上海中考英语话题作文专项训练

这是一份上海中考英语话题作文专项训练，共15页。

注意：1. 文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
3. 请选择一条填在横线上作为标题。
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2．Write a passage f at least 60 wrds n the tpic “We can d smething fr Shanghai”.（以“我们为上海出份力”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
因新冠疫情，目前上海很多小区处于封闭状态，全国各地的医护人员纷纷赶来帮助上海抗疫。同学们只能居家线上学习，同学们的生活怎么样？作为上海市民，你与你的家人能为上海做些什么呢？
以下短语供选用：
the COVID-19 epidemic 新冠疫情
nucleic acid testing 核酸检测
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3．The Earth Day is cming n April 22nd. What d yu think f the envirnment n ur Earth? Please write at least 60 wrds n the tpic “Hw t prtect ur Mther Earth”.（以“如何保护我们的地球母亲”为题，根据英文提示写一篇不少于60个单词的短文）
Suggested questins:
1. What d yu think f the envirnment n ur Earth?
2. What can yu d t prtect ur Mther Earth?
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4．以“Let’s live a healthy life”为题写一写我们怎样培养健康的生活方式，内容必须包括饮食和锻炼两个方面，字数40-50字。
It’s imprtant fr us t keep healthy. We shuld/shuldn’t __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
5．Write at least 60 wrds n the tpic “Ways t imprve my nline learning”
（以“提高我在线学习效率的方法”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）.
（注意： 抄袭试卷中内容不得分。 文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息，否
则不予评分。）
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6．Write a passage f at least 60 wrds abut “Electricity in ur daily life”.（以“电和我们的日常生活”为题写一篇不少于 60 词的短文）
Use the fllwing pints as a reference.（以下内容仅供参考）
1. What rles des electricity play in ur daily life?
2. What shuld we d t use electricity prperly?
Electricity in ur daily life
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7．Write at least 60 wrds abut the tpic “A busy Day at Schl”.（以”学校里忙碌的一天”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
Use the fllwing pints as a guide.（短文须包含下列要点）
1. What d yu d at schl every day?
2. Why d yu think it is a busy day?
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8．Write at least 60 wrds abut the tpic “His/Her/Their ________ Warmed My Heart.”(以“他/她/他们的 ________ 温暖了我”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个字的短文，标点符号不占格)
困难时期，志愿者们的帮助；孤独时，朋友的陪伴；沮丧时，师长的鼓励……
我们总是被很多善意围绕着, 让我们感到温暖。请先补全题目，然后结合自己的经历，谈谈你的感悟。
（注意：短文中不得出现姓名、班级等个人信息，否则不予评分。）
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9．Write at least 60 wrds n the tpic “My 2021”. (以“我的 2021 年”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) (注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。)
回忆过去的一年，在你身边一定发生了很多故事。请你将印象最深的一个故事记录下来， 并谈谈你的感悟。
My 2021
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10．Write at least 60 wrds abut the tpic “I am very active in ________ classes”(请以“我在________课上十分活跃”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
在你的日常学习中，你总会对某一门学科情有独钟，在它的课堂上参与学习活动尤其活跃。请你明确一门学科，并填写在空格内；陈述你活跃的理由（要求所列原因不少于两个），简单介绍你的收获。
（注意：不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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参考答案：
1．例文
Be hnest
As we knw, hnesty is very imprtant. It is ne f peple’s gd qualities. Peple need hnesty and I hpe everyne is hnest and trusting. Last term, my best friend wanted t cpy my hmewrk because he played cmputer games until midnight and had n time t d his hmewrk. But I thught it was against hnesty, s I tld him nt t cpy my hmewrk and I wuld help him next time.
Hnesty is quite an imprtant quality t a persn. S I think as a mdel student, he must be hnest.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：本文首先要选择其中一条标准，并通过举例说明，可适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表示诚实是很重要的，并讲述为什么诚实很重要；
第二步，通过举例说明诚实的重要性；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①ne f……之一
②play cmputer games玩电脑游戏
[高分句型]
①Peple need hnesty and I hpe everyne is hnest and trusting.(and连接的并列句)
②Last term, my best friend wanted t cpy my hmewrk because he played cmputer games until midnight and had n time t d his hmewrk.(because引导原因状语从句)
2．原文
We can d smething fr Shanghai
What can we and ur families d fr Shanghai during the epidemic? Here are a few suggestins.
First, the best way is t avid being expsed t this virus. Secnd, we shuld wash ur hands ften and avid tuching ur eyes, nses and muths with unwashed hands. What’s mre, we must wear a mask when we have t g ut in public. Last but nt the least, we shuld keep a healthy lifestyle. Fr example, we shuld have a healthy eating habit.
All in all, I hpe everyne can stay away frm the virus and keep healthy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：总体介绍上海疫情期间，引出本文主题；
第二步：具体讲疫情期间，我们和家长应该怎么做；
第三步：最后概括疫情期间，人人有责，呼吁更多人关注疫情，关注健康。
[亮点词汇]
①suggestins建议
②avid ding sth.避免做某事
③mask口罩
④healthy lifestyle健康的生活方式
[高分句型]
①First, the best way is t avid being expsed t this virus.（动词不定式作表语）
②I hpe everyne can stay away frm the virus and keep healthy.（省略that引导的宾语从句）
3．例文
Hw t prtect ur Mther Earth
In the last few years, we have been faced with serius envirnmental prblems, such as glbal warming, air pllutin and energy shrtage. I think it is time fr us t take actin t prtect ur Mther Earth.
First f all, we shuld frm the habit f saving fd frm nw n. Besides, we’d better travel by bus r by bike t prtect the envirnment. What’s mre, it is a gd idea t recycle waste. It can help us make better use f the limited resurce.
We nly have ne Earth. Let’t d smething helpful befre it is t late!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中你能做什么来保护我们的地球，注意要点要齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题。介绍我们的地球面临着严重的环境问题；
第二步，具体阐述我们能做什么来保护我们的地球；
第三步，书写结语。呼吁大家现在就行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①be faced with面临，面对
②such as比如
③first f all首先
④frm nw n从现在起
⑤what’s mre除此之外还
⑥make use f利用
[高分句型]
①I think it is time fr us t take actin t prtect ur Mther Earth.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Let’t d smething helpful befre it is t late!（祈使句；befre引导的时间状语从句）
4．例文：
It’s imprtant fr us t keep healthy. We shuld have a balanced diet. Eating mre vegetables and refusing junk fd are imprtant fr ur health. Meanwhile, we shuld drink mre water instead f cla. Besides, we shuld d sme sprts every week, such as running r playing basketball. But we shuldn’t d exercise t much. Let’s build a strnger bdy t live a healthy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文，标题和开头已经给出；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”
③ 提示：写作要点没有明确给出，考生需要围绕“饮食和锻炼”两个方面来展开描写，注意结合主题。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，先从饮食展开，表明要如何饮食才能有健康的生活；
第二步，围绕运动来展开，注意表达逻辑要正确；
第三步，呼吁要过健康的生活。
[亮点词汇]
① a balanced diet均衡的饮食
② instead f而不是
③ d sme sprts做运动
④ t much太多
[高分句型]
① Eating mre vegetables and refusing junk fd are imprtant fr ur health.（动名词作主语）
② Let’s build a strnger bdy t live a healthy life.（祈使句表示建议）
5．例文
Ways t imprve my nline learning
Because f the crnavirus, almst all f the students tk nline classes during the winter vacatin. But the learning effects vary frm ne the anther. Therefre, we shuld find ways t imprve nline learning. And I have sme pieces f advice abut it.
First f all, we need a peaceful envirnment. Online learning takes strng self-discipline. Fr example, my mm likes t ffer me snacks, which smetimes interrupts me. I have asked her t stp ding s. A quiet and peaceful rm can help us stay fcused. What’s mre, we shuld catch every chance t cmmunicate with ur teachers nline. Different frm schl learning, we can’t easily find ur teachers t ask questins, s we have t slve all ur prblems during the classes. By ding this, we can have n cnfusin after class.
I think these suggestins can help yu.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，因为疫情学生们在寒假上网课，以此引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍如何提高网课学习的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①because f因为
②first f all首先
③what’s mre并且
④cmmunicate with沟通
[高分句型]
①By ding this, we can have n cnfusin after class（动名词作宾语）
②I think these suggestins can help yu（省略that的宾语从句）
6．范文
Electricity in ur daily life
Electricity is a majr kind f pwer we use a lt in ur daily life. At hme we use it fr the lights, TVs, air cnditining and s n. And in factries, electricity makes the large machines wrk s that there are s many different srts f prducts in the market. Therefre, electricity gives us a mre clrful life and helps the sciety develp. If there is n electricity, we can’t watch TV, play cmputer games r use mbile phnes. S, we shuld save electricity. We shuld turn ff the lights when we leave the rm.
In a wrd, everyne shuld play a part in saving electricity.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生应注意按照所给问题的提示作答，不要遗漏要点；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明电力与人类的关系，并具体阐述电力在生活中的作用；
第二步，书写结语，提醒大家节约用电。
[亮点词汇]
①a kind f一种
②turn ff关掉，关闭
③play a part in在……中起作用
[高分句型]
①Electricity is a majr kind f pwer we use a lt in ur daily life.（省略引导词的定语从句）
②If there is n electricity, we can’t watch TV, play cmputer games r use mbile phnes.（if引导条件状语从句）
7．例文
I am a middle schl student. I am very busy every day. Let me tell yu abut my busy day at schl.
I ften g t schl at 6:30, and get t schl at 6:45. We ften begin ur classes at 7:00. We have fur classes in the mrning and tw in the afternn. After class we ften have sprts n the playgrund. Smetimes, I d sme cleaning at 5:00 in the classrm in the afternn. I ften g hme at 5:55 after schl.
After supper, I must g t schl. At schl, I have t finish s much hmewrk that I get hme at 8:30 in the evening. I am very tired, but I must g ver my lessns. It is really a busy day fr me because I put my heart and sul int study.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中你认为这是忙碌的一天的原因，注意要点要齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题。表明自己每天都很忙碌；
第二步，具体介绍自己白天做的事情；
第三步，介绍自己晚饭后要做的事情，并阐明这是忙碌的一天的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①have sprts进行体育锻炼
②d cleaning做清洁，打扫卫生
③太……以致于……
④g ver复习
[高分句型]
①At schl, I have t finish s much hmewrk that I get hme at 8:30 in the evening.（that引导的结果状语从句）
②It is really a busy day fr me because I put my heart and sul int study.（because引导的原因状语从句）
8．例文：
Her Actins Warmed My Heart
Tday, I want t say thanks t my best friend Tina.
She is a lvely girl with big eyes. She’s always friendly t everyne. Als, she enjys reading in her free time. One day, I cried sadly because I fund it difficult t learn English well. When Tina saw that, she started t help me with my English after class. With her help, I am gd at English nw.
Thank yu, my dear friend. Her actins warmed my heart.
【详解】[总体分析]
①本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括基本信息、具体的事例和对自己的影响，注意不得出现个人真实信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍温暖自己的这个人是谁；
第二步，具体介绍这个人的基本信息以及温暖自己的事情；
第三步，书写结语，表达对朋友的感谢，呼应标题。
[亮点词汇]
①say thanks t sb向某人说谢谢
②be friendly t sb对某人友好
③help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①One day, I cried sadly because I fund it difficult t learn English well.(find it +adj+t d结构)
②When Tina saw that, she started t help me with my English after class.(when引导时间状语从句)
9．例文：
My 2021
Hw time flies! Anther year has passed. My 2021 was similar t every year passed, but f curse, there were sme things which impressed me, t. Here is ne f them.
One day, my head teacher tld us that ur class was ging t hld a fun game and hped that smene wuld rganize it instead f herself. All students were quiet and lked at each ther. A minute later, I put up my hand and said I wuld like t have a try. My teacher smiled at me and agreed. Then I began t prepare fr the fun game. I lked up infrmatin abut it n the Internet. I asked my classmates fr help. I discussed abut it with my parents and my teacher. All in all, at last the fun game was successful.
By this thing, I learned what I culd nt learn frm bks. I learned nt nly hw t rganize a fun game but als hw t rganize ther activities. I understd that I shuld ask fr help when I culd nt deal with smething. I am prud f my brave chice.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“并谈谈你的感悟”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山说明写作目的——记述2021年印象最深刻的事；
第二步，具体阐述事件的过程；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be similar t...与……相似
②instead f而不是
③put up举起
④ask fr help求助
[高分句型]
①there were sme things which impressed me. (which引导的定语从句)
②my head teacher tld us that ur class was ging t hld a fun game and hped that smene wuld rganize it instead f herself. (that引导的宾语从句)
10．例文
I am very active in English classes
I am Lily, I am a 14-year-ld girl in Grade 9. I lve English, s I am always active in English class.
I fell in lve with English when I was a little girl. At that time, my English teacher was a very beautiful girl. She always spke fluent English with a smile n her face. She was s attractive that I was deeply influenced by her. Frm then n, I have always listened t English classes very carefully. What’s mre, I think English is very useful because I want t g abrad when I finish high schl. I will learn all f my subjects in English, s I decide t learn English well.
All in all, I am always active in English classes, and I als hpe my English will be better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：首先根据自己情况，把题目补充完整再进行写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，第一段指出自己最活跃的课堂是什么课堂，起到开篇点题并引入下文的作用；
第二步，写出自己喜欢这个科目的原因，至少两条；
第三步，最后进行简单的总结及对未来的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①fall in lve with...爱上了……
②be influenced by被……影响
③decide t d sth决定做某事
④attractive有吸引力的
[高分句型]
①She was s attractive that I was deeply influenced by her. （用引导结果状语从句）
②She always spke fluent English with a smile n her face.（with...介词短语作伴随状语）