英语选择性必修 第三册Unit 3 War and peace评优课课件ppt

Period Five　Writing—Writing a figure introduction

写作指导

人物介绍是一种以写人记事为主的文体。写人时主要交代某人的生平。对人物的生平及事迹介绍一般以事情发生的先后为顺序，一般包含：出生及童年；兴趣与事业；苦干与成功；成就与影响。应注意以下几点：

1．突出重点、略加点评：一个人一生所做的事情很多，要抓住他的主要活动和事迹来写，不要在一些次要方面多花笔墨。在人物简介中，要对人物作简短的评论。点评可放在开头，也可放在中间或末尾。这种点评必须简洁明了，一语道破。

2．叙述精炼、防止渲染：人物简介，即使是介绍人物的重要活动和事迹，也必须高度精炼。

3．传记指的是全面而真实地记载个人生平事迹的文章。务求真实，表述可带主观性；要按照历史年代顺序记事。

常用表达

1．介绍人物的姓名、出身及外貌特征：

(1)He had fair hair and blue eyes.

(2)She is tall and slim with big eyes and curly hair.

(3)Sue was a young woman who was studying art.

(4)He is a good-looking，kind-hearted man.

2．表达人物的爱憎情感：

(1)like very much，love，be interested in...

(2)hate，dislike，be tired of，lose interest in...

(3)happy，excited，pleased，satisfied，angry，sad，worried，disappointed...

3．介绍人物的影响及人们对此人的评价：

(1)He became famous for his new theory.

(2)The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader.

(3)Our biology teacher has been a model teacher for many years.

(4)Our Chinese teacher and maths teacher are both strict with us and kind to us.

(5)Such is our English teacher，a simple person of great achievements.

(6)People spoke highly of him and all respected him.

4．介绍人物的性格和爱好：

(1)Being kind and helpful，she always enjoys helping others out.

(2)In her spare time，she spends lots of time listening to music and reading novels.

(3)She gets on well with almost everyone and is always welcome wherever she goes.

保定市残疾青年医生宁学雷，凭着其过人的医术和高尚的医德为乡邻所敬重。请你根据下列有关提示用英语写一篇报道，简要介绍一下身残志坚的好医生宁学雷。

1．宁学雷出生在河北保定市，1岁患上小儿麻痹症，导致下身瘫痪，疾病的磨难激发了他学医救人的志向。

2．经过多年的刻苦学习，他最终实现了梦想，考入了一所医学院。

3．大学毕业后，他开了一家诊所，边行医边学习，不断提高自己的医术。

4．他医德高尚，不计报酬，始终把治病救人放在首位，因此赢得了人们的尊重。

注意：

1．词数80左右；

2．短文要求包含所有要点，但不必逐条翻译；

3．可以适当发挥，增加细节以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：小儿麻痹症poliomyelitis

审题

1．确定文体：记叙文；

2．主体时态：一般现在时和一般过去时；

3．主体人称：第三人称。

谋篇

第一段：介绍人物的基本信息：出生地、遭遇等；

第二段：重点叙述宁学雷刻苦学习、学医救人的过程；

第三段：对宁学雷的评价。

核心词汇

1．在……岁时at the age of

2．被医学院录取be admitted to a medical college

3．实现梦想realize one’s dream

4．赢得广泛尊重win wide respect

5．尽某人最大努力做某事try one’s best to do sth.

连词成句

1．经过多年的刻苦学习，他终于实现了自己的梦想，考上了医学院。(时间状语从句)

After he had studied hard for many years，he finally realized his dream and was admitted to a medical college.

2．宁学雷是一位高尚的医生，从来没想从病人那里获得回报。

Ning Xuelei is a noble doctor and he never expects rewards from his patients.

3．他把“治病救人”放在首位，难怪他赢得了人们的广泛尊重。(It’s no wonder that...)

He puts “curing the sickness to save the patient” first，and it’s no wonder that he wins wide respect from others.

句式升级

1．把句1改为含有现在分词短语作状语的句子

Having studied hard for many years，he finally realized his dream and was admitted to a medical college.

2．用without把句2改为简单句

Ning Xuelei is a noble doctor without expecting rewards from his patients.

3．把句3改为现在分词短语作结果状语的句子

He puts “curing the sickness to save the patient”first，thus winning wide respect from others.

用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。

参考范文

Ning Xuelei，born in Baoding of Hebei Province，suffered from poliomyelitis at the age of one and never regained the use of his legs.The hardship and sufferings never defeated him but inspired him to study medicine to save people’s lives in the future.

Having studied hard for many years，he finally realized his dream and was admitted to a medical college.After graduating，he started a clinic and began to give medical treatments to people.In the meanwhile，he tries his best to improve his medical skills by learning from other experienced doctors.

Ning Xuelei is a noble doctor without expecting rewards from his patients.In addition，as a doctor，he puts “curing the sickness to save the patient”first，thus winning wide respect from others.