山西省太原市2020-2022年（三年）中考二模英语试卷分类汇编：书面表达

山西省太原市

2020-2022年（三年）中考二模英语试卷分类汇编

书面表达

2022年山西省太原市中考二模英语试题

九、材料作文

60．机会总是留给有准备的人。我们常常赞许成绩骄人的学子，羡慕上台领奖的同学，钦佩怀抱奖杯的赛手……可是冰冻三尺非一日之寒。平日积累充分的人才能抓住机会。你对这种说法持什么态度？请根据以上内容，结合自己的生活经历，写一篇短文。

内容包括：

▪ What is your understanding of the statement (说法)?

▪ Please share an experience you had or heard of.

▪ What have you learned from it?

要求：

1. 词数不少于80词；

2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

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2021年山西省太原市中考二模英语试题

十、书面表达（共15分）请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。

在刚刚过去的“五一”国际劳动节，习近平总书记鼓舞大家：“奋斗当其时，劳动创造幸福，实干成就伟业。”他希望广大劳动群众大力弘扬劳动精神、工匠精神，勤于创造、勇于奋斗。作为中学生，你是如何理解劳动（labor）的意义呢？请分享一次你曾有过的劳动经历并谈谈你的体会。

内容包括：

◇ What does labor mean to you?

◇ Tell us an experience that you had.

◇ What should we do?

要求：

1. 词数不少于80字；

2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

2020年山西省太原市中考二模英语试题

十、书面表达

80.请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。

我们的初中生活即将画上句号。三载青春,既见证了同窗好友的共同奋斗,也书写了美丽校园的多彩生活。当我们站在终点线驻足回首,总有一个镜头值得定格,总有一段故事值得回忆。

三年中你与同学之间发生了什么样的故事?请你用英语写一篇短文,分享一次令你印象深刻的经历,并谈谈你是如何理解同学间友谊的。

要求:

1. 词数不少于80词;

2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

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答案：

2022年山西省太原市中考二模英语试题

60．One possible version:

As is known to all, chance favors the prepared mind. Only those who work hard and make full preparations can get the opportunities to succeed.

I had a deeper understanding of the statement especially after I got the first prize in an English speech contest last term. I used to spend little time on spoken English because it was not included in the exams. However, my teacher said, “English is for use, not just for exams.”

Impressed by her words, I began to practise my oral English. I listened to the tape and followed it, talked with foreigners online and kept reading aloud for twenty minutes every day. Half a year later, I could speak fluent English. Then I got the chance to show myself in the English speech contest.

As long as we are well prepared, we will be the ones who shine when the chance comes to us. Only in this way can we seize every chance we meet and achieve success.

【详解】题目解读：本文是一篇材料作文写作，要求对题目提到关于“机会”的一段话作出评述，谈谈自己的理解。并结合自己的生活经历或者听到的事例，谈谈自己的心得体会。

写作指导：本文采用第一人称，时态上使用一般现在时和一般过去时。内容上包含对这段话的理解、自己的经历或听到的事例、心得体会三大内容。在撰写对这段话理解以及心得体会时，采用一般现在时。在撰写经历时，采用一般过去时。结构上，可以采用四段式结构，第一段引出话题，撰写自己这段话的理解；第二段和第三段撰写事例；第四段撰写自己的心得。注意段与段的衔接，保证行文的逻辑性。

2021年山西省太原市中考二模英语试题

60．例文

I think it’s very important for us to learn to do chores when we have free time. It is the traditional Chinese virtue. And we can also learn a lot from it.

Last year, my mother asked me to do chores with her before the Spring Festival. I helped her wash our clothes, clean the furniture and sweep the floor. We spent much time doing chores. In the end, we were too tired to do anything. But for me, looking at the house in which everything was clean, I got such a strong satisfaction. This was the first time for me to do so many chores and I found the happiness from it.

As students, we are supposed to have a responsibility to share some housework with our parents. In this way, we can know about the value of labor and thank others for their hard work.

【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求考生根据写作提示，分享自己的一次劳动经历，谈一谈对劳动 (labor) 的意义的理解。

2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一人称和一般过去时为主，以一般现在时为辅来叙述，写作时先引出话题，然后重点叙述自己的劳动经历和感受，最后简单阐述劳动的意义，使短文结构完整、主题鲜明。行文注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。

2020年山西省太原市中考二模英语试题

【答案】Looking back on the old days of my junior high school, I can see plenty of wonderful moments shared with my teachers and classmates. Among those, an experience of group study is the most unforgettable.

One day when I was in the eighth grade, my English teacher asked the class to make an English presentation about robots. In order to make a successful one, all the members of my group started discussion immediately after school. We divided the tasks into four parts and each of us was responsible for one part. Even though we had different jobs to do, we helped each other a lot by offering valuable information and possible methods. The day before the presentation, all the group members gathered at my home and prepared for it together. We all had a strong sense of satisfaction and achievement when working in a group and cooperating with each other. Without doubt, our presentation the next day was the best of all. Our friendship has depended since that day.

In my opinion, friendship not only means to care or understand, but also to support and encourage each other. Such a kind of friendship will always linger in my mind.

【解析】

【详解】1、题干解读

本题目属于记叙文写作，根据题干要求，写一次令你印象深刻的经历，并谈谈你是如何理解同学间友谊的。第一段写对三年来的时光进行总结；第二段具体介绍令自己印象深刻的经历；第三段谈谈自己是如何理解同学间友谊的。

2、例文点评

例文采用三段式结构；时态采用一般过去时为主，用一般将来时表示将来的愿望；人称采用第一人称；准备机器人报告的过程的描述很细致、条理。

3、高分亮点

短语：Looking back on；the most unforgettable；make an English presentation；In order to；

prepared for it；had a strong sense of satisfaction and achievement；Without doubt；

句型：Even though we had different jobs to do, we helped each other a lot by offering valuable information and possible methods.

In my opinion, friendship not only means to care or understand, but also to support and encourage each other.