高中英语高考读后续写成长类故事构造专题复习
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这是一份高中英语高考读后续写成长类故事构造专题复习,共3页。试卷主要包含了成长前的苦恼,成长中,成长后的升华,成长类场景描写等内容,欢迎下载使用。
一、成长前的苦恼(负面情绪塑造)
(一)孤独
I never made friends easily(从不容易交朋友), and fr a time I did little mre than get n speaking terms with sme bys.
(二)伤心
1.我在口袋里什么也没发现,这个事实就像一把长矛刺进我的心脏,立刻开始流血。
I fund nthing in my pcket, a fact that seemed like a spear piercing int my heart which started t bleed immediately.
2.看了看周围,我焦急地几乎哭了起来。
Lking arund anxiusly, I almst burst int crying.
3.就在我崩溃的时候,克劳利带领的一群男孩从我身边走过
Just at the time I brke dwn, a grup f bys led by Crawley passed me.
(三)惭愧
1. She was verwhelmed / vercme/ cnsumed with guilt and shame (被内疚和羞愧淹没).
2. Suddenly she came alive(精神就为之一振),waving her arthritic(关节炎的) hands.
3. A wave f guilt swept ver me(一阵恐惧向我袭来) and I had t admit the fact that I had gne t the mvies and that was the real reasn why I was late.
(四)嘲笑
他们大声地笑着,像是在尖叫“多漂亮的破表啊!”
They laughed ludly with Crawley screaming wrds like “What a finest brken watch!”
(五)绝望
我妈妈不让我带,”我撒谎,绝望在我心中沸腾。
“My mther wuldn't let me bring it,” I lied, desperatin biling inside me.
(六)紧张
1. Meanwhile, Karie sat restlessly in her seat with her fingers crssed (她的手指交叉着).
2. She tld the teacher the truth , with her heart thumping / punding/ pumping like a drum(她的心跳得像打鼓一样).
3. Having paced up and dwn restlessly(不安地来回走动) in frnt f the the teacher's ffice, she finally gathered curage and pldded in.
(七)害怕
I unknwingly (不知不觉地) avided interacting (interact) with anyne because I was afraid they’d laugh in my face(我很害怕他们会当面取笑我) .
二、成长中(蜕变塑造)
(一)惊讶
Raising her eyebrws in surprise, Mrs Rssi frze, as if rted n the grund(仿佛定格在那里).
(二)希望
Jayce lked up t him, his eyes sparkling with hpe and determinatin(闪烁着希望和决心).
(三)教育与成长
1. “That’s nt the right way. Patience, Will. Patience,” a vice eched in my ears (一个声音在我耳边回响)after the bys left.
2. “What was dne was dne,” thught I t myself. “What is imprtant nw is t d crrect things next(现在重要的是下一步要做正确的事情).”
3. 尽管愤怒、尴尬和悲伤重重地笼罩在空气中,但这个声音还是让我意识到我在试图给同学留下深刻印象时犯下的错误。
Thugh anger, embarrassment and sadness hung heavily in the air, the vice drew me t the awareness f the mistakes I had made when I attempted t impress the bys.
三、成长后的升华(喜悦+感激+升华)
(一)喜悦
1. Karie grinned(grin) as she read the label n the bx.
2. Dad lked at the paper, with his lips curving int a smile(他的嘴唇弯成了微笑).
3. Hearing that, Karie grinned frm ear t ear, a wave f happiness flding ver her(幸福的浪潮涌上她的心头).
(二)感激
I lked at her, tears f lve and gratitude(感动和爱的泪水)welling up in my eyes.
(三)升华句
1. 我确信,将来每当我失去耐心时,我都会记住祖父的话。
I knew fr sure that every time I lst patience in the future I wuld remember my grandfather’s wrds.
2. 这是我第一次真正体会到这份礼物的意义——耐心。
It was the first time that I had truly realized the meaning f the gift --- patience.
然而,从那时起,我保证这只破表会一直提醒我耐心等待,直到真相出现。
3、Aram said, “Thanks, Mrs Rssi, fr teaching me hw t make a cake t realize my dream(实现我的梦想).” Mrs Rssi held his hands, saying, “ It is yu wh teach me hw t stick t my dream(坚持我的梦想).”
4、It dawned n Aram that(Aram突然想到) “One shuld stick t his/her dream n matter what happens.”
四、成长类场景描写
(一)学习知识而成长
知识就是力量!在改变的过程中,学习不同的知识,然后才能面对各种困难和挑战。比如屏幕前的你,不就是在学习读后续写的技巧吗?请看下面的例句,也是我送给正在学习的你。
It's never t late t learn. Each individual has the right t accept mre challenges and make mreattempts.学习永远为时不晚。每个人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战,做更多的尝试。
【分析】individual这里表示“个人,个体”。make mreattempts 做更多尝试。
(二)发挥天赋促成长
认识自身天赋,并且发挥天赋,这是改变我们的现状的一个重要条件。请看下面的例句。
Actually, every individual pssesses talent. Be brave when yu find it and als make effrts. Yu can create miracles in the end.
事实上,每个人都有天赋,发现它的时候要勇敢,也要付出努力,最终你会创造奇迹。
【分析】pssess 拥有。create miracles表示创造奇迹。
读后续写专题:成长类故事构造5
宋老师 英语学习你我他 2023-03-26 06:00 发表于江西
(三)追逐梦想而成长
永远不要忽视了梦想的力量!“做人如果没有理想,跟咸鱼有什么区别呢”。请看下面两个例句。
It's never t late t g fr yur dream. As lng as yu grasp every pprtunity and take full advantage f it, yu will stand a chance t realize yur dreams.追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住机会,充分利用机会,你就有机会实现梦想。
As lng as we dare t dream and dn't let difficulties get in ur way, anything is pssible.只要我们敢于梦想,不被困难所阻挡,一切皆有可能。
【分析】take full advantage f 充分利用, realize yur dreams表示“实现梦想”
(四)克服困难促而成长
只有克服各种苦难,才能改变现状。请看下面的例句。
The jurney t success is nt smth. It is full f challenges and difficulties. We shuld be brave t face them. As lng as we dn’t give up hpe and make every effrt t vercme all the difficulties, we will surely achieve ur gal (success) finally.
通往成功的路不会平坦,充满挑战和艰辛。我们要勇敢面对。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难,我们最终会实现我们的目标(成功)。
【分析】smth 表示“平坦的”vercme all the difficulties 表示“克服困难”;make every effrt 表示“做出努力”;as lng as,表示“只要”,引导条件状语从句。
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