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上海杨浦区2022-2020年英语中考一模试题-作文

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这是一份上海杨浦区2022-2020年英语中考一模试题-作文，共7页。试卷主要包含了话题作文，材料作文，通知等内容，欢迎下载使用。

一、话题作文

1．（2021·上海杨浦·统考一模）Write at least 60 words on the given situation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

法国“蜘蛛人”阿兰.罗伯特的经历告诉我们，战胜恐惧也可以是一种勇敢。你对勇敢的理解是如何的呢？请以“The time I was brave(那次我很勇敢)” 为题，根据自身的经历谈谈你对勇敢的理解。

（注意： 1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，2.照抄阅读的语篇不得分。）

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二、材料作文

2．（2020·上海杨浦·统考一模）Writing

In 60-100 words, make up a two-turn dialogue according to the given situation（根据所给情境编一篇 60-100词的两个轮次的对话。标点符号不占格，对话的开头和结尾已给出。）

Situation: Tome Brown, a 40-year-old P. E. teacher, saved a boy from being knocked down by a car. Crystal school reporter wanted to write an article about his good deed（事迹）. She interviewed Tom Brown.

The interview begins like this:

Crystal: Mr. Brown, May I ask you a few questions? Tom Brown: Sure. Please go ahead.

Crystal: Tom Brown:

Crystal: Thank you for you time! It’s nice talking to you.

（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息。）

三、通知

3．（2022·上海杨浦·统考一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情景写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

学校以下各社团打算在活动周开展一些竞赛活动：

comics club（动漫社） computer club（电脑社）

school newspaper club（校报社） super brain club（最强大脑社）

debate club（辩论社） paper cutting club（剪纸社）

假设你是其中一个社团的干事 Sandy，请拟一份通知告知你所在社团将要举行的活动，内容包括：

1.活动名称、目的；

2.活动时间、地点；

3.参加活动的相关要求；

4.奖项设置等。

参考答案：

1．例文：

The time I was brave

In our daily life, we have various fears preventing us from moving forward. And overcoming the fears helps us become more confident.

I used to be afraid of speaking in public. I never dared to step up and speak in front of a crowd. Then, in Grade 9, a speech contest was held in my school. With my teacher's encouragement, I entered for it and made full preparations for it. Luckily, I finished it smoothly. To my surprise, I won the second prize. This time I was brave. Now I have become more and more confident in expressing myself in public.

Don't let the fear take you. Just step forward and you will find you can do it!

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。但写作时要根据汉语提示，首先叙述自身的经历，然后根据经历谈谈对勇敢的理解。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述自身的经历；时态采用一般过去时叙述过去的经历，用一般现在时和现在完成时来叙述自己的成长和对勇敢的理解。描述经历时，力求语言准确，叙事完整，行文连贯，保证条理清晰。

2．Crystal: Mr. Brown, May I ask you a few questions?

Tom Brown: Sure. Please go ahead.

Crystal:When and where the accident happened?

Tom Brown: At about 8:30, I was walking on Ocean Road when a boy on a bike passed me quickly. The road was empty at that time so the boy kept riding in the middle.

Crystal: How did the accident happened?

Tom Brown: The boy was listening to music with earplugs and he didn’t hear the warning. Suddenly the car speeded up and passed the boy. Unfortunately, it hit the boy. The boy fell off his bike onto the road, but the car didn’t stop.

Crystal: What did you do then?

Tom Brown: The number plate of the car was so dirty that I couldn’t see the number clearly. The boy was badly hurt so I sent him to the office. Then I called the police.

Crystal: Thank you for you time! It’s nice talking to you.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于对话，主要表达校记者需要写一个关于体育老师救了一个被车撞了的小孩的事迹而进行的一个采访。注意时态的准确运用，询问当时发生的事情以及体育老师描述当时的情景需要使用一般过去时。并灵活使用所学的单词、短语以及句型使文章更加生动。

2.这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

3.高分亮点：

单词短语：at that time, keep doing, listen to, with, speed up以及fall off。

高分句型：

I was walking on Ocean Road when a boy on a bike passed me quickly中使用了be doing...when...结构；

The number plate of the car was so dirty that I couldn’t see the number clearly中so...that...引导结果状语从句。

【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如at that time, keep doing, listen to, with, speed up, fall off, be doing...when以及so...that引导的结果状语从句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

3．例文

NOTICE

In order to improve your creativity, we will hold a paper-cutting competition this Saturday at 2:00 pm in the school hall. The name of the competition is Celebrating the New Year. Participants are required to provide a piece of paper-cutting about the new year. We’re going to have three levels of awards. The first prize is an English dictionary. The second prize is a notebook. And the third prize is a certificate. Looking forward to your participation.

Paper Cutting Club

【详解】1.题干解读：本篇作文是一篇通知。需要根据题干所给社团选择一种社团写一份关于所在社团举办竞赛的通知。

2.写作指导：本文人称主要采用第一人称和第三人称，时态主要采用一般将来时和一般现在时。活动的相关内容要具体详细，语言要简洁。