（新高考适用）2023版高考英语二轮总复习 第3部分 写作技能升华篇 专题2 读后续写 第2讲 微观把握　突破读后续写 技法四　营造续写故事的高潮课件PPT

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第2讲　微观把握　突破读后续写
技法四　营造续写故事的高潮
技法点拨故事中的高潮是指故事达到最紧张或扣人心弦的那一部分。高潮有时候是剧情中的“危机”点。有时候，它只是达到了关键时刻或者转折点，发生了一些事情，或者主角必须做出决定，从而导致一个结果。妙招1　增加外部冲突增加外部冲突是一种明显有效的可以达到故事高潮的方式。
(1)角色之间的冲突On the furth r fifth night, we had truble finding a htel with a vacancy.After driving in vain fr time, Mm suddenly gt a great idea: Why didnʼt we find a huse with a likely-lking backyard and ask if we culd set up a tent there? David and I became nervus.【解析】　开车找旅馆→徒劳无功→母亲建议在他人的后院搭帐篷→David和“我”倍感紧张，心有不悦(母子的观点不一)
(2)随时间的发展，决策变得紧急The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him.“Get int the car！” Paul shuted at Mac.Mac jumped ff the bike and slid int the car withut delay as the wlf was just tw steps away and was abut t tear Mac int pieces.What a narrw escape!【解析】　汽车突停面前→急喊上车→Mac 上车避险→饿狼近在咫尺(此情此景，刻不容缓)
(3) 使用环境描写增加不确定性充分利用环境描写可以起到烘托故事高潮的作用。当故事角色在碰到困难的时候，我们往往要加大笔墨来描写故事环境的黑暗、恐怖和不祥。强化环境描写可以增强高潮元素，使读者感受到紧张倍增。Immediately, an abslute darkness ruled the frest.(黑暗)Even wrse, the temperature suddenly drpped dramatically.(寒冷)It didnʼt take lng fr the frest t be envelped in darkness.(黑暗)Her rasping breath steamed in the mnlight and her thrat was parched frm thirst.(寒冷)
(4) 由于增加的障碍，人物角色必须克服挑战，以达到他们的目标But befre we jumped ff the hrses, we fund that we had been ff the beaten track and gt lst.We had n idea where we were and it gt dark.Exhausted and hungry, I wndered if we culd find ur way back.【解析】　草原迷路(障碍1)——天色渐黑(障碍2)——又累又饿(障碍3)——心理恐慌(障碍4)
妙招2　放大内心冲突放大内心冲突(文中角色的内心斗争)也有助于建立一个高度紧张和不确定的时刻。But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again.Jane was s tired, hungry, and extremely frightened.She thught t herself, “If nly I had nt quarrelled with Tm.Where is Tm? He must have made the emergency call.What I need is enugh curage.If I cntinue my spirits tmrrw, I will be likely t guide the helicpter.” Lying beside the stream, she fell asleep very sn.Suddenly, she heard the shuts f tigers, which made her scared t death.After she held her breath fr a few minutes, everything was quiet again.In the terrible darkness, she slept again.