专题07 近十年 （2021--2012）高考英语书面表达满分范文（七）-备战2023年高考英语满分作文万能模板

这是一份专题07 近十年 （2021--2012）高考英语书面表达满分范文（七）-备战2023年高考英语满分作文万能模板，共9页。
书面表达
(2017·北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：视频 vide
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解析】 本文属于看图说话类作文。首先要读懂图片隐含的信息，本文有四幅图，而且要求是按先后顺序，所以一定要注意顺序的问题；其次，根据图片隐含的信息把每幅图的主题找到，然后分别写出每幅图的主题句，也就是说把文章主体部分的大纲要列好，最后结合自己的看法，写出相应的总结和感受。写作的过程中一定要注意先后顺序，巧用连接词，巧妙衔接，合理安排。
1. In rder t leave sme impressive memries fr all f us befre graduatin, ur class made a special vide t express ur appreciatin t…
2. carried ut a discussin/varius ideas were put frward
3. sht sme wnderful vides in the schl/interviewed ur teachers…
4. Thse wh are talented in cmputer cntributed t the making f the vide.
5. edited the vide/added ur lve t…
6. The shw received a warm welcme amng ur fellw schlmates.
7. Memries f the past flded int ur minds
内容要点：
1. 讨论分工；2. 收集素材；3. 编辑制作；4. 放映视频
【参考范文】
One pssible versin：
Graduatin finally came. My classmates and I decided t d smething. After a heated discussin, we agreed n making a vide t recrd ur experiences at schl. Material cllecting tk us a whle week, during which we interviewed ur teachers and tk pictures f every aspect f schl life. The editing part after that was tugh. We debated ver what t put int the vide. Sme cmprmises were unavidable, but the vide turned ut perfect. Several days later, when the vide was played n the graduatin ceremny, it was well received. The students and teachers shared a great time. That surely gave us a great sense f achievement.
【2016年】
（2016·北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actins fr a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：地球日 Earth Day
【答案】
Actins fr a Greener Earth
A week befre Earth Day, psters were put up arund ur schl, calling upn us t jin in the actins fr a greener earth.
Our class came up with the idea t make better use f used materials. We brught t ur classrm wrn-ut clthes, pieces f cardbard and empty plastic bttles and turned thse int dlls, handbags, tissue bxes and small vases. That weekend, we went t a nearby neighbrhd and gave them away t the peple there. All were very happy with thse unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly peple. We did s well that we were invited t share ur idea and experience with all the students f ur schl.
We are very prud f urselves and believe we can d mre fr a better wrld.
【解析】话题比较常规，整体难度适中。“地球日”系列活动属于保护环境的题材内容，考生并不陌生。内容主要包括：公告栏了解活动、分工制作、变废为宝的宣传活动、主题讲座等。题目要求按照四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actins fr a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。词数不少于60词，参考词汇必须使用。使用一般过去时和第一人称进行写作。范文使用了非谓语动词calling upn us t jin in the actins和句型与宾语从句we can d mre fr a better wrld等，句式多样；还使用了固定词组call upn sb. t d sth., jin in, cme up with, make use f, , give away, be prud f等，使作文内容变得丰富。
（2016·江苏卷）
请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
In recent years, internet vting has becme increasingly ppular in China. Peple nt nly cast n-line vtes themselves, but als urge thers t vte fr cmpetitins like the “Mst Beautiful Teacher” and the “Cutest Baby”.
Li Jiang, a high schl student, is invited t vte in the “Best Plice Officer” cmpetitin, rganized by the lcal gvernment t let the public have a better understanding f plice fficers’ daily wrk. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stries. He is deeply mved by their glrius deeds. He is already thinking f becming a pliceman himself in the future.
Su Hua is invited by his uncle t vte fr his cusin in the “Future Singer” cmpetitin. He has already received three similar invitatins this week. His uncle tells him that if his cusin wins the cmpetitin, the family will win an verseas tur fr free. Su Hua likes his cusin very much, but he finds ther singers perfrm even better. T vte, r nt t vte? This is a questin that trubles him very much.
【写作内容】
1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要；
2. 用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用2~3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。
【写作要求】
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
【答案】
Pssible versin ne:
On-line vting becmes increasingly ppular, and many cmpetitins get peple invlved in it. It is beneficial t sme peple, while it puts thers int a dilemma ver whether t vte r nt.
In my pinin, n-line vting is an inseparable part f mdern life and shuld be welcmed, since it is n mre than a way t participate in public life. It makes n difference frm rdinary vting events, in which candidates g arund t seek supprts. In additin, the Internet makes surveying and vting easy and cnvenient, regardless f time and space. Furthermre, vting n the Internet makes instant feedback pssible.
T be hnest, vters smetimes feel annyed, nt because they hate vting, but because they are divided between emtin and fairness. Things will turn fr the better if we can wrk ut sme participatin rules fr peple t bey. Therefre, I hld a psitive attitude twards n-line vting.
(150 wrds)
Pssible versin tw:
Internet vting is quite ppular nwadays. Many peple are smewhat puzzled at the negative side f the vting, althugh sme are quite happy with it, and active in ding it.
In my pinin, Internet vting has begun t shw its negative impacts n peple and sciety. Firstly, peple may feel frced when asked t d things that they dn’t want t d. Secndly, vting f this kind des nt depend n the strng pints f the cmpetitrs, but rather n hw many scial-netwrking resurces they have. Thirdly, the vters r even the cmpetitrs in many cases are pssibly taken advantage f by the rganizers fr cmmercial purpses.
In shrt, Internet vting, t sme extent, is unfair, if nt immral, and cannt be trusted. Therefre, rules shuld be wrked ut and strictly bserved. Everyne in ur sciety shuld help thse in need, but it is mre imprtant t be sincere and earnest.
(150 wrds)
【解析】此类作文对考生的能力要求极高。首先考生要以30字概述短文内容。接下来就网络投票发表个人看法并提出理由和根据。文章要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：
1. 概述：网络投票越来越流行，几乎人人都参与了网络投票，在给人们带来好处的同时，有时候也让人进退两难不知道是否应该参加这样的投票。
2. 支持：网络投票和生活密切相关，我们应该积极参与。理由及依据：（1）它是一种社会生活的方式，网络投票方便容易，不受时间和地点的束缚，同时网络投票的反馈迅速可靠；（2）虽然有时候网络投票也会给我们带来困扰，但如果有更好的参与规则，网络投票会更加规范合理。
3. 反对：网络投票会给人带来负面影响：（1）人们会因为网络投票而产生被迫的感觉；（2）网络投票结果并不客观；（3）网络投票可能会被故意利用。建议考生在写作概述时，语言简练不拖沓。
（2016·浙江卷）
“Planning is gd ,but ding is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题用英语写一篇100~120词的短文。
要求如下：
1. 简述你对这句名言的理解；
2. 用一个具体事例加以说明；
3. 给出恰当的结尾。
注意：1. 文章的标题已给出（不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。
Planning Is Gd, but Ding Is Better
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【答案】One Pssible Versin
Planning Is Gd, but Ding Is Better
Planning is gd as it decides in detail hw we d what we want t d. Hwever, a plan can bear n fruit withut being actually carried ut.
My experience in the English speech cntest last Octber is a case in pint. A mnth befre the event, I spent hurs wrking ut a schedule utlining my gals and practical steps. After that, I set ut t read widely fr an inspiring tpic, wrte a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful prnunciatin with gd public speech skills. I finally came ut f the cntest as the first prize winner.
I knw hw I achieved my success. It came frm gd planning and better ding cmbined.
【解析】本文为一篇开放式作文。题目给出标题和提纲。结合题目可判断出主要是介绍将计划付诸实施的重要性。围绕这个主旨去写，不能跑题。提纲部分还要求三个方面：1. 简述你对这句名言的理解；2. 用一个具体事例加以说明；3. 给出恰当的结尾。这就确定了作文的结构框架。在主旨和结构确定下来后，还要注意文章应用第一人称、一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时发挥自己的想象，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将文章完整地表述出来。注意要主次分明、详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章自然连贯。最后要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【2015年】
(2015·安徽)
某英文杂志正在举办以“Fancy yurself as an interviewer”为主题的征文活动，请你以“A Famus Chinese I Wuld Like t Interview”为题，写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
1. 采访的对象；
2. 采访的原因；
3. 想提的问题。
注意：
1. 词数120左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4. 短文的标题已给出，不计人总词数。
A Famus Chinese I Wuld Like t Interview
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【参考答案】
A Famus Chinese I Wuld Like t Interview
The persn I wuld like t interview is Yang Liwei. I wuld really like t interview him because he is nt nly the first Chinese t g t space but als ne f the greatest astrnauts in the wrld. I have lng been interested in space explratin and I believe I culd learn a great deal frm him abut it.
If I culd interview him, I wuld ask him what made him an astrnaut and hw he was trained. I wuld als like t knw hw he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. Finally, I wuld like t ask a few questins abut his persnal life, which must be very interesting.
【解析】题目是一篇命题材料作文。作文的写作要点已经给出，需要考生根据提示进行写作，作文必须涵盖所有要点，还要注意语篇的连贯性。注意使用高级词汇和定语从句、倒装、强调等重点语法知识。词数在120左右，标题不计入总词数。注意行文的连贯性，不能出现与本人有关的信息。
【亮点说明】范文使用了一些重点句型：定语从句I wuld like t interview is Yang Liwei；原因状语从句because he is nt nly the first Chinese...；宾语从句①I culd learn a great deal frm him abut it，②what made him an astrnaut and hw he was trained；条件状语从句If I culd interview him；非限制性定语从句which must be very interesting等，显示了扎实的语法功底，也使作文的句式变得多样；范文还使用了一些固定搭配和固定短语：nt als...；ne f the...；the first t d sth.；be interested in；a great deal；等，使作文的内容变得更加丰富；范文注意使用nt als, and, als和finally等来衔接句子，使范文显得语意连贯、衔接紧凑。
【考点定位】命题类材料作文
【名师点睛】题目给出了一个征文的通知，要求考生根据提示以“A Famus Chinese I Wuld Like t Interview”为题，写一篇英语短文。题目属于命题作文，不过，题目给出了写作的框架，一定程度上降低了难度。需要注意的是，所写的作文必须涵盖所有的要点，如果能够使用高级词汇和重要句型，将会给作文增色不少。
(2015·湖南)
Sectin C (25 marks)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin accrding t the instructins given belw.
请以老师当众表扬你为话题，用下面所给的句子开头，续写一篇英语短文。
注意：
1. 将所有句子写在答题卡上；
2. 续写词数不少于120个；
3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
【答案】
One pssible versin：
As a student, I can tell yu that there is nthing better than being praised by my teacher befre my classmates.
Yesterday afternn, Li Ming and I went hme tgether after schl. Suddenly we saw an ld lady kncked dwn by a car. The driver ran away in his car. Li Ming and I ran ver t find that the ld lady’s head was bleeding. She had already lst cnsciusness. Immediately I tk ut my handkerchief and cvered the wund with it. Li Ming stpped a taxi quickly. Tgether we put the ld lady int the taxi and drve her t the nearest hspital.
The ld lady was saved and we als felt very pleased. What’s mre, I remembered the number f the car, and the traffic plice caught the driver later.
As a student, I can tell yu that there is nthing better than being praised by my teacher befre my classmates.