专题 06 话题分类+工作与职业、选择与梦想(人与自我)--2023年新高考读后续写指导之话题分类背诵
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专题 06 话题分类+工作与职业、选择与梦想
(人与自我)
目录:
1. 精选名校最新2022年12月-2023年1月名校联考、模拟试题
2. 读后续写话题分类背诵模板
3. 读后续写话题分类写作步骤
4. 读后续写话题分类写作热词
5. 读后续写话题分类高分佳句
1.(2022年湖北省部分学校高三联考)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Lungs nearly bursting, I struggled to lift my head out of the water. Inch by inch, my tired body reached for the end of the pool.
Earlier that week, I had turned in my first job application at a local pool. Overqualified, I was hired on the spot. However, the tasks were boring: helping confused visitors and measuring the height of children before they went down the slide, those sorts of things. I was competent for more.
So a swim test was required, establishing the mere fact that I was not completely helpless in a pool. Midway through, the manager administering the test remarked. “This looks really easy for you. Why aren’t you applying to become a guard? ”
“The thought hadn’t crossed my mind.”
“Well, lifeguarding demands more responsibility, strength and respect. Thus the position pays $2 more per hour. Your swimming skills are strong enough. All you need to do is complete a certification class. ”Inside I was unsure of myself, but his words inspired me — You never know what you are competent to do until you force yourself to do it. Soon I passed the swim test. All left was to practice and learn first aid, CPR (心肺复苏), and procedures for different land and water-based emergencies.
Work started soon. Days, weeks, and months went by without incident; emergencies were rare. The skills and training I had so carefully studied and attained seemed unnecessary.
Today appeared to be another uneventful (平静无事) day. However, shortly after the other guards signaled to the children to exit the pool, I noticed one boy was still in the middle while the others had climbed up.
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1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“Something must have gone wrong with him,” I thought to myself.
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Having the boy on the floor, I put my ear to his mouth and my fingers at his neck.
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【答案】
“Something must have gone wrong with him,” I thought to myself. As it turned out, with a closer look, I found the boy waving his hands and struggling in the water desperately. Without a second thought, I dived into the water, swimming towards the boy at full speed. By the time I reached him, he had nearly sunk to the bottom of the pool, his face pale and his head hanging down, which threw me into great concern and huge panic. I picked the boy up and headed to the poolside with all my strength, keeping his head above the water.
Having the boy on the floor, I put my ear to his mouth and my fingers at his neck. It came as a shock to me that he wasn’t breathing. To make matters worse, I could hardly feel his heartbeat. Every second counted! Without the slightest hesitation I did first aid to him, giving him mouth-to-mouth breathing and doing CPR as I had been trained before. After what seemed a century, I suddenly felt his body moved, a stream of water bursting out of his mouth, and then came the sound of the boy coughing intensely. Seeing the boy come back to life, those surrounding us burst into cheers. Realizing that all my efforts eventually paid off, I breathed a sigh of relief, a smile lighting up my face.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,主要讲述擅长游泳的作者在一家游泳池找了一份工作,但是每天只是给别人解决一些困惑或者给孩子量身高,他觉得很枯燥。接着他考了资格证做了救生员,但是每天也都是平安无事。
第一步:段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我想,‘他一定发生了什么事情了。’”可知,第一段可描写作者前去查看具体发生了什么事情。
②由第二段首句内容“把男孩放在地板上,我把耳朵凑到他的嘴边,并且把手指放在他的脖子处。”可知,第二段可描写作者把男孩从游泳池里拉出来之后的情况。
第二步:续写线索:
发现男孩溺水——跳进游泳池——拉出男孩——急救——男孩恢复意识——高兴
第三步:词汇激活:【行为类】
①到达:reached/come to
②苏醒:come back to life/ come back to oneself
【情感类】
①担忧:concern/worry
②震惊:shock/surprise
【点睛】
【高分句型1】By the time I reached him, he had nearly sunk to the bottom of the pool, his face pale and his head hanging down, which threw me into great concern and huge panic.(由which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】It came as a shock to me that he wasn’t breathing.(由that引导的主语从句)
【高分句型3】Without the slightest hesitation I did first aid to him, giving him mouth-to-mouth breathing and doing CPR as I had been trained before.(由as引导的方式状语从句)
【高分句型4】After what seemed a century, I suddenly felt his body moved, a stream of water bursting out of his mouth, and then came the sound of the boy coughing intensely.(由what引导的宾语从句和省略连词that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型5】Realizing that all my efforts eventually paid off, I breathed a sigh of relief, a smile lighting up my face.(由that引导的宾语从句)
2.(2022年甘肃天水·统考二模)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
I should have been born with my fingers permanently glued to a keyboard. Since I was five, I’ve known that I want to be a professional writer: a journalist, a novelist, a modernday Shakespeare, maybe. In my freshman year I tried to figure out what A Midsummer Night’s Dream and The Tragedy of Julius Caesar were about. Macbeth was much easier to understand in my sophomore year (大二年级).
However, I’m practically addicted to books, whether I’m reading or writing them. I can’t go a single day without writing something. I have made it a rule to pick up a pen and just let my thoughts out every day.
I can be inspired by anything: an expression, a song and a movie. Once I get inspired, it’s like the wheels turning faster and faster as I think out one possible story after another.
My family is so widespread that whenever I meet with a cousin or an aunt I only vaguely (模糊地) remember; I tell him or her I’m a writer because I know it will distinguish me from all the other kids in the family and make me memorable. I told my relatives about the stories I used to write as a child, the projects I’m working on now, and why I’m working so hard to make a breakthrough in the competitive world of publishing. One aunt hugged me and told me, “Just don’t forget about the rest of us when you become the next J. K. Rowling.”
Smiling, I replied, “Don’t worry, I won’t.” I am confident that I will become the next J. K. Rowling. I have the ambition, the means, and the talent. My English and history teachers don’t praise my writing and tell me I have an innate (与生俱来的) writing talent even though they know how passionate I am about writing, and how that passion slips through my fingertips to the paper.
Paragraph 1:
I don’t really know why I love writing so much.
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Paragraph 2:
Maybe I just want to leave my mark on the world since I can’t sing to create a great work of art.
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【答案】
Paragraph 1:
I don’t really know why I love writing so much. I just do. I always feel that there is something in my mind about putting a story down on paper for friends across the globe to read and understand, and about finding just the right words to describe what I can see so clearly in my head, which attracts me like a beautiful song. Writing makes me who I am. Through writing I have found true happiness. Through writing I have found the value and meaning of life.
Paragraph 2:
Maybe I just want to leave my mark on the world since I can’t sing to create a great work of art. Although I am a pretty good actor, acting doesn’t seem like the right path for me. So I’ve chosen writing to make a breakthrough in this world. I am a novelist, journalist and graduate of Columbia University. How nice it sounds! As a professional writer, I have more time and opportunities to create more characters, through which I can express what is going on in my mind. That’s just what I want to leave behind.
【导语】本文以作者的写作经历为线索展开。作者从小时候的梦想就是当作家,她喜欢读书和写作,并且每天坚持,最终取得成功,实现了自己的梦想。
第一步:段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我不知道我为什么那么喜欢写作。”可知,第一段可描写作者因为喜欢而坚持写作并享受其中的幸福。
②由第二段首句内容“也许我只是想在世界上留下我的印记,因为我不能唱歌创作伟大的艺术作品。”可知,第二段可描写作者为什么选择写作和取得的成就。
第二步:续写线索:
喜欢写作——坚持写作——享受写作的快乐——选择写作的原因——取得成功
第三步:词汇激活:
【行为类】
①写下:put...down/write...down/take...down
②理解:understand/comprehend
③描绘:describe/depict
【情绪类】
①快乐:happiness/pleasure
②美好的:nice/wonderful
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I always feel that there is something in my mind about putting a story down on paper for friends across the globe to read and understand, and about finding just the right words to describe what I can see so clearly in my head, which attracts me like a beautiful song. (由连接词that引导的宾语从句,what引导的宾语从句,which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Although I am a pretty good actor, acting doesn’t seem like the right path for me. (由连词although引导的让步状语从句)
3.(2022年全国·高三专题练习)
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Getting to watch surgery should be exciting for any medical student. But in my case, while two doctors were doing the operation, I was checking my phone every 20 seconds to see how much longer it would be until I could leave. I didn’t belong there; I was only pretending to be there. The truth was that, halfway through university, I knew I didn’t want to be a doctor. And I had to decide whether to keep lying to myself, or change my major.
Before university, I had no idea what I wanted to do with my life. Pd always wanted to study English but my parents didn’t approve, saying there was no money in it. So I figured I’d just pick a career that looked well-paid, satisfying, and would make my parents proud. “Doctor” is the first choice, so I decided to study medicine. I knew all the coursework wouldn’t be easy, but I didn’t expect to find it as hard as I did. I spent many late nights and weekends studying, but still didn’t get good grades. I just couldn’t keep the material in mind. By exam time, my grades were terrible and I felt like a fool. I thought maybe a medical internship (实习医生的工作) would help raise my spirits. Absurdly, my internship was where I realized how little I wanted to be a doctor.
Every day I’d just go into work and do exactly what I was told, go where I was told to go, and watch what I was told to watch. And then I’d go home. It was fun whenever I got to play with expensive microscopes or watch crazy surgery, but the rest of the time I struggled to get through the day. The other interns, however, practically worked so hard. They were so driven. I thought, “Wow, these interns really want to be doctors. I obviously don’t. “It was a sad realization that sadder, scarier question: If I didn’t want to be a doctor, what did I want to do?
注意:续写词数应为150左右;请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
It wasn’t an easy decision.
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Eventually, I changed my major to English writing and suddenly I found university enjoyable.
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【答案】
It wasn’t an easy decision. I had two choices—either keep lying to myself or do a different degree. Changing my major would make the past two years of university a waste of time and money. But I realized that though I’d hate myself for quitting, I’d hate myself more if I ended up being a terrible doctor. I was glad to move onto something new, but I had to deal with my parents’ constant disappointment and complaining about my future.
Eventually, I changed my major to English writing and suddenly I found university enjoyable. I was still studying late and through the weekend, but, this time, enjoying the pain. I’d spend hours perfecting a single paragraph until I was satisfied with it. Five hours felt like 20 seconds because I was having so much fun burying myself in writing until good words came out. I started looking for internships that would give me experience in professional writing. Fortunately, I made it as an editorial assistant at a newspaper.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者从一开始的学医学专业而感到没有兴趣,然后做出换专业的选择,并且在之后的新专业努力学习并投入很大的热情和兴趣,最终实现人生蜕变的故事。
第一步:段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“这不是一个容易的决定。”可知,第一段可描写作者面临着两难选择的痛苦。
②由第二段首句内容“最终,我把我的专业换成了英语写作,突然间我发现大学生活很愉快。”可知,第二段可描写作者终于找到了自己喜欢的专业,并且很享受其中的努力过程。
第二步:续写线索:
这不是一个容易的决定——两难选择的权衡——最后的决定——换专业后的心态——努力地学习新的专业——获得成功
第三步:词汇激活:
【行为类】
①寻找:look for /search for/seek
②.意识到:realize /be aware of
③.处理:deal with /solve/work out
【情绪类】
①.高兴的:glad /happy/joyful
②.失望:disappointment /despair
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Five hours felt like 20 seconds because I was having so much fun burying myself in writing until good words came out.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句。)
[高分句型2]. I started looking for internships that would give me experience in professional writing(运用了由关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句)
4.(2022年广东湛江·高三湛江一中联考)
阅读下面短文, 根据所给情节进行续写, 使之构成一个完整的故事。
Three months later was the Middle School Championship Baseball Game of the spring season! The winners would all get trophies (奖杯), Jonas was determined to bring home a trophy to put on his shelf for he had never won one before.
He insisted on practicing in the stadium with friends every day. Day in and day out, the gloves became worn-out. Jonas thought, “I want a pair of new baseball gloves for better practice!“
Jonas passed by a store and saw a pair of delicate gloves, which cost thirty-five dollars. But when Jonas asked for the new baseball gloves, his mother only sighed. “Your birthday isn’tuntil July, ” she said. “If you want the gloves sooner than that, you will have to buy it yourself. If you want something, earn it by yourself. ”
Jonas thought hard. He was too young to drive to work like Dad, and he couldn’t turn his bedroom into an office to work at home like Mom. He went to his favorite thinking spot to look at the bird feeder in his back yard.
As Jonas was thinking about getting a job, it began to snow. At first there were only a few flakes (雪花), but soon the ground turned white.
“I know!” cried Jonas. “I’ll shovel (铲) the sidewalks on snow days. If I’m fast, I can do a lot of houses and make a lot of money. ”
So Jonas put on his warmest sweater and fastened the button of his winter coat. He also added scarf, gloves and a hat. Then he went into the garage to grab a shovel.
Jonas started next door. He rang the bell and asked Mr. Travers if he would like his sidewalks shoveled. “Yes,” said Mr. Travers. “But you should wait until it stops snowing before you start or you will have to do it twice.”
“I’ll be back!” said Jonas. He went around the block to see who would like their walks shoveled after the storm. He had eight customers by the time he got back to his own house.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When it stopped snowing, Jonas grabbed his shovel and got to work.
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Tired but happy, Jonas looked at the forty dollars earned from his work.
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【答案】
When it stopped snowing, Jonas grabbed his shovel and got to work. Standing on Mr Traver’s sidewalks, initially, Jonas was sort of clumsy, but soon he became so expert that it took only 20 minutes to shovel the snow to the sides of the road. When Mr Travers handed Jonas a 5-dollar bill with satisfaction, his face cracked into a smile. Soaked with sweat, he even took off his winter clothes. Waving goodbye, Jonas headed for the second client’s, doing the work in the same order he talked to his neighbors. 3 hours flashed by before he knew it. With all the work finished, each neighbour gave him a thumb-up, as well as the reward, which added up to 40 dollars.
Tired but happy, Jonas looked at the forty dollars earned from his work. It was enough for the gloves. Hardly had Jonas taken the new baseball gloves in the store when he began to practice. His perfect performance won the opportunity to take part in the championship Baseball Game. Hard practice paid off, he and his friends won the first prize. When he took his trophy home and put it on his shelf, his mother spotted he had become a maturer teenager, who could cope with problems life held in store for him.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了想捧个奖杯放在架子上的乔纳斯,他的手套因为频频训练而磨损了,为了买一副新的棒球手套,乔纳斯乘着下雪天气,为8个邻居打扫人行道,用所获得报酬买到了手套,最终得奖杯的梦想也实现了。
第一步:段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“当雪停了,乔纳斯抓起他的铲子开始工作。”可知,第一段可描写作者为8户邻居清除人行道上的雪,并得到了报酬。
②由第二段首句内容“乔纳斯很累,但很高兴,他看着工作挣来的40美元。”可知,第二段可描写乔纳斯花钱买了手套,参加了比赛,最终获得奖杯,妈妈看见了他的成长。
第二步:续写线索:
乔纳斯出门扫雪——邻居满意给酬谢——买回手套去锻炼——获得胜利捧奖杯——乔纳斯成长了
第三步:词汇激活:
【行为类】
①.停止:stop / cease
②.汗流浃背:be soaked with sweat / be bathed with sweat
③.参加:take part in / participate in
【情绪类】
①.开心的:happy / joyful
②.疲倦的:tired / weary
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. With all the work finished, each neighbour gave him a thumb-up, as well as the reward, which added up to 40 dollars. (with结构,由which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]. Hardly had Jonas taken the new baseball gloves in the store when he began to practice.(倒装句)
5.(2022年全国·高三专题练习)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Having struggled with financial difficulties for six months and failing to find a way out, I had to close my technology writing business. Fortunately, I found a new job as a salesperson and soon got a client. At the time, I wondered if it was too good to be true.
By the second month, something didn’t seem right, and I developed a bad feeling about the client and the work. When the third month’s check didn’t arrive on time, I sent the client an e-mail to find out what was going on. But there was no reply. Then I sent another e-mail, and another. The check never arrived, and I never heard from the client again. With no hope in sight, I hit rock bottom. Panic replaced cautious optimism along with my last self-confidence.
I hid myself from friends and locked myself in my room. One night, the phone rang. The call was from Eric, a friend of mine from high school. When he was in high school, he told me many times about his parents’ divorce and his loss of confidence in the college entrance examination. During the difficult time, I gave him much comfort and encouragement. Later, he went to college and was always grateful for what I had done.
After the greetings, I told my problems and challenges, hoping my friend would say something comforting. What I didn’t expect was a string of sharp words. “What is wrong with you? You can do anything you want to do,” he said. “You are a writer, so start writing. Write for magazine.” “Write for magazine? Are you out of your mind? I don’t know the first thing about writing for magazine, let alone write things that anyone would want to read. And I have to know where I can send an application form-to what magazine and to what editor,” I shouted at him.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Surprisingly, I felt a little better after the shouting.
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On finishing the application form I sent it to the editor.
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【答案】
Surprisingly, I felt a little better after the shouting. After a short silence, Eric replied in a firm voice. “I always remember what you said when I was in trouble. You said ‘No one can get you out of trouble but yourself. ’ ” Hearing that, I was speechless and struck by the fact that it was easier to convince others than to convince myself. Inspired by Eric’s words, I started searching for magazines the next day and finally found one that accepted online contributions with various topics. Then I began to prepare my application form.
On finishing the application form I sent it to the editor. Luckily, two days later I received a positive response and an invitation to write. At first, I only wrote articles I was expert in. Gradually, I began trying new types. One day, much to my amazement, one of my articles appeared on the first page of the magazine! Since then, I have been on my way to becoming an excellent writer. That definitely should be credited to Eric. It was he who enlightened me and helped me regain confidence to face challenges in my life.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者由于经济困难结束了自己的技术写作业务,找到一份新的销售工作,很快找到第一个客户,但后来客户杳无音信,在作者对生活感到绝望时,高中时期的一个朋友Eric打电话来,高中时期作者在Eric困难时作者曾给过他很多鼓励,Eric建议作者开始为杂志写作,作者从没有为杂志写过文章,认为Eric一定是疯了。
第一步:段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“出乎意料的是,我在喊了一声之后感觉好多了。”可知,第一段可描写Eric鼓励作者,作者受到启发开始联系杂志社。
②由第二段首句内容“填完申请表后,我就把它寄给了编辑。”可知,第二段可描写作者收到杂志社的积极回复后开始写作并逐渐取得成功。
第二步:续写线索:
Eric鼓励——受到启发,开始行动——收到杂志邀请——逐渐成为优秀作家——自信面对挑战
第三步:词汇激活:
【行为类】
①回答:reply/answer
②鼓舞:inspire/encourage
③帮助某人做某事:help sb. do sth./assist sb. to do sth.
【情绪类】
①惊讶:amazement/astonishment
②自信:confidence/faith
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. I always remember what you said when I was in trouble. (由连接代词what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]. Hearing that, I was speechless and struck by the fact that it was easier to convince others than to convince myself. (由从属连词that引导同位语从句)
[高分句型3]. It was he who enlightened me and helped me regain confidence to face challenges in my life. (强调句型)
6.(2022年辽宁沈阳·高一沈阳市十中期末)
阅读下面材,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一个完整的故事,续写短文的词数为 150 左右。
Amy is good at making pies, which got her hired at the Good Times restaurant months ago. And she was often regarded as the best worker there. Recently, she became the supervisor at the restaurant. She was kind and friendly to all the other workers and the customers.
One morning, Amy was taking orders when she overheard a conversation. “What you did there was great, Mason! It was hard to carry the old lady safely out of the fire. For a moment, I thought you were gone, my friend,” one man said. To this, the other man replied, “Yeah, it was difficult, but that’s our job. And you were the hero today, Gordon. You carried that girl on your shoulder and her dog in your hand. It’s going to be on the front page tomorrow, I’m telling you.”
From their clothing and conversation, Amy knew they were firefighters. And she quickly realized that they had been talking about the previous night’s fire at the old motel on the other end of the road. Then the man named Gordon continued, “I don’t care about being in the papers. The little girl and her dog reminded me of my own daughter. She’s constantly asking for a dog, too.” Amy was moved by the courage and sincerity of the two men. She wanted to show her appreciation for their selfless service.
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“How about helping pay for their meal?” she wondered.
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Then she went to the cashier and secretly paid for their meal.
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【答案】
“How about helping pay for their meal?” she wondered. After taking the order, Amy sat down at a table, got out of a pen and a piece of paper and wrote on the paper, “You are my hero; you are the hero of the city. You are always thinking of others, often risking your life to help others. What I can do for you today is nothing compared to what you did last night. I want to express my appreciation to all of you for your heroic conduct.” Having finished writing the note, Amy got up from the table, glancing at the two firefighters with admiration.
Then she went to the cashier and secretly paid for their meal. She asked the cashier not to tell them who had paid for their meal but just give them the note. About half an hour later, the two firefighters finished their meal and went to the cashier to pay for their meal. But they were told that someone had already paid for them. The firefighters looked at the cashier in surprise. The cashier handed them the note. Looking at the note, the firefighters knew what had happened. “Please convey our thanks to this kind person,” said the firefighters. After saying this, they left the restaurant.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。艾米是一家餐厅的主管,一天她偶然听到两个消防队员的对话,知道他们就是在前一天晚上的大火中救人的英雄。于是艾米决定为他们买单,并给他们留字条来表达对他们的敬佩之情。消防队员知道后也请收银员转达他们的谢意。
第一步:段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“‘帮他们付饭钱怎么样?’她想。”可知,第一段可描写艾米想为消防队员买单并表达对消防队员的敬佩之情。
②由第二段首句内容“然后她走到收银台,偷偷地付了钱。”可知,第二段可描写消防队员去买单时被告知已经有人为他们买单了;通过艾米留的字条,消防队员知道了一切,并请收银员转达他们的谢意。
第二步:续写线索:
听到消防队员的对话——知道了他们的英勇行为——决定为他们买单——写字条表达敬佩之情——为他们买单——消防队员表达感谢
第三步:词汇激活:
【行为类】
①站起:get up/rise
②瞥一眼:glance/glimpse
③发生:happen/occur
【情绪类】
①感谢:appreciation/gratitude
②惊讶地:in surprise/surprisedly
【点睛】
[高分句型1]What I can do for you today is nothing compared to what you did last night.(运用了两个what从句,第一个作主语,第二个作宾语)
[高分句型2]Having finished writing the note, Amy got up from the table, glancing at the two firefighters with admiration.(having finished现在分词的完成时作时间状语;glancing现在分词作伴随状语)
[高分句型3]But they were told that someone had already paid for them. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
7.(2022年浙江绍兴高三期中)
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
In 1989,fresh out of high school, I had the difficult task of choosing a career path before college started in three months. In those days in Pakistan, there were limited options: becoming a doctor or an engineer or entering the financial world after getting a business degree. I wasn’t interested in engineering, so I was left with medicine or business. I couldn’t decide.
My uncle, an influential person in the family,suggested that I do a placement (实习工作) to experience it for a month in an international company followed by a month in a hospital. After that,I could make a decision. It seemed like a brilliant idea.
I was accepted for a month’s placement at a foreign bank in Karachi. I understood a little about how the world of finance functioned, made new friends, and generally enjoyed the mostly easygoing work surroundings.
The month passed rapidly, and soon I began working at a leading hospital in Karachi. The experience couldn’t have been more different. The hospital had an intense environment. The days started early (at 7:00 am compared to 9:00 am at the bank) and were filled with endless duties, and the night calls! This was crazy, working all day, through the night,and again the next day.
I began thinking about my two experiences. The bank had offered a more relaxing atmosphere, better working hours and less stress. The hospital was full of excitement and unpredictability, but the studying and training was difficult.It seemed that the business option was going to win.
Near the end of my month at the hospital, I was driving home after an especially busy night call.In front of me was a public bus, with college students sitting on the top. As the driver weaved through (traffic, I could see the boys shaking from side to side.
注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Suddenly, a boy fell off the back of the bus.
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The next day, when I went to hospital to see the boy, all his family members got up, with grateful smiles on their faces.
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【答案】
Suddenly,a boy fell off the back of the bus. He hit the road face down and rolled over. He then lay motionless in the middle of the road as the bus sped away. None of the cars behind the bus stopped. In fact,I felt the same urge to keep going, but the urge to stop and help was stronger. Knowing that he could die in a matter of minutes, I stopped my car and carefully examined his body. With the help of some passers-by, I lifted his unconscious body into the car and raced back to the hospital. After his family was contacted, and he was wheeled into emergency surgery, I drove home, exhausted.
The next day, when I went to hospital to see the boy,all his family members got up, with grateful smiles on their faces. The mother held my hands to her face and started weeping. “Son,you are an angel!”she repeated. What a feeling this was, to help save the life of another person! I spent the rest of the day in a state of excitement, the most thrilling mood I had ever experienced. Driving home that evening, I knew what I wanted to do for the rest of my life. Two months of placements could not match what 30 minutes’ helping an accident victim had done for me. We spend a lot of time wondering what path to take in our lives. This experience taught me that at times, these decisions are made for you and that whatever happens is always for the best.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者当时是如何做出自己的职业选择的。
第一步:段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“突然,一个男孩从公共汽车后面掉了下来。”以及第二段首句“第二天,当我去医院看男孩时,他所有的家人都起床了,脸上带着感激的微笑。”可知,第一段可描写作者是如何救了男孩
②由第二段首句内容“第二天,当我去医院看男孩时,他所有的家人都起床了,脸上带着感激的微笑。”可知,第二段可描写这件事给作者的职业选择带来的影响。
第二步:续写线索:
作者需要做出职业选择——在银行实习——在医院实习——救了小男孩——小男孩家人对作者的感激——做出选择
第三步:词汇激活:
【行为类】
①匆忙赶回:race back to/rush back to
②想知道:wonder/want to know
【情绪类】
①感激的:grateful/thankful
②兴奋:excitement/thrill
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Knowing that he could die in a matter of minutes, I stopped my car and carefully examined his body.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Driving home that evening, I knew what I wanted to do for the rest of my life.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
8.(2022年广东东莞统考期末)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成-篇完整的短文。
It was spring, and Steve wanted to get a new set (套装) of football, sports shoes, and a really cool backpack. There was only one problem. That great set was too expensive. Steve only saved $10, and that was not even close to what he would need to buy the set.“I could ask mom and dad to give my pocket money in advance,” he thought to himself, “but that would be a big advance!”
That night, Steve told his parents the problem. “Have you ever thought about doing something for the neighborhood to earn some extra money?” asked his dad. “No, it would take me too long to earn the money,” answered Steve, “I need the new set for the school football match in two weeks.”
“Well, if you earn part of the money, I’ll advance you the rest. Is that OK?” suggested his dad. Steve agreed with the offer, went back to his bedroom and thought about what he could do to earn some money.“Billy from next door takes care of Mrs. Smith’s garden, Kelly walks Mr. Frank’s dog, and Tony washes Mr. Lipton’s car. There is nothing that I can do to ear some money,” thought Steve.
The next day after school, Steve went past the store, Sports Time. He loved to lok in the window at all the football equipment and other goods on the shelves. Steve went in and looked at the new football set he wanted.
“Hi, Steve,” said Mrs. Thomas,“what can I do for you today?”
“I want to see if there is a sale on that football set.”
“I am afraid not,” said Mrs. Thomas, “it is sill S60.”
“I only have $10 saved, and my dad said if I could do something for the neighborhood, he would advance me the rest,” said Steve, and he told her about the school football match.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Seeing that Steve was eager for the set, Mrs. Thomas came up with an idea.
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With her permission, Steve nushed to the new football set excitedly.
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【答案】
Seeing that Steve was eager for the set, Mrs. Thomas came up with an idea. She bent over and winked at the boy, saying that he could help her out at the shop after school for the next two weeks and in exchange he could have the set for $10. At the thought that his dream would come true soon, he was overwhelmed with excitement. In the following two weeks, Steve rushed to the store after school, helping sort out the goods and offer valuable advice to customers, which satisfied Mrs. Thomas a lot. Finally the last day came! Mrs. Thomas announced as she had promised, “Boy, you have done an excellent job. Now go to get your payment.”
With her permission, Steve rushed to the new football set excitedly. Holding the set carefully with both hands, he couldn’t help dreaming about the coming football match. A broad smile spread across his face. To show his gratitude, Steve bowed to Mrs. Thomas, without whose help he couldn’t have afforded the precious set. Then he went back home happily and shared this amazing experience with his parents, who felt so proud and gave him a thumb-up. What Mrs. Thomas and his parents gave him was not only support and sports equipment, but a valuable lesson about independence.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了为了两周后学校的足球比赛需要一套新的足球装备的史蒂夫手头只有10美元,父亲答应,如果史蒂夫能靠自己赚一部分钱,他会预付给史蒂夫剩余的钱。“体育时间”商店的托马斯太太出了一个好主意,史蒂夫在接下来的两周放学后去商店帮她,作为交换,他最终花10美元得到这套价值60美元的装备,此次经历也使史蒂夫学到了关于独立的宝贵的一课。
第一步:段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“看到史蒂夫很想要那个布景,托马斯夫人想出了一个主意。”可知,托马斯夫人让史蒂夫在放学后来店里帮忙两周,作为交换,史蒂夫可以支付10美元得到这套价值60美元的装备。史蒂夫干劲十足,托马斯夫人很满意,兑现承诺。
②由第二段首句内容“得到她的允许,史蒂夫兴奋地冲到那套新的足球装备处。”可知,第二段可描写史蒂夫得到装备后的感激之情,并与父母分享这段经历,这次经历是一笔精神财富。
第二步:续写线索:
托马斯夫人出主意——史蒂夫到店里帮忙——史蒂夫得到装备,感谢托马斯夫人——史蒂夫回家分享经历——感悟
第三步:词汇激活:
【行为类】
①.冲到:rush to/dash to
②.分类:sort out/classify
③.回家:go back home/return home
【情绪类】
①.感谢:show his gratitude/show his appreciation
②.快乐地:happily/joyously
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. In the following two weeks, Steve rushed to the store after school, helping sort out the goods and offering valuable advice to customers, which satisfied Mrs.(运用了现在分词作状语,which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2].To show his gratitude, Steve bowed to Mrs. Thomas, without whose help he couldn’t have afforded the precious set. (动词不定式作目的状语,whose引导的非限制性定语从句,含蓄虚拟语气)
9.(2022年吉林松原联考阶段练习)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Appreciation of Hard Work
A young man applied for a managerial position in a big company. In the last interview, the director of the company found that the young man was excellent all the way, from the secondary school until the postgraduate research.
The director asked, “Did you obtain any scholarships in school?”
The youth answered, “None.”
The director asked, “Was it your father who paid for your school fees?”
The youth answered, “My father passed away when I was one year old. It was my mother who paid for my school fees.”
The director asked, “Where did your mother work?”
The youth answered, “My mother worked as a clothes cleaner.”
The director asked the youth to show his hands. The youth showed his smooth hands.
The director asked, “Have you ever helped your mother wash the clothes before?”
The youth answered, “Never, my mother always asked me to study and read more books. Besides, my mother can wash clothes faster than me.”
The director said, “I have a request. When you go back today, clean your mother’s hands and then see me tomorrow morning.”
When he went back, he happily asked his mother to let him clean her hands. His mother felt strange but happy. The youth cleaned his mother’s hands slowly. His tears fell as he did that. It was the first time he noticed that his mother’s hands were so wrinkled, and there were so many bruises in her hands. Some bruises were so painful that his mother shivered when they were cleaned with water. After finishing the cleaning of his mother’s hands, the youth quietly washed all the remaining clothes for his mother.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The next morning, the young man went to the director’s office.
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The director asked, “Please tell me your feelings.”
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【答案】
The next morning, the young man went to the director’s office. The director asked. “Can you tell me what you have done yesterday in your house?” The youth answered, “I cleaned my mother’s hands and also finished cleaning all the remaining clothes.”
The director asked, “Please tell me your feelings.” The young man said, “I know now that without my mother, there would not be the successful me today. By working together and helping my mother, I now realize how difficult and tough it is to get something done. Also, I have come to appreciate the importance and value of family relationship.” The director said. “This is what I am looking for to be my manager. I want a person who can appreciate the help of others and who knows the sufferings of others to get things done. You are hired.”
【导语】本文以应聘为线索展开,文章讲述了作者在面试时,经理提出让他回家为母亲洗手。当作者为母亲洗手时发现母亲的手上都是伤,意识到母亲的辛劳和家人的重要,作者非常感激母亲。经理很满意作者的做法和回答,最终雇佣了作者。
第一步:段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“第二天早上,年轻人去了经理的办公室。”可知,第一段可描写经理问作者昨天在家发生的事情及作者的回答。
②由第二段首句内容“经理问道:请告诉我你的感受。”可知,第二段可描写作者给母亲洗完手之后的感受,及面试的结果。
第二步:续写线索:
来到经理办公室——作者讲述昨天为母亲做的事——作者的感悟——经理满意——面试成功,被雇佣
第三步:词汇激活:
【行为类】
①清洗:clean/ wash
②意识到,理解:realize/ understand
③寻找:look for/ hunt for
【情绪类】
①感激:appreciate/ thank
②痛苦:suffering/ pain/ misery
【点睛】
[高分句型1] “Can you tell me what you have done yesterday in your house?” (运用what引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I want a person who can appreciate the help of others and who knows the sufferings of others to get things done. (运用了who引导定语从句)
10.(2022年浙江杭州高三模拟)
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was my first job, working as a temporary sales girl during the Christmas rush at Richardson’s, the finest jewelry store in our city.
The job was very important to me. Dad had passed away and Mother and I did not have enough to live on in those hard Depression years. I worked in the diamond department. My duties were to arrange the goods, keep them clean, and run errands (跑腿). It was interesting work that I enjoyed thoroughly.
As Christmas drew near, the days became more rushed, but also more exciting. One afternoon, Miss Allan, the head of the department, asked me to get her the diamond ring from the end showcase. I hurried back, with the ring in my hand when I noticed a man on the other side of the row of showcases. He was tall and in his early thirties. But it was the expression on his face that stopped me. He looked bitter, angry and confused. From his well-cut but worn-out suit, I could tell he was one of thousands trained for jobs they could no longer find. He gazed at the beautiful stones with the despair of a man whose right to earn them had been taken away. I had a sudden feeling of sympathy. But I had other things on my mind and soon forgot about him.
A few minutes later Miss Allan called for me again. This time for the clip (夹子) that went with the ring. The clip was at the very front of the window. I got it. But just as I was backing out, my sleeve caught on the corner of a tray (盘子) of diamonds. The tray started to fall, and six magnificent diamond rings rolled across the floor.
Down on my knees, I collected five rings with the greatest speed and put them in the tray. But I couldn’t find the sixth! I thought it must have slipped through the tiny opening between the showcase and the window. I ran around the counter and looked down. It wasn’t there. Just then, out of the corner of my eyes I saw the tall man moving quietly toward the door of the shop, a few yards away. At that moment I knew that he had the ring. He had been standing at the only spot to which it could have rolled. I reached him just as he got to the door.
注意: 1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;
2. 应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语.
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“Excuse me, please,” I said.
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“What do you want?” he repeated.
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【答案】
“Excuse me, please,” I said. He turned, and for a minute neither of us spoke. To drop a tray of rings was bad, but that would be forgiven. To lose a ring was unthinkable. “What do you want?” he asked. He seemed a bit nervous. What should I say? Disaster could come to me from what I was sure he’d done. Yet I felt he hadn’t come into the store planning to steal. Perhaps he had just wanted to get warm.
“What do you want?” he repeated. Suddenly I had the answer. Mother always told me people are generally kind. I didn’t think this man would want to hurt me. “This is my first job,” I said softly. “Jobs are hard to get now.” He searched my face and then smiled gently. “But I’m sure you’ll do very well in yours. May I wish you luck?” He put his hand out and clasped mine. “Good luck to you,” I whispered. He opened the door and disappeared into the crowd. Then I turned and put the sixth diamond in the tray.
【解析】本文以珠宝店的工作为线索展开,讲述了作者在第一份工作中发生的故事。因为家庭变故,作者十分重视这份工作。圣诞前夕,工作十分繁忙。有一天下午,作者按照主管的要求去末端展柜取钻石戒指。在取到戒指回来的路上,一个三十多岁的高个子男人引起了作者的注意,但是他没太在意。随后作者又去取夹子,但是不小心打翻了装钻石戒指的托盘,戒指少了一枚。这时他看到刚才他注意到的高个子男人走到门口要离开,行为很可疑作者就追了上去。
第一步:段落续写:
① 由第一段首句内容“我说‘抱歉’。”可知,第一段可描写作者想要问高个子男人是否拿了戒指,但是不知如何开口的复杂心理活动。
② 由第二段首句内容“他重复说‘你想干什么?’”可知,第二段可描写作者勇敢面对高个子男人并且礼貌相待,巧妙化解困难,拿回了戒指。
第二步:续写线索:
我发问——分析问题——高个子男人回答——我犹豫——高个子男人发问——我勇敢面对——巧妙化解——拿回戒指
第三步:词汇激活:
【行为类】
① 表示推测:would be/seem/be sure/feel/perhaps/think
② 说:say/ask/repeat/whisper
③ 想要做某事:plan to do/want to do
【情绪类】
① 坏的:bad/unthinkable
② 轻声地:softly/gently
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. To drop a tray of rings was bad, but that would be forgiven. (动词不定式短语作主语)
[高分句型2]. Disaster could come to me from what I was sure he’d done. (由关系代词what引导的宾语从句作from的宾语)
[高分句型3]. Mother always told me people are generally kind. (tell sb. that从句结构中,省略了引导词that)
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