人教新目标中考英语复习--话题写作--自然生态（课件）

人与自然话题十一自然生态话题写作·第一步 细审题 定要点·第二步 分段落 列要点·第三步 扩句子 润加工·第四步 连句子 成短文·第五步 查全文 得高分［2017 福建］你的美国朋友John 计划暑假来中国旅游。请你根据以下图示，用英语在QQ ① 中给他留言，介绍② 并推荐你的家乡福建③ ，词数80 左右。第一步 细审题 定要点④定要点：位置、省会、人口、环境、名胜、其他。注意事项1. 必须包含所有提示信息，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数;2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。Hi, John. I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I’d like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit.Fujian lies _____________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to meeting you!第二步 分段落 列要点首段：发出邀请: 我想邀请你来我的家乡福建游玩（已给出）。中间段：全方位介绍福建：地理位置、省会城市、人口、环境、名胜和美食等。结尾：表达期望（已给出）。介绍地理位置、省会城市【易错句】 Fujian lies to the southeast of China. Fuzhou is capital city.【一般句子】 Fujian lies in the southeast of China. Fuzhou is its capital city.第三步 扩句子 润加工中间段【美化句子】 1. ________________________________________________________________________________________Fujian lies in the southeast of China with Fuzhou as its capital city. 介绍人口、环境【易错句】 It has over 38 million population. It has also fresh air and beautiful mountain.【一般句子】 It has a population of over 38 million. It also has fresh air and beautiful mountains.中间段 【美化句子】2. __________________________________________________________________________________________________It has a population of over 38 million. Because of the nice environment, it's known as Refreshing Fujian. 介绍名胜和美食【易错句】 You can visit many place of interests like Mount Wuyi. You can taste many delicious food.【一般句子】 You can visit many places of interest like Mount Wuyi. You can taste many kinds of delicious food.中间段 【美化句子】 3.__________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________Many famous places of interest like Mount Wuyi and Gulang Island are well worth visiting. Besides, you can taste various kinds of delicious food. 在单词拼写和语法正确的前提下，把适合自己水平的句子连成完整的短文。第四步 连句子 成短文优秀范文Hi, John. I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I’d like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit.Fujian lies in the southeast of China with Fuzhou as its capital city. It has a population of over 38 million. Because of the nice environment, it’s known as Refreshing Fujian, which attracts millions of tourists from home and abroad. If you come, you can enjoy fresh air, the blue sky as well as beautiful mountains and clear rivers. Many famous places of interest like Mount Wuyi and Gulang Island are well worth visiting. Besides, you can taste various kinds of delicious food.I’m looking forward to meeting you!亮点点评：通过which 引导的定语从句和if 引导的条件状语从句，展示了福建优美的环境，吸引了游客。同时从句的使用，使句式丰富多样。衔接词besides 承上启下，表示除了上文提到的相关介绍之外还有其他的介绍，使文章语义紧凑，层次分明。依次检查：人称、时态、文体、主题是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。第五步 查全文 得高分改革开放以来，中国发生了翻天覆地的变化。某英文网站正在开展以“家乡的巨变”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李洪，请你根据以下表格提示用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你家乡的变化，至少要有一条自己的观点。注意事项1. 文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥以使行文连贯；2. 词数：80 左右；（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。Great Changes in My HometownSince the reform and opening-up policy was carried out, great changes have taken place in my hometown.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Great Changes in My HometownSince the reform and opening-­up policy was carried out, great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the old days, people used to live in small and old houses. But now most people live in apartments in tall buildings. People went to work or school on foot or by bike in the past, but now subways, high­-speed trains and planes are very convenient to take you anywhere. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________In the past, students took desks and chairs from their homes to the school and the windows of the classrooms were broken, so the classrooms were old and dark. But now the classrooms are wide and bright. There didn't use to be any hospitals in the countryside, and people had to go a long way to see a doctor. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Now doctors can come to every family to give physical examinations. There is no doubt that my hometown will become more and more beautiful.