（新高考适用）2023版高考英语二轮总复习 第3部分 写作技能升华篇 专题2 读后续写 第2讲 微观把握　突破读后续写 技法三　打造读后续写的龙头凤尾课件PPT

这是一份（新高考适用）2023版高考英语二轮总复习 第3部分 写作技能升华篇 专题2 读后续写 第2讲 微观把握　突破读后续写 技法三　打造读后续写的龙头凤尾课件PPT，共12页。PPT课件主要包含了专题二　读后续写等内容，欢迎下载使用。

第2讲　微观把握　突破读后续写
技法三　打造读后续写的龙头凤尾
技法点拨一、高分开头如何写好读后续写，在高考中博取阅卷老师的眼球，获得梦寐以求的高分？如何让学生的作品在高考中脱颖而出？这是很多老师和学生一直不懈努力的课题。一个好的故事开头就好比是一个香味十足的诱饵，诱使读者上钩并且饶有趣味地读完。而一个拙劣的故事开头，一定会让读者大倒胃口，昏昏欲睡。
妙招1　巧用形容词/副词(短语)①Happily and excitedly, they went t the supermarket fr what they needed.②Exhausted and hungry, I wndered if we culd find ur way back.妙招2　巧用分词(短语)Seeing the mess in the kitchen, he immediately understd what had happened, but he wasnʼt upset.
妙招3　巧用高级句式①I was stuck fr five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger.My brther came up with an idea that he culd cut the pumpkin with a knife.(同位语从句)②At the very mment, the helicpter arrived.It hvered ver the camp, causing strng wind that blew the bear unsteady n his feet.(非谓语动词＋定语从句)
妙招4　巧用倒装结构Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared.Hardly had the little dg cme ut when Pppy came ver t lick it as if it were a lng-lst friend.妙招5　巧用强调句结构That vide was psted the day befre Hallween.It was my brther wh did that fr amusement.
二、漂亮结尾5法读后续写不能虎头蛇尾，在篇末也要用心设计。由于文章的故事性、情节性强，所以续写的结尾可以是自然的升华议论，亦可以是其他方式结尾。常见的结尾方式有画面定格、对话收尾、主题升华、结尾留白和首尾呼应等。
妙招1　画面定格法(1)人物动作的画面定格Slwly, almst reluctantly, she placed her arm with apparently unaccustmed affectin arund her mtherʼs shulders and gently guided her back int the crwd.慢慢地，几乎是不情愿地，她用胳膊搂住母亲的肩膀，带着明显不习惯的慈爱，轻轻地领着她回到人群中。
(2)特殊寓意的写景画面Lking up, I saw the sun shine brighter than I ever knew befre.抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。妙招2　对话收尾法When asked hw the reunin with his father will change his life, Chester said, “I gt family everywhere, s it might lead t many mre trips nw.”当被问及与父亲团聚将如何改变他的生活时，切斯特说：“我到处都有家人，所以现在可能会导致更多的旅行。”
妙招3　主题升华法As a prverb says, “Every cin has tw sides.” Making full use f yur strength is yur achievement.Please remember that in n case will yu give up especially in truble.Gd is fair t everyne.正如谚语所说，“事物都有两面性。”充分利用你的力量就是你的成就。请记住，无论如何你都不要放弃，尤其是在麻烦中。上帝对每个人都是公平的。(借用名言警句来升华主题)
妙招4　结尾留白法“Wuld yu be interested in jining me in a bite t eat？”I asked.“Iʼd lve t，” she replied, her eyes sparkling like diamnds. And, this was the beginning f the end t my mnths f heartbreak fllwing Betsyʼs death.“你有兴趣和我一起吃点东西吗？”我问道。“我很乐意去，”她回答，眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光。这是我在贝特西死后几个月的心碎终于开始慢慢愈合。(故事结尾留白，给予读者想象空间)