上海中考英语书信作文专项训练

这是一份上海中考英语书信作文专项训练，共15页。试卷主要包含了一年一度的校园开放日即将来临等内容，欢迎下载使用。

假如你是李华，收到同班同学王涛的e-mail 来信，在信中他提到自从他家小区进入封控以来，“线上学习”和“足不出户”让他感到焦虑万分。没有老师面对面督促、鞭策、叮咛，他无法独立高效地进行线上自主学习；同时“足不出户”让他无法通过户外运动保持良好的精神状态。即将面临中考，他现在待在家里既担心学习又担心身体健康。请你回信给他，给他一些学习和生活上的建议。
（注意：1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
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2．Write a letter f at least 60 wrds accrding t the given situatin (根据以下情境写一封不少于60个词的信，标点符号不占格。信的开头和署名已给，不计入总字数。)
“汉语桥“中文能力大赛的成功举办说明越来越多的外国学生对中华优秀文化很感兴趣。假设你是李华，你的外国网友Peter对中华文化很感兴趣，想了解并学习。请从以下中华文化的六种表现中，选择你最喜欢的一种推荐给他，并说明理由。
中华武术 (Chinese martial arts）京剧 (Peking Opera）中华书法 (Chinese calligraphy)
中文歌曲 (Chinese sngs）中华美食 (Chinese fd）中华剪纸 (Chinese paper-cutting)
(注意：1. 信中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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3．一年一度的校园开放日即将来临。下周五，我们美丽的校园将迎来敬爱的家长们。学生会(student unin)特此收集同学们的活动设计。假设你是Peter，请给学生会负责人Karen写封信，提出2～3个开放日活动设计，并说明理由。
注意：1. 信中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分；
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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4．Write at least 60 wrds accrding t the given situatin. （根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点不占格）
假设你是Alice，你想领养上文的Sunday Special，请给收容所写一份信，说明你为什么想收养它，收养之后你会如何照顾它。
Dear fficers,I read Sunday Special’s letter and my heart was tuched. I wuld like t adpt the puppy. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs truly,
Alice
5．Suppse yur friend Ben is ging t travel in Shanghai next week. Please design a travel plan and write a letter t tell him abut it.Write at least 50 wrds.(假设你的朋友Ben要来你上海旅游，请你为他设计一份旅行计划书并写信告知他。不少于50个单词）
Suggested expressins:
interesting places; It takes ... t d; I hpe ...
Dear Ben,
I’m glad t knw that yu are ging t visit Shanghai,
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6．世界动物保护协会(Wrld Animal Prtectin)最近要招募志愿者。假如你是Tm，你想要加入志愿者团队，请写一封不少于60字的申请信，陈述你申请成为志愿者的原因。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Dear Chairpersn,
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Yurs,
Tm
7．Write at least 60 wrds accrding t the given situatin.（根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个字的短文，标点符号不占格。）
一年一度的校园开放日即将来临，下周五，我们美丽的校园将迎来敬爱的家长们。学生会(student unin)特此收集同学们的活动设计。假设你是Peter，请给学生会负责人Karen写封信，提出2-3个开放日活动设计，并说明理由。
注意：
1．信中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2．照抄试卷中其他阅读语篇不得分。
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8．Suppse yu are Kitty. Yur best friend Lucy is ging t Shanghai t spend the Spring Festival with yu. Please make a 3-day hliday plan fr her and write t Lucy t tell her abut yur plan. Cmplete the letter in at least 50 wrds. (假设你是Kitty，你最好的朋友Lucy准备来上海和你共度春节。请制定一个三天的节日计划并写信告诉她你的计划。用至少50个单词完成此信。标点符号不占空格，开头已给。)
Yu can begin like this:
Dear Lucy,
I’m s happy t knw yu’re ging t spend the Spring Festival with me in Shanghai. I have made a 3-day hliday plan fr us.
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9．学校学生会（the Students’ Unin）要推选一名主席（chairpersn），假设你是Mary，你准备推荐你们班的班长Tm，请根据提示对Tm做简要介绍，写一封100词左右的推荐信给李老师，并作适当补充和发挥。信的开头已经给出。
要点提示：
1. 属兔，又高又帅，爱好广泛，精通电脑，擅长演讲。
2. 最喜欢绿色和红色，绿色是大自然的颜色，给他活力；红色使他更容易采取行动。
3. 推荐理由：许多方面优秀，但很谦虚，从不炫耀；乐于助人、友好，愿意与他人人分享，同学们都乐意和他结交朋友；自信、勇敢、做事有条理……
10th Octber
Dear Mr Li,
I am writing t recmmend Tm as the new chairpersn f the Students’ Unin. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely
Mary
10．第19届亚运会将在杭州举行，需要招募一批擅长英语的志愿者。假如你是李华，你想成为一名志愿者，请结合以下信息，用英语给组委会写一封自荐信。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计人总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear Sir,
I’m Li Hua frm Zhangzhu. May I have the hnr t wrk as a vlunteer fr Asian Games in Hangzhu? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lking frward t yur early reply.
Sincerely yurs,
Li Hua
1．例文：
Dear Wang Ta,
I’m srry t hear sme f yur prblems. During the COVID-19 pandemic, we ften encunter prblems, but we need t face them with cnfidence.
First f all, yu shuld make a study schedule and study accrding t the plan. In this way, yu can learn effectively and independently. Secnd, yu shuld d sme prper exercises at hme, such as push-ups, crdless jumping rpe and s n. Finally, yu shuld learn t relax yurself and keep a gd md.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第二人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达自己对于对方问题的同情；
第二步，具体给出对方一些学习和生活上的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①need t d sth需要做某事
②first f all首先
③in this way以这种方式
[高分句型]
During the COVID-19 pandemic, we ften encunter prblems, but we need t face them with cnfidence.（but连接的并列句）
2．例文
Dear Peter,
I knw yu are interested in Chinese culture. Nw let me intrduce ne f the mst imprtant culture—Chinese paper-cutting.
It has a histry f mre than 5,000 years. It is easily made. Yu nly need sme paper and a pair f scissrs. Yu can change the paper int sme different shapes, such as animals, flwers and s n. When Spring Festival cmes, yu can see peple stick them n the windws and walls. It is a symbl f gd luck. Yu can learn hw t make Chinese paper-cutting by watching vides.
We als have ther traditinal culture. If yu want t learn mre, please tell me. Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Peter
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍剪纸是中国传统文化之一；
第二步，介绍剪纸的相关情况，包括它的历史，制作以及代表的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①mre than多于
②change int把……变成……
③a symbl f……的象征
[高分句型]
①Nw let me intrduce ne f the mst imprtant culture—Chinese paper-cutting（“ne f the+形容词最高级”的结构）
②When Spring Festival cmes, yu can see peple stick them n the windws and walls.（when引导的时间状语从句）
3．例文：
Dear Karen,
I’m Peter. Here are sme f my thughts. First, ur parents visit ur teaching building. Next, they visit ur art rm. Then they sit in an art class. Thrugh the visit, parents can better understand the schl running cnditins and envirnment f ur schl. After that, they g t the cnference rm fr a meeting. It can let parents better understand sme infrmatin abut the schl and students.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，是以书信的方式；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：材料只给出了写作的方向，要设计“2~3个开放日活动”，需要学生把内容补充完整，并要注意活动设计的逻辑性，同时也要注意书信的格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。可直接说明来信意图来引出下文的活动设计；
第二步，具体阐述活动设计的内容。要注意活动设计的逻辑性和合理性，可从参观地方的先后顺序来介绍；
第三步，简单总结，提及如此设计的理由。
[亮点词汇]
① first…, next…, then…, after that… 首先……，然后……，接下来……，之后……
② running cnditins and envirnment 运行状况和环境
③ better understand 更好地理解
[高分句型]
① Thrugh the visit, parents can better understand the schl running cnditins and envirnment f ur schl.（thrugh…“通过……”，介词短语作条件状语）
② After that, they g t the cnference rm fr a meeting. （fr…“为了……”，介词短语作目的状语）
4．例文
Dear fficers,
I read Sunday Special’s letter and my heart was tuched. I wuld like t adpt the puppy.
When I was a little child, we kept a lvely pet dg in ur family. I knw hw t lk after a puppy and I really want t give the pr animal a warm hme.
After I take him hme, first f all, I will give him a blanket and make a cmfrtable bed fr him t sleep n. Secndly, I will feed him 3 t 4 times a day. Of curse, I will never frget t give him a bwl f water t drink. Thirdly, I will als prepare sme tys fr him t play with. When I get hme frm schl, I will play with him.
I’m sure I can take gd care f him and he will be very happy t be ne f ur family members.
Yurs truly,
Alice
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封申请信，属于书信作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，不要遗漏提示中的“你为什么想收养它”这一要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接书信开头，引出话题；
第二步，先说明想收养小狗的原因，再按照要点提示说明你收养它后会如何照顾它，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，表示能照顾好小狗并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①first f all首先
②prepare sth fr sb为某人准备某物
③take gd care f照顾好……
[高分句型]
①When I was a little child, we kept a lvely pet dg in ur family.（when引导时间状语从句）
②After I take him hme, first f all, I will give him a blanket and make a cmfrtable bed fr him t sleep n.（after引导时间状语从句）
③I’m sure I can take gd care f him and he will be very happy t be ne f ur family members.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）
5．例文：
Dear Ben,
I’m glad t knw that yu are ging t visit Shanghai, I will meet yu at the airprt. Then I will shw yu arund the Bund f Shanghai. Yu will see many famus buildings here. Of curse, I will als take yu t taste ur lcal fd. I will als shw yu arund the museum. Yu can visit many histrical relics here. I will als shw yu arund Central Street. Yu can shp here. I’m sure yu will have a great time. I lk frward t yur cming.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：要求为你即将来上海旅游的朋友设计一份旅行计划书，计划应详细具体，注意不少于50词。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用简单问候，引出下文的旅行安排；
第二步，表达自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①shw sb arund带某人四处看看
②have a great time玩得高兴
③lk frward t期望
[高分句型]
I’m sure yu will have a great time.（宾语从句）
6．例文
Dear Chairpersn,
I want t be a vlunteer. There are sme reasns. Firstly, I am kind t animals. I lve animals very much. Secndly, I want t help sme hmeless animals. I want t give them nt nly water but als fd. Thirdly, if I becme a vlunteer, I will call n mre peple t jin us. I prmise t take care f animals well. I am lking frward t becming a vlunteer f the Wrld Animal Prtectin.
Yurs,
Tm
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：本文要求写一封申请信，申请加入加入志愿者团队，并陈述你申请成为志愿者的原因。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己想成为志愿者；
第二步，具体阐述自己申请成为志愿者的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①want t be想成为
②be kind t对……友好
③prmise t d承诺做某事
④lk frward t ding期望做
[高分句型]
①Thirdly, if I becme a vlunteer, I will call n mre peple t jin us.（if引导的条件状语从句）
7．例文：
Dear Karen,
I’m writing t tell yu abut the plan f ur Schl Open Day. Next Friday will be ur Open Day. We are ging t hld sme interesting activities and invite ur parents t visit ur schl.
First, ur parents will arrive at ur schl at 2:00 p.m, and they will visit ur classrm n the secnd flr at 2:15 p.m. Next, they will lk at ur prjects in Arts and Crafts rm n the third flr at 2:30 p.m. Then, they will listen t the schl chir in the hall n the third flr at 3:10. After that, they will lk at the English Club nticebard in the library n the secnd flr at 4:00 p.m. Finally, they will have tea and cakes in the Music rm n the third flr with the teachers at 4:25 p.m. I hpe ur parents will have a great time!
At last, I am als lking frward t yur cming.
Yurs,
Peter
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍写信的目的；
第二步，介绍开放日的活动。
[亮点词汇]
①arrive at 到达
②have a great time 玩得开心
③at last 最后
[高分句型]
①I hpe ur parents will have a great time.（宾语从句）
②At last, I am als lking frward t yur cming.（动名词作宾语）
8．例文
Dear Lucy,
I’m s happy t knw yu’re ging t spend the Spring Festival with me in Shanghai. I have made a 3-day hliday plan fr us.
I will take yu t the Bund n the first day. There are many beautiful landscapes there, and yu will lve them. In the afternn, we will g t taste lcal delicacies and snacks. The next day, I will shw yu the famus scenic spts and learn abut the histry f Shanghai. On the third day, I will take yu t g bating. We can als fish n the bat.
Hpe yu’ll have a gd time in Shanghai.
Yurs,
Kitty
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先引出话题，讲述制定三天的节日计划；
第二步，具体讲述三天的计划内容；
第三步，书写结语，表达“希望对方在上海玩得开心”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①shw sb. sth.给某人看某物
②take sb. t d sth.带某人去做某事
③have a gd time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①There are many beautiful landscapes there, and yu will lve them. （There be句型）
9．例文：
10th Octber
Dear Mr. Li,
I am writing t recmmend Tm as the new chairpersn f the Students’ Unin. His year is the year f the rabbit. He is tall and handsme. He has a wild interest in many fields and is gd at cmputer and speech. He likes green and red best. Green is the clr f nature, giving him vitality. Red makes it easier fr him t take actin.
Tm is excellent in many aspects, but he is very mdest, and she never shws ff. He is always ready t help thers. When we have truble, he ften ffers us sme help. He is very easy-ging, and everyne wants t make friends with him. He is friendly, and he is willing t share with thers. He is cnfident, brave and rganized. We all like him and we hpe that he can be the new chairpersn f the Students’ Unin.
Yurs sincerely,
Mary
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，也是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写在要点已给出，学生要要注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中Tm的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并要提出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，推荐Tm做主席。介绍Tm的属相、爱好；
第二部，具体阐述Tm的优点，作为推荐Tm的理由；
第三部，书写结束语，最后表达希望Tm能成为学校学生会主席的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① have a wild interest in many fields爱好广泛
② be gd at擅长
③ like…best最喜欢……
④ be excellent in many aspects在许多方面优秀
[高分句型]
① Red makes it easier fr him t take actin.（it做形式宾语，代替不定式）
② When we have truble, he ften ffers us sme help.（when引导时间状语从句）
10．例文：
Dear Sir,
I’m Li Hua frm Zhangzhu. May I have the hnr t wrk as a vlunteer fr Asian Games in Hangzhu? I’m friendly and smart. I lve t meet different peple and make friends with them. I’m als helpful and I’m ready t help peple in need.
I can speak Chinese and English well. Chinese histry and gegraphy are my favrite, because they are interesting. It’s easy fr me t tell Chinese stries t players and visitrs in bth languages. Besides, I’m a sprts lver. I enjy ding sprts such as playing basketball and ftball.
I think I can be a gd vlunteer. Lking frward t yur early reply.
Sincerely yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以李华的身份向第19届亚运会组委会写一封应聘志愿者的自荐信，文中必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文是书信作文，用第一人称、一般现在时写作。书写时要紧扣主题，围绕提示内容展开叙述，做到中心突出，内容完整连贯，文句表达力求语法准确、逻辑清楚。
Reference phrases
 feed him 3—4 times every day
 give him a bwl f water t drink
 give him a blanket
 play with him