上海杨浦区2020-2021年中考英语三模试题-作文

上海杨浦区2020-2021年中考英语三模试题-作文

一、话题作文

1．（2021·上海杨浦·统考三模）    Write at least 60 words on the given situation(根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

Michael  Morpurgo 认为当小学老师是他一生最快乐的时光之一。每个人的成长过程中都会有一些快乐时光，或长或短。请以“The happiest days of my life” 为题，分享你的经历和感受。

（注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分）2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。

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二、电子邮件

2．（2022·上海杨浦·统考三模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据所给情景，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

假设你是李平，最近收到加拿大朋友Jack的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分，请你阅读后回复。

注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。

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参考答案：

1．例文：

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       The happiest days of my life

    In my opinion, being a student is the happiest days of my life. I remember when I was in junior high school, I learned every subject well, but my favorite subject was English. Every time I had an English class, the teacher always gives me the small task of distributing homework and test papers. Every time I did these things, I felt very proud. Not only English teachers, but also other teachers paid special attention to me because of my serious attitude.

    I miss junior high school life very much now, and thank the teachers for their concern, which makes me grow up in happiness.

【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“The happiest days of my life” 为题，写一篇短文，叙述一下成长过程中的一些快乐时光，分享你的经历和感受。短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息。

2.写作指导：文章要求叙述成长过程中的快乐时光，是对过去的叙述，所以时态上以一般过去时为主，人称上以第一人称为主。对过去的叙述，注意动词过去式的变化。最后表达一下自己的感受。

2．Dear Jack,

I’ve read your E-mail. Now let me tell you a little bit about how I use computers myself.

     First, I spent about two hours on the computer yesterday. I mainly looked up some information on the Internet and watched some videos. And I don’t think it’s right to spend too much time online every day. Because it hurts our eyes and affects our study. So we should use computers properly.

Yours,

Li Ping

【详解】1.题干解读：本文一篇电子邮件，根据Jack的电子邮件内容给他回复一封邮件。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，介绍昨天的事情应用一般过去时，表达自己的观点时应用一般现在时；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时要根据邮件中的问题来回复。确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。