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08通知
1. 体裁解读
通知是一种使用范围很广的应用文。通知一般分为口头通知和书面通知两种。书面通知的语言简洁明了,要求明确。口头通知使用的语言具有明显的口语特征,通俗易懂。
2. 写作攻略
通知的内容一般包括:标题、日期、称呼语、正文和落款。通知的正上方通常要有一个标题,口头通知常用Announcement,书面通知多用Notice。书面通知还需要在最后一行写下日期,要低于落款。口头通知往往要有称呼语,如Boys and girls,ladies and gentlemen,Dear friends等。通知的正文一般包括被通知的对象、事由、时间、地点等。口头通知一般不用落款,书面通知需要落款,写出发通知的人或单位名称,落款一般写在通知的右下角。
3.写通知时可以遵循以下步骤:
第一步:给出开场白,吸引注意力,点明时间、地点;
第二步:阐述通知的具体内容以及需要注意的事项;
第三步:写结束语,表达期望。
4.通知写作要点
(1)分清类别:动笔之前要分清是哪种通知,格式要符合相应的要求;
(2)人称选用要准确:写书面通知时,被通知的单位或人一般使用第三人称;但是如果带有称呼语,则用第二人称,具体情况要根据题目要求而定;写口头通知时,常用第二人称表示被通知的对象;
(3)使用正确的时态:通知一般是用来告知对方即将发生的事情,故时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主;
(4)语言运用:正文语言要言简意赅,直截了当,多用被动语态和祈使句,恰当采用表示时间和地点变换的过渡词语;
(5)要点齐全,逻辑顺序清晰:通知的要素是时间、地点、对象、事件具体内容、注意事项等,写作时只需把规定的要点写清楚,一般无需添加细节;表达要层次清晰,避免引起歧义;
(6)可以套用一些常用句式,使写作更加规范、严谨,符合英文写作风格。
典例赏析:
(2022·湖北武汉·三模)
假如你是李华,是某国际学校学生会主席。本周日将由你组织国际交换生去武汉国际会展中心游玩。请用英语拟一份口头通知。
内容要点如下:
1. 周日早8点集合,学校大门口;
2. 活动内容:观画展,学剪纸,可在广场自由活动一小时;
3. 下午3点乘地铁返校;
4. 天气热,随身带水,注意安全;
5. 补充一两点有关信息或想法。
注意:
1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
2. 词数:60-80;
3. 内容连贯,不要逐条翻译;
4. 开头和结尾己给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:painting exhibition画展 paper cutting剪纸 square n. 广场
Hello everyone!
We are going to Wuhan International Conference and Exhibition Center this Sunday!
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope we will have a good time.
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone!
We are going to Wuhan International Conference and Exhibition Center this Sunday!
We will meet at 8 a.m. at the school gate. Our main activities there include watching a painting exhibition, learning paper cutting and so on. During this time, you can have your own free activity at the square for an hour. For example, you can walkaround and take nice photos.
We will take the subway back to school at three o’clock. Remember to take some water with you, because it will be hot that day. What’s more, pay attention to safety.
I hope we will have a good time.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文要求写一篇通知,告知大家本周日由自己组织国际交换生去武汉国际会展中心游玩。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般将来时为主;人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。写作需包含所给的四个要点,同时补充一些相关信息或自己的想法。行文围绕主题叙述,注意时态的正确使用,确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误。
模板① 书面通知
Notice
All the students,
具体阐述通知
的内容
There is going to be _______________(事件) at _______________(地点)on _______________(时间). / We are having a(n) _______________ at _______________ on _______________. It will begin at _______________ (具体时间). Everyone can _______________. You can _______________ (可以进行的活动).
结束语,表达愿望
Welcome to take part in _______________ on time. Please come on time. Thanks.
_______________(落款)
_______________(时间)
【模板范文】
Notice
All the students,
We are having an English party at the Great Hall on Sunday. It will begin at 4:00 p.m. Everyone can show his excellent performance then. You can sing, tell stories in English or give an English speech at the party.
Welcome to take part in the party on time. Thanks.
English Club
April 12th, 2015
模板② 口头通知
吸引注意力
Announcement
Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen,
表示感谢
通知的具体内容,
表达期望
May I have your attention, please? Now I've got a piece of good news to tell you. We're going to _______________(事件). We'll walk/ride/go by bus to _______________(交通方式). It's about _______________ away from _______________(距离). As we'll be away for the whole day, please remember the following things. _______________. The most important thing is _______________(注意事项). I think we'1l _______________.
That's all. Thanks for your attention.
【模板范文】
Announcement
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please? Now I've got a piece of good news to tell you. We're going to have a school trip this Sunday. We'll walk to Qianfo Mountain. It's about 3 kilometers away from our school. As we'll be away for the whole day, please remember the following things. Take enough food and drinks with you and wear comfortable shoes. The most important thing is to keep safe. I think we'll have a nice trip.
That's all. Thanks for your attention.
亮点词汇搭配
1. 表示引起注意
attention n. 注意,留心 announcement n. 通知
2. 表示意愿
decide v. 决定 hope v. 希望
mind v. 介意 make up one's mind to... 下决心……
3. 与活动相关
pay a visit to 参观;看望 hold v. 举办
activity n. 活动 spend v. 度过,花(时间)
in memory of 纪念 introduce v. 介绍
celebrate v. 庆祝 party n. 聚会
经典句子背诵:
开头句
1. May I have your attention, please? 请注意啦!
2. Attention please. I have an announcement to make.
请大家注意,我有一个通知要宣读。
3. I have something important/new/bad/interesting to tell you.
我有重要的/新的/不好的/有趣的消息要告诉你们。
4. I have the honor of announcing that...
我很荣幸地通知大家……
中间句
1. We are having a(n)... about...
我们将有一个关于……的……
2. There is going to be an important talk on the playground at 14:30 on May 20.
5月20日下午两点半在操场上将有一场重要的讲座。
3. In memory of ..., a(n)... will be held. 为纪念……,将举行……
4. We will pay a visit to... 我们将会参观……
5. The British Museum has a long history which has collection of over 13 million objects.
大英博物馆历史悠久,拥有超过130万件藏品。
6. Do not forget to take... because we will...
不要忘记带着……,因为我们要……
7. The expert will give a talk on...
专家会就……话题进行演讲。
结尾句
1. Do be present on time! 请务必按时参加!
2. I hope you can take an active part in...
我希望你(们)能积极参与……
3. That’s all. Thanks for your attention. 就是这些,感谢倾听。
(一)(2022·吉林长春·中考真题)
本周日,同学们将去民俗博物馆(the Folklore Museum)参观。假如你是学生会主席,请根据下面要点和要求,用英文向你校国际交换生发布一则不少于40词的通知。
要点:1.早8:00在学校集合;
2.带笔和笔记本;
3.馆内有英文导游;
4.做好记录,为参观后的讨论做准备。
要求:要点齐全;表述通顺;简洁得体。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Dear students,
This Sunday we will go to the Folklore Museum. We will meet at 8:00 am at the school gate. Please don’t be late. You had better bring a pen and a notebook. There are some English guides in the museum. If you have any question, you can ask her for help. You should take notes carefully, and get ready for further discussion.
Hope you will have a good time.
Student Union
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一则通知。介绍去民俗博物馆的注意事项。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般将来时,人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。分为两段式:第一段介绍集合的时间,地点以及需要带的物品;最后一段表达祝愿。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
(二)(2021·黑龙江牡丹江·中考真题)
初中生活即将结束,你们将踏上新的征程。为了欢送毕业生,你校将在6月20日早上八点在学校礼堂举行毕业典礼。你是学生会宣传委员,请你写一则通知。内容如下:
(1)必须穿校服;戴口罩;(2)保持会场安静;(3)离开时带走垃圾。
Notice
All the students,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Students’ Union
例文
Notice
All the students,
Our school will have a graduation ceremony for Grade 9 at 8 o’clock on June 20th. It will be held in our school hall. You must wear school uniforms and masks. And keep quiet during the meeting.
Last, please take your rubbish out when you leave. That’s all. Thanks!
Students’ Union
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇通知类作文。以学生会的名义发一则有关毕业典礼的通知。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般将来时。在通知中描述毕业典礼的时间,地点,需要注意事项。写作时要做到语法和标点无错误。
(三)(2020·黑龙江牡丹江·中考真题)
难忘的初中生活即将结束。你们班计划举行"告别初中生活"的主题班会。假如你是班长, 根据以下提示, 用英语写一则通知。要点如下:
1、时间:7月18日 下午3:00;
2、地点:班级;
3、活动内容:对老师用话语表达谢意, 同学交流、合影等等。
Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Don't be late! That's all. Thank you!
David
例文:
Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. We are going to have a class meeting at 3:00 on the afternoon of July 18. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in our classroom. We should say a thankful word to our teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and take some photos.
Don't be late! That's all. Thank you!
David
【解析】
1.题干解读:该题目属于通知写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作,根据内容提示介绍主题班会的时间、地点以及活动的内容。
2.例文点评:例文主要用第一人称进行写作,主要采用一般将来时态来写作。介绍班会的具体信息,叙述完整且条理清晰。
3.高分亮点:
短语:go to the end; have a class meeting; saying goodbye to; chat freely with; take some photos。
句型:we should do和we can do表示建议的句子;and表示并列的句子;Don't do…祈使句的否定形式。
(四)(2019·辽宁营口市·中考真题)
明天(6月30日)早晨 8: 00 ,七年级学生在校门外集合,去东山植树。请穿上校服 (school uniforms)。
请根据所给条件写一篇简短的通知。30词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
NOTICE
All the students in Grade Seven,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
June 29, 2019
例文:
NOTICE
All the students in Grade Seven,
We will go to East Mountain to plant trees at 8:00 a.m. tomorrow (June,30th).We will meet at the gate of our school.please don't forget to wear your school uniforms.
June 29,2019
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇通知,要求根据所给条件写一篇通知,通知七年级学生明天(6月30日)早晨 8: 00,在校门外集合,去东山植树,要求穿上校服。在写作时,要注意通知的格式,语句要通顺,要表达清楚所给出的所有信息内容。
2.例文点评:本文时态为一般现在时,人称主要用第一人称,格式正确,语言流畅通顺。
3.高分亮点:
短语:plant trees 植树,at the gate of在……的门口。
句型:
高分句型一:We will go to East Mountain to plant trees at 8:00 a.m.tomorrow(June,30th).本句为一般将来时,will+动词原形;这句话意为:我们明天(6月30日)早上8点将去东山植树。
高分句型二:please don't forget to wear your school uniforms.本句为否定祈使句,forget to do sth忘记要做某事;这句话意为:请不要忘记穿你的校服。
(五)(2018·湖北武汉市·中考真题)
假如你是李明,本周日由你组织国际交换生去the Dream city 游玩。请用英语拟一份口头通知.
内容要点如下:
1.集合时间和地点:上午九点, the Dream city入口处;
2.观看楚剧,学习剪纸,制作陶土作品;
3 .自由活动一小时, 可游玩、拍照等,五点乘地铁返校;
4. 天气炎热, 着轻便装;
5- 请补充一至两点个人的想法或建议.
注意:
1 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
2. 词数: 60-80;
3.内容连贯,不要逐条翻译
4-开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: entrance n.入口处 Chu Opera楚剧 clay piece陶土作品
Hello, everyone ! We are going to the Dream City this Sunday
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
例文:
Hello, everyone! We are going to the Dream City this Saturday. Here are our plans that everyone needs to know. First, we will meet at the entrance of the Dream City at 9:00 a.m. Then, we are going to appreciate Chu Opera, learn paper-cutting and make clay pieces. After that, you will be free for your own activities, such as playing around and taking photos. Remember that you’re supposed to return to school at 5:00 p.m. By the way, you’d better wear light clothes because of the hot weather. Hope you can enjoy yourselves.
【详解】
写作分析:这篇作文需要写一份通知,要求是写出去游玩的集合时间和地点,时态以一般将来时为主。要写出主要活动:观看楚剧,学习剪纸,制作陶土作品,自由活动一小时, 可游玩、拍照等,五点乘地铁返校。还需要简单描写天气,天气炎热,着轻便装,为了使行文连贯需要增添适当的细节。
写作亮点:首先开门见山要说明这是一则通知,是人人需要了解的,写出了写作的目的(Here are our plans that everyone needs to know.),然后运用了一些词语使得文章逻辑性很强,如 First, then, after that。在描述活动的时候短语运用准确,appreciate Chu Opera(欣赏楚剧),learn paper-cutting(学习剪纸),make clay piece(制作陶土作品),be supposed to(应该做…),By the way(顺便说一下)。句式的使用也有多样性,例如用到了祈使句Remember that…,最后有简单的祝福语,使得这则通知更加完整,完成了题目要求的写作任务。
(六)(2018·黑龙江齐齐哈尔市·中考真题)
你校定于6月30日去远足。请你以学生会的名义写一个通知。(30-50词)
通知内容:1.早晨6:30在学校门口集合。
2.穿校服、运动鞋。
3.学校为大家准备水和午餐。
4.请准时参加。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Notice
All the students,
We'll go hiking on June 30 and we'll meet at the school gate at 6: 30 in the morning. Please wear our school uniforms and sports shoes. Our school will prepare water and lunch for us. Please be on time
Students' Union
【解析】
高分句型:We'll go hiking on June 30 and we'll meet at the school gate at 6: 30 in the morning.我们将在6月30日去徒步旅行,早上6:30在学校门口集合。这里go hiking表示不徒步旅行。
Please be on time.请准时。句子无主语,是一个祈使句,以动词原形开头。
【详解】
这是一则通知。根据题目要求可知时态主要用一般将来时,人称主要为第一人称。内容包括:1.早晨6:30在学校门口集合。2.穿校服、运动鞋。3.学校为大家准备水和午餐。4.请准时参加。在写作时,首先要认真审题,看清题目中的要求,注意理顺要点,防止漏写。注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;同时注意语句要通顺,词汇书写无误,注意不要出现语法错误。
Writing1(2022·湖北·武汉二中广雅中学模拟预测)
为庆祝共青团百年华诞,校团委组织青年团员下沉社区参加“清洁家园”活动。请你代为草拟一份书面通知,要点如下:
1. 周六早九点学校集合,步行前往; 2. 穿校服,戴口罩,携带劳动工具;
3. 拍照记录,向校报投稿报道活动; 4. 清扫垃圾,张贴宣传画,摆放共享单车;
5. 补充一到两点相关内容。
表达要求: 书写整洁、整齐、清晰; 语句自然流畅; 不得出现真实个人信息;
词数80左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词汇: sharing bike 共享单车; mask n. 口罩; rubbish n. 垃圾。
Notice
May 25, 2022
In order to celebrate the 100th birthday of the Communist Youth League, the committee will organize members to take part in the “Clean Home” activity in the community. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
School Youth League Committee
【答案】例文
Notice
May 25, 2022
In order to celebrate the 100th birthday of the Communist Youth League the committee will organize members to take part in the “Clean Home” activity in the community.
You should assemble at school at 9:00 a.m. on Sunday morning and walk there. Please wear school uniforms and masks, and take labor tools with you. During the activity, remember to take some photos so as to report it to the school newspaper. The things you need to do include: cleaning the rubbish, posting posters and putting sharing bikes in right places. When you finish the work, please clean up the place and take away the things you’ve brought.
Hope you have a meaningful day.
School Youth League Committee
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于应用文写作,写成通知格式,写作时注意认真阅读题干要求和要点提示,要包含所有要点并围绕主题适当补充。
2.写作指导:写作时应用第二人称和一般现在时。此文多为表示要求和建议的句型,注意句型的灵活性,可适当运用时间状语从句。要点之间要过渡自然,条理清晰。
Writing2(2022·黑龙江·齐齐哈尔市铁锋区教师进修学校二模)
假如你叫李明,下周五早上你班同学将去格林农场(Green Farm)参加实践活动,请你用英语拟一则通知。
注意:文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和老师名,否则不给分。
要点如下:
1. 7点在校门口集合,乘车前往;
2. 体验农场生活(适当发挥),活动约3小时;
3. 相互关照,注意安全。(50词左右,已给出词汇不计入总词数。)
Notice
All the students, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Notice
All the students,
Our class will go to Green Farm this Friday morning. Let’s meet at 7:00 am at the school gate and take a bus there. We’ll stay there for 3 hours to grow and water plants. Stay with our classmates and help each other. Keep away from anything dangerous. Have a good time!
Li Ming
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,但写作时要按通知格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头;内容是根据所给的材料,用英语拟一则通知,告诉你班同学下周五早上将去格林农场参加实践活动。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述通知内容;时态采用一般将来时为主;首先介绍集合的时间和地点;其次介绍体验农场生活的活动;最后是注意事项。
Writing3(2022·浙江丽水·三模)
假如你是学生会主席李华,学校“英语角”将举办一次以“缓解压力(Cope with pressure)”为主题的心理主题讲座。请根据下表提供的信息,用英语写一则通知。
Topic
how to cope with pressure
Speaker
Dr. Chen, Beijing University
Time
next Friday, at 3 p.m.
Place
the school hall
Participants (参会人员)
all Junior Three students
Attention
…
注意: 1. 词数80~100;2.通知的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3.不得出现你的真实校名和人名。An Announcement
Dear students,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Student Union
May 20
【答案】Possible version:
An Announcement
Dear students,
In order to help us to cope with pressure properly, our school will invite Dr. Chen from Beijing University to give us a lecture on it in our school hall. Dr. Chen is very famous and experienced in this aspect and he will introduce some effective ways to take off the pressure. All Junior Three students are required to take part in it. The lecture will begin at 3 p. m. next Friday and last about two hours. Be on time there.
Please take your notebook with you and keep quiet during the lecture.
Student Union
May 20
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是应用文写作,根据所给内容,写一则通知,注意要点齐全,适当补充。
2.写作指导:本文主要以第三人称书写,时态是一般现在时和一般将来时。写作时每个要点都要包含,不要遗漏,通知类文章可多使用祈使句。最后行文确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误。
Writing4(2022·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·三模)
假如你是李华, 是阳光社区抗击疫情的志愿者, 请你代社区给全体居民发一份核酸检测通知。通知内容如下:
1. 核酸检测时间:2022年4月17日早上6:00开始, 下午2:00结束。
2. 核酸检测对象:全体居民
3. 检测要求:携带居民身份证, 戴好口罩, 不要聚集。检测后, 请迅速离开。
4. 检测报告可通过手机查询。感谢大家配合。
注意:
1. 内容涵盖要点, 全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数50左右(已给出的文章开头, 不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:抗击疫情anti-epidemic, 核酸检测take a nucleic acid test, 口罩mask, 社区居民community members。
Notice
All the community members including the old people and children will have to take a nucleic acid test tomorrow. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your cooperation.
Sunshine community
【答案】
Notice
All the community members including the old people and children will have to take a nucleic acid test tomorrow. The test starts at 6:00 in the morning and finishes at 2:00 in the afternoon.
When you are going to take the test, remember to take your ID card. What’s more, wear your mask carefully and do not get together too close. After the test, please leave as soon as possible.
You can check the report of the nucleic acid test on the phone.
Thanks for your cooperation.
Sunshine community
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于应用文写作,具体要求写一则通知。文章的开头和结尾已给出,要求内容涵盖所有要点。
2.写作指导:本文应采用第二人称来写作;时态用一般将来时和一般现在时;写作时要阐述清楚检测的时间,对象,要求以及如何查询结果,注意语句通畅,表达清晰。
Writing5(2022·辽宁铁岭·三模)
根据要求完成小作文,词数:30词左右。
考试结束之后,你们班打算本周六去露营。假如你是杰克,请根据提示写一份通知。要点提示:乘坐的交通工具、集合的时间和地点以及要求。(短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
Notice
This Saturday, our class will go camping.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope we’ll have a good time.
Jack
【答案】例文
Notice
This Saturday, our class will go camping. We will meet at the school gate at 7 a.m. Then we will take the school bus to our destination. We need to bring some water and food. At the same time, pay attention to personal safety during camping.
I hope we’ll have a good time.
Jack
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇通知。介绍本周六去露营的相关情况。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般将来时,人称以第一人称为主。从交通工具,集合时间,地点以及要求等方面着手描述,写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
Writing6(2022·山东潍坊·三模)
某地遭遇了洪水(flood) 袭击,为帮助受灾的人们,你们学校打算发起一次捐赠 (donate动词;donation名词) 活动。如果你是学校广播站的播音员,请你将这次活动的相关事项通知大家。
时间
本周五下午3:00-5:00
地点
学校操场
捐赠物品
1.书籍、衣物;
2.不要食物,因不便保存。
其他
通知家人和朋友,一起来帮助受灾的人们。
要求:1.结构完整,表达通顺,语言规范,书写清晰。
2.80-100词。
Boys and girls,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thank you for your attention and kindness!
【答案】One possible version:
Boys and girls, may I have your attention, please? We’ve just got the news that there is a big flood in some area near our city. Many people have lost their homes and really need help from their neighborhoods. In order to help them, our school has decided to hold a donation on the school playground from 3:00 to 5:00 this Friday afternoon. Please bring clothes and books there, but no food please, because it is not easy to keep fresh. Your support will greatly help them overcome their difficulties. Also, please ask you family members and friends to join us.
Thank you for your attention and kindness!
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,内容是根据所给的材料,以通知的形式把学校举行的募捐活动告知全体学生,来帮助受灾的人们。
2.写作指导:本文属于通知,时态为一般现在时;首先介绍举行这次活动的时间和地点;其次介绍所要捐赠的物品;最后是呼吁家人和朋友,一起来帮助受灾的人们。
Writing7(2022·吉林长春·一模)
2022 年北京冬奥会已经结束,北京冬奥宣讲团将要来我校做有关冬奥会的演讲,假如你是育才学校的一名小记者,请根据提示写一份参加会议的通知。
要求:语法正确,要点齐全,40 词左右,不少于 5 句话。
1.时间:2022 年 4 月 15 日下午
2.地点:学校礼堂
3.参加人员:全体初三学生
4.宣讲内容:分享奥运故事;宣传奥运精神
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
The Education Tour for 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics will come to our school and make an exciting speech to the students. On the afternoon of April 15, all the Grade 9 students will get together in the school hall. Some famous athletes will share their interesting stories with us. And they will also publicize the spirit of Olympics to us. Meanwhile, you will know more about the Winter Olympics.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇通知。向同学们介绍“北京冬奥宣讲”的有关内容。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般将来时,人称以第三人称为主。通知中要涵盖时间,地点,参加人员以及宣讲内容等信息。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
Writing8(2022·辽宁·沈阳市实验学校模拟预测)
2021 年,河南省遭受了特强降雨的袭击。多个县区出现严重险情,群众房屋被水淹没,百万计的居民受灾。“天灾无情,人有情”,面对灾难,一方有难,八方支援。为了帮助受灾的人们,你校打算发起一场捐赠活动。假如你是学校广播站的播音员,请你将这次活动的相关事项通知大家。
内容包括:
1. 活动目的
2. 活动内容
3. 发出倡议
要求:
1. 词数 80-100,开头结尾已经为你写好,不计入总词数。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文流畅。
Notice
Dear fellow students,
May I have your attention please?
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your attention and kindness.
【答案】范文:
Notice
Dear fellow students,
May I have your attention please?
We know the news that there is a big flood in some area near our city. Many people have lost their homes and really need help from their neighborhoods. Our school decides to hold a donation on the school playground from 3:00 to 5:00 this Friday afternoon. Please bring clothes and books there, but no food please, because it is not easy to keep them fresh. Also, please ask your family members and friends to join us.
Thank you for your attention and kindness.
【详解】1.题干解读:该提示写一份通知,题目要求以学校的身份发起捐赠倡议,写作时要按照通知格式写。
2.写作指导:本文应该采用一般现在时;描述捐赠活动目的、活动内容以及发出倡议,要叙述完整,保证条理清晰。
Writing9(2022·广东·模拟预测)
你们学校将要组织初三学生在本周末参加一次有意义的活动。假如你是这个活动的组织者,请你根据以下内容写一则英文通知(活动内容见下表)。
活动地点和时间
风云岭、本周六上午 8:30
活动对象和交通工具
九年级全体学生、乘公共汽车
活动内容
1. 种树和收集垃圾
目的:保护环境和意识树的重要性
2. 鸟瞰整个从化城市
目的:?(请你补充至少2点)
要求:
1. 短文应包括表格中所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
3. 词数 80 字左右。(开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数)
参考词汇:FengYun Mountain 风云岭Announcement
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Remember to take some water and a hat, please!
The Student Union
April 26, 2021
【答案】例文:
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please? Our school is going to organize an activity this weekend. We will take a bus to FengYun Mountain. All the students of Grade Nine must take part in this meaningful activity at 8:30 a.m. this Saturday. It will take us about half an hour to get there.
As soon as we arrive there, we will plant a lot of trees and collect rubbish to protect the environment. Also, we can realize the importance of trees. After we do these things, the mountain will become much cleaner and more beautiful. And then we will get a bird’s eye view of the whole city of Conghua at the top of FengYun Mountain so that it can help us get relaxed as well as know more about the change of Conghua. Through this activity, our city will become greener and our health will be better.
Remember to take some water and a hat, please!
The Student Union
April 26, 2021
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇通知,根据活动内容提示完成,通知的开头和结尾已经给出,补充剩余内容即可。
2. 写作指导:本文主要使用第一人称,时态主要使用一般现在时态和一般将来时时态。内容包含所有提示内容,并适当扩充;注意文章结构,保证结构清晰条理。
1. 体裁解读
通知是一种使用范围很广的应用文。通知一般分为口头通知和书面通知两种。书面通知的语言简洁明了,要求明确。口头通知使用的语言具有明显的口语特征,通俗易懂。
2. 写作攻略
通知的内容一般包括:标题、日期、称呼语、正文和落款。通知的正上方通常要有一个标题,口头通知常用Announcement,书面通知多用Notice。书面通知还需要在最后一行写下日期,要低于落款。口头通知往往要有称呼语,如Boys and girls,ladies and gentlemen,Dear friends等。通知的正文一般包括被通知的对象、事由、时间、地点等。口头通知一般不用落款,书面通知需要落款,写出发通知的人或单位名称,落款一般写在通知的右下角。
3.写通知时可以遵循以下步骤:
第一步:给出开场白,吸引注意力,点明时间、地点;
第二步:阐述通知的具体内容以及需要注意的事项;
第三步:写结束语,表达期望。
4.通知写作要点
(1)分清类别:动笔之前要分清是哪种通知,格式要符合相应的要求;
(2)人称选用要准确:写书面通知时,被通知的单位或人一般使用第三人称;但是如果带有称呼语,则用第二人称,具体情况要根据题目要求而定;写口头通知时,常用第二人称表示被通知的对象;
(3)使用正确的时态:通知一般是用来告知对方即将发生的事情,故时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主;
(4)语言运用:正文语言要言简意赅,直截了当,多用被动语态和祈使句,恰当采用表示时间和地点变换的过渡词语;
(5)要点齐全,逻辑顺序清晰:通知的要素是时间、地点、对象、事件具体内容、注意事项等,写作时只需把规定的要点写清楚,一般无需添加细节;表达要层次清晰,避免引起歧义;
(6)可以套用一些常用句式,使写作更加规范、严谨,符合英文写作风格。
典例赏析:
(2022·湖北武汉·三模)
假如你是李华,是某国际学校学生会主席。本周日将由你组织国际交换生去武汉国际会展中心游玩。请用英语拟一份口头通知。
内容要点如下:
1. 周日早8点集合,学校大门口;
2. 活动内容:观画展,学剪纸,可在广场自由活动一小时;
3. 下午3点乘地铁返校;
4. 天气热,随身带水,注意安全;
5. 补充一两点有关信息或想法。
注意:
1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
2. 词数:60-80;
3. 内容连贯,不要逐条翻译;
4. 开头和结尾己给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:painting exhibition画展 paper cutting剪纸 square n. 广场
Hello everyone!
We are going to Wuhan International Conference and Exhibition Center this Sunday!
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope we will have a good time.
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone!
We are going to Wuhan International Conference and Exhibition Center this Sunday!
We will meet at 8 a.m. at the school gate. Our main activities there include watching a painting exhibition, learning paper cutting and so on. During this time, you can have your own free activity at the square for an hour. For example, you can walkaround and take nice photos.
We will take the subway back to school at three o’clock. Remember to take some water with you, because it will be hot that day. What’s more, pay attention to safety.
I hope we will have a good time.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文要求写一篇通知,告知大家本周日由自己组织国际交换生去武汉国际会展中心游玩。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般将来时为主;人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。写作需包含所给的四个要点,同时补充一些相关信息或自己的想法。行文围绕主题叙述,注意时态的正确使用,确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误。
模板① 书面通知
Notice
All the students,
具体阐述通知
的内容
There is going to be _______________(事件) at _______________(地点)on _______________(时间). / We are having a(n) _______________ at _______________ on _______________. It will begin at _______________ (具体时间). Everyone can _______________. You can _______________ (可以进行的活动).
结束语,表达愿望
Welcome to take part in _______________ on time. Please come on time. Thanks.
_______________(落款)
_______________(时间)
【模板范文】
Notice
All the students,
We are having an English party at the Great Hall on Sunday. It will begin at 4:00 p.m. Everyone can show his excellent performance then. You can sing, tell stories in English or give an English speech at the party.
Welcome to take part in the party on time. Thanks.
English Club
April 12th, 2015
模板② 口头通知
吸引注意力
Announcement
Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen,
表示感谢
通知的具体内容,
表达期望
May I have your attention, please? Now I've got a piece of good news to tell you. We're going to _______________(事件). We'll walk/ride/go by bus to _______________(交通方式). It's about _______________ away from _______________(距离). As we'll be away for the whole day, please remember the following things. _______________. The most important thing is _______________(注意事项). I think we'1l _______________.
That's all. Thanks for your attention.
【模板范文】
Announcement
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please? Now I've got a piece of good news to tell you. We're going to have a school trip this Sunday. We'll walk to Qianfo Mountain. It's about 3 kilometers away from our school. As we'll be away for the whole day, please remember the following things. Take enough food and drinks with you and wear comfortable shoes. The most important thing is to keep safe. I think we'll have a nice trip.
That's all. Thanks for your attention.
亮点词汇搭配
1. 表示引起注意
attention n. 注意,留心 announcement n. 通知
2. 表示意愿
decide v. 决定 hope v. 希望
mind v. 介意 make up one's mind to... 下决心……
3. 与活动相关
pay a visit to 参观;看望 hold v. 举办
activity n. 活动 spend v. 度过,花(时间)
in memory of 纪念 introduce v. 介绍
celebrate v. 庆祝 party n. 聚会
经典句子背诵:
开头句
1. May I have your attention, please? 请注意啦!
2. Attention please. I have an announcement to make.
请大家注意,我有一个通知要宣读。
3. I have something important/new/bad/interesting to tell you.
我有重要的/新的/不好的/有趣的消息要告诉你们。
4. I have the honor of announcing that...
我很荣幸地通知大家……
中间句
1. We are having a(n)... about...
我们将有一个关于……的……
2. There is going to be an important talk on the playground at 14:30 on May 20.
5月20日下午两点半在操场上将有一场重要的讲座。
3. In memory of ..., a(n)... will be held. 为纪念……,将举行……
4. We will pay a visit to... 我们将会参观……
5. The British Museum has a long history which has collection of over 13 million objects.
大英博物馆历史悠久,拥有超过130万件藏品。
6. Do not forget to take... because we will...
不要忘记带着……,因为我们要……
7. The expert will give a talk on...
专家会就……话题进行演讲。
结尾句
1. Do be present on time! 请务必按时参加!
2. I hope you can take an active part in...
我希望你(们)能积极参与……
3. That’s all. Thanks for your attention. 就是这些,感谢倾听。
(一)(2022·吉林长春·中考真题)
本周日,同学们将去民俗博物馆(the Folklore Museum)参观。假如你是学生会主席,请根据下面要点和要求,用英文向你校国际交换生发布一则不少于40词的通知。
要点:1.早8:00在学校集合;
2.带笔和笔记本;
3.馆内有英文导游;
4.做好记录,为参观后的讨论做准备。
要求:要点齐全;表述通顺;简洁得体。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Dear students,
This Sunday we will go to the Folklore Museum. We will meet at 8:00 am at the school gate. Please don’t be late. You had better bring a pen and a notebook. There are some English guides in the museum. If you have any question, you can ask her for help. You should take notes carefully, and get ready for further discussion.
Hope you will have a good time.
Student Union
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一则通知。介绍去民俗博物馆的注意事项。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般将来时,人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。分为两段式:第一段介绍集合的时间,地点以及需要带的物品;最后一段表达祝愿。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
(二)(2021·黑龙江牡丹江·中考真题)
初中生活即将结束,你们将踏上新的征程。为了欢送毕业生,你校将在6月20日早上八点在学校礼堂举行毕业典礼。你是学生会宣传委员,请你写一则通知。内容如下:
(1)必须穿校服;戴口罩;(2)保持会场安静;(3)离开时带走垃圾。
Notice
All the students,
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Students’ Union
例文
Notice
All the students,
Our school will have a graduation ceremony for Grade 9 at 8 o’clock on June 20th. It will be held in our school hall. You must wear school uniforms and masks. And keep quiet during the meeting.
Last, please take your rubbish out when you leave. That’s all. Thanks!
Students’ Union
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇通知类作文。以学生会的名义发一则有关毕业典礼的通知。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般将来时。在通知中描述毕业典礼的时间,地点,需要注意事项。写作时要做到语法和标点无错误。
(三)(2020·黑龙江牡丹江·中考真题)
难忘的初中生活即将结束。你们班计划举行"告别初中生活"的主题班会。假如你是班长, 根据以下提示, 用英语写一则通知。要点如下:
1、时间:7月18日 下午3:00;
2、地点:班级;
3、活动内容:对老师用话语表达谢意, 同学交流、合影等等。
Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Don't be late! That's all. Thank you!
David
例文:
Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. We are going to have a class meeting at 3:00 on the afternoon of July 18. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in our classroom. We should say a thankful word to our teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and take some photos.
Don't be late! That's all. Thank you!
David
【解析】
1.题干解读:该题目属于通知写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作,根据内容提示介绍主题班会的时间、地点以及活动的内容。
2.例文点评:例文主要用第一人称进行写作,主要采用一般将来时态来写作。介绍班会的具体信息,叙述完整且条理清晰。
3.高分亮点:
短语:go to the end; have a class meeting; saying goodbye to; chat freely with; take some photos。
句型:we should do和we can do表示建议的句子;and表示并列的句子;Don't do…祈使句的否定形式。
(四)(2019·辽宁营口市·中考真题)
明天(6月30日)早晨 8: 00 ,七年级学生在校门外集合,去东山植树。请穿上校服 (school uniforms)。
请根据所给条件写一篇简短的通知。30词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
NOTICE
All the students in Grade Seven,
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June 29, 2019
例文:
NOTICE
All the students in Grade Seven,
We will go to East Mountain to plant trees at 8:00 a.m. tomorrow (June,30th).We will meet at the gate of our school.please don't forget to wear your school uniforms.
June 29,2019
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇通知,要求根据所给条件写一篇通知,通知七年级学生明天(6月30日)早晨 8: 00,在校门外集合,去东山植树,要求穿上校服。在写作时,要注意通知的格式,语句要通顺,要表达清楚所给出的所有信息内容。
2.例文点评:本文时态为一般现在时,人称主要用第一人称,格式正确,语言流畅通顺。
3.高分亮点:
短语:plant trees 植树,at the gate of在……的门口。
句型:
高分句型一:We will go to East Mountain to plant trees at 8:00 a.m.tomorrow(June,30th).本句为一般将来时,will+动词原形;这句话意为:我们明天(6月30日)早上8点将去东山植树。
高分句型二:please don't forget to wear your school uniforms.本句为否定祈使句,forget to do sth忘记要做某事;这句话意为:请不要忘记穿你的校服。
(五)(2018·湖北武汉市·中考真题)
假如你是李明,本周日由你组织国际交换生去the Dream city 游玩。请用英语拟一份口头通知.
内容要点如下:
1.集合时间和地点:上午九点, the Dream city入口处;
2.观看楚剧,学习剪纸,制作陶土作品;
3 .自由活动一小时, 可游玩、拍照等,五点乘地铁返校;
4. 天气炎热, 着轻便装;
5- 请补充一至两点个人的想法或建议.
注意:
1 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
2. 词数: 60-80;
3.内容连贯,不要逐条翻译
4-开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: entrance n.入口处 Chu Opera楚剧 clay piece陶土作品
Hello, everyone ! We are going to the Dream City this Sunday
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例文:
Hello, everyone! We are going to the Dream City this Saturday. Here are our plans that everyone needs to know. First, we will meet at the entrance of the Dream City at 9:00 a.m. Then, we are going to appreciate Chu Opera, learn paper-cutting and make clay pieces. After that, you will be free for your own activities, such as playing around and taking photos. Remember that you’re supposed to return to school at 5:00 p.m. By the way, you’d better wear light clothes because of the hot weather. Hope you can enjoy yourselves.
【详解】
写作分析:这篇作文需要写一份通知,要求是写出去游玩的集合时间和地点,时态以一般将来时为主。要写出主要活动:观看楚剧,学习剪纸,制作陶土作品,自由活动一小时, 可游玩、拍照等,五点乘地铁返校。还需要简单描写天气,天气炎热,着轻便装,为了使行文连贯需要增添适当的细节。
写作亮点:首先开门见山要说明这是一则通知,是人人需要了解的,写出了写作的目的(Here are our plans that everyone needs to know.),然后运用了一些词语使得文章逻辑性很强,如 First, then, after that。在描述活动的时候短语运用准确,appreciate Chu Opera(欣赏楚剧),learn paper-cutting(学习剪纸),make clay piece(制作陶土作品),be supposed to(应该做…),By the way(顺便说一下)。句式的使用也有多样性,例如用到了祈使句Remember that…,最后有简单的祝福语,使得这则通知更加完整,完成了题目要求的写作任务。
(六)(2018·黑龙江齐齐哈尔市·中考真题)
你校定于6月30日去远足。请你以学生会的名义写一个通知。(30-50词)
通知内容:1.早晨6:30在学校门口集合。
2.穿校服、运动鞋。
3.学校为大家准备水和午餐。
4.请准时参加。
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Notice
All the students,
We'll go hiking on June 30 and we'll meet at the school gate at 6: 30 in the morning. Please wear our school uniforms and sports shoes. Our school will prepare water and lunch for us. Please be on time
Students' Union
【解析】
高分句型:We'll go hiking on June 30 and we'll meet at the school gate at 6: 30 in the morning.我们将在6月30日去徒步旅行,早上6:30在学校门口集合。这里go hiking表示不徒步旅行。
Please be on time.请准时。句子无主语,是一个祈使句,以动词原形开头。
【详解】
这是一则通知。根据题目要求可知时态主要用一般将来时,人称主要为第一人称。内容包括:1.早晨6:30在学校门口集合。2.穿校服、运动鞋。3.学校为大家准备水和午餐。4.请准时参加。在写作时,首先要认真审题,看清题目中的要求,注意理顺要点,防止漏写。注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;同时注意语句要通顺,词汇书写无误,注意不要出现语法错误。
Writing1(2022·湖北·武汉二中广雅中学模拟预测)
为庆祝共青团百年华诞,校团委组织青年团员下沉社区参加“清洁家园”活动。请你代为草拟一份书面通知,要点如下:
1. 周六早九点学校集合,步行前往; 2. 穿校服,戴口罩,携带劳动工具;
3. 拍照记录,向校报投稿报道活动; 4. 清扫垃圾,张贴宣传画,摆放共享单车;
5. 补充一到两点相关内容。
表达要求: 书写整洁、整齐、清晰; 语句自然流畅; 不得出现真实个人信息;
词数80左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词汇: sharing bike 共享单车; mask n. 口罩; rubbish n. 垃圾。
Notice
May 25, 2022
In order to celebrate the 100th birthday of the Communist Youth League, the committee will organize members to take part in the “Clean Home” activity in the community. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
School Youth League Committee
【答案】例文
Notice
May 25, 2022
In order to celebrate the 100th birthday of the Communist Youth League the committee will organize members to take part in the “Clean Home” activity in the community.
You should assemble at school at 9:00 a.m. on Sunday morning and walk there. Please wear school uniforms and masks, and take labor tools with you. During the activity, remember to take some photos so as to report it to the school newspaper. The things you need to do include: cleaning the rubbish, posting posters and putting sharing bikes in right places. When you finish the work, please clean up the place and take away the things you’ve brought.
Hope you have a meaningful day.
School Youth League Committee
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于应用文写作,写成通知格式,写作时注意认真阅读题干要求和要点提示,要包含所有要点并围绕主题适当补充。
2.写作指导:写作时应用第二人称和一般现在时。此文多为表示要求和建议的句型,注意句型的灵活性,可适当运用时间状语从句。要点之间要过渡自然,条理清晰。
Writing2(2022·黑龙江·齐齐哈尔市铁锋区教师进修学校二模)
假如你叫李明,下周五早上你班同学将去格林农场(Green Farm)参加实践活动,请你用英语拟一则通知。
注意:文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和老师名,否则不给分。
要点如下:
1. 7点在校门口集合,乘车前往;
2. 体验农场生活(适当发挥),活动约3小时;
3. 相互关照,注意安全。(50词左右,已给出词汇不计入总词数。)
Notice
All the students, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Notice
All the students,
Our class will go to Green Farm this Friday morning. Let’s meet at 7:00 am at the school gate and take a bus there. We’ll stay there for 3 hours to grow and water plants. Stay with our classmates and help each other. Keep away from anything dangerous. Have a good time!
Li Ming
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,但写作时要按通知格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头;内容是根据所给的材料,用英语拟一则通知,告诉你班同学下周五早上将去格林农场参加实践活动。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述通知内容;时态采用一般将来时为主;首先介绍集合的时间和地点;其次介绍体验农场生活的活动;最后是注意事项。
Writing3(2022·浙江丽水·三模)
假如你是学生会主席李华,学校“英语角”将举办一次以“缓解压力(Cope with pressure)”为主题的心理主题讲座。请根据下表提供的信息,用英语写一则通知。
Topic
how to cope with pressure
Speaker
Dr. Chen, Beijing University
Time
next Friday, at 3 p.m.
Place
the school hall
Participants (参会人员)
all Junior Three students
Attention
…
注意: 1. 词数80~100;2.通知的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3.不得出现你的真实校名和人名。An Announcement
Dear students,
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Student Union
May 20
【答案】Possible version:
An Announcement
Dear students,
In order to help us to cope with pressure properly, our school will invite Dr. Chen from Beijing University to give us a lecture on it in our school hall. Dr. Chen is very famous and experienced in this aspect and he will introduce some effective ways to take off the pressure. All Junior Three students are required to take part in it. The lecture will begin at 3 p. m. next Friday and last about two hours. Be on time there.
Please take your notebook with you and keep quiet during the lecture.
Student Union
May 20
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是应用文写作,根据所给内容,写一则通知,注意要点齐全,适当补充。
2.写作指导:本文主要以第三人称书写,时态是一般现在时和一般将来时。写作时每个要点都要包含,不要遗漏,通知类文章可多使用祈使句。最后行文确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误。
Writing4(2022·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·三模)
假如你是李华, 是阳光社区抗击疫情的志愿者, 请你代社区给全体居民发一份核酸检测通知。通知内容如下:
1. 核酸检测时间:2022年4月17日早上6:00开始, 下午2:00结束。
2. 核酸检测对象:全体居民
3. 检测要求:携带居民身份证, 戴好口罩, 不要聚集。检测后, 请迅速离开。
4. 检测报告可通过手机查询。感谢大家配合。
注意:
1. 内容涵盖要点, 全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数50左右(已给出的文章开头, 不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:抗击疫情anti-epidemic, 核酸检测take a nucleic acid test, 口罩mask, 社区居民community members。
Notice
All the community members including the old people and children will have to take a nucleic acid test tomorrow. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your cooperation.
Sunshine community
【答案】
Notice
All the community members including the old people and children will have to take a nucleic acid test tomorrow. The test starts at 6:00 in the morning and finishes at 2:00 in the afternoon.
When you are going to take the test, remember to take your ID card. What’s more, wear your mask carefully and do not get together too close. After the test, please leave as soon as possible.
You can check the report of the nucleic acid test on the phone.
Thanks for your cooperation.
Sunshine community
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于应用文写作,具体要求写一则通知。文章的开头和结尾已给出,要求内容涵盖所有要点。
2.写作指导:本文应采用第二人称来写作;时态用一般将来时和一般现在时;写作时要阐述清楚检测的时间,对象,要求以及如何查询结果,注意语句通畅,表达清晰。
Writing5(2022·辽宁铁岭·三模)
根据要求完成小作文,词数:30词左右。
考试结束之后,你们班打算本周六去露营。假如你是杰克,请根据提示写一份通知。要点提示:乘坐的交通工具、集合的时间和地点以及要求。(短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
Notice
This Saturday, our class will go camping.
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I hope we’ll have a good time.
Jack
【答案】例文
Notice
This Saturday, our class will go camping. We will meet at the school gate at 7 a.m. Then we will take the school bus to our destination. We need to bring some water and food. At the same time, pay attention to personal safety during camping.
I hope we’ll have a good time.
Jack
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇通知。介绍本周六去露营的相关情况。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般将来时,人称以第一人称为主。从交通工具,集合时间,地点以及要求等方面着手描述,写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
Writing6(2022·山东潍坊·三模)
某地遭遇了洪水(flood) 袭击,为帮助受灾的人们,你们学校打算发起一次捐赠 (donate动词;donation名词) 活动。如果你是学校广播站的播音员,请你将这次活动的相关事项通知大家。
时间
本周五下午3:00-5:00
地点
学校操场
捐赠物品
1.书籍、衣物;
2.不要食物,因不便保存。
其他
通知家人和朋友,一起来帮助受灾的人们。
要求:1.结构完整,表达通顺,语言规范,书写清晰。
2.80-100词。
Boys and girls,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thank you for your attention and kindness!
【答案】One possible version:
Boys and girls, may I have your attention, please? We’ve just got the news that there is a big flood in some area near our city. Many people have lost their homes and really need help from their neighborhoods. In order to help them, our school has decided to hold a donation on the school playground from 3:00 to 5:00 this Friday afternoon. Please bring clothes and books there, but no food please, because it is not easy to keep fresh. Your support will greatly help them overcome their difficulties. Also, please ask you family members and friends to join us.
Thank you for your attention and kindness!
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,内容是根据所给的材料,以通知的形式把学校举行的募捐活动告知全体学生,来帮助受灾的人们。
2.写作指导:本文属于通知,时态为一般现在时;首先介绍举行这次活动的时间和地点;其次介绍所要捐赠的物品;最后是呼吁家人和朋友,一起来帮助受灾的人们。
Writing7(2022·吉林长春·一模)
2022 年北京冬奥会已经结束,北京冬奥宣讲团将要来我校做有关冬奥会的演讲,假如你是育才学校的一名小记者,请根据提示写一份参加会议的通知。
要求:语法正确,要点齐全,40 词左右,不少于 5 句话。
1.时间:2022 年 4 月 15 日下午
2.地点:学校礼堂
3.参加人员:全体初三学生
4.宣讲内容:分享奥运故事;宣传奥运精神
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【答案】例文:
The Education Tour for 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics will come to our school and make an exciting speech to the students. On the afternoon of April 15, all the Grade 9 students will get together in the school hall. Some famous athletes will share their interesting stories with us. And they will also publicize the spirit of Olympics to us. Meanwhile, you will know more about the Winter Olympics.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇通知。向同学们介绍“北京冬奥宣讲”的有关内容。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般将来时,人称以第三人称为主。通知中要涵盖时间,地点,参加人员以及宣讲内容等信息。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
Writing8(2022·辽宁·沈阳市实验学校模拟预测)
2021 年,河南省遭受了特强降雨的袭击。多个县区出现严重险情,群众房屋被水淹没,百万计的居民受灾。“天灾无情,人有情”,面对灾难,一方有难,八方支援。为了帮助受灾的人们,你校打算发起一场捐赠活动。假如你是学校广播站的播音员,请你将这次活动的相关事项通知大家。
内容包括:
1. 活动目的
2. 活动内容
3. 发出倡议
要求:
1. 词数 80-100,开头结尾已经为你写好,不计入总词数。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文流畅。
Notice
Dear fellow students,
May I have your attention please?
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your attention and kindness.
【答案】范文:
Notice
Dear fellow students,
May I have your attention please?
We know the news that there is a big flood in some area near our city. Many people have lost their homes and really need help from their neighborhoods. Our school decides to hold a donation on the school playground from 3:00 to 5:00 this Friday afternoon. Please bring clothes and books there, but no food please, because it is not easy to keep them fresh. Also, please ask your family members and friends to join us.
Thank you for your attention and kindness.
【详解】1.题干解读:该提示写一份通知,题目要求以学校的身份发起捐赠倡议,写作时要按照通知格式写。
2.写作指导:本文应该采用一般现在时;描述捐赠活动目的、活动内容以及发出倡议,要叙述完整,保证条理清晰。
Writing9(2022·广东·模拟预测)
你们学校将要组织初三学生在本周末参加一次有意义的活动。假如你是这个活动的组织者,请你根据以下内容写一则英文通知(活动内容见下表)。
活动地点和时间
风云岭、本周六上午 8:30
活动对象和交通工具
九年级全体学生、乘公共汽车
活动内容
1. 种树和收集垃圾
目的:保护环境和意识树的重要性
2. 鸟瞰整个从化城市
目的:?(请你补充至少2点)
要求:
1. 短文应包括表格中所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
3. 词数 80 字左右。(开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数)
参考词汇:FengYun Mountain 风云岭Announcement
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Remember to take some water and a hat, please!
The Student Union
April 26, 2021
【答案】例文:
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please? Our school is going to organize an activity this weekend. We will take a bus to FengYun Mountain. All the students of Grade Nine must take part in this meaningful activity at 8:30 a.m. this Saturday. It will take us about half an hour to get there.
As soon as we arrive there, we will plant a lot of trees and collect rubbish to protect the environment. Also, we can realize the importance of trees. After we do these things, the mountain will become much cleaner and more beautiful. And then we will get a bird’s eye view of the whole city of Conghua at the top of FengYun Mountain so that it can help us get relaxed as well as know more about the change of Conghua. Through this activity, our city will become greener and our health will be better.
Remember to take some water and a hat, please!
The Student Union
April 26, 2021
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇通知,根据活动内容提示完成,通知的开头和结尾已经给出,补充剩余内容即可。
2. 写作指导:本文主要使用第一人称,时态主要使用一般现在时态和一般将来时时态。内容包含所有提示内容,并适当扩充;注意文章结构,保证结构清晰条理。
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