上海嘉定区2020-2022年英语中考一模试题-作文

上海嘉定区2020-2022年英语中考一模试题-作文

一、话题作文

1．（2020·上海嘉定·统考一模）Writing

Write at least 60 words on the topic “  help(s) me grow”（以“  助我成长”为题，写一篇不少 于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

生活中的很多事或人能帮助我们成长。理想、品格、老师、亲人、朋友……都为我们的成长助力，请选取一个方面，结合发生在你自己身上的经历，来写一写他（它）是如何助力你成长的。

（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息）

The following is for reference only（以下表达仅供参考）

encourage sb. to do ...

do sb. a favour

with the help of ...

make great progress

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2．（2021·上海嘉定·统考一模）Write at least 60 words about the topic “When I met with a problem.”（以“当我遇到问题时”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文。标点符号不占格。）

在日常的生活与学习中，我们应该具备一些解决问题的能力。请结合一次自身经历，说说你是如何解决那个问题的，并分享一下你的经验：如果未能解决，也请谈谈你从中获得的教训。

（注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息。）

The following is for reference only.（以下表达仅供参考）

have difficulty in…

enable me to…

help me realize...

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

3．（2022·上海嘉定·统考一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)

实践类作业 (Project-based homework) 形式多样，可以个人完成，也可以小组合作完成；可以是写书评 (book review)、影评 (film review)；也可以是完成调查报告 (survey report) 或海报制作 (posters) 等。学校正在为“最喜欢的寒假实践类作业”征询建议。假设你是李华，请你在学校网站给张老师留言，分享你的最喜欢的寒假实践类作业，既可以是你完成过的，也可以是你新的创意，请简单描述实践过程并陈述分享理由。

(注意：1.不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，照抄阅读语篇不得分。)

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

参考答案：

1．Mary helps me grow

Looking back on the past four years’ study, there have been many difficulties for me not only in study but also in life. There is an unforgettable experience.

It was the first time that I didn’t pass an important exam. At that time, I was so depressed that I could hardly control myself. After knowing that I was in bad mood, my friend Mary spent all her free time companying me and never stopped encouraging me. With her encouragement, I tried my best in study. Finally, I succeeded in making progress, and I realized that how important a good friend was to me.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文，开头先概括描述，紧接着第二段围绕着受感触的事展开写。

2.例文点评：文章以第一人称来叙述，时态采用一般过去时为主。描述事情情节时，条例清楚，语句表达通顺，逻辑性强。

3.高分亮点：

短语：not only…but also；spend sometime doing sth

句子：It was the first time that I didn’t pass an important exam中that引导的定语从句；I realized that how important a good friend was to me中that引导的宾语从句。

2．例文：

When I met with a problem

Everyone will meet a difficulty during his life, especially for a student. I used to  have difficulty with my homework. For example, sometimes I can't work out a maths problem. In front of a difficulty, different people have different attitudes. Some will give up. To me, I will never give up. I will think it over and over, till I have solved it. Or I will turn to my teachers and classmates for help. This experience makes me know the importance of thinking over the problems.

【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求以“当我遇到问题时”为题写一篇短文，要求结合一次自身经历，介绍如何解决那个问题的并分享经验；如何未能解决，谈一谈从中获得的教训，可适当发挥。

2、写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述自身经历；时态采用一般现在时为主；描述经历以及如何解决的问题并分享经验或描述未能解决问题，从中获得的教训时，应详细具体，叙述完整，保证条理清晰。

3．例文

I think project-based homework is a helpful friend that can guide me to study efficiently. It can not only help us review what we have learned, but also give us a chance to think about the knowledge.

My favorite project-based homework in winter holiday is a survey about lucky money. I interviewed my friends online about how they spent their lucky money. I found half of them used it to buy books or gave away to the poor children while some of them bought snacks or played online games. From then on, I learned to make good use of my lucky money.

I love that homework because it can help us find out the problems and solutions by ourselves instead of copying or repeating something boring.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，题干要求分享最喜欢的寒假实践类作业，可以是做过的或者自己的创意，描述实践过程，并说明喜爱的理由。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称进行写作，用一般过去时描述做过的实践类作业。写作时可分为三段：第一段叙述实践类作业的优点，引入主题；第二段介绍自己最喜欢的寒假实践类作业；第三段说明喜爱的理由。注意语言连贯，条理清晰，力求无语法和标点错误。