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高中英语高考04 书面表达学生常犯错误及如何让作文有”亮“点-冲刺2020高考书面表达提分必备 课件PPT
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这是一份高中英语高考04 书面表达学生常犯错误及如何让作文有”亮“点-冲刺2020高考书面表达提分必备 课件PPT，共32页。PPT课件主要包含了如何让作文亮起来，用词要“亮”，Exercise，are bound，Faced with，turn to，tougher ，cope with，Sample等内容，欢迎下载使用。
如何让高考作文“亮”起来
Our English ---Chingish
Miss: hell!Freigner: hi!M: Yu have what thing?F: Can yu speak English?M:if I nt speak English, I am speaking what?F: Can anybdy else speak English?M: yu yurself lk. All peple are playing, n peple have time.F: Anybdy here can speak English?M: shut what shut, quiet a little, yu n earth have what thing?F: I want t speak t yur head.M: Head nt zai. Yu tmrrw cme.
We tw wh and wh?Hw are yu? Hw ld are yu?I give yu sme clr see see.Yu give me stp.Watch sisterHeart flwer angry penLet the hrse cme nRed face knw me Seven up eight dwn N three n fur
望词生义:The lady is great with child. When I entered the rm she was in her birthday suit.
这位女士大着肚子（怀孕了）
当我走进房间的时候，她正一丝不挂呢！
用词随心所欲:I gt this cell phne withut mney. I hpe that her bdy will stay healthy. pen a meeting/ the light/ TV
改：I gt this cellphne fr free.
改： I hpe that she will stay healthy.
改： hld a meeting/turn n the light/TV
堆词成句:I want t read a big schl. I think yu sended the birthday card t me is s beautiful.students dn’t allw see/watch TVThe reasn f his success has many.
意义重复:I am happy t hear frm yur letter.My English level is gd.I am writing a letter t ask fr yur help.I want t invite yu t take part in my birthday party.
逻辑主语错误:Studying hard can g t cllege.G t cllege can learn useful knwledgeHave rich knwledge can cntribute t ur cuntry.My English spelling have made a big prgress.
连词缺失:There are 61% f the students agree with the pinin.There are 61% f the students wh agree with the pinin.There are 61% f the students agreeing with the pinin.
连词缺失:The dictinary is really I want t have.The dictinary is really what I want t have.I am a student cme frm Huize.I am a student wh cmes frm Huize.I am a student cming frm Huize.I am a student frm Huize.
用词要“亮”造句要“亮”句间过渡要“亮”
1. “语”众不同，避免人云亦云
Successfully, I have helped her in several English activities f my class, which have been appreciated by bth teachers and classmates.
Successfully, I have lent a helping hand t her in several English activities f my class, which have been appreciated by bth teachers and classmates.
Frm this experience I have learnt that questining can help us t seek the truth.
Frm this experience I have learnt that questining can serve as a bridge that helps us t seek the truth.
2. 更新换代，避免重复
We may have different pinins in rganizing class activities. We may have different ways t deal with such a situatin.
We may have different pinins in rganizing class activities. We may have varius ways t deal with such a situatin.
We’ve built a new experiment building beside the ld ne and we’ve als built a library where the ld playgrund used t be.
We’ve built a new experiment building beside the ld ne and we’ve als set up a library where the ld playgrund used t be.
3. 单词与短语巧妙互用
We shuld try t imprve urselves thrugh learning and prepare fr the future.
We shuld take pains t imprve urselves thrugh learning and get prepared fr the future.
As the number f English learners is increasing, it’s nt difficult fr them t understand these wrds in Chinese cntexts.
As the number f English learners is n the rise, it’s nt difficult fr them t understand these wrds in Chinese cntexts.
I sincerely hpe that yu will cnsider my suggestins.
I sincerely hpe that yu will take my suggestins int accunt/cnsideratin.
4. 用高年级词汇代替低年级词汇
In the cming three years, ur schl life will be difficult.
In the cming three years, ur schl life will be challenging.
S lng as we hld fast t ur ideals and never give up, we are sure t achieve success.
S lng as we hld fast t ur ideals and never give up, we are bund t achieve success.
We ffer ht water 24 hurs every day and the swimming pl is free t use any time yu want.
Ht water is available 24 hurs every day in ur htel and yu can have free access t the swimming pl any time yu want.
devte 替换 spendsuppse 替换 shuldcann’t (help) but 替换 have t din the curse f 替换 duringbe wrn ut 替换 be tiredspare n effrts t 替换 try ne’s best t be f + n. 替换 adj.
When we get int high schl, we are sure t meet with difficulties in ur study. A difficulty I met with was that I had strng Chinese accent while cmmunicating with thers in English, making everyne laugh at me.
Facing the difficulty, I bught a lt f CDs f native speakers’ public speaking and tried t imitate every day. I ften asked the teacher fr help, wh always helped crrect my prnunciatin. As a result, I made great prgress.
As a cnsequence
We d meet sme difficulties in ur study, but each man is the architect f his wn fate and success always grws ut f struggles t vercme difficulties, due t which we becme strnger.
T slve ur difficulties in study, we shuld find ut the reasns first and then take effective measures. Besides, cnsulting ur teachers can cntribute a lt t slving the prblems. Only in this way can we perfrm well and gain success.
are suppsed t
Assignment:
假定你是李华，元旦前夕，你班将举办一场迎新晚会，请你给外教Mr. White 写一封信，邀请他参加，内容包括：时间：12月31日晚上7:00-9:00地点：多功能教室（multifunctinal classrm）活动：表演节目，做游戏，包饺子
Dear Mr. White, With the new year drawing near, we plan t rganize a party t welcme the cming year. S I am writing t invite yu t participate it n Dec. 31st, which will be held in the multifunctinal classrm, lasting frm 7:00 pm t 9:00 pm. A great variety f interesting activities will be held then.
First f all, we will watch the wnderful perfrmances well prepared by us students. Then, we will play sme fun games, after which we will make and enjy the delicius dumplings. I firmly believe that we will have a pleasant time tgether. Therefre, we d hpe yu will jin us. I am lking frward t yur early reply. Yurs, Li Hua
如何让高考作文“亮”起来
Our English ---Chingish
Miss: hell!Freigner: hi!M: Yu have what thing?F: Can yu speak English?M:if I nt speak English, I am speaking what?F: Can anybdy else speak English?M: yu yurself lk. All peple are playing, n peple have time.F: Anybdy here can speak English?M: shut what shut, quiet a little, yu n earth have what thing?F: I want t speak t yur head.M: Head nt zai. Yu tmrrw cme.
We tw wh and wh?Hw are yu? Hw ld are yu?I give yu sme clr see see.Yu give me stp.Watch sisterHeart flwer angry penLet the hrse cme nRed face knw me Seven up eight dwn N three n fur
望词生义:The lady is great with child. When I entered the rm she was in her birthday suit.
这位女士大着肚子（怀孕了）
当我走进房间的时候，她正一丝不挂呢！
用词随心所欲:I gt this cell phne withut mney. I hpe that her bdy will stay healthy. pen a meeting/ the light/ TV
改：I gt this cellphne fr free.
改： I hpe that she will stay healthy.
改： hld a meeting/turn n the light/TV
堆词成句:I want t read a big schl. I think yu sended the birthday card t me is s beautiful.students dn’t allw see/watch TVThe reasn f his success has many.
意义重复:I am happy t hear frm yur letter.My English level is gd.I am writing a letter t ask fr yur help.I want t invite yu t take part in my birthday party.
逻辑主语错误:Studying hard can g t cllege.G t cllege can learn useful knwledgeHave rich knwledge can cntribute t ur cuntry.My English spelling have made a big prgress.
连词缺失:There are 61% f the students agree with the pinin.There are 61% f the students wh agree with the pinin.There are 61% f the students agreeing with the pinin.
连词缺失:The dictinary is really I want t have.The dictinary is really what I want t have.I am a student cme frm Huize.I am a student wh cmes frm Huize.I am a student cming frm Huize.I am a student frm Huize.
用词要“亮”造句要“亮”句间过渡要“亮”
1. “语”众不同，避免人云亦云
Successfully, I have helped her in several English activities f my class, which have been appreciated by bth teachers and classmates.
Successfully, I have lent a helping hand t her in several English activities f my class, which have been appreciated by bth teachers and classmates.
Frm this experience I have learnt that questining can help us t seek the truth.
Frm this experience I have learnt that questining can serve as a bridge that helps us t seek the truth.
2. 更新换代，避免重复
We may have different pinins in rganizing class activities. We may have different ways t deal with such a situatin.
We may have different pinins in rganizing class activities. We may have varius ways t deal with such a situatin.
We’ve built a new experiment building beside the ld ne and we’ve als built a library where the ld playgrund used t be.
We’ve built a new experiment building beside the ld ne and we’ve als set up a library where the ld playgrund used t be.
3. 单词与短语巧妙互用
We shuld try t imprve urselves thrugh learning and prepare fr the future.
We shuld take pains t imprve urselves thrugh learning and get prepared fr the future.
As the number f English learners is increasing, it’s nt difficult fr them t understand these wrds in Chinese cntexts.
As the number f English learners is n the rise, it’s nt difficult fr them t understand these wrds in Chinese cntexts.
I sincerely hpe that yu will cnsider my suggestins.
I sincerely hpe that yu will take my suggestins int accunt/cnsideratin.
4. 用高年级词汇代替低年级词汇
In the cming three years, ur schl life will be difficult.
In the cming three years, ur schl life will be challenging.
S lng as we hld fast t ur ideals and never give up, we are sure t achieve success.
S lng as we hld fast t ur ideals and never give up, we are bund t achieve success.
We ffer ht water 24 hurs every day and the swimming pl is free t use any time yu want.
Ht water is available 24 hurs every day in ur htel and yu can have free access t the swimming pl any time yu want.
devte 替换 spendsuppse 替换 shuldcann’t (help) but 替换 have t din the curse f 替换 duringbe wrn ut 替换 be tiredspare n effrts t 替换 try ne’s best t be f + n. 替换 adj.
When we get int high schl, we are sure t meet with difficulties in ur study. A difficulty I met with was that I had strng Chinese accent while cmmunicating with thers in English, making everyne laugh at me.
Facing the difficulty, I bught a lt f CDs f native speakers’ public speaking and tried t imitate every day. I ften asked the teacher fr help, wh always helped crrect my prnunciatin. As a result, I made great prgress.
As a cnsequence
We d meet sme difficulties in ur study, but each man is the architect f his wn fate and success always grws ut f struggles t vercme difficulties, due t which we becme strnger.
T slve ur difficulties in study, we shuld find ut the reasns first and then take effective measures. Besides, cnsulting ur teachers can cntribute a lt t slving the prblems. Only in this way can we perfrm well and gain success.
are suppsed t
Assignment:
假定你是李华，元旦前夕，你班将举办一场迎新晚会，请你给外教Mr. White 写一封信，邀请他参加，内容包括：时间：12月31日晚上7:00-9:00地点：多功能教室（multifunctinal classrm）活动：表演节目，做游戏，包饺子
Dear Mr. White, With the new year drawing near, we plan t rganize a party t welcme the cming year. S I am writing t invite yu t participate it n Dec. 31st, which will be held in the multifunctinal classrm, lasting frm 7:00 pm t 9:00 pm. A great variety f interesting activities will be held then.
First f all, we will watch the wnderful perfrmances well prepared by us students. Then, we will play sme fun games, after which we will make and enjy the delicius dumplings. I firmly believe that we will have a pleasant time tgether. Therefre, we d hpe yu will jin us. I am lking frward t yur early reply. Yurs, Li Hua
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