上海崇明区2020-2021年中考英语二模试题-作文

上海崇明区2020-2021年中考英语二模试题-作文

一、话题作文

1．（2020·上海崇明·统考二模）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Online learning” (请以“在线学习”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。)

提示: 由于新冠病毒(novel coronavirus), 前段时间我们只能在家里通过网络进行学习,有人认为很新鲜效果好,也有人觉得效果一般。请从以上两个观点中,选择一个角度，并结合自己网络学习的经历,谈谈你对“在线学习”的体会或看法，并给出理由。

(注意: 短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。)

Online learning

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2．（2021·上海崇明·统考二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “In three years’ time” （以“三年以后”为题写一遍不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

你是否想象过，三年以后你的生活或者周围的世界会发生产怎样的变化？你对三年以后的自己周围的世界有怎样的期待？你能为此做些什么？

（注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）

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参考答案：

1．例文：

Online learning

This spring our new term don’t come on time because the epidemic broke out. We have to learn online at home. We have lessons from Monday to Friday. Every day class starts at 7:30 and finishes at 4 o’clock. We study Maths, English, Chinese, Physics and PE. During the online learning, there are many problems.

Some students think that this kind of learning method is very fresh and can stimulate their interest in learning. If they meet problems in learning, they can ask the teacher for help in time. But some other students think it’s not good because they can’t concentrate on learning and they can not study as carefully as in class. When their parents go to work, they feel lonely at home alone.

As for me, I like learning at home because I needn’t get up early. I have more sleep time. I won’t hurry to school. But I miss my school my teachers and my classmate. I look forward to meeting them soon.

【详解】1. 题干解读：文章是一篇话题作文。主要以“Online learning”为主题展开描写，文章主要以疫情期间的网络课程为背景描写上网课的一些情况，有认同这种方式的，也有不认同这种方式的，都要写出来，同时还要写出自己的观点和体会。要注意语言的应用要合理。

2. 例文点评：文章分三段描写。第一段写疫情期间开始了网课以及上课的情况，总的引出有一些问题；第二段分别从认同与不认同两个方面详细的介绍不同的意见，第三段以个人的观点总结文章。整个文章结构完整思路清晰，语言表达准确无误，用词恰当。

3. 高分亮点：

短语：break out；from … to …；in time；concentrate on；as … as；get up；hurry to；look forward to。

句型：because引导的原因状语从句；that引导的宾语从句；if引导的条件状语从句；when引导的时间状语从句。

【点睛】英语写作可以分步走。首先要仔细读题，把所给的要求，提示认真读一读；然后可以在草稿纸上列出一个简单的提纲，提纲中要包括题目所给的全部要求，根据提纲确定文章的结构，然后把题目中的要求用简单的句子描写出来，最后再把这些句子包装润色加以修饰，这时可以使用一些短语，连词等使得文章更加完整，行文更加流畅；最后再通读文章，仔细检查，确定每个词，短语，句子准确无误就可以了。本文主要是列出不同的观点的提纲，然后再逐个描写即可。

2．例文：

In three years’ time

There is no denying that the world is changing fast. I do believe that my life will be different in three years’ time. On the one hand, it will be more convenient, we can study at home. Whether we will go to school or stay at home depends on our choices. Certainly, unlike the last special year, we had to study on line because of the virus . On the other hand, the environment may become worse especially white pollution. Sadly, the number of people who like to throw everywhere is still rising. I hope the world will be more beautiful. To achieve this, I need to learn more knowledge about how to protect the environment. Call on more people to take part in fighting against pollution. Only by working together will our future be better in 3 years.

【详解】1.题干解读：本题要求以“三年以后”为题，写篇不少于60个词的短文，描述三年以后你的生活或者周围世界发生的变化，以及自己对周围世界的期待。

2.写作指导：人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般将来时为主。写作时，先描述三年后所发生的变化，最后可以谈谈如何实现这些变化；保证内容完整，结构清晰条理。