上海金山区2022-2020年中考英语二模试题-作文

上海金山区2022-2020年中考英语二模试题-作文

一、话题作文

1．（2022·上海金山·统考二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “The most important rule in my family”. (以“我家最重要的一条家规”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

国有国法，家有家规 (family rule)。不同家庭有不同家规。如：做人诚实、尊敬长辈、天天阅读、人人做家务或吃饭时不能刷手机等等。在你家里，可能也有很多家规，那么你认为你家最看重的家规是哪一条呢？为什么？请举例说明。

注意：

1. 短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。

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2．（2021·上海金山·统考二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Keep your mind open”.(以“敞开心扉/心胸开阔”为题, 写一篇至少 60 个单词的短文, 标点符号不占格)..  

在生活中, 你对你的生活满意吗? 不满意的话, 是什么原因呢? 如果我们能以开阔的胸怀面对不同的事物, 从不同的角度去思考问题, 可能会得到意想不到的收获。结合自身经历, 谈一谈你是如何做到心胸开阔、乐于接受各种顺势逆境的。

(注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息, 否则不予评分。)

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3．（2020·上海金山·统考二模）Write at least 60 words about the topic "My opinion on remote lessons" (请以"我对远程课堂的看法"为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

疫情期间我们开启了一种全新的学习模式——远程课堂(remote lessons)。在此期间你是如何学习的？请结合你自身经历，谈谈对远程课堂的看法。

注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名以其他相关信息，否则不予评分。

The following is for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考)

•because of the virus       

•manage time       

•self-control       

•effective

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参考答案：

1．例文

The most important rule in my family

There are national laws and family rules. Different families have different rules, such as being honest, respecting elders, reading every day, not playing on the phone when doing housework or eating, and so on.

In my family, the most important rule is to be honest. Because my father thinks: lose honesty, also lose everything. Honesty involves many aspects, such as keeping promises, strictly carrying out plans, not telling lies and so on.

Honesty is very important for everyone. I hope every one of us can be an honest person.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“The most important rule in my family”为题，写一篇英文短文，介绍家中最重要的一条家规。

2.写作指导：本文运用第一人称；时态采用一般现在时。可采用分段的形式，使文章结构清晰。最后保证语言通顺，行文连贯；注意语法正确，无标点和大小写错误。

2．例文：

Keep your mind open

In our daily life, we sometimes don’t feel satisfied with our life, especially when we meet difficult situations, such as getting a low mark, losing a precious gift and so on. If we can keep our minds open to different people or things, we may get unexpected harvest.

Last week, my good friend Lucy got a good grade in her English exam. But mine is very poor. I felt very sad. However, she always talked about the English test. It made me annoyed. But I didn’t tell her how I felt. Later, I told my mother about it. My mother encouraged me to talk to Lucy and tell her how I felt. My mother said that friends should keep their minds open to each other. The next day, I shared my feelings with Lucy. She suddenly realized that she had not thought about my feelings and apologized for it. She thanked me for keeping my mind open to her.

In a word, we should keep our mind open when we face the difficulties.

【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示内容，写出自己敞开心扉的一件事情，要写一件具体的事情，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般过去时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。

3．例文

My opinion on remote lessons

Because of the virus, I have taken online courses for over 6 weeks. By communicating with teachers on the online communication platform, I can also solve the problems in the new knowledge in time. It is important for me to keep learning every day. Remote lessons can provide us with a good opportunity to learn.

Remote lessons have many advantages over the traditional classes. However, remote lessons also has some disadvantages. For example, staring at the screen for a long time is very harmful to students’ eyes. And we students need self-control. Then we can finish learning effectively.

【详解】题目解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求写出自己对远程课堂的影响，可以结合自身的经历谈。文章注意谈论观点看法时，需要观点明确，有自己的见解。

例文点评：本文分成两顿，第一段介绍自己六个月的远程课堂经历，以及如何学习的，第二段介绍了作者认为远程课堂的优缺点。观点明确，行文流畅，句型多样。

高分亮点：

短语：solve the problems；for a long time；be harmful to；finish doing。

句型：it作形式主语It is important for me to keep learning every day.；现在完成时应用Because of the virus, I have taken online courses for over 6 weeks.