中考英语二轮复习作文热点素材+精彩范文热点 03 暑假 (含答案)

热点03 暑假

暑假无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，选择的2021年中考英语写作预测话题是：暑假。

【预测题目】

（一）

你的美国朋友John计划暑假来中国旅游。请你根据以下图示，用英语在QQ中给他留言，介绍并推荐你的家乡福建，词数80左右。

要求：

1.必须包含所有提示信息，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数;

2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓校名及提示信息以外的地名。

Hi，John, I’m glad to hear that you're planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I'd like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit.

Fujian lies________________________________________________________________________________

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I'm looking forward to meeting you!

【答案】

Hi，John, I'm glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I，d like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit,

Fujian lies in the southeast of China with Fuzhou as its capital city. It has a population of over 38 million. Because of the nice environment, it’s known as Refreshing Fujian, which attracts millions of tourists from home and abroad. If you come, you can enjoy fresh air, blue sky as well as beautiful mountains and clear rivers. Many famous places of interest like Mount Wuyi and Gulang Island are well worth visiting. Besides，you can taste various kinds of delicious food.

I'm looking forward to meeting you!

【解析】

这是一篇看图作文。根据图示可知主要介绍福建省的位置，省会城市，人口，名胜，环境及其他的相关内容。根据内容可知主要采用一般现在时态，注意主谓一致性。在组成文章时注意语言的逻辑性，词汇要合适丰富。这篇短文内容涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了一般现在时，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时，文章中高分作文比较多，如：Because of the nice environment，it's known as Refreshing Fujian．句中使用短语有："because of  因为"、"be known as  作为…而著名"．If you come，you can enjoy fresh air，blue sky as well as beautiful mountains and clear rivers．句中"If you come"为条件状语从句，增加了文章的亮点。

点睛：1.仔细审题，明确要求。审读所给信息，弄清楚所要表达的内容要点，然后对所给的信息进行梳理，可根据内容要点适当调整写作顺序，使文章行文连贯。

2.列全要点，即提纲要点化，然后写作成文。此时我们就必须在大脑中将各种信息点补充完整，适时使用高级词汇和复杂句式。要根据提示将要点表达清楚，使文章的内容完整、饱满、要点齐全，注意适当增加细节。同时注意句子与句子之间，段落与段落之间要有合理的过渡衔接。

3.检查核实，确保无误。

（二）

随着新学期的到来，暑假已经结束。相信在这个刚刚过去的暑假当中，一定会有很多事情让你印象深刻。请以" One of _____ Events in My Summer Holiday"为题，完成作文。

1.把作文题目补充完整；

2.介绍一件在暑假里发生的事件；

3.事件给你带来怎样的感受。

要求：1. 不少于100词；2.短文要包括所有提示要点，可适当发挥。

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【答案】

One of the Funny Events in My Summer Holiday

This summer vacation, my parents and I went to the countryside to see my grandparents. We stayed there for a week. The air there was fresh. There was a big farm in Grandpa's house. There were many sheep and pigs there. I helped grandma feed chickens every day. There was a river near our home. Grandpa often took me to go fishing. That day, We waited patiently for an hour and fell into a small fish. Grandpa said that he would go back to stew fish for me in the evening. Grandpa put the fish in the basin of the yard, and we went to the room to chat. When we came out, we found that the fish was missing. We saw the cat eating the rest of the fish tail. What a funny thing!

【解析】

1.题干解读：这是一篇命题作文，需要把题目补充完整。随着新学期的到来，暑假已经结束。相信在这个刚刚过去的暑假当中，一定会有很多事情让你印象深刻。文中必须包括：1.把作文题目补充完整；2.介绍一件在暑假里发生的事件；3.事件给你带来怎样的感受。

2.例文点评：本文属于命题作文，本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。这篇短文主要用第一人称，用一般过去时态进行叙述，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能脱离题目要求。

3.高分亮点：

短语：for a week；many sheep and pigs；go fishing；go back；the rest of。

句型：we found that the fish was missing.；We saw the cat eating the rest of the fish tail.；What a funny thing!

（一）

假如你是七年级三班的班长，暑假前，老师要求你在班上组织召开关于如何度过暑假的主题班会。请根据提示内容，用英语写一篇短文简述你的计划以及对大家的希望。70词左右。开头已经给出，不计入总数。

Hello, everyone. Summer holiday will come.

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Hello, everyone! Summer holiday will come. I plan to spend 3 hours reading or doing homework every day. And I will help my parents do some housework. To keep fit, I will play volleyball with my friends in the afternoon. I will get up early every morning and have an egg and some milk for breakfast. It helps me start the day well.

I hope we can make plans. Don’t always play computer games or watch TV during the holiday.

【解析】

本文叙述的是暑假的计划，所以句子的谓语动词用一般将来时，句子的主语用第一人称，要注意不要遗漏要点，注意上下文的衔接。短文用了一些短语和句式，如：plan to sth计划做某事；spend...in doing sth花费时间做某事；help sb do sth帮助某人做某事；get up起床；watch TV看电视。I hope we can make plans.这个句子用了宾语从句，增加了文章的亮点。

点睛：在写作中，首先，要根据试题里的“提示”确定一个写作中心，再根据这个中心，列出写作提纲，提纲一定要包含所提供的情景要点，同时要尽量使用自己熟悉的词汇与句型。然后，用自己熟悉的词汇与句型扩展成篇。自己不熟悉的词汇与句型能换则换，一定不要用，以免用错扣分。扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题。千万不要写那些与主题无关的内容。扩展时要注意短文的字数，要写够要求的字数，以避免由于字数不够引起的扣分。也不要扩展得太多，字数达到要求既可，以免浪费时间或出现更多的错误而扣分。

（二）

暑假即将来临,对于如何安排孩子初中毕业后的第一个假期,家长们和孩子自己有着各自的想法。根据下表提示,写一篇英语短文,描述他们的不同看法,同时发表你自己对暑假安排的观点。

【注意】

(1)表格中的观点仅供参考,允许适当发挥;

(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数;

(3)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息;

(4)词数:不少于80。

How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.

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【答案】

How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.

Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it's important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.

In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It's good for us to do some sports.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般现在时态进行叙述．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．

【点睛】

这篇短文用到了一些好的句型：They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.这些给文章增色不少。

（三）

暑假快到了，同学们都在议论着假期的计划。请根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍几位同学和你自己的想法。

注意：1.词数80字左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

Many of my classmates are discussing the summer vocation plans. Anna

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The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. Some are in favor of staying at home. Anna want to do voluntary work for the old. She would like to make new friends.Peter thinks it is better to travel  in order to relax himself and learn about culture there.However,  he will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.Kelly would like to visit his grandma in the hometown.He also wants to cook himself.

In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.

【解析】

这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如have a discussion，what to do，during the holiday，in favor of，would like to do，in order to，In my opinion，stay at home，such as等。而Peter thinks it is better to travel in order to relax himself and learn about culture there./ In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home for I can do what I like / I will be happy if I can be a member of your club.等多种从句结构的运用更是为文章增色不少。

点睛：这是一篇材料作文。根据提示内容可知用一般将来时，按照提示内容逐条翻译成英文，同时进行适当的发挥。

（四）

同学们即将告别紧张而忙碌的初三，迎来两个月的暑假。是不是有一点点小激动？《盐城晚报》教育专刊将进行征文比赛，请您畅谈暑假计划。请根据所给提示以“My Plan for This Summer Holiday”为题，用英语写一篇短文参加比赛。

注意：

1、词数：100词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）；

2、文中不能出现真实校名、姓名等信息；

3、文章必须包括表格所提供的信息, 并适当发挥, 注意行文连贯, 书写规范。

My Plan for This Summer Holiday

Grade Three will be over soon. The summer holiday is coming. I think many of us feel very excited about it. Here is my plan for holiday.

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I hope that all of us will have a good time during this summer holiday.

【答案】

My Plan for This Summer Holiday

Grade Three will be over soon. The summer holiday is coming. I think many of us feel very excited about it. Here is my plan for holiday. I will do exercise every day in order to keep healthy. I will want to travel anywhere interesting to keep relaxed. I will read a lot every morning. I will play basketball with my friends in the morning. I hope that all of us will have a good time during this summer holiday.

【解析】

【亮点说明】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如be over soon，be coming，many of us，do exercise，every day，in order to，keep healthy，play basketball，in the morning，have a good time，during this summer holiday等。而I think many of us feel very excited about it./ I hope that all of us will have a good time during this summer holiday.等宾语从句的运用更是为文章增色不少。

【点睛】这是一篇提纲作文。根据提示内容可知用一般将来时，按照提示要求逐条发挥，最后连接成一篇通顺的短文。

They tried to make me feel at home.；With my friends’ help, I learned a lot. I really appreciate them

I am quite good at English and I can always get good marks in the exam, but I know clearly that it’s far from enough especially when I have no chance to communicate with English speakers at school.

And I am really concerned about the accommodation----will I live in the dormitory or with host families?

I’d appreciate it if you take my application into consideration and I am looking forward to your reply.

We went to Beigaofeng, which is located in the east of our city.

Beigaofeng was not very far, so we went there on the school bus.

In the end we got to the top of it and had lunch there.；Although we were tired, we were excited.。

I think many of us feel very excited about it.

I hope that all of us will have a good time during this summer holiday.

In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home for I can do what I like

I will be happy if I can be a member of your club.

They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree.

They think it's time to take a good rest.

They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.

What a funny thing!

（一）

假如你是Tom，去年暑假你们一家举行了一次外出游玩活动，请根据表格内容写一篇英语日记。要求:

1、文章必须包含表格中的内容，可适当发挥。

2、文中不得出现真实姓名。

3、字数不少于70词，开头部分已给出，不计入总次数。

Last summer vacation, our family went our for a trip.

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【答案】

Last summer vacation, our family went out for a trip. We went to Beigaofeng, which is located in the east of our city. It was sunny that day. Beigaofeng was not very far, so we went there on the school bus. It took us 30 minutes to get there. There were many people. We began climbing the mountain and we took photos along the way. The scene is very beautiful with many trees and grass. The air is fresh, too. In the end we got to the top of it and had lunch there. We had a good time. Then we started to go down the hill. Although we were tired, we were excited.

【解析】

1. 题干解读：这个题目要求写一篇日记，记叙去年暑假和家人一起去游玩的事情。题目中利用表格的形式列出了写作的要点，包括这次旅行的具体信息，学生们应在文章中将这些信息有序组织起来，并补充一些细节，使文章内容更加充实，然后用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知，短文应以一般过去时为主，第一人称来叙述。

2. 例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容包含了表格中的所有信息，并对细节进行拓展，丰富了文章内容。文章按照事情发展过程记叙，叙述清晰、条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章使用了一般过去时和一般现在时，记叙这次经历用了一般过去时，而事实主要用了一般现在时。语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯，文章中使用了简单句、并列句和状语从句，表达流畅，意思连贯。

3. 高分亮点：

短语：be located in；take photos；the top of；have a good time；go down。

句型：We went to Beigaofeng, which is located in the east of our city.；Beigaofeng was not very far, so we went there on the school bus.；In the end we got to the top of it and had lunch there.；Although we were tired, we were excited.。

（二）

某英语杂志社刊登广告，组织中学生利用暑假时间去美国进行为期两周的夏令营（summercamp）活动，假如你是中学生李华，想报名参加，请你根据以下要点写一封邮件。

你想参加夏令营的原因；

你的英语水平；

咨询住宿（accommodation）条件及费用

注意：1. 字数在100字左右；

可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

开头语已给出，不计入总次数。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I noticed your advertisement that you would organize a summer camp in America during the summer holiday.

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Sincerely

yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I noticed your advertisement that you would organize a summer camp in America during the summer holiday. I am writing to apply for admission.

I am quite good at English and I can always get good marks in the exam, but I know clearly that it’s far from enough especially when I have no chance to communicate with English speakers at school.

And this winter camp will be an excellent opportunity for me to talk with native speakers as well as know the western culture better. By the way, how much should I pay for the camp? And I am really concerned about the accommodation----will I live in the dormitory or with host families?

I’d appreciate it if you take my application into consideration and I am looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely

yours,

 Li Hua

【解析】

这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给杂志社写信，说明自己想要参加去美国的一个夏令营，作文内容包括：想去参加夏令营的原因、你的英语水平、咨询一下住宿条件及费用等。通过审题可知，这是一篇半开放的作文，题目中只给出了大概的提纲，里面的具体内容需要学生们自己组织语言来完成，这一点对于学生们来说是一个难点。写作时，还需要注意语言的得体性，要有礼貌，符合题目设置的情境。还应注意英语句子表述和汉语的不同以及语法的准确性。在短文里，还应使用一些好的句型和短语，使整篇文章表达流畅、连贯。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文，首先这篇短文内容完整，要点全面，层次清楚。短文主要分成三个部分，第一段是点明自己写信的目的；接下来解释了自己想要参加夏令营的原因和自己想要了解的一些信息；最后重申了自己的希望，盼望能收到回复。其次短文使用了正确的人称和时态，语气委婉得体，符合文章的情境。最后短文里使用了一些好的句型，如I am quite good at English and I can always get good marks in the exam, but I know clearly that it’s far from enough especially when I have no chance to communicate with English speakers at school.、And I am really concerned about the accommodation----will I live in the dormitory or with host families?、I’d appreciate it if you take my application into consideration and I am looking forward to your reply.等。

（三）

假如你是Laura，最近在英格兰参加暑假课程，请你写一封回信给Linda，介绍你在英格兰的学习生活情况。内容如下：

1. 介绍你目前的情况（如学习、生活情况和周末的活动等）；

2. 谈谈你的收获和感受。

作文要求：

1. 不能照抄原文；

2. 不得在作文中出现学校真实姓名和学生的真实姓名;

3. 语句连贯，词数80个左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Linda,

It’s nice to hear from you. I am writing to tell you about my summer course in England recently.

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Please write to me and tell me more about your learning experience.

Best wishes,

Yours,

Laura

【答案】

Dear Linda,

It's nice to hear from you. I am writing to tell you about my summer course in England recently. I'm having a good time here. The students here are very friendly to me. They always help me. My spoken English has improved a lot.

My host family is really good. They tried to make me feel at home. They made my favorite food. They took me to the movies at weekends.

My biggest challenge is to learn how I can behave well at the table. I don’t know how to use knives and forks. With my friends’ help, I learned a lot. I really appreciate them.

Please write to me and tell me more about your learning experience.

    Best wishes,

Yours,

Laura

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，题目要求写一封回信给Linda，介绍你在英格兰的学习生活情况。要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；根据题目要求可知，本文应以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态为一般现在时和一般过去时态。

2.例文点评：文章分为三部分，第一段介绍自己的学习情况；第二段介绍自己的生活情况。第三段介绍了自己的收获很感受。全文要点明确，结构严谨，使用了正确的时态人称，语言简洁大方，使读者一目了然。

3.高分亮点：

短语：have a good time；be friendly to；spoken English；at weekends. make me feel at home.；with their help。

句型：They tried to make me feel at home.；With my friends’ help, I learned a lot. I really appreciate them

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快乐轻松的暑假就要来临，尤其是对于即将毕业的初三学生来说，假期更显漫长，大部分学生假期里过多地看电视、玩电脑、睡觉等，让假期过得散漫之极，初中的最后一个暑假，也是高中前的一个休整时期，你打算怎么过得充实又有意义？请以“My summer holiday”为题，根据以下提示介绍下自己的暑假计划。

要求：1．内容应该包括以上提示，可适当发挥。

2．条理清楚，语句通顺, 语法正确，书写规范。

3．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。

4．80词左右,开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

My Summer Vacation

The summer vacation is coming. What are you going to do during the vacation? I am going to …

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I am sure I am going to have an interesting and meaningful summer vacation.

【答案】

My Summer Vacation

The summer vacation is coming. What are you going to do during the vacation? I am going to plan a healthy liftstyle. I will get up and go to bed early.  I will eat healthy food. Also I will watch TV or play computer for only an hour. These are good for my health.

Then I plan to read four great books to improve myself. After that I am going to play the guitar because I like it very much.

As for sports , I will run , ride a bike or swim and so on . I hope to be in good health. And I'll travel to Beijing with my parents for two weeks. Also, I want to be a volunteer to serve in the volleyball games in Tai'an. Of course, I would like to help my parents do some cooking, washing and so on.

I am sure I am going to have an interesting and meaningful summer vacation.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料的表格作文。在写作中注意抓住“充实又有意义”来描写。本文所给材料比较详细。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般将来时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语。如：As for sports , Of course, I would like to help my parents do some cooking, washing and so on.  Then I plan to read four great books to improve myself.等等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。