11：【专题过关】短文改错备考10篇（名校最新真题） -2022-2023学年高二英语下学期期中考点大串讲（人教版2019）

读后续写备考攻略

读后续写解题技巧

技巧一：精读原文，理解文章要表达的主旨和思想

文字是为思想服务的，表达特定的思想需要相对应的有情感特色的文字。如果作者要褒扬特定的人或事，那么他就会用积极的文字。如果是贬低一个人或一件事，那么他就会用消极的文字。理解文章的主旨，对我们在续写中使用合适的语言有很大的指导意义。
 

技巧二：细品原文，分析原文的用词风格

要想对续写的文字有准确的把握，就要对原文的文字有非常准确的理解。要想准确理解原文文字的特点，就要在文章主旨的指导下，对原文的文字进行仔细的分析。对原文文字特点的分析包括：（1）对原文人物的动作和心理描写的分析。（2）对原文对话的话语特点的分析。（3）对原文场景的描写的分析。
 

技巧三：有机地组织自己的语言，保持和原文风格的一致

通过对原文主旨的理解和对语言的准确分析之后，我们就会对原文的语言特点有比较准确的把握，然后就可以使用和原文特点一致的文字来进行续写。

读后续写解题思路

细读原文，理解主旨大意，掌握文章线索

紧扣原文构思情节，结合段落开头语谋篇布局

理清逻辑，拟写草稿，修改润色，整洁誉写

实战演练

读后续写(共10篇名校期中真题)

1．（2022秋·河北沧州·高二任丘市第一中学校考期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

I was in my room, unwilling to head to the community theatre with “my brother” Henry. He was just adopted by my parents recently. I was not in the mood for being onstage with him.

“Kristie, come here,” my mom called. Following her voice, I found her outside the bathroom, holding a wet book. She gave the book a shake. “Henry’s book was in the bathtub. Did you put it there?” She glared at me—something she never did before Henry came to our home. I didn’t wet his book on purpose. Tears of hurt clouded my eyes. Worse still, she promised to buy him a new copy. My heart ached. Henry was stealing my mother’s love. He was ruining my life.

Meanwhile, Henry was just nearby, absorbed in working on a complicated rope knot (绳结) as usual. Why did a boy like him do the girly work? Far from manly!

Soon, it was time to have to set off for the community theatre. As Henry walked ahead of us to the car, my mom took me aside and said in a low voice, “It’s the first time for Henry to be onstage. Be kind to him, Honey.” I nodded but sighed. Being kind didn’t use to be hard. But after Henry moved in, everything felt different. The theatre used to be a special place for my parents and me. With Henry involved, it didn’t seem so special any more.

Finally, it was our stage time. My heart beat wildly. I forgot my annoyance at Henry for a while. As we kids lined up, ready to act out our short play, I realized how loosely I had tied the drawstring (束带) on my skirt. Sure enough, my skirt began to drop. Laughter from the audience could be heard, and even though I was wearing shorts under my skirt, I could feel my face burst into flames. However, my hands were full. If only someone could help me out!

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Right then, Henry sensed my embarrassment.

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After the performance, I found Henry and tapped him on the arm gratefully.

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2．（2022秋·辽宁葫芦岛·高二校联考期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。  

11-year-old Sean lived with his single mother. When he was five years old, his father died while fighting for the country. Sean admired his father and wished to be as brave as him. Sean respected his heroism and courage as a soldier, and he did everything he could to make his father proud when he was still alive. However, Sean’s father was a strict man who never appreciated him. Sean longed to hear words of praise from his father, but that day never came.

After his father’s death, Sean was heartbroken. He would miss his father, and more importantly, he would never get the chance to make his father proud. But life gave him that chance in the most unexpected way.

One day, Sean was playing in his neighborhood when he saw a little girl sitting sadly on the pavement. He immediately recognized her as she lived a couple of houses away from him. Watching her, Sean wondered why she seemed so sad. He decided to talk to her.

“Hi! I’m Sean. What’s wrong? You look upset,” he said, taking a seat beside her.

“I’m Melanie,” said the girl, “My mommy passed away, and I miss her.”

“So did my dad. I miss him too,” said Sean. “Would you like to play with me?” he offered.

“Can I?” she smiled, and Sean nodded.

That day marked the start of Sean and Melanie’s friendship. They would always play together after school.

One day, before going to school, Sean saw Melanie sitting outside her house crying. Sean was worried, so he ran up to her.

After talking, Sean learned that Melanie’s grandma Molly got sick and couldn’t take Melanie to school any longer. Her dad was in the army unit. “I miss my daddy and I want Daddy to be home,” Melanie said. “That’s okay, Melanie. He’ll be home soon. My dad was a soldier, too, and they work hard for our country. Aren’t you proud of your dad?” Melanie answered, “But…There’s no one to take me to school.”

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2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Sean offered to take Melanie to school.

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One day, when Sean and Melanie were approaching Melanie’s home from school, they saw a man in the doorway.

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3．（2022秋·山东青岛·高二山东省莱西市第一中学统考期中）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

My anger almost exploded when I was met the knowing looks that everyone gave me. Annoyance and embarrassment filled my heart. Why could Anne let out my secret? How could she do that to me? She lost all my trust and friendship.

Five years ago, Anne was new to our class. She was polite and shy, wearing a warm smile that attracted me towards her. She was the most friendly person I had ever met. We started as classmates but after a few months we were like best friends. We did homework together and hung out on weekends. We shared a lot of secrets and gave each other a lot of good advice. That was a sweet time.

However, I couldn’t expect such a big betrayal(背叛) from her. I didn’t know what made me tell Anne about my personal life. My dad lost his job, so I had to drop out of my favorite Ballet. A new pair of Ballet shoes was one of the things that we could not afford! Giving up the class made me sad, but I hoped it was just the secret between me and my best friend.

The next day when I walked by the next classroom, I felt several girls staring at me and talking in a low voice. My face turned red at their whisper like “Ballet” and “shoes”. Embarrassed and hurt, I ran away in tears.

I felt much regret to myself and avoiding Anne in and out of school. Soon afterwards, I was glad that our family moved to another town where Dad got a new job and no one would laugh at me. Anne called me many times but I didn’t answer. My heart was broken because the person whom I trusted most cheated me.

I started a new life, leaving all the bad memories behind since growing up naturally involved many stories, both bitter and sweet ones. Five years later, with the life going on, I made new friends and seldom thought about the past.

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好；

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Then, I met Linda in the market my former classmate, who told me shocking news.

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I immediately called Anne.

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4．（2022春·重庆荣昌·高二重庆市荣昌永荣中学校校考期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的故事。

Nine-year-old Dyami loved to visit his grandfather’s house. The house was near the beautiful blue sea. At the seaside stood thick and tall palm trees(棕榈树) with green coconuts (椰子)hanging from them. Dyami liked to play under the trees. It was always great fun to spend the holidays at Grandpa’s place.

Grandpa had planted a few palm trees near the front door and today they had become large, massive trees with thick trunks. He never allowed his trees to be cut. He hugged each palm tree in his courtyard.

One night, Dyami was awakened by a strange sound. Suddenly, the ground shook as if the earth was splitting. He sat up straight and then ran to Grandpa. He clung(附着) to his grandpa tightly. Grandpa cried out, “ It’s an earthquake!” They ran outside the house. They thought that would be safe.

However, there was a louder sound, the earth was not splitting but the sea was roaring. People were shouting, screaming and crying, “The sea is rising! The sea is rising!” The villagers started running away from the beach. Dyami watched stupidly .

The waves were rising higher and higher. Dyami thought, “ How big the waves are!” He went into the house again and saw water coming in from all sides. He was scared. Dyami remembered his mother telling him long ago, “You must always get out of the house if the floods come too near.” He ran outside the house with Grandpa. But the water came surging(汹涌) in.

Waves about twelve meters high came rushing in, drowning everything. Water was all around and everywhere.

注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;

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Grandpa held Dyami ‘s hand tightly ,but a huge wave separated(使...分开) them.

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“Dyami,Dyami !” Grandpa cried. “Don’t be scared, little one, come to me , quickly.”

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5．（2022秋·湖北孝感·高二应城市第一高级中学校考期中）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Kelsey was grateful for everything her mother had done for her. In spite of being raised by her mother alone, Kelsey received a good education, and now held a leading position in a large company.  

Recently the company was making corporate brochures in which achievers would share their success and thank their parents as well. For this, the achievers would have to take photos of themselves with their parents.

Kelsey didn’t really want that because her mother had put on a lot of weight due to a sedentary (久坐的) lifestyle. Kelsey managed to contact one of the best photographers and made a reservation in advance. When she and her mother came to the photographer’s studio, Kelsey took the man aside and said, “Please make sure my mom looks thinner in the photo.” But the photographer said what her mother really needed was a diet or exercise, not a photographer.

Kelsey insisted that he shouldn’t make her mother look like a slim dancer. She just expected him to do his best to make her mother look a bit thinner. The photographer finally agreed and took measures to hide some details, setting the right light and choosing better angles for shots. But it was not easy to fool the camera.

Kelsey’s mother noticed how the photographer was having a hard time and how her daughter was shaking her head. She smiled and said that she just wanted photos with Kelsey no matter whether she looked heavy or not.

The next day, Kelsey came to pick up the photos with her mother. The photographer printed out several photos, copied the rest on a flash drive (闪存盘) and handed them to Kelsey. Kelsey was disappointed and complained. How she wished her mother could look much thinner! The photographer shrugged (耸肩) helplessly and said nothing. Kelsey’s mother, however, said that the photographer did a good job and she was who she was. Then she told Kelsey to accept the fact that her mother was not “the tiny girl Thumbelina in the fairy tale.”

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2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。

Finishing her words, Kelsey’s mother turned and went out of the studio.

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Kelsey felt so ashamed that she came near to tears.

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6．（2022秋·湖南怀化·高二统考期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

“Can I see my baby?” the happy new mother asked. When the baby was lying in her arms, she moved the fold of cloth gently to look upon his tiny face. Dumbfounded (目瞪口呆的), she held her breath and tears welled up in her eyes and rolled down her cheeks. The doctor turned his head quickly and looked out of the tall hospital window. The baby had been born without ears. Time, however, proved that the baby’s hearing was perfect. It was only his appearance that was a pity.

One day, when he rushed home from school and threw himself into his mother’s arms, he cried out bitterly and told his mum in a choked voice, “A boy, a big boy… called me a freak (怪人).” The mother sighed, knowing that his life was to be full of endless unfortunate heartbreaks.

Though the misfortune happened to him, he grew up into a handsome boy. A favorite with his fellow students, he might have been class president, but for the ears. He developed a gift, a talent for literature and music. Yet he felt ashamed when he communicated with others. “But you might communicate with other young people,” his mother blamed him, with a kindness in her heart.

The boy’s father talked with the family doctor about his ears. “Could nothing be done?” the father asked. “I believe we could transplant on a pair of outer ears, if they could be donated.” the doctor replied. From then on, the search for a person, who was willing to make such a sacrifice, began.

How time flew! Two years went by. One day, the father said to the son, “You’re going to the hospital, son. Mother and I have found someone who will donate the ears you need. But remember it’s a secret.”

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2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph 1: The operation was a great success, and a new person appeared.

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Paragraph 2: He stood with his father over his mother’s casket (灵柩).

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7．（2022秋·山东临沂·高二统考期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

New Beginnings

My sister and I weren’t exactly what you would call close. I was three years younger, and I thought she walked on water. Everything she did was perfect, and I wanted to be just like her when I grew up. If she wore her hair in twin braids with a pink clip one day, the next day I wore mine exactly the same way. I used to follow her and her friends around, begging to be included, but there isn’t much room in a thirteen-year-old’s life for a annoying ten-year-old sister. As a result, over time, my worship of her became indifference. We were strangers living in the same house, eating together but never communicating.

So when she sat me down last year and told me she’d be going to Israel to study abroad for ten months, I wasn’t too concerned. I figured I would get to wear the clothes she left behind and use her CD player. That was the only way I thought her leaving would affect me.

That first night after she left, I sat in my room and tried to do homework. I couldn’t shake the feeling that something was wrong, something was missing. The house was too quiet. No Tova’s CD player and no Tova’s voice giggling on the phone with her friends. Sitting there, I realized just how different it was without her in the house. Even though we didn’t always speak, I had felt safe just knowing she was near.

I cried that night. I cried over all the years we had wasted trying to live our own lives and ignoring each other’s. I cried that I couldn’t even give her a hug before she boarded her plane. But as the night wore on, my tears changed to tears of calm, tears of new beginnings.

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1. 续写词数应为150左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

I picked up the phone and called her halfway across the world.

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Finally she spoke.

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8．（2022秋·山东菏泽·高二山东省鄄城县第一中学校考期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Kevin was a “slow” boy. He didn’t learn his ABCs as fast as other kids. He never came in first in the schoolyard races. However, Kevin could get along well with other people. And his enthusiasm for life was quite contagious (有感染力的). So, when he discovered that his teacher, Randy Moss, was putting together a basketball team, his mother could only answer, “Yes, you may join.”

Basketball became the center of Kevin’s life. He liked to stand in a certain spot near the free-throw line and shoot baskets. Patiently, he stood there throwing ball after ball.

The day before their first game, Randy gave each player a bright red jersey (运动衫). Kevin had stars in his eyes when he saw his number 12. He quickly put it on and almost never took it off again. Kevin and his whole team truly loved basketball. But just loving the game doesn’t help you win. More balls fell out of the basket than into it, and the boys lost every game that season, except one—the night it snowed. and the other team couldn’t make it to the game.

At the end of the season, they had the misfortune to play against the first-place team-the undefeated first-place team. The game went pretty much as expected, and near the middle of the fourth quarter Kevin’s team stood nearly 30 points behind.

At that point, one of Kevin’s teammates called a time-out. As he came to the side, Randy couldn’t imagine why the time-out had been called. “Mr. Moss, this is our last game and I know that Kevin has played in every game, but he’s never made a basket. I think we should let Kevin make a basket,” said the boy.

With the game completely out of reach, the idea seemed reasonable, so the plan was made. Every time Kevin’s team had the ball, Kevin was to stand in his special spot near the free-throw line and they would give him the ball.

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1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

His first shot bounced around but missed.

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Soon, all the players threw the ball to Kevin and clapped for him.

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9．（2022秋·重庆·高二重庆巴蜀中学校考期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Yesterday as I flipped through the stack of mostly junk mail that I had fetched from the mailbox, an advertisement for a magazine caught my attention. The cover featured a color photograph of a ball of yarn (纱线) with knitting (编织) needles artistically inserted through the middle. Memories of Mrs. Hudson, my sixth-grade teacher, came to mind. She was tall, with a kind face, and wore little makeup.

Mrs. Hudson taught language arts when I was in sixth grade. Mrs. Hudson also taught knitting lessons in her home to select sixth-grade students every other Saturday from fall through winter. I was a shy girl back then, considered by others as weird.

It took the most pitiful expression I could find to convince my parents to let me take the knitting lessons. It then required pleading and promises of extra chores to get them to agree to drop me off and pick me up every other Saturday. Thankfully, Mrs. Hudson only lived seven miles away, and she offered the knitting lessons for free. She even supplied knitting needles and yarn.

The house was quiet, tidy, and welcoming as Mrs. Hudson guided me to the room, which was already filled with girls looking as shy and nervous as I was. Yet gradually we got to know each other and relaxed. We would grab a snack and drink while everyone arrived and settled for the lesson. I drank iced tea for the first time at one of those Saturday knitting lessons. Trips to Mrs. Hudson’s house were like a treat to me back at that time. I actually made some friends who shared the same hobby.

I don’t recall officially thanking Mrs. Hudson for those Saturdays, and I regretted that. I typed her name and the town where she lived into Google. Within minutes a couple of articles and multiple obituaries (讣告) popped up. There was a recent photograph inserted into one of the obituaries, and as I gazed into those eyes, there was no question that it was Mrs. Hudson. She had passed away only eight years before at the age of 99. I took down the address and decided to pay a visit.

As I stood in front of the door, I gathered my courage and knocked.

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An old lady, who looked like Mrs. Hudson, opened the door.

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It was amazing that she still kept all the knitting needles and yarn.  

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10．（2022秋·湖南·高二湖南师大附中校考期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Two men, who were both seriously ill, occupied the same hospital room. One man had to spend all his time lying flat on his back. His roommate was allowed to sit up in his bed for an hour a day and his bed was next to the room’s only window.

The men talked for hours on end. They talked about everything in their life. But always, the best subject was the time when his roommate described all the things he could see outside the window.

The man lying on the bed would live for those one—hour periods where his world would be broadened and enlivened by all the activities and color of the outside world. His roommate had said out of the window was a park with a lovely lake. Ducks and swans played on the water while children sailed their model boats. Lovers walked arm in arm among flowers of every color. Old trees graced the landscape, and a fine view of the city skyline could be seen in the distance. As the roommate by the window described all this in detail, the man on the other side of the room would close his eyes and imagine the scene.

One warm afternoon the roommate by the window described a parade passing by. Although the other man could not hear the band, he could imagine it in his mind as his roommate by the window described it.

Unexpectedly, an alien thought entered his head: Why should he have all the pleasure of seeing everything while I never get to see anything? It didn’t seem fair. As the thought fermented(发酵), the man felt ashamed at first. But as the days passed and he missed seeing more sights, his envy became resentment and soon turned him sour. These dark thoughts made himself unable to sleep. He should be by that window and that thought now controlled his life.

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1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

One night the man, whose bed was near the window, died peacefully during sleep.

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But when he took his first look out of the window, he found it faced a blank wall.

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