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(期末必考话题作文)
专题09 单元话题满分范文20篇
1.注意篇章结构，合理布局
开始部分说出文中的要点、核心问题。
正文部分围绕主题展开叙述、讨论。
结尾部分对全文内容进行总结和概括。
2.确定主题句
主题句是全文对概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主旨句最好放在作文的开头，而后是对全文主题句所提出的内容进行解释、论述。
3.重要连接词
表示顺序增加
First, then / next, after that / next, finally
For one thing … for another…,
On (the) one hand…on the other hand,
Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also
表示时间顺序
now, at present, recently,
at first, in the beginning, to begin with,
later, next, finally,
form now on, from then on,
till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during,
表示解释说明
now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover
表示转折关系
but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the hand
表示并列关系
or, and, also, too, not only … but also, both… and, either …or, neither…nor
表示因果关系
because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore
1．（2021·上海奉贤·八年级期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “The importance of___________”（请以“……的重要性”为题写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，要求意思明确、内容连贯，标点符号不计字数）
（注意：作文中不得出现考生的中文姓名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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2．（2021·上海浦东新·八年级阶段练习）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A problem I’ve solved”.（以“我解决了这个问题”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
提示：你可以根据以下提示讲述自己如何解决在学习、生活中遇到的一个问题。
Use the following points as a reference:
1. What was the problem?
2. How did you solve it?
3. What have you learned?
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3．（2021·上海奉贤·八年级期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “________ are/is important to us”.（以“________是重要的”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
________ are /is important to us
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4．（2021·上海浦东新·八年级期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic: ________ changed me! 以“ _______ 改变了我”为题, 写一篇不少于60个单词的短文， 要求内容适切，意思连贯，标点符号不占格。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名，学校及其相关信息，否则不予评分）
Suggested topic： Reading/Doing sports/ Helping fight against pollution/Doing housework/My teacher/My mother… changed me!
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5．（2021·上海金山·八年级期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Everyone can change the world”（以“人人都能改变世界”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
The E-Waste Girls 的故事告诉我们，只要我们愿意，我们都能为世界贡献自己的一份力量，都能以自己的行动和智慧改变这个世界。请结合自己的经历或见闻写一篇以“Everyone can change the world”为题的文章。
（注意： l. 文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
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6．（2021·上海奉贤·八年级阶段练习）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Without you, we can’t ________!” 一定有人对你表示过“没有你，我们不能________”，以此为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。
少年的你可能没有感觉到自己的力量吧！其实：在家里，你是父母的掌上明珠；在班级，你是同窗好友的陪伴；在学校，你是老师们的牵挂；在小区，你是处处在先的志愿者；在抗击疫情期间，你是做好自我防疫和宣传的能手或者你是……！请谈谈“你”在家庭、朋友、学校或社区等各种场合中，“没你不行”的学习或生活经历！
(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
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7．（2021·上海浦东新·八年级期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic：A Change in me
花开花落，岁月如梭。我在成长的过程中历经了不少变化。请描述自己的一次亲身经历，以“我的变化”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，要求内容适切，意思连贯，标点符号不占格。
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8．（2022·上海闵行·八年级期末）Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to say thanks to my …（以 “我想对……说声 “谢谢”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
Use the following points as a reference.
* Who do you want to say thanks to?
* Why do you want to say thanks to him or her? (Give at least two reasons: 至少 2 条理由)
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9．（2021·上海徐汇·八年级期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “_______ healthy life” 通过描写自己或者自己的一个同学（朋友）、一个家人的某一天生活，谈谈健康的生活方式，写一篇不少于60字的短文。要求： 补全作文题目。不得出现任何人名，否则不予评分。
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10．（2021·上海徐汇·八年级期末）Write a passage of at least 60words about the topic “I learned to be _______ through a school activity”
开学以来，学校开展了许多活动，如：夸夸我的好家长；校庆170周年等，请你以“通过一次学校活动我学会了……”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文。
注意：1. 在答题纸上将题目补充完整。2. 短文中不得出现真实人名，班级及其他相关信息。
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11．（2020·上海市进才中学北校八年级阶段练习）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “A respectable person in my eyes”.(以“我眼中值得尊敬的一个人”为题写一篇60词以上的短文，标点符号不占格。)
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
Suggested outlines:
Who is a respectable person in your eyes?
Why do you think he/she is respectable?
What can you learn from him/her?
A respectable person in my eyes
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12．（2021·上海市进才中学北校八年级阶段练习）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Save energy, love our Earth”. (以“节约能源，热爱地球”为题写一篇60词以上的短文，标点符号不占格。)
(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
Suggested outlines:
Why should we save energy?
As middle school students, what should we do to save energy?
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13．（2021·上海浦东新·八年级阶段练习）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A day to remember”（以“值得记住的一天”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、学校及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following is for reference only（以下表达仅供参考）
◎Is there a day that you will always remember?
◎What happened on that day?
◎What did you do?
◎How did you feel about it?
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14．（2021··八年级期中）Write a short passage about “My way of saving ________” .（以“我节约 ________ 的方法”为题，根据英文提示写一篇不少于60个单词的短文。）
1. What do you like to save?
2. Why do you like to save ________?
3. What do you usually do to save it/them?
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15．（2021·上海市川沙中学南校八年级期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My Favorite Newspaper”.（以“我喜爱的报纸”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格）
Use the following points as a reference:（以下内容仅供参考）
1. Which is your favorite newspaper?
2. Why do you like it?
3. Do you have any suggestions for your favorite newspaper?
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16．（2021·上海黄浦·八年级期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “__________ is/are important to us”(以“__________ 对我们很重要”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
Use the following as your reference:
1. How much do you know about ...?
2. Why is/are ... important to us?
3. What can we do for it/them? (At least 2 examples)
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17．（2021·上海市罗星中学八年级阶段练习）Write at least 60 words on the topic “__________ is/are important to me”（以“__________对我很重要”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
Use the following as your reference:
1. What is/are important to you?
2. Why is/are ... important to you?
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18．（2021·上海市进才中学北校八年级期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Something I want to do for my school”. （以“我想为学校做件事”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息， 否则不予评分。
Use the following points as a guide（短文须包含以下要点）：
1. What do you want to do for your school?
2. Why do you want to do it?
3. How do you plan to do it?
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19．（2021·上海市民办上宝中学八年级阶段练习）日前，某寄宿制山学（boarding school）明文禁止学生叫外卖（order take-away food），学生中议论纷纷。假设你是学生会主席李明，请代表全校同学给校长写一封信，信中内容包括：
1）向校方反馈同学们对此规定的看法。
2）向校方提出的意见和建议。（文中不得出现考生姓名、学校等任何真实信息）
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20．（2021·上海普陀·八年级期末）Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the given situation.
校刊的主编正在找负责不同版面的编辑，你有以下选择，如校园新闻、运动与健康、艺术和音乐等。请给校刊主编写一封不少于60个字的信，简单介绍自己想负责的版面、申请的理由和让该版面受欢迎的想法等。信的开头和结尾已给出。标点符号不占格。
（注意：短文中不得出现个人任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Dear chief editor,
I’ve noticed that you are looking for editors of our school newspaper. I’m very interested in it so I’m writing to apply for the position. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
John
参考答案：
1．例文：
The importance of Confidence
Confidence is very important in daily life. It can help you to develop a healthy attitude. It can bring us courage to stick to what we do. A study shows that the confident people are much happier. They can have more chances to make themselves successful. So confidence is valuable to us.
When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot the words at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it successfully. My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，谈论自信的重要性以及自己的一次经历以及从经历中的收获是什么，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
2．例文：
A problem I’ve solved
I still remember when I just entered the first year of junior high school. I didn’t know how to keep a balance between study and hobbies. My parents thought that I should give my hobby of playing basketball, and concentrate on my study and use all my spare time to study. But I thought that life was boring and I thought I also needed to relax properly, so I communicated with my parents. They allowed me to relax properly, but study mustn’t fall behind. I was very happy.
From this experience, I have learned that when we meet some problems, we should not give up but try our best to solve them actively.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干分析：该题目要求以“我解决了这个问题”为题写作，包含曾经遇到什么问题，通过什么方式解决的，以及从这件事情学到什么。
2. 写作指导：文章主要用第一人称，描述经历时用一般过去时，描述经历时注意行文要流畅。
3．例文：
Make Our Hometown More Beautiful Is Important to Us
The clean water and green mountains are our treasures. It’s our dream to have a home with a blue sky, green trees and clean water. So it’s very important for us to realize the importance of protecting the environment and dealing with pollution. But what should we do?
We can take actions in our daily life. We can plant more trees to keep the soil in place. Resources are very important, so we need to save resources to avoid polluting the environment. For example, we can use both sides of the paper. Polluted water should be dealt with in time to keep the river clean because we cannot live without water. When we go to other places, we can choose public transport to reduce air pollution.
In my opinion, everyone can do something small to make a difference. When we see rubbish on the road, we should pick it up immediately. We should also learn to recycle waste by separating the waste into different groups. If all of us work together, we will have a more beautiful home.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：文章是一篇话题作文。主要写出对我们来说重要的一件事情，为主题展开描写，主要从保护环境，节约资源，垃圾分类等方面做详细的描述，写作时要注意文章的层次感和语言的逻辑性要合理。
2. 例文点评：文章分三段描写。第一段引出绿水青山很重要，我们应该如何做；第二段给出一些具体的做法，第三段给出自己的一些观点，从生活出发要怎么做。整个文章结构完整思路清晰，语言表达流畅，意思明确，通俗易懂。
4．例文：
Music changed me!
Everyone has his own hobby, and it may give him lots of happiness. My hobby is listening to music. When I was a child, I enjoyed listening to music, especially the cartoon music, though I wasn’t good at it. I often lost myself in it. When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down. When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something, it also can make me happy again. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it’s good for my health. Do you like listening to music? If not, hope you can have a try, you will find it beneficial.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇命题作文，介绍什么改变了我，可以从文中提示的话题中选择一个，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。
2. 写作指导：本文使用一般现在时态和，人称用第一人称，写作时，注意表达观点时的常用句式和when引导的时间状语从句，内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
5． Everyone can change the world
Once I went to school by bus. An old man got on the bus. But there were no empty seats. Because it was full. Although I was still far from the school, I stood up and gave the old man a seat. The others on the bus looked at me approvingly.
I believe that as long as everyone pays a little love, the world will be better.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文，围绕主题“Everyone can change the world”展开叙述，讲述自己过往的经历或见闻，并呼吁人人都可以为世界变好贡献自己的一份力量。
2.写作指导：本文主要使用第一人称来叙述；针对“自己过往的经历或见闻”，要用一般过去时描述；谈及感受或未来的展望时，可以活用一般现在时和一般将来时。能够准确使用语法以及一定的词汇、短语和句型，清楚连贯地表达思想，保证条理清晰。
6．例文：
Without you, we can’t get the first prize
Last autumn, our school held a sports meeting. All students were encouraged to take part in the games. In our class, it seemed that nobody was willing to join in the 3000 meters’ race. Maybe that’s because it was a too long distance for us. So I made a decision to join in it and challenged myself. I practiced running for half an hour every morning. As time went by, I could run very fast. When the meeting came, I was confident and got the first prize. My teachers and classmates were proud of me. They told me, “Without you, we can’t get the first prize.” I was tired but happy.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，主要写发生在自己身上的经历，可以是在家或学校，也可以在社区等。
2. 写作指导：文章主要是第一人称为主，时态为一般过去时。文章需要描述清楚事件发生的时间、地点、人物、起因、经过、结果，保证条理清晰。
7．例文：
A Change in me
I am a junior high school student. I am an outgoing girl. But I used to be shy. I used to be afraid to chat with others. I always stayed at home in my free time. So, I didn’t have any friends. I sometimes felt lonely. By chance, when I played in the park, a girl smiled at me. It changed me. I thought others may be friendly. I started to try to talk to others and played with them. After that, I made good friends with others. Now I am a positive person. And I also have many good friends.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，自己的变化以及原因，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
8．范文：
I want to say thanks to my friend
Today, I want to say thanks to my best friend Tina. She is a lovely girl with big eyes. She’s always friendly to everyone. Also, she enjoys reading in her free time. One day, I cried sadly because I found it difficult to learn English well. When Tina saw that, she started to help me with my English after class. With her help, I am good at English now. Thank you, my dear friend.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，在写作时应根据英语提示的内容，叙述你想对谁说感谢以及你想感谢他/她的理由，至少说出两条。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时，在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，并且故事发生的背景、起因、过程和结果等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
9．例文：
My grandfather’s healthy life
Although my grandfather is over 70 years old, he is very healthy. He has a healthy life.
He gets up at 6 every morning and has breakfast at 6:30. He usually has an egg, a glass of milk and some bread for breakfast. Then he goes to the park to exercise. He likes playing Tai Chi. He usually plays Tai Chi in the park for an hour. Then he talks with his friends and takes a walk. He comes home at about 9 o’clock. My grandfather usually eats some rice, meat and vegetables at noon. He likes to eat fish and tomatoes. He thinks they are healthy for him. He sometimes waters the flowers in the afternoon. At about 6 p.m., he has dinner, and then he watches TV for an hour. At about 9 p.m., he goes to bed. He never stays up late. He has a healthy life.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写出爷爷的健康的生活方式的情况，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
10．例文
I learned to be self-governed through a school activity
Everyone has some unforgettable experiences. I had a very unforgettable experience when I was 13 years old. I had some training with my classmates. We went to Linyi and we needed to live in an apartment for a week. We did everything ourselves. Our parents couldn’t help us, because they didn’t stay with us. We got up very early in the morning. We had to clean ourselves quickly and had breakfast soon. And then we stood in a line. We learnt a lot of things there, such as cooking, washing and even making beds. We sang and danced together and did all kinds of activities. Every day, we had to practice more than six hours.
Now I think it was very hard for everyone but it was very good for us. Because we are looked after by our parents, but in fact we should learn how to look after ourselves. What an unforgettable experience it is! I learned lots of things. Especially, I learned to be self-governed through the school activity.
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“learned to be … through a school activity”为题写一篇短文。首先需要把题目补充完整，然后再列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；
写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般过去时和一般现在时。文章要围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
11．例文
A respectable person in my eyes
The respectable person in my eyes is my father.
Firstly, he is very strong and makes me feel very safe. Secondly, he is good at many things, such as basketball and ping-pong. I think he plays ping-pong as well as Wanghao. Thirdly, he is very popular in our big family. Everyone in my family loves my father very much. Most important of all, he is a great father and he loves me and my mother a lot. He also helps me a lot. I have learnt a lot from him, such as some ways of solving problems and responsibility for the family. I do think he is as great as Superman. I respect him!
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：本文要求以“A respectable person in my eyes”为题，介绍眼中值得尊敬的人是谁，说明理由及从他/她身上学到了什么，可适当增加细节。
2. 写作指导：本文主要以第三人称来叙述；时态以一般现在时为主；第一段点明我尊敬的人是谁。第二段介绍尊敬他的理由，并说明从他身上学到了什么。在写作时可使用适当的连词让文章有次序，要做到无标点符号和语法错误。
12．例文:
Save energy, love our Earth
As we know, energy is very important to us, we can’t live without energy. The amount of energy is becoming less and less. So we must try our best to do something to save energy.
As middle school students, we must turn off the tap immediately after we use it. We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces. We can also wash some clothes by hand instead of by machine. After we use some water, we can reuse it. We can walk to some places or ride bikes instead of driving. It is a good way to save energy. It is also a good idea to encourage our friends and family members to join us. I think if we save energy, our earth will be better. If everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big difference.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Save energy, love our Earth”为题，结合提示问题进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为两段，第一段引出话题，介绍为什么要节约能源；第二段详细介绍作为学生可以做什么来节约能源。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
13．例文：
A day to remember
There is a day that I will always remember.
It was a sunny day. On the way to school, my friend did something rude to me. It made me sad. What’s worse, I got a “C” in my favorite subject. After school, I went home unhappily. It was dark in the room. Suddenly the lights were on, and I heard the song “Happy birthday”. I was surprised to see many people and a big cake. “Oh, it’s my birthday.”
I was so excited and happy. It was my first time to have a birthday party. I’ll never forget that day.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。要求我们以“A day to remember”（以“值得记住的一天”）为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；写作时，首先开篇点题；其次介绍哪天很难忘，那天发生什么以及你做了什么；最后写出自己的感受。
14．例文
My way of saving water
As we all know, water is necessary in our daily life. We drink water every day, we use water to wash things and cook food, we also use water to make machines. People can’t live without water. Though about 75% of the earth is covered with water, only 3% of it is fresh water. So we must save water by having a shower instead of a bath. We can save water by fixing dropping taps immediately and we can also save water by not washing under running water.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于材料写作，写作时要把题目补充完整。本文要从三个方面来叙述：节约什么，为什么要节约，通常你怎么做。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；叙述要清条理晰，表达通顺连贯完整，适当使用连词介词，保证单词拼写、语法和标点使用正确，字数要符合要求。
15．例文
My Favorite Newspaper
Different people like to read different kinds of newspaper nowadays. There’s no denying that China Daily is my favorite newspaper to read. I’ve been on reading China Daily because I can know a lot of important world news from it. Besides, I can also improve my English reading skills by reading it. I think the layout of newspapers needs to be optimized so that readers can easily find the modules they are interested in. All in all, China Daily not only improves my English study, but also widens my view. I like it very much.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据提示问题介绍自己喜欢的报纸。注意要点齐全，可适当增加细节。
2. 写作指导：本文以第一人称，一般现在时进行描写。首先介绍自己所喜欢的报纸；然后解释喜欢它的原因；最后给出一些报纸需要优化的建议。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
16．范文：
Trees are important to us
Trees are really important in our daily lives. They take in harmful gases and release oxygen into the air for people and other living things to breathe. They make our city more beautiful and less noisy. A lot of things that we use come from trees. The benches we sit on in the parks, the nuts we eat and the pencils we use are all from trees.
However, nowadays, trees on the earth are in great danger. We must try our best to protect the trees, woods and forests on the earth and plant more trees every year.
In a word, trees are our good friends.
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：题目要求以“... is/are important to us”为题，讲题目补充完整，根据提示问题写一篇短文。
写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时为主，采用第一人称口吻。写作时要结合问题介绍你对某物了解多少、某物为何是重要的及我们能为其做些什么。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
17．例文：
Health is important to me
From my point, health is important to me. When I was young, I had a fever, and I could not go to school or play outside. I felt very sad. So I exercise and keep good eating habits to keep healthy. Because I am healthy, I can do many things I like. Therefore, I think health is very important.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文要求以“__________对我很重要”为题写一篇短文，题干中给出了细节要点，也可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来描述健康对“我”的重要性；时态采用一般现在时为主，用一般过去时举例；举例时，应贴合实际，具有说服力；短文需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
18．例文
I want to do something for my school. I’m leaving my school. I want to plant a tree in my school garden. I have found there are too many buildings and few trees in our school yard. I want to make my school much greener and more beautiful. If I plant a tree there, maybe more and more students will do so. In their spare time, the students can read under the trees. I am going to ask my teacher to agree with me. Then I am going to buy a tree and plant it before I leave.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我想为学校做件事”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般将来时和一般现在时。从想为学校做什么，为什么想这么做，以及如何计划等方面来描述。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
19．例文
Dear sir,
On behalf of all students in our school, I’m writing to you about the school ban on ordering take-away food imposed by our school recently.
We all agree that the ban on take-away food is reasonable. The quality of take-away food is not good and might do harm to our health, so this ban is aimed at protecting our health and helping us form a good eating habit. Meanwhile, there are still some problems even if we don’t order take-away food. We sincerely hope our school will improve the service of the school canteen. It is too crowded during lunch break, and many of us have to line up too long. Besides, we strongly advise our school to offer the night-time snacks. Most students turn to instant noodles to satisfy ourselves at night, which is bad for health.
To sum up, our school has made a right decision, while there is still room for improvement, which all students are looking forward to.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们以李明的身份给学校校长写信，对学校禁止学生叫外卖的规定发表看法，并对校方提出意见和建议。题目中只给出了文中应包括的两个要点，并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们应发挥自己的想象力，结合自己的生活实际，组织语言，并用正确的英语表达出来。
写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以一般现在时、第一人称和第三人称为主叙述。首先应对学校的这一规定发表看法，支持或反对，并给出理由；然后对学校提出一些建议。注意英语句式结构的特点和与汉语表达习惯的不同，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句的使用，提升作文档次。同时注意上下文意的衔接，使文意连贯、表达流畅。
20．例文
Dear chief editor,
I’ve noticed that you are looking for editors of our school newspaper. I’m very interested in it so I’m writing to apply for the position. I want to be in charge of the sports and health section.
First, I have a healthy eating habit. I can give some advice on eating healthily. Second, I am a member of the sports club. I am also good at some sports, such as swimming and playing basketball. If I am chosen as a sports and health editor, I think I will introduce a few healthy foods every day. What’s more, I will introduce a kind of sport which is suitable for students every time. I hope I can get the position.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
John
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。给校刊主编写一封信，申请自己想负责的版块。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般将来时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题，阐明自己想申请的位置；第二段介绍自己的优秀以及如何让该版面受欢迎的想法；最后一段期待收到对方的回复。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
牛津上海版八年级下学期期末复习 查缺补漏冲刺满分
(期末必考话题作文)
专题09 单元话题满分范文20篇
1.注意篇章结构，合理布局
开始部分说出文中的要点、核心问题。
正文部分围绕主题展开叙述、讨论。
结尾部分对全文内容进行总结和概括。
2.确定主题句
主题句是全文对概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主旨句最好放在作文的开头，而后是对全文主题句所提出的内容进行解释、论述。
3.重要连接词
表示顺序增加
First, then / next, after that / next, finally
For one thing … for another…,
On (the) one hand…on the other hand,
Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also
表示时间顺序
now, at present, recently,
at first, in the beginning, to begin with,
later, next, finally,
form now on, from then on,
till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during,
表示解释说明
now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover
表示转折关系
but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the hand
表示并列关系
or, and, also, too, not only … but also, both… and, either …or, neither…nor
表示因果关系
because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore
1．（2021·上海奉贤·八年级期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “The importance of___________”（请以“……的重要性”为题写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，要求意思明确、内容连贯，标点符号不计字数）
（注意：作文中不得出现考生的中文姓名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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2．（2021·上海浦东新·八年级阶段练习）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A problem I’ve solved”.（以“我解决了这个问题”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
提示：你可以根据以下提示讲述自己如何解决在学习、生活中遇到的一个问题。
Use the following points as a reference:
1. What was the problem?
2. How did you solve it?
3. What have you learned?
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3．（2021·上海奉贤·八年级期中）Write at least 60 words about the topic “________ are/is important to us”.（以“________是重要的”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
________ are /is important to us
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4．（2021·上海浦东新·八年级期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic: ________ changed me! 以“ _______ 改变了我”为题, 写一篇不少于60个单词的短文， 要求内容适切，意思连贯，标点符号不占格。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名，学校及其相关信息，否则不予评分）
Suggested topic： Reading/Doing sports/ Helping fight against pollution/Doing housework/My teacher/My mother… changed me!
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5．（2021·上海金山·八年级期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Everyone can change the world”（以“人人都能改变世界”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
The E-Waste Girls 的故事告诉我们，只要我们愿意，我们都能为世界贡献自己的一份力量，都能以自己的行动和智慧改变这个世界。请结合自己的经历或见闻写一篇以“Everyone can change the world”为题的文章。
（注意： l. 文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
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6．（2021·上海奉贤·八年级阶段练习）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Without you, we can’t ________!” 一定有人对你表示过“没有你，我们不能________”，以此为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格。
少年的你可能没有感觉到自己的力量吧！其实：在家里，你是父母的掌上明珠；在班级，你是同窗好友的陪伴；在学校，你是老师们的牵挂；在小区，你是处处在先的志愿者；在抗击疫情期间，你是做好自我防疫和宣传的能手或者你是……！请谈谈“你”在家庭、朋友、学校或社区等各种场合中，“没你不行”的学习或生活经历！
(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
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7．（2021·上海浦东新·八年级期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic：A Change in me
花开花落，岁月如梭。我在成长的过程中历经了不少变化。请描述自己的一次亲身经历，以“我的变化”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，要求内容适切，意思连贯，标点符号不占格。
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8．（2022·上海闵行·八年级期末）Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to say thanks to my …（以 “我想对……说声 “谢谢”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
Use the following points as a reference.
* Who do you want to say thanks to?
* Why do you want to say thanks to him or her? (Give at least two reasons: 至少 2 条理由)
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9．（2021·上海徐汇·八年级期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “_______ healthy life” 通过描写自己或者自己的一个同学（朋友）、一个家人的某一天生活，谈谈健康的生活方式，写一篇不少于60字的短文。要求： 补全作文题目。不得出现任何人名，否则不予评分。
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10．（2021·上海徐汇·八年级期末）Write a passage of at least 60words about the topic “I learned to be _______ through a school activity”
开学以来，学校开展了许多活动，如：夸夸我的好家长；校庆170周年等，请你以“通过一次学校活动我学会了……”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文。
注意：1. 在答题纸上将题目补充完整。2. 短文中不得出现真实人名，班级及其他相关信息。
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11．（2020·上海市进才中学北校八年级阶段练习）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “A respectable person in my eyes”.(以“我眼中值得尊敬的一个人”为题写一篇60词以上的短文，标点符号不占格。)
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
Suggested outlines:
Who is a respectable person in your eyes?
Why do you think he/she is respectable?
What can you learn from him/her?
A respectable person in my eyes
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12．（2021·上海市进才中学北校八年级阶段练习）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Save energy, love our Earth”. (以“节约能源，热爱地球”为题写一篇60词以上的短文，标点符号不占格。)
(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
Suggested outlines:
Why should we save energy?
As middle school students, what should we do to save energy?
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13．（2021·上海浦东新·八年级阶段练习）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A day to remember”（以“值得记住的一天”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、学校及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following is for reference only（以下表达仅供参考）
◎Is there a day that you will always remember?
◎What happened on that day?
◎What did you do?
◎How did you feel about it?
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14．（2021··八年级期中）Write a short passage about “My way of saving ________” .（以“我节约 ________ 的方法”为题，根据英文提示写一篇不少于60个单词的短文。）
1. What do you like to save?
2. Why do you like to save ________?
3. What do you usually do to save it/them?
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15．（2021·上海市川沙中学南校八年级期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My Favorite Newspaper”.（以“我喜爱的报纸”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格）
Use the following points as a reference:（以下内容仅供参考）
1. Which is your favorite newspaper?
2. Why do you like it?
3. Do you have any suggestions for your favorite newspaper?
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16．（2021·上海黄浦·八年级期中）Write at least 60 words on the topic “__________ is/are important to us”(以“__________ 对我们很重要”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
Use the following as your reference:
1. How much do you know about ...?
2. Why is/are ... important to us?
3. What can we do for it/them? (At least 2 examples)
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17．（2021·上海市罗星中学八年级阶段练习）Write at least 60 words on the topic “__________ is/are important to me”（以“__________对我很重要”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
Use the following as your reference:
1. What is/are important to you?
2. Why is/are ... important to you?
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18．（2021·上海市进才中学北校八年级期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Something I want to do for my school”. （以“我想为学校做件事”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息， 否则不予评分。
Use the following points as a guide（短文须包含以下要点）：
1. What do you want to do for your school?
2. Why do you want to do it?
3. How do you plan to do it?
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19．（2021·上海市民办上宝中学八年级阶段练习）日前，某寄宿制山学（boarding school）明文禁止学生叫外卖（order take-away food），学生中议论纷纷。假设你是学生会主席李明，请代表全校同学给校长写一封信，信中内容包括：
1）向校方反馈同学们对此规定的看法。
2）向校方提出的意见和建议。（文中不得出现考生姓名、学校等任何真实信息）
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20．（2021·上海普陀·八年级期末）Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the given situation.
校刊的主编正在找负责不同版面的编辑，你有以下选择，如校园新闻、运动与健康、艺术和音乐等。请给校刊主编写一封不少于60个字的信，简单介绍自己想负责的版面、申请的理由和让该版面受欢迎的想法等。信的开头和结尾已给出。标点符号不占格。
（注意：短文中不得出现个人任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Dear chief editor,
I’ve noticed that you are looking for editors of our school newspaper. I’m very interested in it so I’m writing to apply for the position. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
John
参考答案：
1．例文：
The importance of Confidence
Confidence is very important in daily life. It can help you to develop a healthy attitude. It can bring us courage to stick to what we do. A study shows that the confident people are much happier. They can have more chances to make themselves successful. So confidence is valuable to us.
When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot the words at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it successfully. My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，谈论自信的重要性以及自己的一次经历以及从经历中的收获是什么，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
2．例文：
A problem I’ve solved
I still remember when I just entered the first year of junior high school. I didn’t know how to keep a balance between study and hobbies. My parents thought that I should give my hobby of playing basketball, and concentrate on my study and use all my spare time to study. But I thought that life was boring and I thought I also needed to relax properly, so I communicated with my parents. They allowed me to relax properly, but study mustn’t fall behind. I was very happy.
From this experience, I have learned that when we meet some problems, we should not give up but try our best to solve them actively.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干分析：该题目要求以“我解决了这个问题”为题写作，包含曾经遇到什么问题，通过什么方式解决的，以及从这件事情学到什么。
2. 写作指导：文章主要用第一人称，描述经历时用一般过去时，描述经历时注意行文要流畅。
3．例文：
Make Our Hometown More Beautiful Is Important to Us
The clean water and green mountains are our treasures. It’s our dream to have a home with a blue sky, green trees and clean water. So it’s very important for us to realize the importance of protecting the environment and dealing with pollution. But what should we do?
We can take actions in our daily life. We can plant more trees to keep the soil in place. Resources are very important, so we need to save resources to avoid polluting the environment. For example, we can use both sides of the paper. Polluted water should be dealt with in time to keep the river clean because we cannot live without water. When we go to other places, we can choose public transport to reduce air pollution.
In my opinion, everyone can do something small to make a difference. When we see rubbish on the road, we should pick it up immediately. We should also learn to recycle waste by separating the waste into different groups. If all of us work together, we will have a more beautiful home.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：文章是一篇话题作文。主要写出对我们来说重要的一件事情，为主题展开描写，主要从保护环境，节约资源，垃圾分类等方面做详细的描述，写作时要注意文章的层次感和语言的逻辑性要合理。
2. 例文点评：文章分三段描写。第一段引出绿水青山很重要，我们应该如何做；第二段给出一些具体的做法，第三段给出自己的一些观点，从生活出发要怎么做。整个文章结构完整思路清晰，语言表达流畅，意思明确，通俗易懂。
4．例文：
Music changed me!
Everyone has his own hobby, and it may give him lots of happiness. My hobby is listening to music. When I was a child, I enjoyed listening to music, especially the cartoon music, though I wasn’t good at it. I often lost myself in it. When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down. When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something, it also can make me happy again. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it’s good for my health. Do you like listening to music? If not, hope you can have a try, you will find it beneficial.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇命题作文，介绍什么改变了我，可以从文中提示的话题中选择一个，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。
2. 写作指导：本文使用一般现在时态和，人称用第一人称，写作时，注意表达观点时的常用句式和when引导的时间状语从句，内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
5． Everyone can change the world
Once I went to school by bus. An old man got on the bus. But there were no empty seats. Because it was full. Although I was still far from the school, I stood up and gave the old man a seat. The others on the bus looked at me approvingly.
I believe that as long as everyone pays a little love, the world will be better.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文，围绕主题“Everyone can change the world”展开叙述，讲述自己过往的经历或见闻，并呼吁人人都可以为世界变好贡献自己的一份力量。
2.写作指导：本文主要使用第一人称来叙述；针对“自己过往的经历或见闻”，要用一般过去时描述；谈及感受或未来的展望时，可以活用一般现在时和一般将来时。能够准确使用语法以及一定的词汇、短语和句型，清楚连贯地表达思想，保证条理清晰。
6．例文：
Without you, we can’t get the first prize
Last autumn, our school held a sports meeting. All students were encouraged to take part in the games. In our class, it seemed that nobody was willing to join in the 3000 meters’ race. Maybe that’s because it was a too long distance for us. So I made a decision to join in it and challenged myself. I practiced running for half an hour every morning. As time went by, I could run very fast. When the meeting came, I was confident and got the first prize. My teachers and classmates were proud of me. They told me, “Without you, we can’t get the first prize.” I was tired but happy.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，主要写发生在自己身上的经历，可以是在家或学校，也可以在社区等。
2. 写作指导：文章主要是第一人称为主，时态为一般过去时。文章需要描述清楚事件发生的时间、地点、人物、起因、经过、结果，保证条理清晰。
7．例文：
A Change in me
I am a junior high school student. I am an outgoing girl. But I used to be shy. I used to be afraid to chat with others. I always stayed at home in my free time. So, I didn’t have any friends. I sometimes felt lonely. By chance, when I played in the park, a girl smiled at me. It changed me. I thought others may be friendly. I started to try to talk to others and played with them. After that, I made good friends with others. Now I am a positive person. And I also have many good friends.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，自己的变化以及原因，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
8．范文：
I want to say thanks to my friend
Today, I want to say thanks to my best friend Tina. She is a lovely girl with big eyes. She’s always friendly to everyone. Also, she enjoys reading in her free time. One day, I cried sadly because I found it difficult to learn English well. When Tina saw that, she started to help me with my English after class. With her help, I am good at English now. Thank you, my dear friend.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，在写作时应根据英语提示的内容，叙述你想对谁说感谢以及你想感谢他/她的理由，至少说出两条。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时，在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，并且故事发生的背景、起因、过程和结果等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
9．例文：
My grandfather’s healthy life
Although my grandfather is over 70 years old, he is very healthy. He has a healthy life.
He gets up at 6 every morning and has breakfast at 6:30. He usually has an egg, a glass of milk and some bread for breakfast. Then he goes to the park to exercise. He likes playing Tai Chi. He usually plays Tai Chi in the park for an hour. Then he talks with his friends and takes a walk. He comes home at about 9 o’clock. My grandfather usually eats some rice, meat and vegetables at noon. He likes to eat fish and tomatoes. He thinks they are healthy for him. He sometimes waters the flowers in the afternoon. At about 6 p.m., he has dinner, and then he watches TV for an hour. At about 9 p.m., he goes to bed. He never stays up late. He has a healthy life.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写出爷爷的健康的生活方式的情况，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
10．例文
I learned to be self-governed through a school activity
Everyone has some unforgettable experiences. I had a very unforgettable experience when I was 13 years old. I had some training with my classmates. We went to Linyi and we needed to live in an apartment for a week. We did everything ourselves. Our parents couldn’t help us, because they didn’t stay with us. We got up very early in the morning. We had to clean ourselves quickly and had breakfast soon. And then we stood in a line. We learnt a lot of things there, such as cooking, washing and even making beds. We sang and danced together and did all kinds of activities. Every day, we had to practice more than six hours.
Now I think it was very hard for everyone but it was very good for us. Because we are looked after by our parents, but in fact we should learn how to look after ourselves. What an unforgettable experience it is! I learned lots of things. Especially, I learned to be self-governed through the school activity.
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“learned to be … through a school activity”为题写一篇短文。首先需要把题目补充完整，然后再列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；
写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般过去时和一般现在时。文章要围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
11．例文
A respectable person in my eyes
The respectable person in my eyes is my father.
Firstly, he is very strong and makes me feel very safe. Secondly, he is good at many things, such as basketball and ping-pong. I think he plays ping-pong as well as Wanghao. Thirdly, he is very popular in our big family. Everyone in my family loves my father very much. Most important of all, he is a great father and he loves me and my mother a lot. He also helps me a lot. I have learnt a lot from him, such as some ways of solving problems and responsibility for the family. I do think he is as great as Superman. I respect him!
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：本文要求以“A respectable person in my eyes”为题，介绍眼中值得尊敬的人是谁，说明理由及从他/她身上学到了什么，可适当增加细节。
2. 写作指导：本文主要以第三人称来叙述；时态以一般现在时为主；第一段点明我尊敬的人是谁。第二段介绍尊敬他的理由，并说明从他身上学到了什么。在写作时可使用适当的连词让文章有次序，要做到无标点符号和语法错误。
12．例文:
Save energy, love our Earth
As we know, energy is very important to us, we can’t live without energy. The amount of energy is becoming less and less. So we must try our best to do something to save energy.
As middle school students, we must turn off the tap immediately after we use it. We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces. We can also wash some clothes by hand instead of by machine. After we use some water, we can reuse it. We can walk to some places or ride bikes instead of driving. It is a good way to save energy. It is also a good idea to encourage our friends and family members to join us. I think if we save energy, our earth will be better. If everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big difference.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Save energy, love our Earth”为题，结合提示问题进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为两段，第一段引出话题，介绍为什么要节约能源；第二段详细介绍作为学生可以做什么来节约能源。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
13．例文：
A day to remember
There is a day that I will always remember.
It was a sunny day. On the way to school, my friend did something rude to me. It made me sad. What’s worse, I got a “C” in my favorite subject. After school, I went home unhappily. It was dark in the room. Suddenly the lights were on, and I heard the song “Happy birthday”. I was surprised to see many people and a big cake. “Oh, it’s my birthday.”
I was so excited and happy. It was my first time to have a birthday party. I’ll never forget that day.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。要求我们以“A day to remember”（以“值得记住的一天”）为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；写作时，首先开篇点题；其次介绍哪天很难忘，那天发生什么以及你做了什么；最后写出自己的感受。
14．例文
My way of saving water
As we all know, water is necessary in our daily life. We drink water every day, we use water to wash things and cook food, we also use water to make machines. People can’t live without water. Though about 75% of the earth is covered with water, only 3% of it is fresh water. So we must save water by having a shower instead of a bath. We can save water by fixing dropping taps immediately and we can also save water by not washing under running water.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于材料写作，写作时要把题目补充完整。本文要从三个方面来叙述：节约什么，为什么要节约，通常你怎么做。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；叙述要清条理晰，表达通顺连贯完整，适当使用连词介词，保证单词拼写、语法和标点使用正确，字数要符合要求。
15．例文
My Favorite Newspaper
Different people like to read different kinds of newspaper nowadays. There’s no denying that China Daily is my favorite newspaper to read. I’ve been on reading China Daily because I can know a lot of important world news from it. Besides, I can also improve my English reading skills by reading it. I think the layout of newspapers needs to be optimized so that readers can easily find the modules they are interested in. All in all, China Daily not only improves my English study, but also widens my view. I like it very much.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据提示问题介绍自己喜欢的报纸。注意要点齐全，可适当增加细节。
2. 写作指导：本文以第一人称，一般现在时进行描写。首先介绍自己所喜欢的报纸；然后解释喜欢它的原因；最后给出一些报纸需要优化的建议。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
16．范文：
Trees are important to us
Trees are really important in our daily lives. They take in harmful gases and release oxygen into the air for people and other living things to breathe. They make our city more beautiful and less noisy. A lot of things that we use come from trees. The benches we sit on in the parks, the nuts we eat and the pencils we use are all from trees.
However, nowadays, trees on the earth are in great danger. We must try our best to protect the trees, woods and forests on the earth and plant more trees every year.
In a word, trees are our good friends.
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：题目要求以“... is/are important to us”为题，讲题目补充完整，根据提示问题写一篇短文。
写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时为主，采用第一人称口吻。写作时要结合问题介绍你对某物了解多少、某物为何是重要的及我们能为其做些什么。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
17．例文：
Health is important to me
From my point, health is important to me. When I was young, I had a fever, and I could not go to school or play outside. I felt very sad. So I exercise and keep good eating habits to keep healthy. Because I am healthy, I can do many things I like. Therefore, I think health is very important.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文要求以“__________对我很重要”为题写一篇短文，题干中给出了细节要点，也可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来描述健康对“我”的重要性；时态采用一般现在时为主，用一般过去时举例；举例时，应贴合实际，具有说服力；短文需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
18．例文
I want to do something for my school. I’m leaving my school. I want to plant a tree in my school garden. I have found there are too many buildings and few trees in our school yard. I want to make my school much greener and more beautiful. If I plant a tree there, maybe more and more students will do so. In their spare time, the students can read under the trees. I am going to ask my teacher to agree with me. Then I am going to buy a tree and plant it before I leave.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我想为学校做件事”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般将来时和一般现在时。从想为学校做什么，为什么想这么做，以及如何计划等方面来描述。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
19．例文
Dear sir,
On behalf of all students in our school, I’m writing to you about the school ban on ordering take-away food imposed by our school recently.
We all agree that the ban on take-away food is reasonable. The quality of take-away food is not good and might do harm to our health, so this ban is aimed at protecting our health and helping us form a good eating habit. Meanwhile, there are still some problems even if we don’t order take-away food. We sincerely hope our school will improve the service of the school canteen. It is too crowded during lunch break, and many of us have to line up too long. Besides, we strongly advise our school to offer the night-time snacks. Most students turn to instant noodles to satisfy ourselves at night, which is bad for health.
To sum up, our school has made a right decision, while there is still room for improvement, which all students are looking forward to.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们以李明的身份给学校校长写信，对学校禁止学生叫外卖的规定发表看法，并对校方提出意见和建议。题目中只给出了文中应包括的两个要点，并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们应发挥自己的想象力，结合自己的生活实际，组织语言，并用正确的英语表达出来。
写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以一般现在时、第一人称和第三人称为主叙述。首先应对学校的这一规定发表看法，支持或反对，并给出理由；然后对学校提出一些建议。注意英语句式结构的特点和与汉语表达习惯的不同，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句的使用，提升作文档次。同时注意上下文意的衔接，使文意连贯、表达流畅。
20．例文
Dear chief editor,
I’ve noticed that you are looking for editors of our school newspaper. I’m very interested in it so I’m writing to apply for the position. I want to be in charge of the sports and health section.
First, I have a healthy eating habit. I can give some advice on eating healthily. Second, I am a member of the sports club. I am also good at some sports, such as swimming and playing basketball. If I am chosen as a sports and health editor, I think I will introduce a few healthy foods every day. What’s more, I will introduce a kind of sport which is suitable for students every time. I hope I can get the position.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
John
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。给校刊主编写一封信，申请自己想负责的版块。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般将来时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题，阐明自己想申请的位置；第二段介绍自己的优秀以及如何让该版面受欢迎的想法；最后一段期待收到对方的回复。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
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