高考英语写作分类训练：电子邮件

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电子邮件1．《湿地公约》第十四届缔约方大会在我国成功召开。深圳作为重要的湿地城市，也积极响应公约（Wetlands Convention）号召。假如你是学生李华，是学校环保俱乐部一员，你们俱乐部举行了“湿地保护节”（Wetland Protection Festival）。请根据以下提示给你的外国朋友Mike写一封邮件，介绍此次活动。要点：1.目的：见证深圳湿地建设的成就；提升环保意识2.内容：①前往深圳红树林生态公园观赏红树林和鸟类；②深圳湿地摄影展；③……3.你的感受：①……②……要求：1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；4.标点正确，书面整节。参考词汇：witness 见证；awareness 意识；mangrove forest红树林；Shenzhen Mangrove Ecological Park深圳红树林生态公园；Dear Mike,As an important wetland city, Shenzhen is making efforts to answer the call of the Wetlands Convention.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua2．假如你是李华，王叔叔及其家人约定与你一起游览天津。请你给王叔叔写一封英文电子邮件，告知你们的旅行安排。（1）6月28日下午3: 00天津机场见；（2）酒店己预订好，直接前往，晚上游海河夜景；（3）第二天去海边看海鸟，吃海鲜；（4）第三天，游览古文化街，品尝天津小吃；（5）补充一两点你对这次旅游的想法。参考词汇：直接地directly；海河the Haihe River；古文化街Ancient Cultural Street 要求：（1）词数80—100个。（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。FROM: Li HuaTO: Uncle WangSUBJECT: The trip planDear Uncle Wang,I’m so glad to hear from you about visiting Tianjin. Here is the trip plan. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Looking forward to meeting all of you.Li Hua3．假如你是李华，你的朋友Mike给你发了一封电子邮件诉说了上周他与妈妈之间的争吵，他说妈妈给他的压力太大，总拿他跟别人比较，并且周末课后班太多，他经常睡眠不足，考前紧张等。请你根据以下提示词，给他回一封电子邮件，提一些合理化的建议。提示词：compare…with, communicate, cut out, understand, relax,…要求：1.可选择使用提示词，也可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计人总词数。）Dear Mike,I’m sorry to hear that last week you argued with your mother.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua4．假定你是李明，请结合表格中内容，用英文写一封邮件，向你的美国笔友John介绍你校本学期新开设的劳动课程。CoursesReasons●Planting (vegetables, fruit trees, …)●cooking (dumplings, zongzi, …)●repairing (bikes, ....)●…●study plants and know about farming●learn about Chinese traditional cultures●practice and learn new skills●… 注意：1.文中必须包含至少两类劳动课程的内容要点，可适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；3.词数：80~100；邮件的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear John,How is everything going? This term, we have some labor courses at school.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Ming5．假如你是中学生李明，你的英国好友 Alan 来信询问你的近况。中考(the Entrance Exam to Senior High School) 在即，你们班最近召开了以“如何有效(adv. efficiently) 提高成绩”为主题的班会。请你根据以下信息给他写一封信，并和他交流一下自己怎样在努力学习的同时，劳逸结合减轻压力。写作要点：1.收到信时候的心情：开心2.班会情况：（1）林涛：有良好的学习态度（2）刘瑞：改进学习方法（3）我：制定学习计划3.说说作为九年级学生，你平时怎样劳逸结合减轻 (reduce) 压力。Dear Alan,How is everything going?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming6．假如你是李华。请你给你的英国笔友Tom写一封email，介绍你所生活的小镇。简介位于西安（Xi’an）东部的一个小镇（a small town），近年变化巨大（great changes）过去有很多大型工厂现在政府已经迁走（move out）了绝大多数工厂，空气清新（fresh），……问题仍然有一些，其中之一是公交线路（bus lines）太少希望…… 要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息；4. 词数不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）Dear Tom，Is everything going well? I’m writing to introduce my hometown to you. I live ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope you can come to visit me someday in the future. Yours truly, Li Hua7．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣，他给你发来邮件，询问中国人日常生乐中的基本社交礼仪，如待人按物、餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你所知道的相关礼仪。文中不得出现真实人名、校名。词数：80-120，开头已给出，开头及标点符号不计入总词数提示词语：manners, shake hands, polite, gift, chopsticks提示问题：●What do we do when we meet people for the first time?●How do we behave properly at table?Dear Chris,I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.Yours,Li Hua8．假定你是李华。你的外国笔友Alice发来电子邮件，询问你最喜欢的运动。请你根据以下提示，给她回一封电子邮件，介绍你最喜欢的运动。内容包括：1. 你是怎么喜欢上这项运动的；2. 你开展这项运动的情况；3. 你从事这项运动的体会。注意：1. 词数80-100；2. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Alice,I am so delighted to receive your e-mail._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua9．假如你是李华，学校将接待一批国际交换生，请你为学校拟一封邮件，向交换生们推荐两项有关中国文化的交流活动，给出理由，并提供一些建议。注意：1. 词数80—120个左右(文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数，请根据要点提示适当发挥)2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Dear exchange students,Welcome to our school! To make your visit more pleasant and meaningful,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________We are looking forward to your arrival!Yours,Li Hua10．假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Jack听说“美丽中国”建设给你的周边环境带来了巨大的变化，请用英文给他回一封邮件介绍你和家人参与“美丽中国”建设的情况。要点： 1. 学习环保知识；2. 实现绿色生活；3. 参与志愿服务；4. ……注意: 1. 词数80~100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息。Dear Jack, I’m happy to hear that you’re interested in the “Beautiful China” project and its influence on the environment. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best regards, Li Hua       1．例文Dear Mike,As an important wetland city, Shenzhen is making efforts to answer the call of the Wetlands Convention.The purpose of this activity is to witness the achievements of Shenzhen wetland construction and enhance environmental awareness. We went to Shenzhen Mangrove Ecological Park to watch mangrove forests and birds. We also visited the Shenzhen Wetland Photography Exhibition. We have also singed the Convention on the Protection of Wetlands. We are committed to maintaining wetlands. Through this activity, we learn that we live on the same planet and we need to protect wetlands.Yours,Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍活动目的；第二步，介绍活动内容；第三步，介绍自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①make efforts to do努力做某事②the purpose of……的目的③need to do sth需要做某事[高分句型]①The purpose of this activity is to witness the achievements of Shenzhen wetland construction and enhance environmental awareness.（动词不定式作表语）②we learn that we live on the same planet and we need to protect wetlands.（that引导的宾语从句）2．例文：Dear Uncle Wang,I’m so glad to hear from you about visiting Tianjin. Here is the trip plan. We’ll meet at Tianjin Airport at 3 p. m. on June 28th. We can go to the hotel directly to have a rest as I’ve already booked the rooms. In the evening, we’ll take a boat along the Haihe River. It’s very beautiful, especially at night. The next day we’ll go to the beach and watch the seabirds. As for dinner, we’ll eat seafood. The third day we’ll visit the Ancient Cultural Street and taste the delicious food, Tianjin snacks. It’s worth visiting and you’ll be impressed. Honestly, I am getting excited about the trip.Looking forward to meeting all of you.Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件作文；②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；③提示：考生需注意补充一两点你对这次旅游的想法，要注意合乎情理。[写作步骤]第一步，承接开头，点明见面的时间、地点；第二步，介绍当天的行程安排；第三步，介绍第二天的行程安排；第四步，介绍第三天的行程安排；第五步，谈谈自己对这次旅游的想法。[亮点词汇]①have a rest休息②in the evening在晚上③take a boat 乘船④the next day第二天⑤be worth doing sth.值得做某事 [高分句型]①We can go to the hotel directly to have a rest as I’ve already booked the rooms. 我们可以直接去酒店休息，因为我已经订好了房间。 (使用as引导原因状语从句。)②Honestly, I am getting excited about the trip. 老实说，这次旅行让我很兴奋。(使用副词Honestly修饰整个句子)3．参考范文：Dear Mike.I’m sorry to hear that last week you argued with your mother. I know that you don’t feel good. Your mother puts too much pressure on you and compares you with others. Besides, you have a lot of classes after class and on weekends. You often don’t have enough sleep and feel nervous before exams. Here’s my advice. I suggest that you had better communicate with your mother and let you cut out the extra lessons. She would understand your feelings. You can also listen to music and relax yourself.All in all, you can follow these suggestions and live a better life.   Yours,Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据Mike的问题，给他提出一些建议，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯，逻辑清晰。[写作步骤]第一步，承接开头，对Mike妈妈给他的压力表示理解；第二步，给出解决问题的一些建议；第三步，书写结语，希望对方能够通过这些建议，有着更好的生活。[亮点词汇]①feel nervous感到紧张②cut out取消③communicate with sb和某人沟通[高分句型]①Your mother puts too much pressure on you and compares you with others.（and连接并列句）②I suggest that you had better communicate with your mother and let you cut out the extra lessons. （that引导宾语从句）4．例文： Dear John,How is everything going? This term, we have some labor courses at school. I took the cooking course to learn how to make traditional food like dumplings, zongzi and so on. In each kind of Chinese traditional food lie rich Chinese cultures. For example, when learning to make zongzi, we can know more about the Dragon Boat Festival and the great poet, Qu Yuan. I also took the vegetable-planting course this term. My classmates and I planted tomatoes and harvested a lot. We learned and practiced planting skills and got close to nature. I really enjoy these courses as they not only enrich our school life but also offer us basic life skills.Yours,Li Ming【详解】[总体分析]① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意至少介绍“两类”劳动课程，以第一人称为主。[写作步骤]第一步，根据表格提示，介绍两类或两类以上劳动课程，并说明课程的意义；第二步，描述对这些课程的看法、感受以及自己的收获。[亮点词汇]①for example例如②get close to nature亲近自然③rich Chinese cultures丰富的中国文化[高分句型]①In each kind of Chinese traditional food lie rich Chinese cultures.（完全倒装句）②I really enjoy these courses as they not only enrich our school life but also offer us basic life skills.（as引导的原因状语从句；not only…but also连接的并列成分）5．例文Dear Alan,       How is everything going? I am happy to hear from you and I want to share something with you together.         Recently, our class held a class meeting about how to improve our grades before the Entrance Exam to Senior High School. During the meeting, we students all shared the ways of learning. LinTao is the first one to share his ways and he thinks the most useful way is to keep good attitude towards study. All of the students, LiuRui thinks that it is important for us to improve our learning methods, because he thinks a good way is a half success. As for me, making study plans is my key way to improve my study. Last but not least, we should also achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. Try to plan your spare time well.        Don’t lose heart at any time. You will make great progress through hard work.        Best wishes!                                                                                   Yours,                                                                                         Li Ming【详解】[总体分析]① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；② 时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时；③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示中”收到信的心情这一点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。表明收到信很开心并要分享信息；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“林涛、刘瑞、我、减轻压力”几个方面重点介绍如何在中考前提高成绩；第三步，书写结语。表达美好祝愿。[亮点词汇]① the first one to do 第一个做某事② share sth. with sb. 和某人分享某物③ a balance between 在……平衡[高分句型]① It is important for us to improve our learning methods.（it is+adj. for sb. to do sth. 做某事对某人来说是重要的）② Making study plans is my key way improve my study.（动名词作主语）6．例文Dear Tom,Is everything going well? I’m writing to introduce my hometown to you. I live in a small town which lies in the east of Xi’an. Great changes have taken place recently.In the past, there were many big factories. But now the government has moved out most of them. The air is fresh and the sky is blue. There is less pollution in my hometown. But there are still some problems. One of them is fewer bus lines. I hope the government can open up more bus lines so that people can travel or go to work more easily.I hope you can come to visit me someday in the future.Yours truly,Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，引出“介绍家乡变化”的主题；第二步，根据提示材料介绍家乡的变化；第三步，表达自己的希望。[亮点词汇]①take place发生②move out迁走③open up开发[高分句型]①I live in a small town which lies in the east of Xi’an.（which引导定语从句）②I hope the government can open up more bus lines so that people can travel or go to work more easily.（so that引导目的状语从句）7．例文 Dear Chris,I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners. China is a country with a long history, so there are many customs here. Let me tell you some of them. Firstly, you are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, you should bring a gift when you are invited to a party and be sure to arrive on time or a few minutes earlier. Thirdly, when you eat meals with others, it’s rude to point at others with your chopsticks. And don’t make noise when you have your soup. I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.Yours,Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要求已给出，学生可适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。[写作步骤]第一步，首先通过介绍中国有许多风俗习惯来引出话题；第二步，具体阐述中国人日常生乐中的基本社交礼仪；第三步，谈谈自己的感想。[亮点词汇]①be supposed to do sth应该做某事②be sure to do sth一定会做某事③point at sb指向某人[高分句型]①Firstly, you are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time.（时间状语从句）②Thirdly, when you eat meals with others, it’s rude to point at others with your chopsticks.（时间状语从句）③I hope the above is helpful.（宾语从句）8．One possible version:Dear Alice,I am so delighted to receive your e-mail. I’d like to share with you my favorite sport table tennis, one of the most popular sports in China.At the age of five, I began to learn how to play table tennis from my parents, who have a habit of playing it in their spare time. Since then, I’ve been fond of it and always play it with my friends at weekends. Under the guidance of my coach, I improve my skills gradually. I won first place in my school last year, which promoted my confidence greatly.You see, playing table tennis not only builds up my body but also helps me make a lot of friends. Therefore, it makes my life more enjoyable.What about your favorite sports?Yours,Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，一封电子邮件；②时态：本文时态有一般过去时，一般现在时；③提示：注意描述怎样喜欢这项运动时，用一般过去时。要注意给出的要点内容应具体阐述。[写作步骤]第一步，向笔友介绍自己最爱的运动是乒乓球；第二步，具体阐述怎样爱上这项运动，现在怎样训练这项运动；第三步，介绍乒乓球带给自己的感受，并询问笔友最爱的运动。[亮点词汇]①in their spare time在他们的空闲时间②Since then自那时起③Under the guidance of 在……的指导下④Therefore因此[高分句型]①You see, playing table tennis not only builds up my body but also helps me make a lot of friends.（动名词作主语）②At the age of five, I began to learn how to play table tennis from my parents, who have a habit of playing it in their spare time.（定语从句）9．例文Dear exchange students,Welcome to our school! To make your visit more pleasant and meaningful, here are some amazing activities for you.To learn about Chinese traditional culture, taking our ancient poetry class is the top choice. While reading the poems, you may feel that you are meeting people from the past and experiencing their life. It is even more wonderful if you wear some traditional clothes like hanfu and try to behave like them, which helps you understand their life better.To meet modern Guangzhou, I strongly recommend you to take a trip by riding a shared bicycle along the Pearl River. As one of “the four great inventions” in modern China, shared bikes are convenient enough to take you anywhere, anytime. Touring with a bike, you can enjoy not only the natural beauty along the river, but also some famous landmarks around Zhujiang New Town. By the way, remember to take your mobile phone, as using shared bicycles needs scanning with a mobile phone.We are looking forward to your arrival!Yours,Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文。②时态：以一般现在时为主。③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]①第一步，补全开头，交代出写作目的，介绍几个活动给对方；②第二步，分别从校内和校外两个方面来介绍活动；③第三步，总结全文，表示对于对方到来的期待。[亮点词汇]①learn about学习关于……②try to do尝试做某事③recommend sb to do sth推荐某人做某事④not only…, but also…不但……，而且……⑤by the way顺便说一下[高分句型]①While reading the poems, you may feel that you are meeting people from the past and experiencing their life. (while引导的时间状语从句)②It is even more wonderful if you wear some traditional clothes like hanfu and try to behave like them, which helps you understand their life better. (if引导条件状语从句，which引导定语从句)10．例文：Dear Jack, I’m happy to hear that you’re interested in the “Beautiful China” project and its influence on the environment. My family and I have also taken part in this effort. First, we’ve learned about protecting the environment through reading or videos. We’ve also taken steps in our daily lives. We recycle, reduce plastic use, and try to save water and electricity. Also, we have volunteered to clean up public areas, plant trees, and teach others how to protect the environment. There are other ways to join in the “Beautiful China” project, such as buying green products and sharing information about living a green life. It’s our duty to protect the planet, and we’re happy to be part of this important project. Best regards, Li Hua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；②时态：时态为一般现在时和现在完成时；③提示：根据所给提示内容介绍参与“美丽中国”建设的情况。注意不要遗漏要点。[写作步骤]第一步，说明自己和家人参与了“美丽中国”建设。第二步，介绍自己和家人都做了哪些工作。第三步，呼吁大家都参加到这个项目中去。[亮点词汇]①through reading or videos通过阅读或视频②try to do sth.尽力做某事③join in参加活动[高分句型]①It’s our duty to protect the planet (it作形式主语)②teach others how to protect the environment (疑问词+to do)