高中外研版 (2019)Unit 1 A new start一等奖ppt课件

Period Five　Writing—Writing a journal entry

 本单元的作文是写一篇英语日记，英语日记一般记录一天发生的事件或自己感受最深的事，可分为记事、议论、描写、抒情等。写英语日记要注意下面几点：

一、格式

日记由书端和正文组成。书端指写日记的星期、日期和天气，顶格写在左上角，先写星期，然后写日期，最后再写天气。(例如：Tuesday　February 26th,2019　Sunny)

二、时态

谓语动词多用一般过去时态，但是要根据具体情况使用其他时态。

三、写正文时应注意的问题

1.围绕一个主题来展开。

2.若无法用已学语言知识来表达某种意思，可采用“同义转换法”。

3.结尾最好用一句话来总结自己的感想或体会。

1.Today，I found something strange with...

2.I just want to share...

3.That’s what I saw on the newspaper.

4.In my opinion，nowadays，...

5.I think there are some reasons contributing to this phenomenon.

6.Firstly，...Secondly，...Last but not least...

假设你是李华，今天(星期三，3月20日，晴)在公园散步时遇到一个外国人来旅游。你和他进行了交流。请围绕这个事情写一篇英语日记。要点如下：

1.想跟他谈话却不知所措。

2.你向他介绍你的城市。

3.他向你提供了一些学习英语的建议。

注意：

 1.词数80左右；

 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

审题

写作要求是介绍自己在公园爬山时偶遇一外国人，想与之交谈，练练自己的英语口语。写作时应注意下面几点：

1.确定文体：这是一篇日记。写作时注意日记的格式。

2.主体时态：文章应以一般过去时为主。

3.主体人称：由于是日记，所以人称应该以第一人称为主。

谋篇

第一段：开门见山，简介自己在公园偶遇一外国人。

第二段：具体介绍两人交谈的情况。

第三段：进行评论和总结。

必备词汇

1.散步take a walk

2.紧张的nervous

3.谈话；交谈conversation

4.鼓励encourage

5.建议advice

6.经历experience

关键句式

1.今天早晨我在公园散步。

This morning I was taking a walk in the park.

2.我看见一个外国人。

I saw a foreigner.

3.他正在欣赏公园的美景。

He was enjoying the beauty of the park.

4.我很兴奋也很紧张。

I was so excited and nervous.

5.我不知道做什么也不知道怎么开始谈话。

I didn’t know what to do and how to start a conversation.

6.我渴望练习英语口语。

I was eager to practise my spoken English.

7.我鼓励自己走过去向他问好。

I encouraged myself and went to say hello to him.

句式升级

1.用when引导的时间状语从句和分词作宾补把第1、2和3句话合成一个句子。

This morning when I was taking a walk in the park，I saw a foreigner enjoying the beauty of the park.

2.用so...that...把第4和第5句话合成一句话。

I was so excited and nervous that I didn’t know what to do and how to start a conversation.

3.用形容词作状语把第6和第7句话合成一句话。

Eager to practise my spoken English，I encouraged myself and went to say hello to him.

用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。

参考范文

Wednesday March 20,2019Fine

This morning when I was taking a walk in the park，I saw a foreigner enjoying the beauty of the park.I was so excited and nervous that I didn’t know what to do and how to start a conversation，though I did well in English classes.

Eager to practise my spoken English，I encouraged myself and went to say hello to him.He was very friendly and we talked for about 15 minutes.As a native，I introduced some tourist attractions and tasty food to him.Finally，he gave me some advice on how to further improve my English.

It was more than an experience!