专题13 情感-备战高考英语读后续写热点话题+体裁分类训练(高考模拟+名校真题)

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备战高考英语读后续写热点话题+体裁分类训练
(高考模拟+名校真题)
专题13 情感
1．（2021·福建永安·二模）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
There was something in the elderly woman’s grace（优雅）that caught my eye. Although slow and unsure of her steps, the woman moved with deliberation（从容），and there was no hesitation in her gestures.
It was a few years ago, and I had taken a part-time holiday-season job in a video store at the local shopping mall. From inside the store, I could see the people outside rushing by.
The elderly woman entered the store, along with her daughter, who was displaying a serious case of impatience, rolling her eyes, sighing and checking her watch every few seconds. I guessed if she had possessed a rope, she would have fastened it to her mother to drag her along to keep step with the rush of other shoppers.
The elderly woman separated from her daughter and began to seek through the DVDs on the nearest shelf. After the slightest hesitation, I walked over and asked if I could help her find something. The woman smiled up at me and showed me a title written on an old piece of paper.
Rather than rush off to locate the DVD for the woman, I asked her to walk with me so I could show her where she could find it. Looking back, I thought I wanted to enjoy her company for a moment.
Something about her deliberate movements reminded me of my own mother, who'd passed away the previous Christmas. I missed my mom and still felt regretful about the moments when I’d used my impatience to make her life unhappy.
As we walked along the back of the store, I introduced its floor plan: old television shows, action movies, cartoons, science fiction. The woman seemed glad of the unrushed company and casual conversation.
We found the DVD and she thanked me, saying that it was the one she’d enjoyed when she was her daughter’s age. Unwillingly, I accompanied her to the cash register. I realized I had to return the elderly woman to her daughter, who was still tapping her foot at the front of the store.
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So I walked over to her daughter.
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Together they made their way toward the store’s exit
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2．（2021·山东·二模）阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好；
I worked in the local pet registration office in our neighborhood. It had been a few months since our beloved Bama had passed away. He’d lived a good, long life. My husband, Alan, and I didn’t have children. Our boxer (拳狮犬)was our baby. After Bama’s death, we couldn’t bring ourselves to go through his toys to decide what to keep, so we put them all in our closet. I told myself I’d do it when I was ready. Apparently, I still wasn’t.
Now I sat on my front porch and sobbed. Friends and family had suggested we get another dog, but Alan and I dismissed the idea. We couldn’t go through that kind of heartbreak again. Besides, I didn’t want just any dog. I wanted Bama.
I gazed out over the yard. Across the street was a dog. A boxer. I wiped the tears from my eyes. Was he real or just a myth of my wishful imagination? I blinked. The boxer was still there. We locked eyes. He ran at a moderately swift pace across the street, straight toward me. Tentatively, I offered my hand. He licked me. I let out a surprised laugh.
This dog was younger than Bama, smaller. Bama had been white, but this dog’s fur got stripes. He wore a collar but had no ID．I knew he must belong to someone in the neighborhood, but I’d never seen another boxer around. I would have remembered if I had.
“Where did you come from?” I asked the dog, scratching him behind the ears. He didn’t seem lost. Just as if he were dropping by for a visit. “Alan!” I called. “You have to come see this!”
Alan joined me, and we sat together in wonder for a moment. Then the boxer got up and ran off. In the following days, he’d sometimes appear in the backyard when Alan and I were outside. Other times, he’d wait for us on the front porch. “I wish he, d announce himself, ” Alan joked. “Knock on the door or something.” The next day, there was a strange scratching at the door. I opened it and saw the mystery boxer, doggie smile wide.
The dog seemed to know exactly what my husband and I needed.
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Recovering from pain of the great loss, I wanted to know who his owner was.
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3．（2021·广东·清新一中二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I couldn't even sort through the first box of our dog Bama's toys without bursting into tears. My husband, Alan, found me sitting on the floor, holding our dog's favorite toy. He gently pulled me to my feet. "It's okay, Lisa," he said. "I'll put these away. Why don't you go outside and get some air?"
I nodded.
It had been a few months since our beloved Bama had passed away. Alan and I didn't have children. Our boxer (拳师犬) was our baby. After Bama's death, we couldn't bring ourselves to go through his toys to decide what to keep. I told myself I'd do it when I was ready. Apparently, I still wasn't.
Now I sat on my front porch (门廊) and sobbed. Friends and family had suggested we get another dog, but Alan and I dismissed the idea. We couldn't go through that kind of heartbreak again.
I gazed out over the yard. Across the street was a dog. A boxer. Was he real or just my wishful imagination? I blinked. The boxer was still there. We locked eyes. He came across the street, straight toward me. Hesitantly, I offered my hand. He sniffed it eagerly then he licked (舔) me. I let out a surprised laugh. He pushed his head into my lap to be petted.
This dog was younger than Bama, smaller. He was well-fed and well-dressed. He wore a collar but had no ID．I knew he must belong to someone in the neighborhood, but I'd never seen another boxer around. I would have remembered if I had.
"Where did you come from?" I asked the dog, scratching him behind the ears.
He just sat there at ease. He didn't seem lost. Just as if he were dropping by for a visit.
"Alan!" I called. "You have to come to see this!"
Alan joined me, and we sat together in surprise for a moment. Then the boxer got up and slowly ran off.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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The next day, there was a strange scratching at the door.
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A week later, a young man I'd never seen before came in to visit.
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4．（2021·广东惠州·三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Thomas watched the irrigation canal (灌溉渠) for a sign of water. It looked as dry as he felt inside. Thomas's thoughts were interrupted as his younger sister, Maggie, came skipping across the field.
"What are you giving Mama for her birthday?" she asked.
Thomas felt his stomach turn. He had forgotten that Mama's birthday, the first since they left their hometown, was tomorrow. "It's a surprise, Maggie," he answered. It was the truth.
Even he would be surprised.
Thomas would wish to be back in the mountains of their hometown. Surely Mama would want the same. At least it rained there. Each time it did, Mama, Thomas, and Maggie would sit on the front porch and watch for a rainbow. Then each of them picked out a favorite color in the rainbow. Mama always gave the same answer. "Turquoise (蓝绿色，绿松石)," she would finally say with a dreamy smile, pointing at the sky. "Squeezed in tight, between the blue and green. Close your eyes and you can see it. If you could touch it, it would feel cool, like a breeze blowing across the stream."
Thomas was discouraged. The sun would be setting soon, and he still had nothing to give his mother. What he saw around were rocks and sand. He picked up a large, flat rock, scooped up the dirt and watched it fall to the ground. Suddenly, something caught his eye. A speck of color peeked through the dirt.
"Hey, what's this?" he asked.
"Let's find out," Maggie yelled. Thomas and Maggie dug with their fingers and uncovered a small, round stone. In the center, there was a tiny hole.
"That's just a turquoise bead (珠子)," Thomas exclaimed. "My friend Jack's sister has a jar full of them."
"Let's see if there are more," Maggie got excited.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"I have an idea," Thomas said cheerfully. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Early the next morning, Thomas and Maggie set a small package on the table.
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5．（2020·山东·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
The most delicious memories seem to happen during the holidays. And like a squirrel preparing for winter, I put them away to enjoy slowly during the long winter months. Sometimes, I enjoy them for years.
Among them are sweetest recollections: my little girls at the church play and the moment they got their first angel wings; a pink dolly stroller(手推车) wheeled into the bedroom with a tiny voice declaring, ''Look what Santa Claus brought me! ''; or New Year's snowmen wearing bright scarves borrowed from a grandma's fragrant drawer.
But there is one memory that is a little bittersweet -- sort of like 80% dark chocolate, but still good for you.
This story brings to mind a colorful candy dish and a very little boy. The occasion was somewhere between Christmas and New Year's when a few candies in a dish remained behind, a bright spot in dull winter gray.
Wrapped in December's chill, my then 3-year old grandson, Justin, and I had dashed from the warmth of my parked car into the building where I planned to take care of a few work-related tasks.
A smiling secretary greeted us as we brushed the snowflakes and rubbed our hands to chase the cold. Then with my grandchild close to my side, I busied myself, finishing the items of business that had brought us there. But while his hand remained in mine, his eyes fell on the candy dish sitting nearby.
As we turned to leave, the thoughtful and very observant woman behind the desk asked the question all children wait to hear.
''Honey, '' the kindly woman said, peering over her glasses at Justin. ''Would you like a candy bar? '' she asked, her hand pushing the dish close for an easier reach.
The boy looked up questioningly, his eyes meeting mine, permission hanging in the air. A slight nod from me and then a hurried beeline to the candy dish followed. One candy bar was already in his hand.
Para 1: ''Justin! '' I said from the doorway.
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Para 2: In the humor of the moment, I felt something hard to swallow.
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6．（2022·广东中山·高二期末）I was about 13. My father frequently took me on short outings on Saturdays. Sometimes we went to a park, or to a marina (码头) to look at boats. My favorites were trips to junk stores，where we could admire old electronic stuff. Once in a while we would buy something for 50 cents just to take it apart.
On the way home from these trips, Dad frequently stopped at the Dairy Queen for l0cent ice cream cones. Not every single time: just often enough. I couldn't expect it, but I could hope and pray from the time we started heading home to that critical corner where we would either go straight for the ice cream or turn and go home empty handed. That corner meant either mouthwatering excitement or disappointment.
A few times my father teased me by going home the long way. “I'm just going this wry for variety.” he would say, as we drove by the Dairy Queen without stopping. It was a game, and I was well fed, so we’re not talking torture (折磨) here.
On the best days he would ask, in a tone that made it sound novel and spontaneous, “Would you like an ice cream cone?” and I would say, “That sounds great, Dad!” I’d always have chocolate and he’d have vanilla. He would hand me 20 cents and I would run in to buy the usual. We'd eat them in the car. I loved my dad and I loved ice cream — so that was heaven.
On one fateful day, we were heading home, and I was hoping and praying for the beautiful sound of his offer. It came. “Would you like an ice cream cone today?” “That sounds great, Dad!”
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右：
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
But then he said, “It sounds good to me too, Son. How would you like to treat today?”
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My father just said, “Okay, Son.”
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7．（2021·辽宁丹东·高三阶段练习）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
After 20 years as a full-time wife and mother, I decided to be a school bus driver for I loved kids. When I think about my years of bus driving, many things crowd in, but mostly, I remember Charlie.
Charlie, eight years old, with blond hair and crystalline gray eyes, began riding my bus in September of my fourth year driving. They all had stories to tell me about their summers. Charlie, though, ignored me. He didn’t even answer when I asked his name.
From that day on, Charlie was a trial. If a fight broke out, I didn’t have to turn my head to know who had started it. If a girl was crying, chances were Charlie had pulled her hair. No matter how I spoke to him, gently or firmly, he wouldn’t say a word. He’d just stare at me with those big gray eyes of his.
I later found out Charlie’s father was dead and he didn’t live with his mother. He deserves my patience, I thought. To my cheery “Good Morning”, he was silent. When I wished him a happy Halloween, he sneered (冷笑). Still I was sure that this child needed to feel some warmth from me. So, when he’d pass by, I’d pat him on the arm or sometimes gave him a hug.
Toward the end of that year, the kids on my bus gave me a small trophy inscribed (刻) “To the Best Bus Driver Ever”. I propped it up on the dashboard (仪表盘). On top I hung a small tin heart that a little girl had given me. In red paint she had written, “I love Polly and Polly loves me.”
The next day, I was delayed a few minutes talking to the principal. When I got on the bus I realized that the tin heart was gone. “Does anyone know what happened to the little heart that was up here?” I asked. For once with 39 children, there was silence.
One boy piped up, “Charlie was the first one on the bus. I bet he took it.” Other children joined the chorus, “Yeah! Charlie did it! Search him!”
I asked Charlie to come forward, stuck my hand into his pocket and immediately I felt it—the small tin heart. Charlie stared at me and seemed to be waiting for what he’d come to expect from the world. I was about to pull out the tin heart when I stopped myself. Let him keep it, a voice seemed to whisper.
“It must have fallen off before I got here,” I said to the kids. “I’ll probably find it back at the depot.” Without a word, Charlie returned to his seat. When he got off at his stop, he didn’t glance at me as usual.
That summer Charlie moved away.
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150词左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
3. 请按如下格式作答。
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A dozen years after my retirement I was in a department store, when someone said, “Polly?”
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That night I thought over his words.
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8．（2021·江苏海门·高三阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As I sat by the window of our schoolhouse that afternoon, my heart began to sink further with each passing car. This was a day I had been looking forward to for weeks. Miss Pace had kept a running countdown on the blackboard, and our class had almost gone crazy by the time the much-anticipated “party Friday” had arrived.
I had happily volunteered my mother when Miss Pace requested cookie volunteers. Mom’s chocolate chips were the best on our block, and I knew they would be a hit with my classmates. But two o’clock passed, and there was no sign of her. Most of the other mothers had already come and gone, dropping off their offerings of dessert. My mother was missing in action.
“Don’t worry, Robbie. She’ll be along soon,” Miss Pace said as I looked sadly at the street. I looked at the wall clock just in time to see its black minute hand shift to half past two.
Around me, the noisy party went on, but I wouldn’t leave my window watch post. Miss Pace did her best to comfort me, but I just stayed there, holding out hope that the familiar family car would appear, carrying my embarrassed mother with a tin of her famous cookies under her arm.
The three o’clock bell soon awoke me from my thoughts and I sadly grabbed my schoolbag and headed home.
On the four-block walk, I plotted my revenge (报复). I would slam the front door upon entering, refuse to return her hug when she rushed over to me, and never speak to her again.
The house was empty when I arrived and I looked for a note on the refrigerator that might explain my mother’s absence, but found none. Heartbroken and angry, I was lying face-down on my bed upstairs when I heard her come through the front door and mount the steps.
When she entered my room and sat beside me on my bed, I didn’t move but instead stared blankly into my pillow, refusing to acknowledge her presence.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“I’m so sorry, honey,” she said. “I just got busy and forgot.”
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I desperately tried to recall the words she had used to comfort me from times past when I cried.
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9．（2021·吉林·洮南市第一中学高一阶段练习）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
My mom only had one eye. I hated her. She was such an embarrassment. She cooked for students and teachers to support the family.
There was one day during elementary school when my mom came over to say hello to me. I was so embarrassed.
How could she do this to me? I ignored her, threw her a hateful look and ran away. The next day at school one of my classmates said, "Your mom only has one eye!"
I wanted to bury myself. I also wanted my mom to just disappear. I confronted(面对) her that day and said, "If you're only going to make me a laughing stock, why don't you just die?"
My mom did not respond. I didn't even stop to think for a second about what I had said, because I was full of anger. I took no notice of her feelings at all.
I wanted to be out of that house, and have nothing to do with her. So I studied really hard, and got a chance to go abroad for further education.
Then, I got married. I bought a house of my own. I had kids of my own. I was happy with my life, my kids and the comforts. Then one day, my mother came to visit me. She hadn't seen me in years and she didn't even meet her grandchildren.
When she stood by the door, my children laughed at her, and I shouted at her for coming over uninvited. I screamed at her, "How dare you come to my house and scare my children! GET OUT OF HERE! NOW!!!"
And to this, my mother quietly answered, "Oh, I'm so sorry. I may have got the wrong address." And she was soon out of sight.
One day, a letter regarding a school reunion(同学聚会) came to my house. So I lied to my wife that I was going on a business trip. After the reunion, I went to the old house just out of curiosity.
My neighbors said that she died. I did not shed (流出) a single tear. They handed me a letter that she had wanted me to have.
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My dearest son,
I think of you all the time and I'm sorry that
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You see, when you were very little, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
With all my love to you.
You​r mother
10．（2022·广东茂名·高二期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的文章。
The Feel-Good Shoebox
Catherine sat on her bed with her chin in her hands. “Why aren't you getting ready for Grandma's birthday party?”asked Mother.
“I can't bake like Sylvia or knit like Anne,” Catherine grumbled. “They made good presents. All I made for her is an ugly card.” “It's a lovely card. And no one can be good at everything,” said Mother. She sat on the bed next to Catherine. “When I was your age, I felt sad when I couldn't do certain things. But one day Grandma showed me the shoebox game, and it made me feel a lot better.” Catherine frowned （皱眉）. “How can a shoebox make me feel better？”“You＇ll see，” said Mother. She disappeared down the hall, then came back carrying a shoe box, a pencil, paper, and scissors.
Catherine watched as Mother cut several pieces of paper into squares. “Nôw, I want you to write down all the things you can do,” said Mother. “Like what?” asked Catherine. “Why not start with things you've learned in school? Give it some thought while I ice Grandma's birthday cake.”
Catherine sat for a while wrinkling （起皱纹） and unwrinkling her eyebrows.Slowly Catherine began to write and write. Before long she had written on every square of paper. She was so busy that she didn't hear Mother come into the room.“My goodness!"said Mother.“Do you think they'll all fit in the shoebox?”“I hope so,” said Catherine. “It was fun thinking of all the stuff I can do.”“And the next time you feel sad because you can't do something, your feel-good shoebox will remind you of how much you can do-just as mine did when I was a little girl,” said Mother,“Now let's finish getting dressed for Grandma's party.”
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Happy birthday！” yelled（欢呼） the children when they arrived at Grandma’s house.
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Then Catherine gave her card to Grandma.
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参考答案：
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So I walked over to her daughter. “Mind some advice?” I asked. She rolled her eyes and said, “of course not.” I smiled to show her I wasn’t criticizing. “Cherish her and cherish every single moment you can stay with her,” I said. And then I answered her curious expression by saying, “When she's gone, it's these little moments that will come back to you. Moments like this. I know.” Having finished saying this, I noticed the elderly woman moving with her deliberation back to her daughter.
Together they made their way toward the store's exit. Then the daughter glanced over her elderly mother. And slowly, almost unwillingly, she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mothers’ shoulders and gently guided her back into the crowd. Tears filled my eyes when I watched them disappearing in the crowd.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇读后续写。文章讲述了作者在做兼职工作时，看到了一对母女一起走进了商店。女儿非常不耐烦，而母亲只是从容地选着DVD。看到这里，作者想到了自己的母亲，于是在收银台排队时给那个女儿一些忠告。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“于是我走向她的女儿。”可知，第一段可描写作者想向她的女儿一些忠告，要珍惜和母亲在一起的时光。
②由第二段首句内容“她们一起向商店出口走去”可知，第二段可描写作者给她的女儿一些忠告后，女儿表现出的一些改变。
2.续写线索：给女孩忠告——接受——改变
3.词汇激活
行为类
①批评：criticize/ scold/blame
②去世：have gone /have been dead/have passed away
③看：glance over/look at/stare at/gaze at
情绪类
①不愿意地：unwillingly/reluctantly
②眼睛充满眼泪：Tears filled my eyes/tears welled up in my eyes
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Having finished saying this, I noticed the elderly woman moving with her deliberation back to her daughter.（使用现在分词完成时态作状语以及使用现在分词作宾补）
[高分句型2]. When she's gone, it's these little moments that will come back to you. （使用when引导的时间状语从句和that引导的定语从句）
2．The dog seemed to know exactly what we needed. Seeing him was helping me work through my grief. With each visit, I could feel the ache in my heart lessen. I noticed that I could now pass Bama’s favorite napping spots. I realized I could fondly recall how Bama would follow us from room to room—our constant companion. Memories, until recently, had hurt too much to go on. Something in my heart got relieved.
Recovering from pain of the great loss, I wanted to know who his owner was. One day at my workplace, a young man came in to register his pets, information. I found he had a boxer called Axle and lived just up the street from me. I told him his dog had been paying regular visits, which I was very grateful for the delight it brought me. Now Bama’s toys don’t just sit in the closet, gathering dust. Alan and I keep them out for Axle to enjoy whenever he comes over to visit.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以一条叫巴马的拳狮犬去世到一条叫埃克斯利的拳狮犬的到来为线索展开，讲述了作者和丈夫失去了心爱的拳狮犬巴马，他们很伤心，无法从悲伤中恢复过来。幸运的是，另一条叫埃克斯利的拳狮犬经常来看作者，使她从悲伤中逐渐恢复过来以及作者在工作时遇见了狗的主人。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“这只狗似乎很清楚我和丈夫需要什么。”可知，第一段可描写这只狗使作者从对过去回忆带来的痛苦中摆脱出来。
②由第二段首句内容“从巨大损失的痛苦中恢复过来后，我想知道它的主人是谁”可知，第二段可描写作者通过在附近的宠物登记处工作时知道了这条狗的主人及狗的名字。
2.续写线索：看到狗——回忆——痛苦中恢复过来——工作——遇见狗的主人——感激
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.感觉到，意识到：could feel/notice/realize/ find
②.过来：come in / come over
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. I noticed that I could now pass Bama’s favorite napping spots. （由连接词that引导的宾语从句作noticed的宾语）
[高分句型2]. I found he had a boxer called Axle and lived just up the street from me. （由过去分词短语作后置定语修饰boxer，同时found后是省掉了连接词的宾语从句）
[高分句型3]. I told him his dog had been paying regular visits, which I was very grateful for the delight it brought me.（由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句）
3．The next day, there was a strange scratching at the door. I opened it and found my unexpected guest—the mystery boxer, who seemed to still remember me. He came over lightly and licked my hand, as if trying to erase my painful memories. Seeing him follow me from room to room, I gradually felt the ache in my heart lessen. I suddenly realized that I could pass Bama's favorite toys to my guest. So each day I would stand at the front door, waiting for the happy moment when my guest came and played with the toys.
A week later, a young man I'd never seen before came in to visit. The man said his family had just moved to the neighborhood. He asked me if I happened to see a dog, a boxer recently. I said "Yes" and told him actually "my guest" had been paying me regular visits. He looked embarrassed and then apologized for the trouble his cutie caused for me. I told him there is no need to apologize and actually he was a big help in working through my grief. It has been three years since that day. Now Bama's toys don't just sit in the room, gathering dust.
【解析】
【分析】
作者的拳师犬去世了，作者非常伤心。一天，作者看到街对面有一条拳师犬。这条拳师犬看到作者后，来到了作者面前。作者和它进行沟通交流，给她带来了慰藉，走出了失去爱狗的伤痛。最后，狗离开了。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“第二天，门上有奇怪的挠门声”可知，挠门声应该是上文最后部分中提到的拳师犬发出来的。拳师犬来到作者家。该段应该写作者和这只拳师犬的互动。
②由第二段首句内容“一周后，一个我从未见过的年轻人前来拜访”可知，第二段应该叙述年轻人来拜访的情景和目的。再结合上文所述，应该可以推知年轻人是拳师犬的主人。
2.续写线索：挠门声——来访——互动——建立感情——寻找——释怀
3.词汇激活
行为类
①拜访：visit/pay a visit
②互动：interact/communicate/respond
情绪类
①缓解：relieved/relaxed
②感激：grateful/thankful
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I opened it and found my unexpected guest—the mystery boxer, who seemed to still remember me.（who引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] Seeing him follow me from room to room, I gradually felt the ache in my heart lessen.（现在分词作状语）
[高分句型3] He asked me if I happened to see a dog, a boxer recently.（if引导宾语从句）
4．"I have an idea," Thomas said cheerfully. "We can give Mom turquoise for her birthday, because she likes rainbows like that." "I think it's a good idea," Maggie said. "Mother will love it. Let's go back to digging. We'll find as many as we can, picking the prettiest. The more, the better." Thomas and Maggie immediately began digging, hoping to find more such small stones. They were digging for stones, and dark fell before they knew it.
Early the next morning, Thomas and Maggie set a small package on the table. Inside was the turquoise they had dug. It's a birthday present for their mother. "Mom, come here quickly. What do you think is in the parcel?" Maggie shouted. Mother came out of the kitchen and looked very surprised. When their mother opened the package, she saw the beautiful stones like a rainbow. Mother said "thank you" happily, saying it was the best birthday present she had ever received. Thomas and Maggie laughed happily.
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇读后续写，讲述了Thomas和妹妹Maggie为妈妈准备生日礼物的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“‘我有一个想法，’托马斯高兴地说。”可知，第一段可描写Thomas和Maggie想把这绿松石色的石头送给妈妈作生日礼物，于是就挖起来。
②由第二段首句内容“第二天一早，托马斯和玛吉在桌子上放了一个小包裹。”可知，第二段描写第二天当妈妈看到生日礼物时，非常高兴。
2.续写线索：想法——挖石头——生日礼物——高兴
3.词汇激活
行为类
挖石头：dig the stone/get the stone/pick the stone
喜欢：like/love/enjoy
情绪类
高兴：cheerfully/ happily
【点睛】
[高分句型1] We can give turquoise to Mom for her birthday, because she likes rainbows that way.（句中使用because引导的原因状语从句）
[高分句型2] Thomas and Maggie immediately dug up, hoping to find more such small stones.（句中使用现在分词作伴随状语）
[高分句型3] Mother said "thank you" happily, saying it was the best birthday present she had ever received.（现在分词作伴随状语，且使用定语从句）
5．''Justin!'' I said from the doorway. By this time his pudgy hands had grabbed one -- and only one -- and he made his way back to me. My voice was somewhat serious as I realized manners had been forgotten. ''What do you say? '' Hearing this, the little boy turned on his heel, promptly returning to the candy dish. ''Get Grandma one, too! '' I laughed. The secretary laughed. And even little Justin innocently giggled at the fun we were having.
In the humor of the moment, I felt something hard to swallow. There was a truth that lingered long after the strawberry candy taste had disappeared. What example had I set for this little one while often in my care? Was he learning more about ''getting'' and less about gratitude -- that heartfelt ''thank you''? In the years since, I've always loved to remember that moment. But one gift I hope we all leave with our children is the importance of a grateful heart. Really, what could be sweeter?
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇读后续写。文章主要讲述了作者和孙子的一次经历带给她苦中带乐的回忆。
【详解】
续写分为两段。第一段的开头是：“Justin！”我在走廊上说。这时他的手上抓着一颗糖，然后朝我走过来。我的声音有点严肃，我意识到自己当时失态了。“你说什么？”。听到这话，小男孩转过身去，立刻跑到糖果盘那里。“给奶奶也拿一颗。”我笑了。秘书也笑了。小Justin也咯咯的笑了。第二段的开头是：在这个幽默时刻，我觉得有些东西难以下咽。在草莓味糖果的味道消失之后，有一个想法始种萦绕在我心头。我给小家伙树立了什么榜样？他学到了更多关于得到，更少关于感激的东西吗（那种发自内心的感激）？从那以后，我一直记得那一刻。我总是希望让孩子学会真正的感恩。没有什么比这更好了。
续写时应注意故事情节要符合逻辑，基础时态为一般过去时。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高级表达，例如：Hearing this, the little boy turned on his heel, promptly returning to the candy dish.中使用了现在分词作状语；There was a truth that lingered long after the strawberry candy taste had disappeared.中that引导同位语从句；What example had I set for this little one while often in my care?中what引导主语从句。这些表达的使用不仅给文章增色添彩，也展示了作者扎实的语言功底。
6．But then he said, “It sounds good to me too, Son. How would you like to treat today?” Twenty cents! I felt dizzy. I could afford it. But saving money was important. And when it was my money, ice cream just wasn't a good use of it. Why didn't it occur to me that this was a golden opportunity to give something back to my very generous father who had bought me 50 ice cream cones? But all I could think was “20 cents!” In a fit of selfish, miserly ingratitude, I said the awful words that have rung in my ears ever since. “Well, in that case, I guess I'll pass.”
My father just said, “Okay, Son.” But as we turned to head home, I realized how wrong I was and begged him to turn back. I felt awful for my selfishness and ungratefulness. He didn’t mention it, or even act disappointed. But I don't think he could have done anything to make a deeper impression on me. I learned that generosity goes two ways and gratefulness sometimes costs a little more than “thank you.” We went on another trip the next week, and as we approached the crucial corner, I said, “Dad, would you like an ice cream cone today? My treat.”
【解析】
【分析】
本文讲述了作者的父亲经常在郊游回来的路上请作者吃冰淇淋。一次父亲让他请父亲吃冰淇淋，作者却拒绝了。通过这件事，作者学会了感恩不仅是“谢谢”。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
由第一段首句内容“但是他反过来说:‘听起来主意不错，儿子。你今天能请我吃冰淇淋吗？’”可知，第一段可描写作者听了父亲话后的想法和行为。
②由第二段首句内容“父亲仅仅说了声：‘行了，儿子’”可知，第二段可描写作者回家路上的自责。
2.续写线索：听了父亲的话——思考——拒绝买——回家——自责——下一次郊游——主动请客
3.词汇激活
行为类
① 意识到：realize/ come to realize/be aware of
返回去：turn back/return/go back
提及：mention/ refer to
接近：approach/ come closer
情绪类
①.难过：feel awful/ feel sad
②.失望的：disappointed/ despaired
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Why didn't it occur to me that this was a golden opportunity to give something back to my very generous father who had bought me 50 ice cream cones?(运用了it作形式主语和who引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]. In a fit of selfish, miserly ingratitude, I said the awful words that have rung in my ears ever since. (运用了that引导的定语从句）
7．Paragraph 1:
A dozen years after my retirement I was in a department store, when someone said, “Polly?” I turned around to find it was Charlie who was in front of me. I was so surprised and happy to see him there. I asked him where he had been to after that incidence. He had a deep breath and told me that during the time he rode on my bus, he experienced much kindness and love from me like a gentle mother, which he needed eagerly at that time. But he didn’t had courage to give me a response. Because he was afraid to face the pain of losing love again just as his parents left him. But when he saw the small tin heart, he envied it so much that he stole it away. Finally he felt so embarrassed that he had to leave.
Paragraph 2：
That night I thought over his words. For a boy who had just lost the love of his parents, he needed love again so much. But at the same time, he didn’t had courage to give me a response. For me love is common and selfless. I just thought that I should give everybody my love and kindness not specific to anyone, which may finally hurt Charlie by chance. From then on, I learned that if I would give somebody my love, I must pay more attention to what he really needed.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在作校车司机期间碰到了一个叫Charlie的男孩。他的父亲刚刚去世，妈妈也不要他了。这导致他心理上对外人很排斥。但是，在我每天的关心下，他渐渐有了好转。却在某一天，当他看到一个小女孩送给我的礼物上面写着“我爱Polly，Polly也爱我”的时候，因为内心感到我对他的爱不是独一份的，而又感觉到失去了我的这份爱，就选择偷走了女孩送给我的礼物，并不在出现了。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“退休十几年后的一天，我正在逛超市，突然听到有人喊“Polly?””可知，第一段可描写作者再次见到Charlie后的情景。
②由第二段首句内容“那天晚上，我反思了他的话”可知，第二段可描写作者在超市见到Charlie后，Charlie说的话让作者有了什么样的想法。
2.续写线索：见到Charlie——Charlie解释离开的原因——作者反思
3.词汇激活
行为类
①急需：needed eagerly/be in eager need
②面对：face/be faced with
情绪类
①吃惊：surprised/shocked
②高兴：happy/glad
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I turned around to find it was Charlie who was in front of me. (由it was…that…引导的强调句型)
【高分句型2】I asked him where he had been to after that incidence. (由where引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型3】He had a deep breath and told me that during the time he rode on my bus, he experienced much kindness and love from me like a gentle mother, which he needed eagerly at that time. (由that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型4】But when he saw the small tin heart, he envied it so much that he stole it away. (由when引导的时间状语从句和so…that…引导的结果状语从句)
【高分句型5】I just thought that I should give everybody my love and kindness not specific to anyone, which may finally hurt Charlie by chance. (由that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型6】From then on, I learned that if I would give somebody my love, I must pay more attention to what he really needed. (由that引导的宾语从句、if引导的条件状语从句和what引导的宾语从句)
8．“I’m so sorry, honey,” she said. “I just got busy and forgot.” I didn’t move. “Don’t forgive her,” I told myself. “She forgot you. Make her pay.” Then my mother did something completely unexpected. “I’m so sorry,” she sobbed softly. “I let you down. I let my little boy down.” She sank down on the bed and began to weep like a little girl. I was so shocked. I had never seen my mother cry. To my understanding, mothers weren’t supposed to.
I desperately tried to recall the words she had used to comfort me from times past when I cried. “It’s okay, Mom,” I stammered with difficulty. “We didn’t even need those cookies. There was plenty of food. Don’t cry. It’s all right. Really.” My words, as inadequate as they sounded to me, made my mother sit up. She wiped her eyes, and a slight smile appeared on her tear-stained cheeks. I smiled back awkwardly. We didn’t say another word but held each other in a long and tight embrace.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者焦急地等待着母亲来为班级举行的派对来送她做的最拿手的饼干，但是直到放学母亲也没来，作者怒气冲冲的回到家。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我很抱歉，亲爱的，”她说。“我只是太忙了，忘了。”可知，第一段可描写妈妈就此事向作者道歉并像个小女孩一样哭了起来以及作者对此感到很惊讶。
②由第二段首句内容“我拼命地回想过去我哭泣时，她是如何安慰我的”可知，第二段可描写作者反过来一直在安慰母亲，母亲笑了，他们拥抱在一起。
2.续写线索：母亲道歉——作者无动于衷——母亲哭泣——作者感到震惊——作者安慰母亲——母亲微笑——二人拥抱在一起
3.词汇激活
行为类
①让某人失望：make sb. disappointed /let sb. down
②忘记：forget/ slip from one’s memory
③开始做某事：start to do sth. /begin to do sth.
情绪类
①惊讶的：shocked/amazed/astonished
②尴尬地：embarrassedly/ awkwardly
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. There was plenty of food.（there be 句型）
[高分句型2]. She sank down on the bed and began to weep like a little girl..（and引导的并列句）
9．Paragraph 1:
I think of you all the time and I'm sorry that I went to your house and scared your children. I had never thought my visit would bring so much unhappiness to you. However, I was really so happy when I heard you were coming for the reunion, I missed you day and night. But I may not be able to even get out of bed to see you. I'm terribly sorry that I was a constant embarrassment to you when you were growing up.
Paragraph 2:
You see, when you were very little, you got into a terrible accident, as a result of which you lost one of your precious eyes. As a mother, I couldn't stand watching you have to grow up with just one eye. It was too much for you—a young soul to endure such a cruel fact and a possible future full of challenges. So I gave you mine. I was so proud of my son who was seeing a whole new world in my place with that eye.
With all my love to you.
Your mother
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲了作者因为自己母亲是一只眼而觉得生活十分尴尬然而到母亲死后才知道母亲是将眼睛给了失去眼睛的自己，伟大的母爱令人感动。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我一直在想你，我很抱歉”可知，第一段可描写“妈妈抱歉去了儿子家，吓到了他的孩子，让儿子很尴尬，并说明为什么去”。
②由第二段首句内容“你看，当你还很小的时候，”可知，第二段可描写“妈妈讲述儿子小时候遇到车祸，是怎样失去一只眼的以及后来发生的事情”。
2.续写线索：想儿子———去儿子家——吓到儿子的孩子——儿子尴尬——儿子小时候——事故——儿子失去一只眼——妈妈把一只眼给他——妈妈骄傲
3.词汇激活
行为类
①起床：get out of bed /get up
②以……而自豪：be proud of/take pride in
情绪类
①恐惧的：scared /frightened
②不高兴：unhappiness/sorrow
【点睛】
[高分句型1] However, I was really so happy when I heard you were coming for the reunion, I missed you day and night.（由连接词when引导时间状语从句）
[高分句型2] You see, when you were very little, you got into a terrible accident, as a result of which you lost one of your precious eyes.（由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3] I was so proud of my son who was seeing a whole new world in my place with that eye.（who引导定语从句）
10．“Happy birthday！” yelled（欢呼） the children when they arrived at Grandma’s house. “we brought you cookies. We made them by myself.”said Sylvia. “wonderful”said Grandm.Meanwhile, Anne quietly took out the scarf she knitted for grandma. When grandma saw it, her face showed appreciation and said proudly, "my baby, you are such a handy girl. I like it very much.". Shrinking behind them, Cathrine looked nervously at the card in her hand and wondered if grandma would like it. At this time, grandma looked at Catherine kindly and said gently, "I'm curious what my Catherine has prepared for me?"
Then Catherine gave her card to Grandma. When grandma saw this card, she showed a big smile, " Wow, this is the most beautiful card I've ever seen." Grandma thanked the children again for their birthday gifts. They ate delicious cookies and spent a good night together. That night，when she lay in bed，Catherine thought about her feel-good shoebox and how it really did make her feel very，very good. She feels that no matter what difficulties she encounters in the future, she can face them bravely as long as there is feel good shoebox.
【解析】
【分析】
本文是以人物为线索展开，讲述了Catherine拿不出像样的东西而不愿参加祖母的生日聚会，但是在跟妈妈玩了鞋盒游戏后欣然同意参加祖母的生日聚会。
【详解】
段落续写：
由第一段首句内容““生日快乐！”孩子们来到奶奶家时大声喊道。”可知，第一段可描写Catherine带着礼物去了奶奶的生日聚会，对于奶奶是否喜欢卡片而忐忑不安。
由第二段首句内容“然后凯瑟琳把她的卡片给了奶奶。”可知，第二段可描写奶奶看到卡片后夸赞了Catherine，让她对自己更有自信。
续写线索：怀疑自己----妈妈提出玩鞋盒游戏----认识到自己的优点----给奶奶送贺卡----得到表扬----对自己更自信
词汇积累
欢呼：yell/cheer
骄傲的说：say proudly/say in a proud voice
遇到：show a big smile/show a bright smile
情绪类
勇敢的：bravely/courageously
紧张的：nervous/uptight
【点睛】
【高分句型1】 Shrinking behind them, Cathrine looked nervously at the card in her hand and wondered if grandma would like it. （运用了现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】She feels that no matter what difficulties she encounters in the future, she can face them bravely as long as there is feel good shoebox.（运用了no matter +特殊疑问词引导的让步状语从句）