高中外研版 (2019)Unit 3 Family matters获奖课件ppt

Period Five　Writing—Writing about a family memory

 本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于家庭记忆的日记。日记属于记叙文性质的应用文，是用来叙述一天中发生的有意义的事件的文体。日记没有标准的格式，写法灵活多样，只需把自己看到的、听到的、想到的事物记录下来，形成一篇文章即可，可以记事、描写、抒情，也可以议论。日记正文的左上方写明日期、星期，正文的右上角写明天气情况。正文具体描述事件发生的起因、经过和结果，常用第一人称，多用一般过去时。描写景物或对某一事物发表见解时可用一般现在时。

1.内容安排

(1)交代所涉及事情的时间和地点；

(2)具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果；

(3)对事件的分析和自己的感受。

2.语言特征

(1)遵循真实性原则，客观描述；

(2)简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。

3.在写作过程中要注意人称的变化和时态的正确运用。描写事情的时间和地点、事件发生的原因、经过和结果常用一般过去时；而对事件的分析和自己的感受常用一般现在时。

1.Today is...

2.In the morning，my parents and I...

3.There is no doubt that...

4.We decided to...

5.What a happy day it was!

6.How wonderful a day it was!

7.We all enjoyed ourselves.

8.I learned from the experience that...

9.I feel that...

10.It is certain that...

 假如今天是2019年3月15日，星期五，天气晴朗。你去参加了朋友David的生日聚会，请你在日记中记录这件事。

注意：1.词数80左右；

 2.开头和格式已给出，不计入总词数。

审题

本题要求写一篇日记，写作时应注意下面几点：

1.确定文体：这是一篇应用文。

2.主体时态：一般过去时。

3.主体人称：第一人称。

谋篇

第一段：介绍这次聚会的时间、地点以及参加人员。

第二段：详细介绍聚会的过程。

第三段：写自己的感受。

必备词汇

1.邀请某人做某事invite sb.to do sth.

2.热情迎接某人give sb.a warm welcome

3.由于，因为as a result of

关键句式

1.放学之后，我带着礼物骑车到了大卫家。大卫和他的父母热情地迎接了我。

After school，I arrived at David’s home by bike with a present.David and his parents gave me a warm welcome.

2.在聚会上，使我印象最深的是大卫的幸福家庭。

During the party，David’s happy family impressed me most.

3.此外，轻柔的音乐和烛光营造了美好温馨的氛围，因此，我能够像对待兄弟姐妹一样，向他其他的友好活跃的朋友们敞开心扉。

Besides，the light music and candle light created a nice and warm atmosphere.As a result of that I was able to open my heart to his other friendly and active friends like brothers and sisters.

句式升级

1.用定语从句改写第一句话。

After school，I arrived at David’s home by bike with a present，where David and his parents gave me a warm welcome.

2.用主语从句改写第二句话。

During the party，what impressed me most was David’s happy family.

3.用定语从句改写第三句话。

Besides，the light music and candle light created a nice and warm atmosphere，as a result of which I was able to open my heart to his other friendly and active friends like brothers and sisters.

 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。

参考范文

March 15,2019　Friday             Sunny

 Today is my best friend David’s birthday，and I，together with his other friends，was invited to his birthday party held in his home.

After school，I arrived at David’s home by bike with a present，where David and his parents gave me a warm welcome.During the party，what impressed me most was David’s happy family.Besides，the light music and candle light created a nice and warm atmosphere，as a result of which I was able to open my heart to his other friendly and active friends like brothers and sisters.

It was a wonderful party and the unforgettable experience will be stored in my mind forever.