专题10 近十年 （2021--2012）高考英语书面表达满分范文（十）-备战2023年高考英语满分作文万能模板

这是一份专题10 近十年 （2021--2012）高考英语书面表达满分范文（十）-备战2023年高考英语满分作文万能模板，共13页。试卷主要包含了 描述漫画内容；， 分析漫画所揭示的问题；， 提出你的看法， 文中不能出现考生的具体信息等内容，欢迎下载使用。
书面表达
（2013·福建卷）
孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。
内容要求：
1. 描述漫画内容；
2. 分析漫画所揭示的问题；
3. 提出你的看法。
注意：
1. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；
3. 词数120左右；
4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。
参考词汇：铺路 pave the way
Frm the picture we can see a family f three walking n a lng red carpet. ___________________________
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【思路点拨】 本题是一篇附有文字提示的看图作文，首先要正确理解图画意思并合理想象。漫画讲述“以孩子为中心的三口之家，孩子是小皇帝，父母是臣仆”这一社会现象，然后再发表个人看法。如：这一现象怎样发人深省？我们该怎么做？考生成文时应注意：1. 结构上可采用三段成文，第一段简要描述图画意思；第二段阐述这种普遍现象并发表议论；第三段发表个人看法，评述这种不正常行为以及说明怎样改变这种现象。2. 时态：因为是普遍现象，故应以一般现在时为主，表达愿望时也可用将来时。3. 人称：描述图画意思用第三人称，评述用第一或第三人称。4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。
One pssible versin：
Frm the picture we can see a family f three walking n a lng red carpet. The sn, well dressed, waves prudly in the middle while the father behind bends frward t hld the jacket and the mther in frnt rlls ut the carpet, sweating.
It shws a cmmn phenmenn nwadays that children are the fcus f families, shuldering the hpe f their parents. Parents arrange everything fr their children and spare n effrt t pave the way fr their success. As a cnsequence, children becme s reliant n their parents that they have n independent thught r creative ideas.
Such a situatin is f great cncern. In my pinin, verprtectin and t much care are extremely bad fr children’s develpment. Instead f ding everything fr them, parents shuld encurage their children t vercme difficulties and inspire them t develp by themselves. Only in this way can they grw up t be independent and becme truly successful.
（2013·湖南卷)
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin accrding t the instructins given belw.
请以下列词语为关键词写一篇英语短文。
eq \x(match winner lser result)
内容：
1. 自己或他人的一次经历；
2. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 必须使用所给4个关键词；
2. 词数不少于120个；
3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
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【思路点拨】 虽然英文提示只提到四个词，但是所给信息量却非常大，它的主要意思是一次比赛的结果是有赢有输，并就此发表自己的看法。这就决定了这篇文章的体裁是夹叙夹议。因此我们首先应该讲述比赛的经过和结果，最后再进行议论。
One pssible versin：
Last week, a ftball match was held between ur Class One and Class Tw.
The players frm bth sides are all excellent ftball players, s the match went n fiercely at first. At last the result was: the winner was Class Tw, and we were the lser.
We didn’t win the match, but we didn’t lse heart. On the ne hand, we think that friendship cmes first, and match cmes secnd. On the ther hand, since we all tried ur best, we had n regret. In ur life we may meet many failures. As lng as we try ur best, there’s n need t feel regret fr failure. What’s mre, we shuld analyze the reasns fr failure t get success fr the next time.
In a wrd, success is imprtant, s is failure, because it’s the mther f success.
【范文点评】 本文语言规范、条理清楚、脉络清晰。过渡性词汇at first, at last, n the ne hand, n the ther hand, in a wrd等的贴切使用使文章意义更连贯、逻辑更严密。总体上讲不失为一篇优秀的习作。
【2012年】
(2012·陕西卷) 假定你是李华。下面的图画描述了教师节那天你们班组织的一次活动，请根据写作要点并参考图画内容，为校刊“英语角”版面写一篇短文。
写作要点：
1．活动的策划；
2．教室的布置；
3．活动的内容；
4．你的感想。
注意：
1．短文词数不少于100；
2．开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；
3．可根据情况增减细节，详略得当；
4．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Ms. Li, ur English teacher, must have fund it strange n Teachers’ Day: she did nt receive a single greeting card frm us students. She wuld have never thught a cmplete surprise was waiting fr her. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【思路点拨】 本题是一篇材料作文，也是看图作文，材料和图片比较简单，考生应不难理解，但文章首句已经给出，要求考生续写，这增加了本题的难度和区分度。考生重点要先仔细审题，审题主要包括以下几个方面：(1) 主体时态；(2) 主体人称；(3) 内容要点。尤其是对于内容要点的把握要准确到位。再者考生需注意尽可能使句子表达形式多样化，尽量使用一些较复杂的句式结构和较高级的词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。
One pssible versin：
Ms. Li, ur English teacher, must have fund it strange n Teachers’ Day: she did nt receive a single greeting card frm us students. She wuld have never thught a cmplete surprise was waiting fr her. As Teachers’ Day was appraching, ur class decided t hld a party t celebrate the imprtant day fr a change this year. On the afternn f September 10, sme f us decrated ur classrm with paper flwers and ballns, and thers went t buy cakes, drinks and fruits. The blackbard was decrated with beautiful wrds, which read “Happy Teachers’ Day!”
Entering the classrm, Ms. Li was surprised t find we were standing in line, clapping hands and saying ludly “Happy Teachers’ Day!” Wang Hua, ur mnitr, presented her with the prepared flwers. Sme f the girls sang sngs fr Ms. Li, and three bys shwed their kung fu talent. Befre we left, we enjyed a new English sng by Ms. Li.
Ms. Li spent a wnderful time with us, but we knw that we cannt thank her enugh fr all her hard wrk and guidance.
（2012·江西卷）
某英文报社举办以“I Like Reading”为主题的征文活动，你打算投稿。请根据以下要点写一篇短文：
1．你为什么喜欢读书；
2．你喜欢读哪一类的书（例如：历史、科学、文学等）？请给出至少两个理由。
注意：词数120左右。
【思路点拨】 今年的书面表达仍然属于半开放型作文试题，话题为学生所熟悉，要求考生以“I like Reading”为题目写一篇120词左右的议论文。这是一个中学生非常熟悉的话题，可以肯定这篇作文一定能让考生有话可说。写作前要注意审题，由作文的要求可知，此篇文章首先应该抓住两个要点来展开写作，然后确定时态，由本文的体裁及内容可判断，本文应该用一般现在时。同时注意使用各种句式以及衔接词，尽量使文章语言丰富，表达流畅。
One pssible versin：
I Like Reading
Reading is my favrite hbby. I can never stp the lve fr reading because bks are like wise teachers as well as gd friends in my life. As we knw, bks are the surce f knwledge. I benefit a great deal frm reading.
There are a variety f bks fr us t chse, like histry bks, science bks, literary bks and s n. But what interest me mst are literary bks, especially thse by famus writers. Fr ne thing, they help t imprve my writing skills and braden my hrizns. Fr anther, they can enrich my life and prvide me with great fun. Isn’t it a pleasure t have great calm in mind while yu are reading?
（2012·浙江卷)
你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动。该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句(qute)并相互交流。以下是某同学摘录的句子：“Yur future depends n many things, but mstly n yu”。请按下列要求用英语写一篇100~120个词的短文：
1. 针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法；
2. 举例说明理由。
注意：短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）。
In the English Reading Week, ne f my classmates recmmended a qute t us, which ges like this: “Yur future depends n many things, but mstly n yu.” __________________________________________________
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思路点拨： 从文章体裁分析，这是较典型的议论文写作，主要让考生就名言“Yur future depends n many things, but mstly n yu.”展开议论，发表自己对该名言的看法。同时结合要点提示看，文章属于半开放式的写作，所以考生要补充一定的自我看法、评述和建议。文章可以从三方面入手，第一部分讲述英语读书周活动的内容（部分已经给出）；第二部分重点讲述考生自己对该名言的看法和评述，如用I can’t agree mre with the view来表示非常赞同；第三部分则要用一定的事例来进一步阐述，并说明理由，如以名人Lincln为例。在写作过程中，要注意好词好句的运用，词汇丰富，如可以使用such as, pprtunity, attitude, determinatin, in ther wrds, fr example, limited, be regarded as, inspiring figures, therefre, in ne’s hands等重要词汇。句式要多样。如可以用名词性从句It is true that…；状语从句等。
One pssible versin：
In the English Reading Week, ne f my classmates recmmended a qute t us, which ges like this: “Yur future depends n many things, but mstly n yu.” I can’t agree mre with this view. It’s true that ur future is determined by many things, such as pprtunities and help frm thers, but ur wn attitude, determinatin, and hard wrk play a mre imprtant rle. In ther wrds, we are the master f ur wn future.
Take Abraham Lincln fr example. He was brn in a pr family, and nly received limited educatin in his childhd. Yet thrugh his painstaking effrts, he changed nt nly his wn fate but als the histry f America. Even t this day, Lincln is regarded as ne f the mst inspiring figures in the wrld. Therefre, I firmly believe that ur future is in ur wn hands.
(2012·江苏卷)
生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执，导致关系紧张。请你结合此事，并根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。
注意：
1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Cnflicts with thers are cmmn in everyday life. _______________________________________________
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【思路点拨】 这是一篇表格类作文，内含三个要点：简要描述事情经过；分析发生冲突的原因；谈谈避免冲突的做法，文章要紧紧围绕这三个要点展开。各个要点的表达要清晰，第一个要点只要简要描述；第二、三个要点考生可以自己做合理的联想，理由要有新意，内容要符合逻辑。可适当发挥，增加细节。三个要点层次要分明，衔接要自然。最后注意一些衔接词和特殊句式的运用。
One pssible versin：
Cnflicts with thers are cmmn in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternn, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped int each ther, trying t catch the ball. Then they started shuting and yelling, and it turned int a hrrible quarrel.
T be hnest, it was Su’ s fault but Li was als t blame — they were nt calm enugh and bth said sme really mean things. They cared t much abut winning and lsing. As a matter f fact，blcking, pushing and bumping are just part f a tugh game.
T avid such cnflicts, we shuld be kind t ne anther, which is essential t enjying a harmnius life. It is als a virtue t frgive and frget, especially in such a cmpetitive and stressful sciety. Instead f blaming each ther, we shuld cmmunicate mre and put urselves in thers’ place.
Dn’ t be self­centered and try t be cnsiderate. We must learn t handle cnflicts calmly and wisely.
(2012·湖南卷)
生活中，你自己或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历，其间有烦恼、有惊喜、有感慨……请就此写一篇英语短文。
主要内容包括：1) 丢失的物品；2) 物品失而复得的经过；3) 你的感想。
注意：
1. 词数不少于120个；
2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
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思路点拨：本文是一篇命题作文。要求同学们根据所提供的材料，写出一篇不少于120词的短文。短文内容包括：丢失的物品；物品失而复得的经过；你的感想。可见文章的中心和重点要放在“经过”的描写之中，但是也要描写自己的感受，写出作者自己的烦恼、惊喜、感慨；尤其要包含失而复得的复杂过程，是一篇夹叙夹议的作文。
One pssible versin：
Oh, my Gd! Where is my iPhne? I made a call just nw n the bus. Suddenly I remembered I’ve put it n the seat next t me. It’s my birthday present frm my father. He wuld be sad if he knew it.
I g t schl as usual this mrning, trying t stay calm. The first tw classes ended quickly because I was absent­minded. During the break, my math teacher asked me t visit him. I am very uneasy because I didn’t knw what I had dne wrng. Seeing me standing there, my teacher shwed me my iPhne. Overjyed, I grasped it back quickly. It turned ut that the driver f the bus that I ften take saw the picture f me in my iPhne and knew that I was a student f ××× schl.
I am very mved that the driver tk s much truble t send it t my schl. The event will always remind me t be kind and helpful.
(2012·湖北卷)
请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。
Yu cannt chse what yu are given, but yu can chse hw yu make use f it.
注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
④词数为120左右。
【思路点拨】 本篇作文属于夹叙夹议的半开放式作文，要求考生结合生活中的事例来诠释“我们不能选择我们被给予的东西，但我们能选择如何利用好给予我们的东西”。考生在写作过程中一定要结合生活中的事例（事例的篇幅应该占大部分）进行总结和提炼，起到点睛作用。注意生活事例列举部分应该用一般过去时，而最后的总结部分应该用一般现在时。以2～3段为宜。写作过程中应适当注意素材及词语的选择，注意对生活感知能力的挖掘。
One pssible versin：
Three years ag I failed an imprtant exam in my life and became a student in an rdinary schl. Disappinted as I felt at the shabby campus and the prly­equipped classrm, I fund the teachers patient and cnsiderate. Besides, I enjyed the friendly atmsphere in class. I decided t make the best f it. I wrked hard and gt alng well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. Sn, I became ne f the tp students in my class, which greatly increased my cnfidence and gt me mtivated.
My experience tells me that it is nt what yu are given but hw yu make use f it that determines wh yu are.
(2012·福建卷)
假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者，以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻，请根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。内容要求：
1．描述漫画内容；2．发表个人感想。
注意：
1．短文标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；
3．词数120左右；
4．文中不能出现考生的具体信息。
参考词汇：告示牌 sign
Mind Yur Behavir in Public Places
Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. ______________________________
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【思路点拨】 这是一篇看图作文，属于先叙后议的体裁，要点包括：
1. 描述漫画内容；2. 发表个人感想。
考生在描述图片内容时，要注意图中所给的文字信息，先描写美景，再描写画中人的不文明行为，让美与丑形成鲜明对比；发表个人感想时可适当发挥，但内容要符合逻辑，层次要分明，衔接要自然。
Mind Yur Behavir in Public Places
Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. The park was full f freshness and beauty f spring, with the sun shining and birds singing. When I was enjying the fantastic scenery arund, smething unpleasant caught my eye. A yung cuple in a bat were eating, talking and laughing ludly as if they were the nly peple in the wrld. What’s wrse, they spat and even threw rubbish int the lake, ttally ignring the nticeable sign “N Littering” nearby. What a shame!
Such behavir left me deep in thught. If all visitrs t the Fairy Lake Park d as the cuple did, the lake will be severely plluted and sn turned int a huge dustbin. I think all f us shuld mind ur behavir in public places. Only in this way can we live in mre cmfrtable and beautiful surrundings.
简要描述事情的经过
打篮球、碰撞、争执，等等
分析发生冲突的原因
1. 遇事不够冷静
2. ……
谈谈避免冲突的做法
（请考生根据自己的经历或感想，提出至少两种做法）