly learned a lt, but als came t realize the imprtance f teamwrk thrugh practice. We hpe there will be mre clrful activities in ur schl.
在单词拼写和语法正确的前提下，把适合自己水平的句子连成完整的短文。
第四步 连句子 成短文
Our Schl English DayOur schl English Day was a great success. It tk place in the schl hall frm 2:00 p.m. t 4:30 p.m. n June 18th.
There were three activities n the day. ① Half f us students tk part in the singing cmpetitin t shw urselves. 30% f us went t the cking shw where we tasted many delicius dishes. And ② the rest f us enjyed urselves in the strytelling part because there were s many great stries.
We spke highly f the English Day. ③ We nt nly ② learned a lt, but als ② came t realize the imprtance f teamwrk thrugh practice. We hpe there will be mre clrful activities in ur schl.亮点点评 ①概括句，起到承上启下的作用。② And 表示前后活动的顺接；nt als 表示两个感受的递进关系。③总结句，对上一段三项活动总的评价。
依次检查：人称、时态、文体、主题是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。
第五步 查全文 得高分
［2022 陕西A 卷改编］ 学校是个大家庭，这里充满了欢声笑语、爱与温暖。你们学校即将举办以“Schl Is a Big Family” 为主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据下列要求，从结构图的三个方面写一篇英文演讲稿。词数：80 左右。
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；2. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息；3. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。Gd afternn, everyne!I am glad t be here t give a speech. My tpic is “Schl Is a Big Family”. _________________________________________________Thank yu fr yur time!
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Gd afternn, everyne!I am glad t be here t give a speech. My tpic is “Schl Is a Big Family”．First, my math teacher is patient with me. She always encurages me t study harder. Secnd, my classmates are kind t me. I'm nt gd at sprts. My friend Li Yun helps me with running and I run faster.