江苏省南京市建邺区2020-2022年中考英语二模试题分类汇编：书面表达

江苏省南京市建邺区

2020-2022年中考英语二模试题分类汇编

书面表达

2022年江苏省南京市建邺区中考二模英语试题

九、材料作文

76．“Kids’ Fun” 杂志正在举办征文活动，请根据征文要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。

注意：1.要点齐全，文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3.词数80左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。What an unforgettable school trip!

I have experienced many school trips, but the one I will never forget is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2021年江苏省南京市建邺区中考二模英语试题

九、电子邮件

76．假如你是阳光中学的光明，英国交换生 James 即将来你校交流。近期，他给你写了一封电子邮件询问选修课事宜，请你根据邮件内容，用英语给 James 回一封邮件。

注意：

1.    文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2.    语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3.    词数 80 左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear James,I’m glad to know that you are coming to our school.

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Ming

2020年江苏省南京市建邺区中考二模英语试题

书面表达

76.初三中考最后复习阶段，同学们要学会调节并且劳逸结合，可以积极参加一些有意义的活动来丰富自己的生活。假定你是李磊，你的朋友 Frank 想邀请你与他共度周末，请认真阅读他写给你的邮件，根据邮件内容及你的想法用英语问复。

注意： 1.词数 90 左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；

2.回复必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；

3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

Dear Frank,

Thanks for your invitation for this weekend._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I am looking forward to this weekend!

All the best,

 Li Lei

答案：

2022年江苏省南京市建邺区中考二模英语试题

76．

例文：

What an unforgettable school trip!

    I have experienced many school trips, but the one I will never forget is visiting the Great Wall and the Fragrant Hills.

    We met at the school gate at eight and then we set off by bus. First, we visited the Great Wall. When we got there, it was nine. We started to climb the great wonder of ancient China immediately. That was the first time that we had visited it, so we were very excited. We took many photos of the Great Wall. Then we had lunch there, after which we left for the Fragrant Hills. When we got there, we were amazed at the beautiful maple leaves, which made us not want to leave. We stayed at the top of the mountain for an hour and at five we returned by bus.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇投稿，写自己最难忘的一次旅行。写作时需要包含以下要点：（1）你最难忘的旅行是哪一次？（2）为什么你总是记得那次旅行。在写作时应承接短文开头，围绕主题展开。语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚。

2.写作指导：本文是讲述过去的一场旅行，故时态为一般过去时；主语为第一人称；描述旅行时，内容应描写细致；并且把旅行时的所见、所闻、所感都介绍清楚。

2021年江苏省南京市建邺区中考二模英语试题

76．例文：

Dear James,

I’m glad to know that you are coming to our school. You said that you don’t know which elective course to choose. Now I’ll give you some advice.

I suggest that you should choose Cooking. Because there are a lot of interesting skills of cooking to learn. You can learn about the process of the cooking Chinese food and experience the happiness of making delicious food by yourself. Besides, you can share delicious food with your parents or friends. I hope you will like to cook Chinese food.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Ming

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一封电子邮件，在邮件中给James一些关于选择选修课的建议。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、二人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体建议选择哪一门选修课，并给出理由；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。

2020年江苏省南京市建邺区中考二模英语试题

【答案】Dear Frank,

Thanks for your invitation for this weekend. I am very glad to have the opportunity to participate in environmental protection activities. I have been hoping to take part in an activity to make contributions to protecting the environment.

I prefer to plant trees in the park, because trees provide not only fresh air but also protect against wind and sand. I have some old clothes, so I don’t have to use yours.I want to go to visit the old people in the nursing home, talking with them during my stay.

I am looking forward to this weekend!

All the best,

Li Lei

【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时先表示我很高兴参加保护环境的活动；第二段介绍更喜欢在公园种树；最后我期盼这个周末。

2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一、三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，介绍我喜欢在公园种树的原因，叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

3.高分亮点：

短语：participate in；take part in；make contributions to ; prefer to；protect against; look forward to。

句型：because引导的原因状语从句；so连接的并列复合句。