高中外研版 (2019)Unit 6 Nature in words精品课件ppt

Period Five　Writing—Creative writing：poems review

写作指导

本单元要求学生根据自己所熟悉的古诗，用英语写出其大意，并说明诗中所蕴含的作者的思想。首先应该很好地理解诗歌的寓意，抓住诗歌的主题，围绕诗歌中描述的具体细节进行有重点的写作。其次在确定主题后，要适当运用一些高级词汇和复杂句式，以增加文章的亮点。另外要注意不要抄写原诗句，一定要按照词数要求，语义要连贯，结构要完整，句子要通顺。写作步骤一般是“三段式”，具体为：

第一段：简要介绍诗歌的作者及内容。

第二段：详细论述诗歌的主题。

第三段：启迪与感想。

注意：1.改写必须忠实于原作的中心思想。这就要求想象和联想要符合原作精神，不能任意想象，写得漫无边际。

2．改写要注意创作性。改写是再创作的过程。改写并不是单纯地翻译诗歌，不能仅就诗歌的内容进行简单的扩充，而是要进一步展开种种想象，使人物形象有血有肉，栩栩如生，使故事情节更加完整生动。

3．改写时可以插入丰富的想象，将原来诗中没有的东西，如人物的表情、动作、语言、神态和行为等都加进去，在不改变原作主题思想的基础上，写成一篇完整的文章。

总之，诗歌改写应该把握原文的主题，用通俗易懂的语言进行创作，加入自己的语言，使文章符合主题，流畅易懂。

常用表达

1．开头常用句式——介绍诗歌及作者

Here is a poem entitled “...” by...，which enjoys great popularity among readers.

2．主体常用句式

(1)Young as we are，we come to realize that as long as we try，nothing is impossible.

(2)She often encourages me to face everything，sad or happy.

(3)Remember，the best love is to love others unconditionally rather than make demands on them.

3．结尾常用句式

(1)I’m deeply moved by the above poem reminding us of the importance of trying to seize every chance to do what we should before it’s too late in our life.

(2)We should call on people all over the world to change our living ways before all hopes have gone.

请根据唐朝诗人李绅的《悯农》，用英语写出这首诗的大意，并说明诗中所蕴含的作者的思想，以便向你的外国朋友解释。

Sympathy on the Farmers

At noon，farmers are weeding，

Down the field，sweat is dropping.

Who knows rice on a dish，

Every grain is full of moiling.

注意：

1．不得照抄短诗原文；

2．必须结合短诗的内容，发挥想象，适当展开；

3．必须突出短诗的主题，结构完整，语义连贯；

4．短文不能写成诗歌形式；

5．词数80左右。

审题

写作要求是用英语解释一首中国诗歌的含义，也就是改写诗歌。写作时应注意下面几点：

1．确定文体：这是一篇记叙文。写作时注意记叙文的写作特点。

2．主体时态：文章应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。

3．主体人称：由于是解释一首诗歌，所以人称应该以第三人称为主。

谋篇

本文可以分为三个部分。

第一部分：介绍诗歌的作者：李绅；时代：唐朝；地位：深受欢迎。

第二部分：介绍诗歌所表达的内容。

第三部分：诗歌的写作意图及现实意义。

核心词汇

1．受欢迎be popular with

2．掉到土里fall into the soil

3．美味的delicious

4．来自come from

5．提醒某人……remind sb.of...

连词成句

1．这是李绅的一首诗，名叫《悯农》。

Here is a poem by Li Shen and it is titled “Sympathy on the Farmers”．

2．李绅很受中国读者欢迎。

Li Shen is popular with Chinese readers.

3．夏日正午时刻，外面天气炎热；农民依然在地里除草。

It is so hot outside at this summer noon time.The farmers are still weeding in the fields.

4．他们全身湿透，汗水频繁地掉在庄稼生长的土地上。

They are wet all over and their sweat is frequently falling into the soil.The crops grow there.

5．我认为对今天的年轻一代来说，理解这首诗歌并珍惜每粒粮食是很重要的。

I think it’s very important for the young generation today to understand the poem and treasure every grain.

句式升级

1．用过去分词作后置定语改写句1，并与句2合成一句带有定语从句的话

Here is a poem titled “Sympathy on the Farmers” by Li Shen who is popular with Chinese readers.

2．用as引导的倒装句改写句3

Hot as it is outside at this summer noon time，the farmers are still weeding in the fields.

3．用with的复合结构和where 引导的定语从句改写句4

They are wet all over with their sweat frequently falling into the soil，where the crops grow.

4．用“it is of＋抽象名词＋主语从句”结构改写句5

I think it’s of great importance that the young generation today should understand the poem and treasure every grain.

用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。

参考范文

Here is a poem titled “Sympathy on the Farmers” by Li Shen who is popular with Chinese readers.

It goes like this：Hot as it is outside at this summer noon time，the farmers are still weeding in the fields.They are wet all over with their sweat frequently falling into the soil，where the crops grow.But who knows exactly all our foods，the delicious dishes on our table，come from the hard work of the farmers?

Li Shen wrote this poem in order to remind people of the importance of the farmers’ hard work.I think it’s of great importance that the young generation today should understand the poem and treasure every grain.