湖北高考英语写作专项训练

这是一份湖北高考英语写作专项训练，共29页。
应用文
1．假定你是李华，你看到学校门口存在乱停放自行车的现象。请你在校英文报上写一篇报道，倡议同学们把自行车停放在指定位置，内容包括：
(1)乱停放自行车造成的不良影响；
(2)发出倡议。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：random随意的
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2．假定你是某国际学校的学生，最近你参与创办了一个传统中国画社团，该社团正打算向全校招募成员，请你以社团的名义写一则招募启事，内容如下：
1.启事目的；
2.加入社团的好处；
3.如何加入。
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
New Members Wanted
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3．高中学习紧张，考试压力大，因而有些学生产生了不劳而获的想法，你校英文报拟向全体学生发出“诚信考试”(Take Exams Honestly)的倡议。请你为英文报写一封倡议书。内容包括：
1. 倡议目的
2. 诚信考试的重要性
3. 你的期待。
Dear fellow students,
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4．假定你是李华，你观察到同学们英语写作中存在的问题。请写一篇演讲稿，在课前分享你的观察并提出建议。内容包括：
1．作文问题；2．改进方法。
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
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5．假定你是李华，就读于一所国际学校。现阶段对个人未来发展产生了困惑，希望得到学校职业规划办公室（Career Planning Office）的Mr. Smith的帮助。请按下列要求写一封求助信：
1.本人简介；
2.对未来职业的畅想；
3.现阶段的困惑。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．假如你是高三学生李华，打算毕业后申请去香港大学(Hong Kong University)学习。因此你给该校写了一封电子邮件，咨询相关事宜。要点如下：
1.如何才能被你感兴趣的专业录取；
2.是否需要参加英语考试；
3.该校的学费，食宿安排等情况。
注意：
1.词数为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Hua from Senior Three.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
7．假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了一场师生足球友谊赛，参赛人员为高三学生代表队对战教师代表队。请为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 比赛目的；
2. 比赛过程；
3. 活动反响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Teacher-Student Football Friendly
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8．针对高中生压力大，同学之间常因鸡毛蒜皮的小事闹矛盾这一问题，你校即将举行一场以“Learn to Forgive”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。内容包括：
1．原谅他人的意义；
2．如何原谅他人；
3．你的建议。
注意：1．词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hello, everyone,
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That’s all. Thank you!
9．假定你是李华，你的好朋友Tom，由于父母要求即将期中考试的他暂停社团活动，与父母发生了争吵陷入冷战，因此他写信向你诉苦。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.给予安慰；
2.给出建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．假定你是李华，学校英语报记者，你们学校近期举行了一次校体育运动会。请写一篇短文，报道此次校运会。
内容包括：
1.活动简介
2.你的感受
注意：1.词数80左右
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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11．你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以“The Person I Admire Most”为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：1．人物简介；2．你敬佩的原因；3．你的评价或对你的影响。
注意：1．词数应为80左右，开关和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数；2．所写内容应包括以上信息；3．不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
The Person I Admire Most
Dear fellow students,
There are many respectable people around us. And the person I admire most is
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That’s all. Thank you!
12．假如你是一名英语课代表，为了帮助同学们提高学习英语的效率，你用英语给全班同学写了一封倡议信，倡导“坚持每天高效晨读”，内容如下：
1. 倡议目的；
2. 你对晨读的看法和建议；
3. 希望大家积极响应。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
My dear fellow students,
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13．假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席，为了发现身边的美，你校计划开展主题为“寻找最美武汉人”的摄影展(photographic exhibition)，请你为此写一则英文通知以鼓励大家踊跃参与。
内容包括：
1. 摄影展的目的和主题。
2. 展出的时间及地点。
3. 具体要求。
注意：1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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14．某英语报刊正举办以“学习与锻炼”为主题的征文比赛。请你写一篇短文参加比赛，内容包括：
1. 你校学生学习与锻炼的现状；
2. 分析产生该现状的原因；
3. 你自己的感想。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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15．你校近期计划举行一个以创新为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你根据一下内容写一篇发言稿参赛，介绍一款家用机器人。这款家用机器人主要有以下功能：
1. 可以根据个人需要做饭;
2. 可以陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动等;
3. 可以及时处理突发事件。
注意：1.词数 80 左右;2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
参考词汇：家用机器人 domestic robot
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16．假定你是李华，校学生会主席。现在全国中小学生近视问题日益严峻，这一现象已经引起了国家的高度重视。为此，请你在全校升旗仪式上做演讲，呼吁爱眼护眼。内容包括：问题的严重性；改进和预防措施等。要求：
1. 词数 80 词左右；
2. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：近视 nearsightedness
Dear teachers and fellow students;
It’s my great honour to stand here and present a speech about the worrying situation of nearsightedness among Chinese students.
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That’s all! Thanks for all your attention!
17．你校英语报的“中国传统文化”专栏准备招募一名英语编辑。请你写一则招聘广告，内容包括：
1.专栏简介；
2.岗位要求；
3.报名方式和截止时间。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
An English Editor for “Traditional Chinese Culture” Wanted
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18．请你用英文介绍一位你最敬佩的老师。标题已为你拟好。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My admirable teacher
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19．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom得知你参加了学校上月举办的首届校园科技节 (Science and Technology Festival ) 活动， 发邮件向你询问相关情况， 请你回复邮件。内容包括：
1．活动的目的;
2．活动的形式;
3．你的感受。
注意：1．词数80左右;2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3．作文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
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Yours，
Li Hua
20．假设你是李华，你是一名市博物馆的志愿者英语讲解员。请写一篇英文日记，记述你今天接待几位英国游客，带领他们参观瓷器展的全过程，内容包括:
1. 参观过程;
2. 你的感想。
注意:
1，词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:瓷器porcelain
Friday 30th September, 2022
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参考答案：
1．One possible version:
Noticing that our bicycles are parked randomly on the roadside at the school gate, I strongly call on everyone to pay attention to this situation.
There is no doubt that the random parking results in many bad effects. Firstly, it may cause traffic jams.What’s more, it may leave a bad impression on others, affecting the appearance of our school. As we all know, it is our duty to park our bicycles at the right place.The school is our family and we should be responsible for it.
Take action, and we will have a better school!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求针对自行车乱停放的现象进行报道并提出倡议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
影响：effect→influence
此外：what’s more→besides
引起：cause→lead to
不好的：bad→ negative
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句：The school is our family and we should be responsible for it.
拓展句：The school is our family, for which we should be responsible.
【点睛】 【高分句型1】 There is no doubt that the random parking results in many bad effects. （运用了that引导的同位语从句）
【高分句型2】What’s more, it may leave a bad impression on others, affecting the appearance of our school.（运用了非谓语动词作状语。）
2．One possible version:
New Members Wanted
The traditional Chinese painting club founded two weeks ago is looking for new members. By participating in our well-organized activities, you will benefit a lot. Not only can you cultivate your patience and imagination, but also you can reach a higher level of artistic thinking. Learning traditional Chinese painting, you will get easier access to our excellent history and culture, which can nurture your mind. Students of all grades are welcome. If you are interested, please fill in the application form and send it to the email address at Traditional Chinese Painting@ 163.com before May 7, 2021. Please join us now.
Traditional Chinese Painting Club
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为传统中国画社团写一则招募启事，向全校招募成员。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立：found→set up
参加：participate in→take part in
极好的：excellent→wonderful
培养：nurture→nourish
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The traditional Chinese painting club founded two weeks ago is looking for new members.
拓展句：The traditional Chinese painting club which was founded two weeks ago is looking for new members.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Not only can you cultivate your patience and imagination, but also you can reach a higher level of artistic thinking. (运用了部分倒装)
[高分句型2] Learning traditional Chinese painting, you will get easier access to our excellent history and culture, which can nurture your mind. (运用了现在分词作状语，which引导非限制性定语从句)
3．possible version:
Take Exams Honestly
Dear fellow students,
Nowadays many students care too much about high grades, resulting in growing inappropriate behaviors in exams. As far as I am concerned, taking exams with integrity is necessary. I advocate that we students should take exams honestly.
Honesty is considered as one of important Chinese traditional virtues. As a student, we should avoid cheating in every exam, which is a right way to demonstrate our integrity. In other words, the process of learning is more meaningful than getting a seemingly perfect but unreal result.
All in all, it is high time that we should value honesty.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于倡议书。考生所在学校的英文报拟向全体学生发出“诚信考试”的倡议，要求考生为英文报写一封倡议书。
【详解】1.词汇积累
导致：lead to→ result in
关心：be concerned with→ care about
换句话说：in other word→ in other words
重视：pay attention to→ value
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Honesty is considered as one of important Chinese traditional virtues
拓展句：It is honesty that is considered as one of important Chinese traditional virtues this weekend.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As a student, we should avoid cheating in every exam, which is a right way to demonstrate our integrity.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】 I advocate that we students should take exams honestly.（运用了that引导宾语从句）
4．
Good morning! Everyone!
Today I’d like to say something about the problems in English writing and some ways to solve them.
There are two mistakes that we students always made in our writing. The first one is spelling mistake, for example, “whether” and “weather”, which means students have some problems in vocabulary learning. What they need to do is to enhance their memory. And the second mistake is grammar mistake. Some students even can’t write a complete sentence and always miss some necessary elements of a sentence. For these students, it is significant to learn more about syntax. That’s what I’d like to share with you today.
Thanks for your attention.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你观察到同学们英语写作中存在的问题。请写一篇演讲稿，在课前分享你的观察并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累建议：
问题：problem→question
解决：solve→deal with
例如：for example→such as
重要的：significant →important
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：And the second mistake is grammar mistake. Some students even can’t write a complete sentence and always miss some necessary elements of a sentence.
拓展句：And the second mistake is grammar mistake, such as writing a incomplete sentence and missing some necessary elements of a sentence.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 The first one is spelling mistake, for example, “whether” and “weather”, which means students have some problems in vocabulary learning.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】For these students, it is significant to learn more about syntax.(运用了it作形式主语)

【高分句型3】That’s what I’d like to share with you today.(运用了what引导的表语从句)
5．Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a student in Class 1 Senior 3. Struggling with choosing a suitable major for the future, I am writing for your guidance and assistance.
Adoring my English teacher, I made up my mind to be a teacher like her. However, I find it difficult to figure out which subject to learn in the university and where I can get the introductions of the subjects.
Faced with all the above, I’m eager to get your advice. Thank you in advance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校职业规划办公室的Mr. Smith写一封信，介绍自己现阶段对个人未来发展的困惑并寻求帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮助：assistance→help
崇拜：adore→idolize
下定决心做某事：make up one’s mind to do sth.→be determined to do sth.
然而：however→nevertheless
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Faced with all the above, I’m eager to get your advice.
拓展句：Faced with all the above, I’m eager to get your advice, which is very important to me.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Struggling with choosing a suitable major for the future, I am writing for your guidance and assistance.（运用了现在分词短语作状语）
【高分句型2】However, I find it difficult to figure out which subject to learn in the university and where I can get the introductions of the subjects.（运用了which引导的宾语从句和where引导的宾语从句作figure out的宾语）
6．Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua from senior Grade Three. With graduation approaching, I’d like to apply to study further in Hong Kong University. Now I’m writing to ask you for some information regarding its admission policy.
To begin with, could you tell me what I am expected to do to gain admission to the major I have the greatest passion for? Still, I’m wondering whether there is any English admission examination upon registration/enrollment? If so, I will get fully prepared ahead of time. Moreover, it would be better if you could offer me some information related to tuition fees, scholarship, living costs and accommodation as well.
Your generous assistance and prompt reply would be highly appreciated.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达为一封询问信。要求学生写一封信，咨询申请去香港大学学习的相关事宜。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
提前：ahead of time→ahead of schedule/in advance
关于：regarding→in regard to/as regards with/with respect to
喜欢：have great passion for→be fascinated by/be enthusiastic about
获得：gain→get/obtain/acquire
首先：to begin with→first and foremost/firstly
2.句式拓展：
同义句
原句：With graduation approaching, I’d like to apply to study further in Hong Kong University.
拓展句：As graduation approaches, I’d like to apply to study further in Hong Kong University.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Still, I’m wondering whether there is any English admission examination upon registration/enrollment?（运用了whether引导宾语从句）
【高分句型2】
To begin with, could you tell me what I am expected to do to gain admission to the major I have the greatest passion for?（运用了what引导宾语从句）
7．One possible version:
A Teacher-Student Football Friendly
Last Sunday, our school organised a friendly football match between students and teachers, in an effort to enrich students’ school life.
Bathed in sunshine, players from Grade 3 competed against their teachers in the field, with all the rest students watching excitedly in the bleachers. Both teams were playing at their best in high spirits. Although the teachers dominated the game at first, the students did not give up and tried to intercept every pass from their op-ponents. The match was filled with great dynamics and interesting plays, ending in a draw of 2: 2.
The exciting game not only helped relieve the students’ intense pressure caused by heavy workload, but also strengthened their relationship with the teachers.
【分析】本书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对学校组织的师生足球友谊赛写一篇英文报道并写一下活动的反响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
组织：organise →hold
最初：at first → in the beginning
充满了：be filled with →be full of
加强：strengthen →build up
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last Sunday, our school organised a friendly football match between students and teachers, in an effort to enrich students’ school life.
拓展句：Last Sunday, our school organised a friendly football match between students and teachers, which was aimed to enrich students’ school life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Bathed in sunshine, players from Grade 3 competed against their teachers in the field, with all the rest students watching excitedly in the bleachers.（运用了分词作状语和with的复合结构）
【高分句型2】The exciting game not only helped relieve the students’ intense pressure caused by heavy workload, but also strengthened their relationship with the teachers.（运用了not only…but also…连接并列结构和分词短语作定语）
8．Hello, everyone.
It’s a great honor for me to deliver a speech here.
Learning to forgive plays a major role in our daily communication. First, tolerance is a virtue which helps us lighten our mood. Second, forgiving others means stopping blaming people because we might lose them if we always focus on their mistakes. The key to learning to forgive is to care more about others’ positive aspects. Only in this way can we establish a harmonious relationship with others.
If we develop a forgiving nature, we’ll also receive forgiveness from others. Why not try it now?
That’s all. Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。针对高中生压力大，同学之间常因鸡毛蒜皮的小事闹矛盾这一问题，你校即将举行一场以“Learn to Forgive”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
发表演讲：deliver a speech→address a speech
其次：second→what’s more
集中：focus on→concentrate on
尝试：try→attempt
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The key to learning to forgive is to care more about others’ positive aspects.
拓展句：The key to learning to forgive is to care more about others’ positive aspects, which is important to develop the virtue.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, tolerance is a virtue which helps us lighten our mood.（运用了which引导定语从句）
【高分句型2】Second, forgiving others means stopping blaming people because we might lose them if we always focus on their mistakes. （运用了because引导状语从句，if引导条件状语从句）
【高分句型3】Only in this way can we establish a harmonious relationship with others.（运用了倒装句）
9．Dear Tom，
       I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in dealing with your parents. Honestly speaking, it is not rare during our daily life, but we should make efforts to get along well with them. My advice is as follows.
       To start with, you should follow your parents’ instructions so that you can make good preparations for the coming exam. Equally importantly, you may as well have a talk with your parents, telling them what you are planning and what levels you can reach. Only when they know your real knowledge ability can they feel at ease. If possible, you can help your parents around the house, which is of great benefit to improve your relationship.
       If you follow my advice, you will be in harmony with your parents.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。你的好朋友Tom，由于父母要求即将期中考试的他暂停社团活动，与父母发生了争吵陷入冷战，要求考生给好朋友Tom写一封电子邮件，对他表示安慰，同时给出一些建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
了解：know → learn
问题：trouble → problem
建议：advice→ suggestion
即将来临的考试：the coming exam→the exam to come
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： My advice is as follows.
拓展句： My advice is as follows, which I think will be of great use.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
To start with, you should follow your parents’ instructions so that you can make good preparations for the coming exam. （运用了so that的目的状语从句）
【高分句型2】
If possible, you can help your parents around the house, which is of great benefit to improve your relationships.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）
10．Last week, a sports meeting was held by our school in the stadium, which was so exciting that it impressed me deeply. All the students got actively involved in it and the whole school was alive and full of freshness. The playground was crowded with audiences. Every athlete made great efforts to win, the students who stood by the runway let out the most encouraging slogan.Exhausted/Worn out as we were, we enjoyed ourselves cheering and jumping.
This activity was of great significance, not only could it help us sense the fun of exercise, but also cultivate the awareness of teamwork, and deepen our friendship.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于短文报道。学校近期举行了一次校体育运动会。要求学校英语报记者李华写一篇短文，报道此次校运会。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感觉：feel→ sense
玩的开心：have a good time→ enjoy oneself
筋疲力尽的：worn→ exhausted
重要性：importance→ significance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：All the students got actively involved in it and the whole school was alive and full of freshness.
拓展句：Because all the students got actively involved in it, the whole school was alive and full of freshness.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Last week, a sports meeting was held by our school in the stadium, which was so exciting that it impressed me deeply.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Exhausted out as we were, we enjoyed ourselves cheering and jumping.（运用了as引导的让步状语从句）
11．One possible version:
There are many respectable people around us. And the person I admire most is Mrs Wu, aged 30, my English teacher, who has been teaching English for 6 years.
Mrs Wu is kind and considerate towards us students just like our dear mother. Once, one of my classmates got injured accidentally and without hesitation Mrs Wu took him to hospital for medical treatment at once. What impresses me most is that she always tries new ways to make her classes lively and interesting. Also, she is very patient with us and always helps us find solutions to problems when we turn to her for help. With her help, our English has made rapid progress.
In my eyes, Mrs Wu is more than our teacher. She’s also our best friend. That’s why she deserves our respect.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你根据所给要求，以“The Person I Admire Most”为题写一篇发言稿参赛。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
体贴的：considerate→ thoughtful
意外地：accidentally→ unexpectedly
立刻：at once→ immediately
帮助：help→ assistance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Once, one of my classmates got injured accidentally and without hesitation Mrs Wu took him to hospital for medical treatment at once.
拓展句：Once, when one of my classmates got injured accidentally, without hesitation Mrs Wu took him to hospital for medical treatment at once.
【点睛】[高分句型1] And the person I admire most is Mrs Wu, aged 30, my English teacher, who has been teaching English for 6 years.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] What impresses me most is that she always tries new ways to make her classes lively and interesting. （运用了what引导的主语从句）
12．One possible version:
My dear fellow students,
Aimed at helping improve the efficiency of learning English, I make an appeal to all of the students in our class to make it a habit to do English reading every morning.
As far as I’m concerned, the importance of morning reading can never be emphasized too much. It is an effective way to read aloud, which not only helps us feel the charm of English but also helps us cultivate a good sense of language. Furthermore, it is strongly recommended that we should break down our morning reading tasks and complete them one by one. Only in this way can we memorize what we have learned very well.
I sincerely hope that everyone of us will take action immediately. Let’s work together!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语给全班同学写了一封倡议信，倡导“坚持每天高效晨读”，帮助同学们提高学习英语的效率。
【详解】1.词汇积累
学习：learn →study
在我看来：As far as I’m concerned → In my opinion
方法：way →approach
而且：Furthermore → Moreover/Besides
2.句式拓展
句式转换
原句：Aimed at helping improve the efficiency of learning English, I make an appeal to all of the students in our class to make it a habit to do English reading every morning.
拓展句：In order to help improve the efficiency of learning English, I make an appeal to all of the students in our class to make it a habit to do English reading every morning.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is an effective way to read aloud, which not only helps us feel the charm of English but also helps us cultivate a good sense of language.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Only in this way can we memorize what we have learned very well.（运用了部分倒装结构和what引导的宾语从句）
13．possible version
Notice
To encourage us to find the beauty around us, our school is going to hold a photographic exhibition whose theme is “Looking for the most beautiful person in Wuhan”.
The exhibition will take place in the library from 10:00 am to 5:00 pm on September 10. Anyone who is interested in photograph is welcome to take part in it, but each one is allowed to submit only one photo. Besides, the top five winners will get prizes.
Look forward to your participation.
The Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一则英文通知以鼓励大家踊跃参与学校计划开展的主题为“寻找最美武汉人”的摄影展。
【详解】1.词汇积累
发现：discover→find
主题：subject→theme
寻找：search for→look for
发生：happen→take place
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, the top five winners will get prizes.
拓展句：Besides, the top five winners will get prizes which are very beautiful.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To encourage us to find the beauty around us, our school is going to hold a photographic exhibition whose theme is “Looking for the most beautiful person in Wuhan”.(运用了非谓语动词不定式作目的状语以及whose引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Anyone who is interested in photograph is welcome to take part in it, but each one is allowed to submit only one photo. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
14．One possible version:
With the increasing pressure from the exams, more and more students in our school sacrifice the time for sports to prepare for exams, which is so important for our development. We only have one class a week, obviously not enough. Actually, most students are eager to take part in sports, but they are so occupied with their study.
In my view, important as it is for us to have a better performance in the exam, exercise is equally vital. Without a strong body we could achieve nothing in our life. I hope all students can reorganize the importance of healthy bodies and try to build up our bodies as well.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，某英语报刊正举办以“学习与锻炼”为主题的征文比赛。请你写一篇短文参加比赛，内容包括：1. 你校学生学习与锻炼的现状；2. 分析产生该现状的原因；3. 你自己的感想。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：important→significant
渴望的：eager→wishful
获得：achieve→gain
在我看来：In my view =Personally
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Without a strong body we could achieve nothing in our life.
拓展句：If we did not have a strong body we could achieve nothing in our life.
【点睛】[高分句型1] With the increasing pressure from the exams, more and more students in our school sacrifice the time for sports to prepare for exams, which is so important for our development. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In my view, important as it is for us to have a better performance in the exam, exercise is equally vital. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句)
15．参考范文：
Good morning, everyone.
As you know, with the development of the economy, people have to face various pressures. They don’t have enough time to take care of the aged people in their family, which has become a social problem.
To solve this problem, we will launch a domestic robot, which is designed to take care of the old. It can cook according to individual need. It can also accompany old people by having a chat, playing chess, doing exercise and so on. Moreover, it can deal with emergencies in time. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors for help. It would be a great help to you if you own such a robot.
Thank you.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以创新为主题写一篇发言稿，介绍一款家用机器人。
【详解】1.词汇积累
足够的：enough→ sufficient
年老的：old→aged
另外：moreover→besides
生病：fall ill→get sick
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It can cook according to individual need.
拓展句：It can cook meals at a fixed time which can be adjusted according to individual need.
【点睛】[高分句型1]They don’t have enough time to take care of the aged people in their family, which has become a social problem.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors for help. （if引导的条件状语从句）
16．Dear teachers and fellow students;
It’s my great honour to stand here and present a speech about the worrying situation of nearsightedness among Chinese students. Nowadays in China, huge numbers of students are near-sighted, college students included. Worse still, the tendency is still on the rise. So, it is high time we took immediate and proper measures right now.
Here, I do appeal to you all to stick to the practice of eye exercises at least twice a day. Besides, don’t read in an environment where it is too dim or too bright. As you know, too much screen time contributes a lot to poor eyesight, so you’d better stay away from digital devices as well. Last of all, please remember to give your eyes a short rest between classes by looking afar outside.
Take good care of the window of your heart, and you’re bound to enjoy a bright future.
That’s all! Thanks for all your attention!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在全校升旗仪式上做演讲，呼吁爱眼护眼。内容包括：问题的严重性；改进和预防措施等。
【详解】1.词汇积累
发表演讲：present a speech →give/deliver a speech
在增长：on the rise → increasing
立刻：right now →immediately
此外：Besides → What’s more
2.句式拓展
句式转换
原句：Take good care of the window of your heart, and you’re bound to enjoy a bright future.
拓展句：Taking good care of the window of your heart, you’re bound to enjoy a bright future.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, don’t read in an environment where it is too dim or too bright.（运用了where引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】As you know, too much screen time contributes a lot to poor eyesight, so you’d better stay away from digital devices as well.（运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句）
17．An English Editor for “Traditional Chinese Culture” Wanted
The “Traditional Chinese Culture” column, which is intended to help readers know more about traditional Chinese paper cuttings, Beijing Opera as well as folk music and so on, is looking for an English editor.
Some qualifications are needed for this position. First, we need one who is fond of and familiar with traditional Chinese culture. Besides, being an English editor requires you have a good command of English, especially written English. In addition, you will be preferred if you have editing experience.
If you think you are fit for it, please send your resume to www. schoolenglishnewspaper. com before June 10.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英语报“中国传统文化”专栏写一则招聘广告。内容包括：专栏简介；岗位要求；报名方式和截止时间。
【详解】1.词汇积累
需要：need→ require
此外：besides → what’s more
擅长：have a good command of→ be expert in
喜欢：be fond of→ enjoy
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, being an English editor requires you have a good command of English, especially written English.
拓展句：Besides, being an English editor requires you have a good command of English, especially written English, which is an essential ability for the position.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The “Traditional Chinese Culture” column, which is intended to help readers know more about traditional Chinese paper cuttings, Beijing Opera as well as folk music and so on, is looking for an English editor.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】 First, we need one who is fond of and familiar with traditional Chinese culture. （运用了who引导的定语从句）
18．My admirable teacher
We have a lot of admirable teachers while growing up. As for me, my English teacher is the person I admire most. My English teacher is a kind and outgoing lady who loves her career and her students very much. She has a wide range of knowledge and we have learned a lot from her lively lessons.
Whenever I encounter the problems in my study, she will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. It is my English teacher who taught me never to acknowledge defeat in any circumstances. This year she is awarded as the “most beautiful teacher” for her remarkable achievements on teaching. We all love and admire her deeply.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生用英文介绍一位你最敬佩的老师。
【详解】1.词汇积累
钦佩：admire→ respect/look up to
知识渊博的： a wide range of knowledge →knowledgeable
遇到：encounter→ meet
鼓舞，激励：encourage→ inspire
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：This year she is awarded as the “most beautiful teacher” for her remarkable achievements on teaching.
拓展句：This year she is awarded as the “most beautiful teacher” for what she has achieved remarkably on teaching.
【点睛】【高分句型1】My English teacher is a kind and outgoing lady who loves her career and her students very much.（运用了who引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Whenever I encounter the problems in my study, she will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.（运用了whenever引导的时间状语从句）
19．Dear Tom,
Delighted to learn that you have a keen interest in the first Science and Technology Festival held in our school last month, I am writing to share with you more relevant details about it.
Aimed at enriching us students’ campus life and promoting our awareness of innovation, the Festival included a variety of activities, the most popular of which was “Makers on Campus”, where participants could design their own products and illustrate their ideas. Additionally, an exhibition of the students’ original inventions, designs and literary works was also a highlight of this Festival. With the enthusiastic participation and support of all the students, the whole process turned out to be a great success. I was totally amazed at the creativity and team spirit showed by my schoolmates.
I do hope more activities will take place in my school to provide us with chances to practice our critical thinking and problem-solving abilities. What do you think of it? Expecting your early reply.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生李华给笔友Tom回邮件介绍其学校举办的首届校园科技节活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
各种各样的：a variety of→varieties of
和：and→as well as
证明是：turn out→prove
完全地：totally→completely
2. 句式拓展
简单句变强调句
原句：With the enthusiastic participation and support of all the students, the whole process turned out to be a great success.
强调句：It was with the enthusiastic participation and support of all the students that the whole process turned out to be a great success.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Aimed at enriching us students’ campus life and promoting our awareness of innovation, the Festival included a variety of activities, the most popular of which was “Makers on Campus”, where participants could design their own products and illustrate their ideas. (运用了过去分词短语作状语，定语从句)
【高分句型2】I was totally amazed at the creativity and team spirit showed by my schoolmates. (运用了过去分词短语作后置定语)
20．参考范文
This morning, some tourists from UK visited the porcelain exhibition in our city museum. As a volunteer guide of this section, I took them to experience the porcelain culture of China.
On arriving at the exhibition hall, the tourists were impressed by the delicate porcelain ware. I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of porcelain culture, including its profound history and its rich varieties. Afterwards, I showed the exquisite craftsmanship in a porcelain workshop. Amazed at every procedure, the foreign visitors took many pictures.
At the end of the tour, it suddenly hit me that traditional culture like porcelain culture was of great charm and huge value. I am so proud to spread our own culture to people all over the world.
【导语】这是一篇应用文写作。题目要求考生以市博物馆的志愿者英语讲解员李华的身份写一篇英文日记，记述你今天接待几位英国游客，带领他们参观瓷器展的全过程，内容包括参观过程和感想。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
精致的：exquisite→elegant
种类：variety→category
精美的：delicate→refined
惊讶：amazed→surprised
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
简单句：On arriving at the exhibition hall, the tourists were impressed by the delicate porcelain ware. I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of porcelain culture...
复合句：On arriving at the exhibition hall, I gave the tourists, who were impressed by the delicate porcelain ware, a vivid and informative introduction of porcelain culture...
【点睛】[高分句型1]Amazed at every procedure, the foreign visitors took many pictures.（使用了分词作状语）
[高分句型2]it suddenly hit me that traditional culture like porcelain culture was of great charm and huge value.（it作形式主语）