专题08 书面表达15篇-2023中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题特快专递（上海专用）

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2023上海中考英语逆袭冲刺 名校模拟真题特快专递
第一期
专题08 书面表达15篇
一、话题作文
1．（2022·上海静安·二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “The moving moment in my life”（请以“生活中让我感动的瞬间”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
在你的生活中一定有许多令人感动的记忆，请结合自己的个人经历，谈谈发生了哪件事，并具体讲述为何这个瞬间最能触动你的心灵。
（注意：1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
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【答案】例文：
The moving moment in my life
Here is a moving moment in my life that I will never forget.
I still remember that was a rainy day. I failed an exam, and I felt very upset. What was worse, I didn’t bring an umbrella. Countless raindrops beat against my body, which seemed that they were laughing at me. Suddenly, the raindrops disappeared. At first, I thought the rain finally stopped. But when I looked up, I saw a big umbrella and the smiling face of my deskmate, Mike. He looked into my eyes sincerely and said, “An exam can’t stand for everything. I believe you can get good grades next time.” His words really touched my heart and cheered me up. After that, I studied harder and made great progress.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“The moving moment in my life”为题，介绍生活中让自己感动的事情。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主行文；人称以第一人称为主。写作时围绕主题展开适当的叙述，谈谈发生了哪件事，并具体讲述为何这个瞬间最能触动你的心灵。确保语句通顺，逻辑清晰，无单词语法错误。
2．（2022·上海闵行·二模）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “________ makes no difference”. （以“……是无济于事的”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）阅读D篇怀特家的故事告诉我们：一旦事情已经发生，责备任何人都无济于事，相反会让被责备的人背负罪恶感。在我们的生活中，总会遇到困难或者发生一些不愉快的事情，这时候谩骂、责备、抱怨、生气、担忧等等都不会起到任何作用。我们应该改变自身，寻求智慧的解决办法。请结合你的经历或见闻，谈谈你的感受。写作前请你先把题目补充完整。
注意：
文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。抄袭阅读理解语篇的不给分。
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【答案】
例文：
Blaming others makes no difference
In our life, there will always be difficulties or unpleasant things. Blaming, complaining, getting angry, worrying and so on will not do any good. We should change ourselves and seek intelligent solutions.
I used to climb mountains with my friend who insisted on going to remote places. Finally we got lost, and I knew it was useless to blame my friend. So I called for help right away. At last we were saved.
I think when something unexpected happens, we should try to solve it instead of blaming the other person.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，首先把题目补全完整。其次根据题目要求结合自己的经历和见闻写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文在叙述过去的经历时用一般过去时，叙述感受时使用一般现在时。人称以第一人为主。写作时可以从“谩骂、责备、抱怨、生气、担忧”等词中选取一个把题目补充完整，然后围绕主题展开叙述。确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
3．（2022·上海虹口·二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Small tricks to improve happiness” (以“提升幸福感的小妙招”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
3月20日是国际幸福日。快乐、自信、充实、自豪，当你拥有这些感受，你就是一个幸福的人。生活中的一些小妙招可以让我们获得幸福感，请你结合自己或他人的经历和感受描述至少两个提升幸福感的小妙招，并说明一下理由。
(注意: 1.短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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【答案】例文：
The feeling of happiness is very important. We are no longer satisfied with only enough food and clothes. Instead, we need happiness. Now I will share some tips to increase our sense of happiness.
The first is friendship. Friends can share our feelings and help to make us happy when we are sad. They can provide us with help when we are in need. They can also keep us company when we are lonely. The second is being thankful. Sometimes we can’t get what we want and we will be unhappy. But if we focus on what we already have, and be thankful to everything around us, I believe our life will be a lot happier.
Try to make some friends and be thankful to everything. I am sure we will be much happier.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，以“Small tricks to improve happiness”为题参照所给提示中要点信息进行分析。写作时需选定至少两个提升幸福感的小妙招，并陈述理由。
2.写作指导：本文以第一人称为主，时态为一般现在时；写作时注意分段叙述，第一段开门见山，引入话题；第二段介绍小妙招及原因；第三段总结全文；保证文章条理清晰，语句通顺。
4．（2022·上海·模拟预测）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “The best ________ I have ever met”（请以“最美的遇见”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）。
一场美丽的相遇是生命的恩赐， 是缘分的开始。最美的遇见可以是雨后的彩虹，可以是陪伴的挚友，亦可是成长的鼓励等。请选择一个方面，结合你的经历，谈谈你的感受。
注意：1.补全作文题目；
2.抄袭试卷中内容不得分；
3.文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
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【答案】范文：
The best encouragement I have ever met
Life is full of difficulties, so we need to gain encouragement from others.
Once I made a speech in the school. I tried hard to say out every word clearly. Unfortunately, I was so nervous that I forgot one part of my speech. I wanted to give up. “You are great.” Someone shouted. I suddenly became powerful and completed the speech perfectly. From that time, I have realized that we need encouragement from others.
This is the best encouragement I have ever met.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时首先要补全作文题目，然后根据题目要求，叙述自己的亲身经历——遇见的最好的鼓励，并写出自己的感受。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述故事内容，时态采用一般过去时为主。在描述故事时，场景应描写细致，并且故事发生的起因、过程和结果等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
5．（2022·上海长宁·一模）Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’ve learned something helpful for my future life”（请以“我学到了对未来生活有用的东西”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
学校生活的目的不仅仅是为了升学，更重要的是学习对未来生活中有用的一种能力本领、一种精神品质、或者是获取一个经验教训。请你以一个具体的事例谈谈你学校生活中这方面的一点收获。
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【答案】例文：
I’ve learned something helpful for my future life
Recently, I’ve learned something helpful for my future life. I’ve had a change in my life. It makes me realized that how important it is for me to be confident.
I was poor at math and my math score was so disappointing that I became mad at myself. But my teacher Mr. Li told me that I could have done much better if I believed in myself. Every time I met with some math problems, I told myself  “You should be confident and you can do it.” And out of my expectation, I got an “A” in my math exam a month later. Not until then did I realize I had a gift for math.
There is nothing that I can’t do if I am confident enough.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求讲述自己在学校生活中的收获及自己的感悟。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述自己在学校生活中的收获及自己的感悟，要叙述完整，条理清晰。
6．（2022·上海普陀·一模）Write at least 60 words according to the pictures about “A 14th birthday ceremony”
【根据所给的图片，写一篇关于 “十四岁生日仪式” 的短文，题目可另拟，字数不少于 60 个词，标点符号不占格】

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【答案】例文：
An unforgettable experience
Last Sunday, we had our 14th birthday ceremony in the school hall. The hall was decorated with balloons and streamers. Students with uniforms attended the ceremony at 10:00 a.m. First, the headmaster gave a speech. He praised the great progress we made, and gave best wishes to us. Next, the parent representative appreciated the communication with the teenagers and talked about the happy family time with us. To our surprise, we received letters from our parents, which were filled with love and expectation. Finally, cakes with white house and colorful chocolate were presented to us. We enjoyed the cakes and had a great time. What an unforgettable experience!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求及图片显示的信息讲述14岁生日庆典的时间、地点、庆典的具体步骤及自己的感受。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述庆典的具体内容，要叙述完整，条理清晰。
7．（2021·上海杨浦·三模）    Write at least 60 words on the given situation(根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
Michael  Morpurgo 认为当小学老师是他一生最快乐的时光之一。每个人的成长过程中都会有一些快乐时光，或长或短。请以“The happiest days of my life” 为题，分享你的经历和感受。
（注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分）2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文：
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       The happiest days of my life
    In my opinion, being a student is the happiest days of my life. I remember when I was in junior high school, I learned every subject well, but my favorite subject was English. Every time I had an English class, the teacher always gives me the small task of distributing homework and test papers. Every time I did these things, I felt very proud. Not only English teachers, but also other teachers paid special attention to me because of my serious attitude.
    I miss junior high school life very much now, and thank the teachers for their concern, which makes me grow up in happiness.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“The happiest days of my life” 为题，写一篇短文，叙述一下成长过程中的一些快乐时光，分享你的经历和感受。短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息。
2.写作指导：文章要求叙述成长过程中的快乐时光，是对过去的叙述，所以时态上以一般过去时为主，人称上以第一人称为主。对过去的叙述，注意动词过去式的变化。最后表达一下自己的感受。

二、材料作文
8．（2022·上海宝山·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation （根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Sam在学校的英语学习论坛里发了一个帖子寻求帮助，请阅读他的帖子并针对他提出的问题写一份回帖为他提供帮助。
Sam,
Posted:
(2 days ago)

My problem
I’m very worried about the coming English oral test (口语测试) . I’m not good at speaking English. I’ve no idea about how to practice oral English. My parents are angry with me because I haven’t made much progress. What should I do? Can you give me some advice?

Your Reply


Re: Sam’s problem
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注意:
1. 文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。
The following is for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考)
●be patient
●keep practising
●communicate with
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【答案】例文
Don’t lose heart. Confidence will solve many problems. There are some solutions to improve your oral English.
First of all, recite the words and be patient. Because the sentences read in English are composed of words, you will be more fluent when you are familiar with the words. Secondly, you should read after the radio and cultivate your sense of language. Keep practicing so that you can speak fluently. Finally, you should find more classmates to communicate with you in your classroom.
I hope above advice will be helpful to you.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文需要回复Sam发布的一个帖子，回复原贴中的问题：应该如何提高口语？
2. 写作指导：本文采用一般现在时；主要以第二人称为主展开叙述；短文采用三段式：第一段鼓励对方，引出话题。第二段给出具体的三个提高口语建议；最后一段总结全文。在写作时要做到无标点符号和语法错误。
9．（2022·上海·模拟预测）Write at least 60 words according to the given information（根据以下材料，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）Please complete the topic “The ________ I will never forget” and write at least 60 words on your topics.（请补全题目并以此为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）.
提示：
生活中总有一些令人难忘的东西，或是一个给你帮助的人；或是一个意义非凡的日子或是一部令人深思的电影……请你搜索记忆的宝库，分享一段令人难忘的片段。
注意：短文中不得出现任何人名，校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分.
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【答案】例文
The English speech contest I will never forget
During my middle school study, I have taken part in many matches, but I never forget an English speech contest.
When the teacher told us there was an English speech contest, I didn’t think much of it.
Many excellent students were in our class. Besides me, several students put up their hands to show their interest in the contest. Luckily, the English teacher asked me to take it. I was worried about it very much. I was eager to get it, but I was afraid to fail. With the help of my English teacher and more than a week’s hard work, I won the first in our school.
After that I worked harder. I think I can succeed if I try my best to do it. Where there is a will, there is a way. Do you think so?
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇命题作文，首先把标题补充完成，本文题目“我永远不会忘记的英语演讲比赛”，根据所给提示，分享一段令人难忘的片段。要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充。
2. 写作指导：本文用到的一般过去时态，人称用第一人称。写作时，注意承接上文，写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
10．（2022·上海·模拟预测）Write at least 60 words on the topic “ ‘Double Reduction Policy’ affects me”.（以“‘双减政策’影响我”为题，写一篇至少60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格。）全国义务教育阶段都在实施“双减政策”。“政策”实施后，校内课后服务全面覆盖，学生作业有限定，周末培训机构不再提供服务。学生有了更多自主学习和享受家庭生活的时间了。对你而言，“双减政策”给你带来了哪些影响呢？你是如何看待这些影响的呢？
以下短语供选用：
put into effect 实施       benefit me/everyone 使我/大家获益       give individual help 给予个别帮助       service after class 课后服务
（注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
文章首句“Since ‘Double Reduction Policy’ was put into effect, something has changed in my life.”已给，这些文字不计入文章字数。
“Double Reduction Policy” affects me
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【答案】例文
“Double Reduction Policy” affects me
Since “Double Reduction Policy” was put into effect, something has changed in my life. The policy benefits me a lot. After the policy, service after class is fully covered, the teachers can give individual help to the students who are poor in study. My homework is limited, and weekend training institutions no longer provide services. I have more time to study by myself and enjoy my family life. I can learn to draw and play with my friends. I think these effects are very useful to my study and life.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“‘双减政策’影响我”为题写一篇短文，介绍 “双减政策”对“我”的影响。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍“双减政策”给“我”带来的影响以及“我”对这些影响的看法；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点，可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。

三、电子邮件
11．（2022·上海·模拟预测）假如你是李雷，今天你们班针对学校本周末开展的 “无作业日”活动进行了讨论。你的外校好友张鹏对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息，给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他讨论的情况，并说说你的计划及理由。
写作要点：
1.讨论主题：如何让 “无作业日”过得有意义。
2.同学们的周末计划：
（1）韩梅进行户外活动
（2）魏军参加志愿者活动
（3）我看喜欢的电影
3.谈一谈你喜欢看电影的理由。
写作要求:
1.不得使用真实姓名、地点和班级、学校名。
2.适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.至少 80 词。
Dear Zhang Peng,
I’m writing to tell you something about our discussion today. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Lei
【答案】例文
Dear Zhang Peng,
I’m writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
This weekend is Homework-free Day. My classmates had a discussion about how to make the weekend meaningful. They have different plans.
Han Mei will do outdoor activities. She will take a trip and have a volleyball match. Wei Jun will have a volunteer time in Children's Home, he thinks it is interesting. I like watching action movies. Because I think it is relaxing and amazing. So I will go to the cinema.
What’s your plan? Can you tell me?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Lei
【详解】1.题干解读：题目是一篇邮件作文。要求以李雷身份给张鹏写一封电子邮件，介绍一下自己班就如何让 “无作业日”过得有意义展开讨论的情况，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一、三人称来写，时态以一般将来时为主。应包括所提供的信息，把同学们的计划叙述完整，注意主谓一致问题，语句通顺。

四、书信作文
12．（2022·上海浦东新·模拟预测）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (假定你是Tony，根据以下情境续写这一封信，不少于60 词，标点符号不占格)
注意：
1.文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。
Note: entire adj. 全部的，整个的
Dear Editor,
I have lived in Jackson my entire life. I go to Lake School. I am in second grade. I am writing this letter because I do not agree with your article. You wrote about the new shopping mall that will be built on First Street. I think it is exciting to have new things to do here. I just wish our city did not decide to get rid of Hardy Park. Why should we lose a park to get a mall?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Dear Editor,
I have lived in Jackson my entire life. I go to Lake School. I am in second grade. I am writing this letter because I do not agree with your article. You wrote about the new shopping mall that will be built on First Street. I think it is exciting to have new things to do here. I just wish our city did not decide to get rid of Hardy Park. Why should we lose a park to get a mall?
Now people are under more and more pressure from work and study. We need a place to relax. I think this park is the best place to relax. We can see many people in the park every day. Some old people exercise in the park, and children fly kites in the park. There are also many people talking happily with their friends. If the park becomes a shopping center, there will be no suitable place for us to relax.
So I insist on my view that the park cannot be given up. Now the transportation is very convenient. People can take the subway or car to go to a far place when shopping. I think this is a better solution.
That’s all. Thank you!
Tony.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据信件中的提示要点，介绍不同意公园变购物公园的理由以及建议，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时，提出建议可以多用情态动词；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
13．（2022·上海宝山·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the situation given. (请根据所给情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)
假如你是李华，你的朋友小强最近在学习时注意力难以集中，学习效果不佳，感觉压力很大。请你给他写一封信对他表示关心，结合自身或他人的经历谈谈你对压力的看法，并给他提供一些缓解学习压力的方法，帮助他放松身心、提高学习效率。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。
The following is for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考)
☺ under stress
☺ take an active part in…
☺ try to relax and enjoy…
Dear Xiao Qiang,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Xiao Qiang,
I am sorry to hear that you have difficulty concentrating on his study recently, the learning effect is poor, and you feel stressed. In fact, don’t worry, everyone will be under pressure. Proper pressure is helpful to do our study well. However, too much pressure is harmful to our health and study.
I was in the same situation as you. You can take an active part in sports. When you feel upset, you should try to relax and enjoy your favorite music. I believe that if you do this, you will get better and you will make a big progress in your study.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本题是一篇书信作文，给小强写一封信，结合自身或他人的经历谈谈你对压力的看法，并给出一些缓解学习压力的方法。
2.写作指导：本文以第一人称和第三人称为主；时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；在写作时要确保内容完整，要点全面，行文连贯，流畅、通顺，适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，和复合句。语言结构要符合语法习惯，保证单词拼写和标点使用正确。
14．（2022·上海静安·一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情景写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
新学期带来了新变化。“双减”新规（The new rules）提出：减轻义务教育阶段学生过重作业负担和校外培训负担。“双减”后，你的生活有了什么变化？请给学校的校长（Headmaster）写一封信，从课后作业、学校活动和业余生活三方面谈谈你是否满意现在的变化以及还有何烦恼，并请对方给你的烦恼提些建议。
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【答案】例文
Dear Headmaster,
I’m writing to tell you the changes in my life after the new rules.
In the past, I spent lots of time doing my homework and there were many after-school classes on weekends. Now I have less homework and there are more activities at school, including many kinds of club activities. So, my life is much more colorful. In my free time, I like going to the museum to learn about history. Besides, I plan to study computer science by myself.
I am pleased with my life after the new rules. But sometimes, I have trouble controlling myself. I can’t help playing computer games. Could you please give me some advice on how to improve my self-control so that I can make the best of my time? Thanks so much！
Yours
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封学生写给校长的信，要求谈论“双减”政策出台后自己生活的变化以及遇到的烦恼，并请校长提出建议来解决烦恼。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称进行写作，重点描述现在的生活，因此时态主要用一般现在时。可分为三段：第一段说明写信目的；第二段描述“双减”后生活的变化；第三段陈述遇到的烦恼并请求对方的建议。写作时，注意条理清晰，语言连贯，力求无语法和标点错误。