湖北省荆州市2021-2023年中考一模英语试题分类汇编：书面表达

湖北省荆州市

2021-2023年中考一模英语试题分类汇编

书面表达

2023年湖北省荆州市中考一模英语试题

Ⅸ. 短文写作。(共15分)

56. 初中生活即将结束，学校英语俱乐部特邀你写一篇英语短文，给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议。

内容要点如下： 1.初中科目更多，好的学习方法很重要； 2.锻炼身体，保持健康；

3.参加社团活动，使学校生活丰富；   4.多读书，多交朋友；

5.补充一两点个人想法。

注意：1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 2.词：60-80；

3.内容连贯，不要逐条翻译;           4.短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：method n.方法；colorful adj.丰富的

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2022年湖北省荆州市中考一模英语试题

七、书面表达

56．假设你是王新，最近收到美国朋友Oliver的来信，以下是信件的一部分，请你阅读后回复，词数80左右。

Dear Oliver,

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Yours,

Wang Xin

2021年湖北省荆州市中考一模英语试题

IX. 短文写作。（共 15 分）

请以"_____________________change（s） my life"为题写一篇英语短文。

要求∶

1．先把题目补充完整（空格处可以是单词、短语, 也可以是从句）;

2. 文中不得出现真实的地名或人名等信息;

3. 80词左右。

_______________________ change(s) my life

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答案：

2023年湖北省荆州市中考一模英语试题

【答案】例文：

   It is very exciting that your junior high school life is coming soon. Here are some tips to help you have a meaningful school life.

   Firstly, there will be more subjects in junior high school. So good learning methods are really important, you should find your own study method. Secondly, you should do more exercises to stay healthy and strong. Thirdly, there will also be many clubs in new school, why not join some clubs to make your school life more colorful? What’s more, reading is always important, you should read more books as well as make some friends.

   The time is school is always quick and fulfilling, don’t be nervous and just be yourself. Everything will be OK!

【解析】

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，要点已经给出；

②时态：一般现在时为主；

③提示：考生应注意不要遗漏，注意表达的逻辑和行文连贯，使用正确的词汇和句型，并适当补充自己的看法。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写作意图，引出要提的建议；

第二步，按照提示展开描写，注意逻辑，可使用如firstly，secondly，thirdly和what’s more之类的词语使得行文连贯，层层递进；

第三步，注意发表自己的观点以及总结。

[亮点词汇]

①a meaningful school life有意义的校园生活

②stay healthy and strong保持健康强壮

③What’s more而且

④as well as也，和

[高分句型]

①Why not join some clubs to make your school life more colorful?（why not do sth表示“为何不做某事”）

2022年湖北省荆州市中考一模英语试题

56．范文：

Computers change my life

I think computers change my life. Before computers were widely used, I had to go to the library to look up information that I wanted. I often spent much time on it. But now, with the help of computers, my life has become more convenient and interesting. I can search for any information I want easily. I can communicate with my friends in many ways. Such as e-mail, QQ. I can listen to music, watch some interesting movies and do some shopping and so on. I can also play computer games in my spare time.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时首先把题目补充完整，然后根据题目，介绍电脑如何改变了自己的生活，包括查询信息、和朋友沟通和购物等方面。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时为主。在介绍内容时，力求语句通顺，内容完整，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。

100．One possible version

Dear Oliver,  

Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Los Angeles. Now let me tell you something about my brother. He is twelve years old. He is outgoing and smart. We get along very well. My brother loves different cultures. He is interested in museums and likes trying local food. He likes playing basketball very much. He is good at Chinese kung fu. He’s of medium height with short straight black hair.         

Thanks again for your help!

Yours,

Wang Xin

【详解】1. 题干解读：本文要求以王新的身份回复美国朋友Oliver的来信，写作时信中的问题要都涉及到。

2. 写作指导：本文采用一般现在时；主要以第三人称为主展开叙述；短文采用二段式：第一段介绍弟弟的情况，要包含他的年龄，外貌，性格，喜欢的食物及爱好，介绍要详细具体；第二段表达感谢。在写作时要做到无标点符号和语法错误。

2021年湖北省荆州市中考一模英语试题

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时首先把题目补充完整，然后根据题目，介绍电脑如何改变了自己的生活，包括

查询信息、和朋友沟通和购物等方面。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时为主。在介绍内容时，力求语句通顺，内容完整，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。