上海黄浦区2020-2022年中考英语二模试题-02作文

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上海黄浦区2020-2022年中考英语二模试题-02作文一、话题作文1．（2020·上海黄浦·统考二模）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “The first time I ...”（以“我第一次……”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）要求：1. 补全作文标题。2. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名以及其他相关信息。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 二、材料作文2．（2021·上海黄浦·统考二模）Write at least 60 words on the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)在生活中，要取得成就，往往需要勇气，你需要勇气来帮助你战胜困难，承认错误，拒绝他人，或者克服恐惧，你是如何理解勇气的呢？请以“have the courage to…”(我有勇气……)，为题，结合自己的经历谈谈你对勇气的理解和感受。注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2022·上海黄浦·统考二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）疫情期间，为了帮助同学们保护视力，避免过多使用电子产品，学校鼓励大家阅读纸质书籍。老师决定招募志愿者，管理在线读书俱乐部“Online reading club”。如果你有意愿承担管理读书俱乐部的工作，请给老师写一封电子邮件，谈谈你计划如何做。邮件内容可以包含以下几个问题： 1. How often do you meet online? 2. How will you choose books to read?3. What activities will you organize for your club?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：1． The first time I succeeded in cookingWhen I was very young, I liked to watch my mother cook. I always found it amazing when colorful dishes appeared on the table. So I begged my mother to teach me to cook. Though I started with some simple dishes, it wasn't so easy as I had imagined. But I kept practicing. Then, one day in the holiday, I decided to make lunch without my mother's help. I tried two of the dishes I had learnt. To my surprise, I made it! At that moment I was proud of myself.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，在写作时应注意要首先补全作文题目，然后围绕题目再写作。2.例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一人称叙述内容；时态采用一般过去时，叙述清晰，行文连贯。3.高分亮点：短语：like to do；on the table；beg sb to do sth；teach sb to do sth；start with；so…as；keep doing sth；decide to do sth；to one’s surprise。语法：when引导的时间状语从句；并列连词so，but的运用；though引导的让步状语从句；频度副词always的运用；定语从句的运用。2．例文Have the courage to be braveIn our daily life, we have various fears preventing us from moving forward. And overcoming the fears helps us become more confident. I used to be afraid of speaking in public. I never dared to step up and speak in front of a crowd. Then, in Grade 9, a speech contest was held in my school. With my teacher’s encouragement, I entered for it and made full preparations for it. Luckily, I finished it smoothly. To my surprise, I won the second prize. This time I was brave. Now I have become more and more confident in expressing myself in public.Don’t let the fear take you. Just step forward and you will find you can do it!【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。但写作时要根据汉语提示，首先叙述自身的经历，然后根据经历谈谈对勇敢的理解。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述自身的经历；时态采用一般过去时叙述过去的经历，用一般现在时和现在完成时来叙述自己的成长和对勇敢的理解。描述经历时，力求语言准确，叙事完整，行文连贯，保证条理清晰。3．例文：Dear teacher,I am so delighted to hear that you are looking for a volunteer to manage the online reading club. Responsible and organized as I am, I think I am the right person for this club. If I am chosen, I will spare no effort to help my classmates use electronic products less and read paper books more. First, I will hold a meeting online for everyone to share the books they like best and choose some of them as a must for everyone to finish in a certain period of time. Then, we will meet online once a week to report our reading achievements and share our thoughts. Besides, I will sometimes ask our Chinese teachers to give us some tips on reading books. Last but not least, I will invite my cousin, a very famous writer, to share some of her works as well as some tips on how to write a good article. In a word, if I am in charge of this club, I will do everything possible for my classmates. Yours,Li Hua【详解】1. 题干解读：本题目属于应用文写作，同时写作时要按邮件格式写，要求按照三个问题的提示展开写作，给老师写一封自荐信。2. 写作指导：本文是向对方阐述自己的计划，因此应使用第一人称为主；时态采用一般将来时为主；根据三个问题，计划至少涉及三个方面；结尾不忘进行总结，表达自己对这份志愿者工作的向往。