高中英语高考高考英语总复习课件：高考开放式作文写作技巧

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开放式作文的两种类型第一类：漫画 Yu are discussing the fllwing picture with yur English friend Jim. Nw yu are telling him hw yu understand the picture and what makes yu think s.
第二类：文字请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。Yu cannt chse what yu are given, but yu can chse hw yu make use f it.注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；②除诗歌外，文体不限；③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；④词数为120左右。
开放式作文的优势：1.防止考生“直接翻译”2.需要在理解图片/文字的基础上提取话题，考察学生的写作能力和思考能力3.难度大，区分度更高
第一类：漫画式作文第1种：图片中有两个矛盾对立体 （老龄化...）描述图片，得出结论
第2种：图片中只有一个人/物外国人费力地用叉子吃面，矛盾，结论（做事情要用正确方法，才能事倍功半）
第3种：图片蕴含了一个哲理发现与正常情况的区别找矛盾，逆境生长，适应环境，坚持梦想
漫画式作文写作核心：制造“矛盾”一描二议三升华：一、描述图片：不遗漏细节，有合理的想象二、发表议论：有理有力三、升华观点：联系实际，自身做起
第一段：描述图片(不遗漏细节，有合理的想象) As is vividly shwn in th picture, we can see ... What inspires us is that …万能句式 As is vividly shwn in th picture, we can see a yung tree standing between tw strange buildings, sparing n effrts t grw up, reaching the sunshine finally, lking rather curageus and cnfident. What inspires us is that he has been bent by the envirnment.
第二段：发表议论（有理有力）Frm my perspective, this picture cnveys a message that…(概括图片主题)In the picture, …(总结图中现象)广泛适应性，从物说到人The reasn is simple:…(分析现象成因)
第二段：发表议论（有理有力） Frm my perspective, this picture cnveys a message that everyne f us needs a dream. In the picture, the tree refuses t give up his dream, which led t his final success. The reasn is simple: his dream is s clear that he had n chice but t hld n t the last minute.
第三段：升华观点（联系实际，自身做起）Actually, this reflects a widely existed image in ur life. …(联系实际)In cnclusin, we teenagers are suppsed t…Only in this way can we…(自身做起)
Actually , this reflects a widely existed image in ur life. Mre than ften than nt, we wuld rather give up ur dreams than face all the challenges. Hwever, if we culd always vercme all the difficulties,we wuld certainly achieve ur wn success.In cnclusin, we teenagers are suppsed t set ur gals and spare n effrts t fulfill ur dreams. Only in this way can we taste the same jy as the tree in the picture.
万用模板As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述图画).定语从句引出新人物转折或让步引出矛盾关系The mst striking feature is(图画重点信息).There is n dubt that/ It is generally believed is …that…(强调句标明主题)It is high time that sb. did sth.(虚拟语气发出倡议)Only in this way can we…(倒装再次呼应主题)
【练习】假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者；以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻,请根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。内容要求：1.描述漫画内容；2.发表个人感想。注意详略得当：只有一方，着重描图（第一段）有矛盾双方，议论部分（第二段）着重写含蓄式，着重写二三段
用高级词汇/短语替换 The park was beautiful, with the sun shining, the wind blwing and birds singing.The park was full f freshness and beauty f spring, with the sun shining, the wind blwing and birds singing.
2. 交代新人物出场我正欣赏美景，突然看到一对年轻男女，他们的行为令人不快。I was enjying the scenery.I saw a yung cuple.Their behavir was s unpleasant.用定语从句合并短句：I was enjying the scenery when I saw a yung cuple, whsebehavir was s unpleasant.
用高级词汇/短语替换I was enjying the︿scenery when I saw a yung cuple, whsebehavir was s unpleasant.I was enjying the fantastic/fascinating scenery arund when ayung cuple caught my sight, whse behavir was s undesirable.
3. 用转折/让步突出矛盾关系The man spat int the lake.The wman threw rubbish and talked ludly.There was a sign “N Littering” nearby.Althugh there was a sign “N Littering” nearby, the man spatint the lake while the wman threw rubbish and talked ludly.
用高级词汇/短语替换 Althugh there was a︿sign “N Littering” nearby, the man spat int the lake while the wman threw rubbish and talked ludly︿. Althugh there was a nticeable sign “N Littering” nearby, the man spat int the lake while the wman threw rubbish and talked ludly as if they were the nly peple in the park.
Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in theFairy Lake Park.The park was full f freshness andbeauty f spring, with the sun shining, the wind blwingand birds singing.(with结构描景，渲染气氛) I wasenjying the fantastic/ fascinating scenery arund whena yung cuple caught my sight, whse behavir was sundesirable.(用定从引出新人物) Althugh there wasa nticeable sign “N Littering” nearby, the man spatint the lake while the wman threw rubbish and talkedludly as if they were the nly peple in the park.(让步突出矛盾)
漫画式作文写作核心：制造“矛盾”一描二议三升华：一、描述图片不遗漏细节，有合理想象二、发表议论有理有力三、升华主题联系实际，自身做起
文字式开放作文写作技巧一总二例三升华一、开门见山，阐明观点将给出的题目换种说法再说一遍二、事例入手，先抑后扬 （注意用第一人称，注意时态-过去时）写自己熟悉的故事比写不着边际的例子更能打动人三、总结经验，升华主题
1.开门见山，阐明观点Yu cannt chse what yu are given, but yu can chse hwyu make use f it.洗牌的是上帝，出牌的是自己。There is a saying ges that “When gd clses a dr, he pens a windw.”
2. 先抑后扬讲故事三年前，我做…失败了Three years ag I failed in…… Three years ag I failed an vital exam in my life and became a student in an rdinary schl.
让步或转折引出矛盾Althugh I felt disappinted at the shabby campus andthe prly-equipped classrm, I fund the teacherspatient and cnsiderate.改造成倒装句：Disappinted as I felt at the shabby campus andthe prly-equipped classrm, I fund the teacherspatient and cnsiderate.Besides, I enjyed the friendly atmsphere in class.
老师和同学们都很热情。My teachers and classmates were s warm-hearted.Whenever I was in truble, they were always there fr me.两句话主语相同，或者第一句话的宾语是第二句话的主语定语从句合并简单句：Whenever I was in truble, my teachers and classmates, wh weres warm-heart, were always there fr me.
大团圆结局：最终，我成为班上最优秀的学生之一。Sn, I became ne f the tp students in my class.这段经历增强了我的自信心和动力。This experience greatly increased my cnfidence and gtme mtivated.第二句话的主语是第一句话的内容定从合并简单句：Sn, I became ne f the tp students in my class, whichgreatly increased my cnfidence and gt me mtivated.
3. 总结经验，升华主题强调、虚拟、倒装灵活切换强调： My experience tells me that it is nt what yu are given but hw yu make use f it that determines wh yu are.虚拟：发出倡议 It is high time that we made great effrts t face the life n matter what we had been given.倒装： Only in this way can we make great effrts t face the life n matter what we had been given.
万用模板There is a saying ges that…/It is universally acknwledged that…(言语或名言开头）Three years ag I failed in……(先抑后扬讲故事)Disappinted as I…(让步状语从句的倒装结构引出矛盾)定语从句，大团圆结局My experience tells me that it is nt…but…that…(强调结尾，掷地有声)
几个必用句式：强调句： It is …that…虚拟语气：It is high time that sb. did sth.倒装结构： Only in this way can we…定语从句：两句并一句With结构分词
下图反映的是网络时代所出现的一种问题，有些孩子沉溺于网上聊天而忽视了与父母的沟通。请你根据漫画写一篇150词左右的短文。
As is vividly prtrayed/depicted in the picture,a teenage by is busy chatting nline.(开篇描图）He enjys it s much as t ignre his mum, wh is juststanding nearby.(定语从句合并短句，引出新人物)
Althugh she is just standing there watching, herunhappy expressin suggests that she hpes fr a chancet have a chat with her sn. (让步引出矛盾关系)Actually, This phenmenn is becming mre and mrecmmn bth at hme and abrad.(升华一下)
1.为什么青少年宁愿跟网友聊天而不愿意跟家长谈话？Why d many teenagers chse t cmmunicate withnet friends rather than peple in real life, even theirwn parents？2. 因为…That’s mainly because chatting nline is much fun andkids can make new friends with peple acrss the teenagers hld thepinin thattheirprivate secretsculd be shared n the Internet.
漫画式作文写作核心：制造“矛盾”一描二议三升华：一、描述图片不遗漏细节，有合理想象二、发表议论有理有力三、升华观点联系实际，自身做起