高中英语高考应用文写作分类指导(感谢信)
展开高考英语应用文写作指导(感谢信)【写作模板】 【经典考题】假定你是李华。最近,你刚结束在英国为期一个月的交换学习。学习期间,你和房东Mr.Wilson结下了深厚的友谊。请根据下面的写作提纲,给Mr.Wilson发一封电子邮件。内容包括:1.表示感谢;2.回顾他对你的照顾和帮助;3.邀请他来中国游览。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。[满分范文]DearMr.Wilson,①Howiseverythinggoing?②I'vebeenbackhomenow.③I'mwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyouforyourkindness.④WhileIwasinEngland,yourhelpandkindnessmademystayspecialandenjoyable.⑤HowImissthedayswespenttogether!⑥toyourhelp,Igotusedtothelifestyletheresoon.⑦Istillmissthedeliciousmealsyoupreparedforme.⑧Besides,Ireallyappreciateyourpatiencewhileyouweretalkingwithme.⑨Bypractisingspeakingwithyoueveryday,IgraduallyimprovemyspokenEnglish.⑩Ihopewecankeepintouchwithandcommunicatewitheachotherinthefuture.⑪ItwouldbeagreathonorformetoinviteyoutocometoChinasothatyoucanexperienceChineseculture.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua[阅卷评点]①开篇问候,显现礼貌。③gratitude是高级词汇,体现了作者扎实的语言功底。⑤句中使用了感叹句和定语从句,大大提高了表达难度和写作档次。⑩高级短语keepintouchwith和communicatewith的正确使用为文章锦上添花。⑪本句中it作形式主语,sothat...引导目的状语从句,这显示了作者对复杂句式的运用能力,增加了文章得分的亮点。【增分佳句】1.开头部分常用语:(1)Iamwritingtoexpressmythanksfor...我写这封信是为了表达我对……的谢意。(2)Iwouldliketoconveyinthislettermyheartfeltthankstoyoufor...在信中我要为……向你表达我诚挚的谢意。(3)Onbehalfofmywholefamily,Iwouldliketoextendmysinceregratitudefor...我谨代表我全家对……表示真诚的感激。2.结尾部分常用语:(1)Nothingwillbeabletoeraseourwonderfulmemories;wewillrememberthemforever.没什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆,我们会永远牢记在心。(2)Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!/Thanksagainforyourkindhelp.我再次对你表示衷心的感谢。/对你的热心帮助再次表示感谢。(3)IappreciateitmorethanIcansay./Icanneverthankyouenough.感激之情,无以言表。【热点押题】假定你是李华,目前正在英国做交换生。你的英国朋友Debbie送了你一张苏格兰传统舞蹈——凯利舞(CeilidhDance)舞会票。现在,请给她写一封邮件致谢,并询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。参考范文:DearDebbie,IamdelightedtoreceiveyourticketfortheCeilidhDance.Ireallyfeelgratefulforyourkindnessanditwillsurelymakemyculturalexperienceheremorecolorful.Here,I'dliketoknowsomedetailsaboutthisdance.First,couldyoupleasegivemeabriefintroductiontothisdancesothatIcanknowsomethingaboutitbeforeattendingit?Besides,I'dliketoknowwhetherIneedtobringanythinglikeabagorapresent,andparticularly,whatkindofclothesandshoesI'msupposedtowear,theformalonesorthecasualones?Finally,I'mwonderinghowIcangetthereandavoidbeinglate.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua