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压轴题22 书面表达（三）应用类

题型/考向一：邮件、书信
题型/考向二：日记、讲稿
题型/考向三: 便条、通知

普通书信模板
Dear ，（称呼）
①Haven't seen you for ages. Glad to hear from you.
②I'm writing to .（写作意图）Firstly, .（做法一）Secondly, .（做法二）Thirdly, （做法三）Fourthly, （做法四）。
③Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua

倡议书模板
Dear schoolmates,
①It is known to us all that .Let's do something to .（倡议内容）
②Here are some suggestions.Firstly,we should .（做法一）Secondly,we should .（做法二）Thirdly,we hope that （做法三）Fourthly,we should .（做法四）
③It is my hope that .（结果）
（落款）

通知模板
万能模板1 书面通知
Notice
All the students,
①There is going to be （事件）at （地点）on （时间）。／We are having a(n) （事件）at （地点）on （时间）。It will begin at （具体时间）。Everyone can .You can （可以进行的活动）。
②Welcome to take part in on time./Please come on time.
Thanks.
（落款）
（时间）

万能模板2 口头通知
Announcement
Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen,
①May I have your attention,please?②Now I've got a piece of good news to tell you. We're going to （事件）We'll walk/ride/.go by bus to （交通方式）It's about away from .
（距离）As we'll be away for the whole day, please remember the following things. .The most important thing is （注意事项）I think we'll .
③That's all. Thanks for your attention.


日记模板
Day of the week, Date Weather
①Today is .I did some meaningful things .
②In the morning,I_ .（事件一）In the afternoon,I （事件二）After that,I .（事件三）
③What a warm and meaningful day! I will never forget the memorable day!/Although I was very tired, I felt very happy because .

演讲稿模板
Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen,
①Good morning/afternoon/evening.I am .（自我介绍）It is a great honor for me to make a speech on .(演讲题目）／Thank you for giving me the opportunity to make a speech here. The topic of my speech is .（演讲题目）／I'm very happy to speak here and I'd like to talk about .（演讲题目）
②In my opinion, .First,we should .（做法一）Then,we'd better （做法二）What's more, .（做法三）
③I hope I have made myself understood. That's all,thank you./Thank you for your listening.


1．（2023·河北石家庄·校联考二模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Cici准备来华做交流生。她在学习汉语的过程中觉得汉语特别难懂难学，因此向你写信求助。请你根据以下提示和要求，给她写一封邮件给出你的建议。
提示：
（1）Look up the new words.
（2）Listen to Chinese radio.
（3）Talk with classmates in Chinese.
要求：
（1）邮件须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
（2）邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Cici,
Welcome to China and start your Chinese-learning journey!
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Take it easy, and I do believe everything will get better and better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Cici,
Welcome to China and start your Chinese-learning journey! I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty in studying Chinese.
In fact, Chinese is quite different from Italian. Chinese writing is more interesting than English writing. Don’t worry about your problem, and I’ll give you some advice to help you.
Firstly, you need to prepare a Chinese-English dictionary so that you can look up the new words while learning. Secondly, listening to Chinese radio is a great way to improve your listening. If you talk with your classmates in Chinese, you will make great progress gradually. Practice makes perfect.
Take it easy, and I do believe everything will get better and better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中给出的要点，写电子邮件给Cici一些学习汉语的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇引出话题；
第二步，描述汉语与英语的差别以及学习汉语的建议；
第三步，鼓励对方。
[亮点词汇]
①have difficulty in doing sth. 做某事有困难
②in fact 事实上
③be different from 不同于
④worry about 担心
⑤make great progress 取得巨大进步
⑥take it easy 放轻松
[高分句型]
①I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty in studying Chinese.（that引导宾语从句）
②Don’t worry about your problem, and I’ll give you some advice to help you.（祈使句，and+陈述句）
③Firstly, you need to prepare a Chinese-English dictionary so that you can look up the new words while learning.（so that引导目的状语从句）
④Secondly, listening to Chinese radio is a great way to improve your listening.（动名词作主语）
2．（2023·浙江杭州·统考一模）假如你是李平，以下是你的美国朋友发给你的一封电子邮件，请你根据邮件内容给他回复。
Dear Li Ping, How is everything going? I am going to be in China for a short study project this summer, and I’m busy learning Chinese these days. I find it difficult to do well. Can you give me some advice? Also, I’m stressed out because of the heavy schoolwork. What can I do to relax myself?
I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Alex
注意：
1. 请回复邮件中所提及的所有问题，可适当发挥使行文通顺、连贯。
2. 邮件中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
3. 词数80左右。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Dear Alex,
I’m OK, thank you. I’m sorry to know that you have some problems recently. Here are my suggestions.
It is not easy to learn Chinese well. If you want to study it well, you should often listen to the tapes, Chinese songs and programs. Watching Chinese movies is also helpful to you. Besides, you should speak Chinese as much as possible in class.
In terms of study, you should think about your weaknesses and make a plan by yourself. Then, you should learn how to relax yourself. Doing more sports such as running and playing table tennis is good for your health and listening to music is also a good way to relax.
I hope these suggestions will help you.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：题干中没有给出明确的写作要点，考生需要从邮件内容提炼出要点，具体包括两大方面：中文学习和如何放松自我；注意补充细节，使得行文通顺、连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，感谢问候，并对他面临的问题表示遗憾；
第二步，给出中文学习的建议；
第三步，介绍如何放松自我；
第四步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
① listen to tapes 听磁带
② helpful 有帮助的
③ as much as possible 尽可能
④ be good for 对……有益
[高分句型]
① It is not easy to learn Chinese well.（it is+adj.+to do sth. 做某事是……的）
② Doing more sports such as running and playing table tennis is good for your health and listening to music is also a good way to relax.（动名词作主语）
3．（2023·浙江宁波·统考一模）假如你是李华，鄞州图书馆将举行“爱心漂流书库进凉山(Love Offering, Books Donating)”活动，请你写一封邮件邀请在宁波的外国友人Tom一起参加。
注意：1.邮件须包含邀请函所有内容，并适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3.词数：80-100个；
Love Offering, Books DonatingTime: this Saturday afternoon, April 22nd
Place: on the playground in Yinzhou Library
Activities: . put on performances;
. write a letter to children in Liangshan;
...
Meanings: ...
INVITATION
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I’m writing to invite you to take part in this meaningful activity named Love Offering, Books Donating, which will be held on this Saturday afternoon, April 22nd on the playground in Yinzhou Library. There will be many activities, such as putting on performance, writing a letter to children in Liangshan, donating books to children in Liangshan and so on. Through this activity, not only can the children in poor areas gain more knowledge, but also let us show our love. I believe you will benefit a lot from this activity.
I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，表明目的是邀请参加活动；
第二步，介绍活动的时间，地点及内容；
第三步，表明活动的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②such as例如
③not only... but also不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①I’m writing to invite you to take part in this meaningful activity named Love Offering, Books Donating, which will be held on this Saturday afternoon, April 22nd on the playground in Yinzhou Library. （which引导非限制性定语从句）
②I believe you will benefit a lot from this activity.（省略that的宾语从句）
4．（2023·山东临沂·统考一模）假定你是陈飞，一个外国游学团要来你校，学校需要一批志愿者，你很乐意参加。请阅读下面的招募启事，并根据招募启事的内容用英语写一封应征邮件。可以适当发挥。
要求：1. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
Volunteers WantedSome students from the UK will come to our school to have a study tour. They are interested in Chinese culture. We’re looking for some volunteers to help us.
Can you introduce yourself (English ability and personality)?
Can you plan an activity about Chinese culture and explain your purpose (目的)?
If you are interested, please email us at Andrew@163.com.
Dear Andrew,
I’m Chen Fei.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Chen Fei
【答案】例文：
Dear Andrew,
I’m Chen Fei. I’m writing to ask for the position as a student volunteer. I like English and I’m good at it. I’ve won the first prize in our school English speech contest. As an outgoing boy, I always get along well with my classmates. I enjoy communicating with people.
To help them experience our traditional culture, I’ll teach them to make dumplings. They can learn how to make Chinese traditional food. Then they can eat the delicious dumplings made by themselves. I’m sure they’ll have a good time.
I really want to get the great chance to offer my service.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Chen Fei
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”、“一般将来时”等；
③ 提示：写作要求已给出，要求考生根据招募启事写一封应征邮件。考生可根据招募启事中的两个问题，结合自身情况适当发挥，但要突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题，表明写这封邮件的目的。根据题干可知，写作目的是“应征志愿者”；
第二步，根据招募启事的要求，介绍一下自己。重点介绍在“英语能力”和“性格”这两个方面自己所具备的能力、优势或相关经历等；
第三步，根据招募启事的要求，介绍一下自己的计划。重点介绍自己会策划一个什么活动，并解释策划这个活动的目的。
[亮点词汇]
① ask for 恳求（给予）
② be good at 擅长
③ have a good time 过得愉快
[高分句型]
① To help them experience our traditional culture, I’ll teach them to make dumplings. （动词不定式作目的状语）
② I’m sure they’ll have a good time. （宾语从句）
5．（2023·浙江宁波·模拟预测）《湿地公约》第十四届缔约方大会在我国成功召开。深圳作为重要的湿地城市，也积极响应公约（Wetlands Convention）号召。假如你是学生李华，是学校环保俱乐部一员，你们俱乐部举行了“湿地保护节”（Wetland Protection Festival）。请根据以下提示给你的外国朋友Mike写一封邮件，介绍此次活动。
要点：1.目的：见证深圳湿地建设的成就；提升环保意识
2.内容：①前往深圳红树林生态公园观赏红树林和鸟类；②深圳湿地摄影展；③……
3.你的感受：①……②……
要求：1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4.标点正确，书面整节。
参考词汇：witness 见证；awareness 意识；mangrove forest红树林；Shenzhen Mangrove Ecological Park深圳红树林生态公园；
Dear Mike,
As an important wetland city, Shenzhen is making efforts to answer the call of the Wetlands Convention.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
As an important wetland city, Shenzhen is making efforts to answer the call of the Wetlands Convention.
The purpose of this activity is to witness the achievements of Shenzhen wetland construction and enhance environmental awareness. We went to Shenzhen Mangrove Ecological Park to watch mangrove forests and birds. We also visited the Shenzhen Wetland Photography Exhibition. We have also singed the Convention on the Protection of Wetlands. We are committed to maintaining wetlands. Through this activity, we learn that we live on the same planet and we need to protect wetlands.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动目的；
第二步，介绍活动内容；
第三步，介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①make efforts to do努力做某事
②the purpose of……的目的
③need to do sth需要做某事
[高分句型]
①The purpose of this activity is to witness the achievements of Shenzhen wetland construction and enhance environmental awareness.（动词不定式作表语）
②we learn that we live on the same planet and we need to protect wetlands.（that引导的宾语从句）

6．（2023·辽宁沈阳·统考一模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter正在学习中文。他写信向你请教如何提高中文水平，请你按以下要点给他写封回信。
内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 提出建议；
3. 表达希望。
注意：
1. 词数80—100，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Dear Peter,
I am so happy to receive your letter. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
I am so happy to receive your letter. I know you are trying to learn Chinese, so I’m writing to give you some advice on how to improve your Chinese.
Different from other languages, Chinese is more difficult to learn. First, you need to take a great interest in the Chinese language. In addition, it’s a good idea to read as many Chinese books as possible. Reading can help you to think in a Chinese way. Finally, you had better communicate with your friends online in Chinese. The more you practice speaking in Chinese, the better your Chinese will become.
I hope that you will find these suggestions helpful. I am looking forward to your improvement soon.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第二人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明写信的目的；
第二步，具体阐述你的建议；
第三步，最后表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①take a interest in对……感兴趣
②communicate with sb和某人交谈
③practice doing sth练习做某事
[高分句型]
①Reading can help you to think in a Chinese way.（动名词作主语）
②The more you practice speaking in Chinese, the better your Chinese will become.（the+比较级，the+比较级的句型使用）
7．（2023·辽宁葫芦岛·统考一模）根据要求完成大作文。
假如你成为了你校创建文明校园的志愿者，请你根据下面图示给全体学生写一封倡议书。

要求：①中心突出，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。
②文中不能出现真实姓名校名和地名。开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear schoolmates,
To create the civilized campus, everyone of us needs to take action now!
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s pull together to make our campus more civilized and beautiful!
【答案】例文：
Dear schoolmates,
To create the civilized campus, everyone of us needs to take action now!
Firstly, let’s plant trees and flowers in our campus. It’ll not only make our campus more beautiful but also make the air fresher. Secondly, it’s necessary to clean our campus every day. At the same time, we should never drop litter so that the campus will always keep clean. Thirdly, the school rules are made for us, so we must follow the rules and keep away from the danger. Lastly, we should be polite to the teachers and other students. It’s too rude to quarrel or fight with others.
Let’s pull together to make our campus more civilized and beautiful!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇倡议书；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，提出创建文明校园的倡议。
第二步，从四个方面讲述如何去做。
第三步，最后动员大家行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
① not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
② make the air fresher 让空气更新鲜
③ keep away from the danger 远离危险
[高分句型]
① Secondly, it’s necessary to clean our campus every day. (it作形式主语)
② At the same time, we should never drop litter so that the campus will always keep clean. (so that引导目的状语从句)
8．（2023·浙江宁波·统考一模）61.当前，各地正积极响应习总书记“讲好中国故事，传播中国声音，推动中国文化更好地走向世界”的讲话精神。假设你是李华，你的英国笔友James写信请你介绍一本有关中国经典故事的英文版书籍，请根据以下内容给他写封回信，并谈谈你的观点。
注意：
(1)邮件必须包括表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(3)词数80词；邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Name
Stories of China Retold in English
Your opinions
Writer
James Hu
1. help foreigners know better about Chinese culture2. become more interested in China
3...
Published
In May, 2019
Content
1. more than 200 Chinese traditional stories;2. about Chinese culture;

Dear James,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear James,
    I am glad to know that you are interested in Stories of China Retold in English which is written by James Hu. It was published in May, 2019. There are more than 200 Chinese traditional stories vividly told in the book. All of them are based on Chinese culture. As far as I’m concerned, the book is really valuable and suitable for the people who want to learn more about Chinese culture. It can not only help foreigners know better about Chinese culture, but also make readers more interested in China. What’s more, the characters in different kinds of stories may make a great difference to you.
    I’m looking forward to hearing from you and knowing how you feel after reading the book.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封信；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表明自己对于这本书的观点，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍“书籍的名称、作者及写作时间”。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“书籍内容”以及“自己对于这本书的看法”展开描写。
第三步，书写结语，表示“期待回信，希望了解对方的读后感”。
[亮点词汇]
① are based on Chinese culture基于中国文化
② As far as I’m concerned就我而言
③ make a great difference to you对你产生巨大的影响
④ am looking forward to hearing from you期待收到你的来信
[高分句型]
① I am glad to know that you are interested in Stories of China Retold in English which is written by James Hu.（that后接宾语从句，宾语从句含which引导的限制性定语从句）
② It can not only help foreigners know better about Chinese culture, but also make readers more interested in China.（not only.. but also...“不但……而且……”连接两个并列动词短语）
9．（2023·江苏常州·校考一模）你的英国朋友Sandy在本学期开学初给你发了一封电子邮件，请根据她的邮件内容写一封英文回信，谈谈你的想法。
注意：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数100左右；信的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：猜谜guess a riddle
Dear Helen,
Happy New Term!
I know from the news that this year is very special. After the winter holiday, you start your new term at the Lantern Festival. I am very interested in knowing more about this festival. How do you use lanterns for this festival? What special food do you eat? What kinds of celebration activities do you have in your school? Could you please satisfy my curiosity(好奇心)?
Best wishes!
Sandy
Dear Sandy,
Thank you for emailing me.
Yes, the Lantern Festival is a traditional festival all over China, which is considered as the end of the Spring Festival. In China, we think lanterns can
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Hope we can spend the next Lantern Festival together!
Greetings！
Hellen
【答案】Dear Sandy,
Thank you for emailing me.
Yes, the Lantern Festival is a traditional festival all over China, which is considered as the end of the Spring Festival. In China, we think lanterns can break darkness as well as bring warmth and hope to people. So, at night, we can enjoy red lanterns in different sizes along the street. We can let off fireworks and enjoy the night view as well.
Also, this festival is a wonderful time for families to get together. On this day, we usually eat Tangyuan which means all the families get together and enjoy their nice time.
Yes, you are right. In our school, we have different activities. We can guess riddles on the red paper or plastic lanterns and get nice presents if we get right answers. What’s more, because it’s also the beginning of a new term, we can write down our best wishes to our friends and teachers for the new term.
Hope we can spend the next Lantern Festival together!
Greetings!
Hellen
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据邮件内容给对方回信，注意要点齐全，语句通顺，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍元宵节，包括如何使用灯笼及食物等；
第二步，介绍在元宵节进行的活动；
第三步，书写结语，期待对方能一起过下个元宵节。
[亮点词汇]
①let off 燃放
②as well as以及
③write down写下
[高分句型]
①we usually eat Tangyuan which means all the families get together and enjoy their nice time.（which引导的限制性定语从句）
②We can guess riddles on the red paper or plastic lanterns and get nice presents if we get right answers.（if引导的条件状语从句）
③because it’s also the beginning of a new term, we can write down our best wishes to our friends and teachers for the new term.（because引导的原因状语从句）
10．（2023·浙江金华·模拟预测）假如你是某报社的心理辅导老师Miss Pearl，你刚收到读者Eric的来信。信中说，自上了初三，学习任务很繁重。在学校，一天的绝大多数时间是待在教室学习。放学回到家，父母不让看电视、上网，要求在家学习、做作业。因此，这样的生活让他很苦恼，特写信向你求助。针对Eric的来信，请根据下面的提示和要求，用英语给 Eric 回信。
内容提示：
1.上课认真听讲，提高学习效率(learning efficiency)：多向班上的优秀学生请教；
2.保证每天必要的放松(就具体应该如何去做给出合理化的建议，建议不少于三条)；
3.多与父母沟通。
写作要求：
1.词数100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数：
2.文章必须包含所给要点提示，可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯，书写工整：
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Eric,
I right away realized that you needed help when I read your letter. Now I would like to share something about your problems.
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Yours,
Miss Pearl
【答案】例文
Dear Eric,
I right away realized that you needed help when I read your letter. Now I would like to share something about your problems.
During the last school year of your junior high school, studies have been so heavy that you can hardly breathe. Therefore, reducing stress seems more important. Meanwhile, you should study hard. First, you should improve learning efficiency. That is to say, you must listen carefully in class. When you face problems, you can ask the excellent students for help. In addition, relaxing yourself is also important. You can listen to music, watch movies or play sports. Most importantly, you must communicate more with your parents. In my opinion, communication is a useful way to solve problems.
Yours,
Miss Pearl
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意结合提示要点进行写作，针对Eric的问题，用英语给Eric回信。可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。首先介绍一下Eric遇到的问题来引出重点介绍的内容（文章已给出）；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍Eric在初三遇到的问题以及解决措施；
第三步，书写结语。表达“沟通是解决问题的有效方法。”的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth.想要做某事
②therefore因此
③in addition此外
④ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助
[高分句型]
①Studies have been so heavy that you can hardly breathe.（so…that…引导结果状语从句）
②Therefore, reducing stress seems more important.（动名词作主语）
③When you face problems, you can ask the excellent students for help.（时间状语从句）

11．（2023·宁夏吴忠·校联考一模）2022寒假正值北京冬奥会，你和同学们也想去体验一下冰雪运动。周六天气晴朗，你和朋友相约到鸣翠湖滑雪场一起滑雪。请你根据思维导图的提示写一篇日记，记录本次活动并简要谈谈感受。

要求：1. 文中须包含思维导图中的所有信息；
2. 补充至少两项活动；
3. 合理增加细节使行文连贯；
注意：1. 词数80词左右，已给内容不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。
Saturday                                  Sunny
During the winter vacation of 2022, the Winter Olympics was held in Beijing. I also wanted to experience winter sports with my friends.
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【答案】例文
Saturday                                  Sunny
During the winter vacation of 2022, the Winter Olympics was held in Beijing. I also wanted to experience winter sports with my friends. We left at 10:00 a. m. and returned at 5:00 p. m. We went there by bus because Mingcui Lake Ski Resort was not far from here. We had many interesting activities, such as skating, skiing and visiting Mingcui Lake. We also had an interesting ski race. In addition, we had a game about skiing. Everyone took an active part in the game. I was so happy that I didn’t want to go home.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为日记；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作时按照日记格式，内容须包含所给提示内容。文章确保语句通顺，条理清晰，无单词语法错误。人称采用第一人称。
［写作步骤］
第一步，开篇点题；
第二步，围绕思维导图进行介绍，内容须包含时间、交通工具、活动以及自己的感受。
［亮点词汇］

①far from 远离
②in addition 此外，另外
③take an active part in 积极参加
［高分句型］
①We went there by bus because Mingcui Lake Ski Resort was not far from here. （because引导的原因状语从句）
②I was so happy that I didn’t want to go home.（so ... that ... 结果状语从句）

12．（2023·江苏南通·统考一模）“立德树人、五育并举”的教育理念在我市落地生花。三年荏苒，即将毕业，我们增强了爱国情怀，强健了体魄，启发了智力，陶冶了情操，完善了人格，茁壮成长，收获颇多。假如你是李华，请根据下图提示，从“德智体美劳”几方面谈谈这几年的进步。做成“青春记忆”的视频演讲，进行成果展示。

注意：
1. 词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名；
3. 从“五育”中选择至少“三育”，其中“劳”必须写。 成长树上的提示只是参考，考生可以自己发挥。要求语句通顺，意思连贯，并展开合理想象，适当发挥。
参考词汇：劳动教育labor education
How time flies! We’re leaving the junior high school and getting into the senior high school. In the past three years, I’ve made great progress in many ways.
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【答案】例文
How time flies! We’re leaving the junior high school and getting into the senior high school. In the past three years, I’ve made great progress in many ways.
First, I always obey school rules. I try to be a good student. I’ve learned to care for others and often help those who are in trouble. And I can get along with my classmates now.
Second, I used to be crazy about playing games. But now I spend most of my free time reading all kinds of books. I know reading makes a full man. Also, I develop a good habit of studying and get good grades finally.
Finally, our school pays much attention to the labor education. So I’ve learned all kinds of basic life skills, such as making bed, cooking dinner and mopping up the floor. My parents are satisfied with this. What’s more, I often work as a volunteer in my community. I often help my neighbours fix things, like broken bicycles and computers.
In a word, I’m very proud that I can make such great progress in the past three years. Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示和要求，从“五育”中选择至少“三育”，其中“劳”必须写，写一篇演讲稿。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明这几年自己取得了很大的进步；
第二步，具体从“三育”说明自己的进步；
第三步，总结，自己为这些年的进步感到骄傲并致谢。
[亮点词汇]
①get along with 与……和睦相处
②develop a good habit of 养成……的好习惯
③pays much attention to 非常关注
[高分句型]
I know reading makes a full man.（宾语从句）
13．（2023·山东淄博·统考一模）假如你是李华，你校英语社团将举行以“Living a Healthy Life”为主题的英语演讲活动，请你从饮食、睡眠、运动等方面写一篇100词左右的演讲稿。开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
要求：
1. 书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。
Living a Healthy Life
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s nice to give a speech about living a healthy life.
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That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】例文
Living a Healthy Life
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s nice to give a speech about living a healthy life.
It’s important for us to have a healthy life. First of all, we need to form good eating habits. We’d better eat more vegetables and fruit. We shouldn’t have too much meat, sugar or junk food. What’s more, it’s important for us to have enough sleep. As teenagers, we need to have an eight-hour sleep every night. Or we will feel tired the next day. In addition, we are supposed to take exercise for an hour every day, such as running, cycling, playing ball games and so on. Finally, developing healthy routines is also of great importance. We must wash our hands so that we can prevent some diseases from spreading. It’s also necessary for us to clean our rooms every day. We can open the windows to keep the air fresh. In a word, the healthier life we live, the happier we will feel.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：以“Living a Healthy Life”为题写一篇短文，从饮食、睡眠、运动等方面来介绍自己的健康生活。注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：先承接短文开头。
第二步：直入主题，从饮食、睡眠、运动等方面来介绍自己的健康生活。
第三步：最后表示感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①give a speech 发表讲话  
②too much 太多
③be supposed to 应该；被期望  
④be of great importance 非常重要
⑤prevent...from 阻止
[高分句型]
①It’s important for us to have a healthy life.（it作形式主语）
②We must wash our hands so that we can prevent some diseases from spreading.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
③In a word, the healthier life we live, the happier we will feel.（the+比较级，the+比较级）

14．（2023·江苏泰州·统考一模）假如你是李华, 请仔细阅读征文要求, 并用英语写一篇短文投稿。
Call for papers (征文启事)“Labor Education(劳动教育)” has always been an important topic and doing housework is a part of it. We want to know:
♦Are you a good helper at home?
♦What kinds of housework do you usually do? (At least 2 kinds and the housework you did last week)
♦How do you and your parents feel after you do it?
♦Why do you want to do housework? (At least 2 points：to you, to your family, or to society )
要求：
（1）文中必须包含所有要点, 可适当拓展。
（2）语义连贯, 书写工整。
（3）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
（4）词数:100左右, 已给句子不计入词数。
Dear Editor,
I’m writing this letter to share my thoughts of doing housework.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Editor,
I’m writing this letter to share my thoughts of doing housework. I think it is really important. It helps us learn basic life skills and develop the right view of life.
I always help my parents do housework at home. Last Sunday, after breakfast, I began to help my parents wash clothes. Though washing clothes is not so difficult, it took me a long time. After that, I tried to tidy my bedroom. I first made the bed and then put away my clothes and school things. Looking at the tidy room, I felt tired but satisfied because I not only share the housework with my parents, but also learn life skills. And my parents felt proud of me.
I think doing housework can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. Above all, I can develop good working habits and value the importance of working hard through my experience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇应用文，为征文启事；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“征文启事”中的上周做的家务介绍，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出自己对于做家务的观点；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“自身做家务经历、自己和父母的感受、做家务的必要性”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
develop the right view of life 培养正确生活观
put away 收拾好
value the importance of working hard 珍惜努力工作的重要性
[高分句型]
Looking at the tidy room, I felt tired but satisfied. （现在分词作状语）
I not only share the housework with my parents, but also learn life skills. （not only...but also...句型的应用）



15．（2023·广东深圳·统考一模）为丰富校园生活，学校的英语俱乐部决定举办以“最美深圳”(Amazing Shenzhen) 为主题的英文绘本大赛。请你根据以下提示，写一则活动通知。
要点：
1. 参赛对象：全校学生
2. 提交时间：下周五上午12:00前
3. 绘本内容：选择深圳这座城市的任一方面，如发展历程、景点、文化、志愿服务等。
4. 参赛要求：①绘本必须原创；②……（至少补充一点）
参考词汇：内容content；原创的original
要求：
1. 词数80左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Notice
In order to enrich students’ campus life, the school English club decides to hold an English picture book competition with the theme “Amazing Shenzhen”. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
English Club
【答案】One possible version:
Notice
In order to enrich students’ campus life, the school English club decides to hold an English picture book competition with the theme “Amazing Shenzhen”. The following is something you should pay attention to.
All the students can take part in the competition. Your works should be handed in before 12:00 am next Friday. You can finish your English picture books from any aspect of Shenzhen, such as its development history, scenic spots, culture, volunteer services and so on. Remember that your works must be original and the contents should be positive.
We hope all of you can take part in the competition.
English Club
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇通知，介绍英文绘本大赛。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：题目要求根据提示写一则通知，内容为举办以“最美深圳”(Amazing Shenzhen) 为主题的英文绘本大赛。写作时注意适当增加细节，补充要点，同时不要遗漏所给要点。
[写作步聚]
第一步，先简单介绍活动内容。（开头已给出）
第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍活动的具体内容以及要求。
第三步，最后号召大家积极参加。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to注意
②take part in参加
③hand in上交
[高分句型]
①Your works should be handed in before 12:00 am next Friday.（含情态动词的被动语态）
②Remember that your works must be original and the contents should be positive.（肯定祈使句）