福建省宁德市2020-2022年三年中考一模英语试题分类汇编：书面表达

福建省宁德市2020-2022年三年中考一模英语解析版试题分类汇编

书面表达

2022年福建省宁德市中考一模英语试题

Ⅷ. 书面表达（满分15分）

91．近年来，我们的生活里涌现了许多可歌可泣的英雄，你心中的英雄是谁呢？是耀眼的明星，是见义勇为的市民，是恪守职责的公民，还是身边默默无闻的普通人？假如你是李华，你校将开展以“The Hero in My Heart”为主题的征文活动。请你结合下列思维导图写一篇征文投稿，词数80 左右。

要求：

★       开头已给出，不计入总词数；

★       短文必须包括上述要点，可适当发挥；意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

★请勿在文中使用真实的姓名（除名人外）、校名及提示信息以外的地名。

The Hero in My Heart

Recently, many heroes like Zhong Nanshan, Li Guimei have appeared around us. Who is the hero in my heart? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2021年福建省宁德市中考一模英语试题

71．你校英语俱乐部拟举办以“How to Be a Healthy Student”为题的演讲活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示，从身体健康、心理健康两方面写一篇英语演讲稿。

要求：词数80个左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;

短文必须包括上述要点，可恰当发挥；意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。

How to Be a Healthy Student

Hello, everyone! It’s a great honor to give a speech here. Health is important for students. Here is my advice about how to be a healthy student. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

   Thanks for listening.

2020年福建省宁德市中考一模英语试题

VII. 书面表达（满分15分）

46．（15分）2019年以来， 地球之肺亚马逊森林足足燃烧半个多月；南极冰川融化， 数十万企鹅丧身：……一系列遭受破坏的自然现象向人类敲响了警钟．请你根据下图提示要点， 以"Save the Earth"为题写一篇短文， 阐述自己的观点和做法．

要求：

★词数80左右， 开头已给出， 不计入总词数；

★短文必须包括上述要点，可适当发挥；意思清楚，表达通顺， 行文连贯， 书写规范；

★请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名．

Save the Earth

    Recently， our earth has experienced many terrible things． I think it is high time for us to do something to save the earth．

    As middle school students，                  ．

         参考答案

2022年福建省宁德市中考一模英语试题

91．参考范文：

The Hero in My Heart

Recently, many heroes like Zhong Nanshan, Li Guimei have appeared around us. Who is the hero in my heart? She is my mother whose name is Zhangli. She is a nice doctor with long hair, a pretty face and slim body. Now she has become my hero because she helps me a lot and sets a good example for me. As my mother, she always listens to me patiently, encourages me deeply and gives me helpful suggestions when I am in trouble. With the help of her, I always succeed in solving problems. As a doctor, she works hard, tries her best to help patients and wins their high praise. In a word, she is successful both at work and family.

I hope I will be a person like her. I also hope she will care for her own health.

【详解】

题干解读：本题是一篇材料作文，结合思维导图提示，谈谈自己心目中的英雄，具体包括他/她的姓名、职业、外貌以及为什么他/她会成为你心目中的英雄，你在他/她身上学到了什么精神。

写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时，人称用第三人称。写作时可分为两段，第一段承接开头，点出心目中的英雄是谁，然后结合思维导图，全方面地描写；第二段写向他/她学习，成为像他/她那样的人。注意人称和时态正确运用，造句符合英语语言表达习惯，无拼写和语法错误。

2021年福建省宁德市中考一模英语试题

71．One version:

Hello, everyone! It’s a great honor to give a speech here. Health is important for students. Here is my advice about how to be a healthy student.

We need to have healthy eating habits. Fruit and vegetables are good for our health. So eat the right food to keep us healthy. Having a good sleep also makes us active. Do sports an hour every day so that we can keep fit. We should not only care for our physical health but also our mental health. Try to be happy. If we are not happy, we can talk with our friends, parents and teachers about our worries or sadness. Do something relaxing to stay in a good mood.

In short, health is a problem we should pay attention to. If we can follow the advice, we can keep healthy. Be healthy to live a better life.

Thanks for listening.

【详解】

1. 题干解读：题目要求根据思维导图写如何成为一个健康的学生，从身体健康、心理健康两方面描写，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头和结尾融合起来，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。

2020年福建省宁德市中考一模英语试题

46．【分析】高分句型一：

I think it is high time for us to do something to save the earth．认为现在是我们采取行动拯救地球的时候了．句子中think后面跟的是一个宾语从句．

高分句型二：

Thirdly， when we go out to do some shopping， we'd better take cloth bags rather than plastic bags to save energy．第三，当我们出去购物时，我们最好带布袋而不是塑料袋以节省能源．had better do sth表示最好做某事．

【解答】

Save the Earth

    Recently， our earth has experienced many terrible things． I think it is high time for us to do something to save the earth．【高分句型一】（引出话题）

    As middle school students， firstly， we should ride a bike of go to school on foot instead of taking a bus． Secondly， we can ask our government to keep factories from pouring waste water into rivers or streams． Thirdly， when we go out to do some shopping， we'd better take cloth bags rather than plastic bags to save energy．【高分句型二】 Last but not least， animals are our friends， we should protect them from being killed．（为了保护环境，应该如何去做）

    In short， only when we have the idea of loving our earth， can we make a better place to live．（结束语）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．