北京高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

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建议信1．假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国朋友 Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他们学校的国际文化周要开始了，他们班将要举办一次中国文化展。因此，他向你询求建议，请你给他回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 推荐展示的内容及形式；2. 陈述推荐理由。 注意：1.词数不少于 50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua2．假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国好友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他最近沉迷于使用电子设备，想做出改变但不知该怎么办，特来信向你寻求建议。请给他回邮件，内容包括：1.表示理解；2.提供合理使用电子设备的建议；3.祝愿他生活重回正轨。注意：要点1和3已给出，请结合上下文补充要点2。Dear Jim,I’m sorry to learn that you have been obsessed with using your digital devices lately. It’s surely natural for you to find the virtual world appealing. And don’t worry! I will fully support you in dealing with it._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope it will all work out. Cheer up! Let me know if I can help further.Yours,Li Hua3．假设你是高一学生李华。你读到英语报纸中“互动空间”版块上Lora的来信，请根据所给信件内容，给Lora写一封回信，提出建议。要点包括：1. 你的建议(至少两条)。2. 你的理由。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear editor,I’m a senior high school student, and I want to work part-time this summer. Í think it is good to do so, but my parents don’t agree with me. I just can’t understand them. I need your advice.LoraDear Lora, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua4．假如你是李华，你的好朋友李红前不久随父母去了美国读高中。她写信告诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活，感到很孤独，而且全英文上课和论文作业让她感觉压力很大。请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件。要点包括：1.安慰李红；2．给李红至少两个建议；3．祝福。注意事项：1．词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节；3．卷面整洁。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。新学期伊始，你的好朋友Jim在进入高中后，不进不太适应新生活，还经常生病，Jim感受到了很大的压力。请你给他写一封电子邮件，向他提一些建议，内容包括：1.表示理解2.你的建议（积极适应；强身健体）注意：1.词数：100词左右2.开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua6．假设你是红星高中学生李华，来自英国的交换生Tom周末想去旅游，让你推荐一个当地有特色的公园游玩，请你给他写一封电子邮件告诉他相关的旅行信息。内容包括：1.推荐的公园和基本信息；2.推荐理由；注意：词数不少于80；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；Dear Tom,How is everything going?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours Truly,Li Hua7．假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim来信，询问你如何在繁忙的学习中，保持良好的身体和精神状态（keep fit both physically and mentally）。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：1. 你的建议及理由；2. 表示祝愿。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua8．你的英国朋友Jim寒假要来北京旅行，来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1．你的建议；2．你的理由；3．你的祝愿。Dear Jim，__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua9．假设你是红星中学高一(1)班的学生李华，你的英国笔友Chris刚刚转学，感到一切都很陌生。他在邮件中向你询问如何尽快融入新环境。请你根据以下信息回信：1. 表示安慰；2. 提出解决问题的合理建议；3. 表示可以随时提供帮助。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Chris,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua10．假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。Jim是你校交换生，正居家上网课，邻居家的孩子在他房间外面打篮球，噪音严重影响Jim听课。他来信向你求助。请你给他写封回信，内容包括：1. 列举可能的解决方案；2. 建议对方尝试的方案及理由。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua            1．Dear Jim,It’s a great delight to hear that your class is going to promote Chinese Culture! Chinese culture is splendid with many unique elements, and I’m glad to recommend some of them to you.I think you can hold a small exhibition with both traditional and modern Chinese culture elements on display. For example, different Huawei phones and models of bullet trains can be shown on shelves, while a hands-on area can also be provided, where students can try to make their own paper cuts and dumplings. In this way, the advanced technology of modern China, together with its long-lasting traditional culture, can definitely attract students and meet different needs.Above are some of my ideas that I hope can be helpful. I wish this activity great success and please let me know how it goes!Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友 Jim 回复一封邮件，向他推荐中国文化展展示的内容及形式，并陈述推荐理由。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴：delight →pleasure极好的：splendid→ magnificent例如：for example→for instance同……一起：together with →along with2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Chinese culture is splendid with many unique elements, and I’m glad to recommend some of them to you.拓展句：Chinese culture is splendid with many unique elements, some of which I’m glad to recommend to you.【点睛】【高分句型1】For example, different Huawei phones and models of bullet trains can be shown on shelves, while a hands-on area can also be provided, where students can try to make their own paper cuts and dumplings.（运用了while引导状语从句和where引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Above are some of my ideas that I hope can be helpful.（运用了倒装句和that引导的限制性定语从句）2．Dear Jim,I’m sorry to learn that you have been obsessed with using your digital devices lately. It’s surely natural for you to find the virtual world appealing. And don’t worry! I will fully support you in dealing with it.First of all, start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music, or playing chess, etc., which will take your mind off your digital devices. Secondly, make more friends. Friends will help you when you can’t resist the temptation of your digital devices. Thirdly, do more sports. Sports can not only keep you healthy, but also enrich your life and help you forget your digital devices.I hope it will all work out. Cheer up! Let me know if I can help further.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友Jim回邮件，就如何合理使用电子设备提建议。【详解】1.词汇积累对……痴迷：be obsessed with→be crazy about最近：lately→recently健康的：healthy→fit转移注意力：take your mind off→distract your attention2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：It’s surely natural for you to find the virtual world appealing.拓展句：It’s surely natural that you find the virtual world appealing.【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music, or playing chess, etc., which will take your mind off your digital devices. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Friends will help you when you can’t resist the temptation of your digital devices.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）3．Dear Lora,As peers, I understand very well why you want to work part-time this summer. But your parents may think that learning is more important for you. Besides, personal safety may also be one of their major considerations. My advice for you is that you should make a detailed plan for your study and work. In addition, you should have a good talk with your parents, explaining to them the benefits you can get from your part-time work. What’s more, inviting your parents to visit your working conditions in advance can reduce their worry.I hope my suggestions will be useful to you.Yours,Li Hua【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给Lora写信，就她提到的问题给出建议，并说明理由。【详解】1.词汇积累理解，明白：understand→be aware of重要的：important→significant主要的：major→main参观：visit→pay a visit to2.句型拓展简单句变复合句原句：Besides, personal safety may also be one of their major considerations.拓展句：Besides, personal safety may also be one of the problems that they have to consider.【点睛】[高分句型1]As peers, I understand very well why you want to work part-time this summer.（运用了why引导的宾语从句）[高分句型2]My advice for you is that you should make a detailed plan for your study and work.（运用了that引导的表语从句）4．Dear Li Hong,I miss you so much. I am sorry to hear that you haven’t adapted to the life in the USA. You feel lonely and stressed because of all the courses taught in English and schoolwork finished in English. Be relaxed and you are not alone. I feel the same with you when I go to the new senior secondary school at the beginning of the new term.I would like to share my ways with you. Firstly, why not make some friends? They can help you know more about America, and friendship can help you forget your loneliness. What’s more, it would be a good idea if you take part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting. I believe by doing this, you will be happier with your new life soon. By the way, your English is so wonderful that you will adapt to the new school study soon.Well, I must go now. I’ve got to do my homework. I hope you have a happy and fruitful life there. Looking forward to your reply!Yours.Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你的好朋友李红前不久随父母去了美国读高中。她写信告诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活，感到很孤独，而且全英文上课和论文作业让她感觉压力很大。请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件。【详解】1.词汇积累适应：adapt to→adjust oneself to方法：way→method此外：What’s more→Besides参加：take part in→participate in2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Firstly, why not make some friends? They can help you know more about America, and friendship can help you forget your loneliness.拓展句：Firstly, make some friends because they can help you know more about America, and friendship can help you forget your loneliness.【点睛】[高分句型1] I am sorry to hear that you haven’t adapted to the life in the USA. (运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2] What’s more, it would be a good idea if you take part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)5．Dear Jim,Knowing that you have stress in your study, I am writing to give you some advice. As a senior high school student, none of us is having an easy time, but we still can do something to successfully get through the next three years.The most important thing you should do is to take good care of yourself. Whenever you feel tired or depressed, spare some time to have fun with your families and friends. As for study, it is essential to find out what needs to be done. Then make a schedule and set time for each subject. That will ensure you enough time to review.Anyway, don’t push yourself too hard. I hope you will make progress in your study.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于劝慰信。要求考生给英国笔友回信，就如何处理学习压力这一问题表示理解和关心，给对方提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累压力：stress→pressure建议：advice→suggestion照顾：take care of→look after重要的：essential→important2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Then make a schedule and set time for each subject. That will ensure you enough time to review.拓展句： Then make a schedule and set time for each subject, which will ensure you enough time to review.【高分句型1】Knowing that you have stress in your study, I am writing to give you some advice.(运用了现在分词作状语，that引导宾语从句，不定式作目的状语）【高分句型2】 Whenever you feel tired or depressed, spare some time to have fun with your families and friends.(运用了whenever引导时间状语从句）6．Dear Tom,How is everything going? Knowing that you feel like taking a trip at the weekend, I highly recommend Futuroscope Park as your destination. Futuroscope Park, a theme park known for science and technology, will surely provide you with a unique experience of the most advanced technology. You can try your own scientific experiment there. You can also learn more about space travel, the undersea world and brand new experiences of the earth. What’s more, the picturesque scenery there of this season must be a feast for your eyes.   Considering you will walk a lot, please wear comfortable sneakers. Wish you an enjoyable weekend!Yours truly,Li Hua【导语】这是一封建议信。要求考生以李华的口吻给来自英国的交换生Tom推荐周末可以去游玩的特色公园。【详解】1.词汇积累想要做某事：want to do→feel like doing推荐：suggest→recommend提供：offer→provide愉快的：happy→enjoyable2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：You can try your own scientific experiment there. You can also learn more about space travel, the undersea world and brand new experiences of the earth.拓展句：Not only can you try your own scientific experiment there but also learn more about space travel, the undersea world and brand new experiences of the earth.【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you feel like taking a trip at the weekend, I highly recommend Futuroscope Park as your destination. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2] Considering you will walk a lot, please wear comfortable sneakers. (运用了considering（that）引导的原因状语从句)7．Dear Jim,Knowing that you have trouble keeping fit both physically and mentally in your life, I am writing to give you some advice.As a high school student, none of us is having an easy time, but we still can do something to get through high school successfully. The most important thing is to take care of your body and your mind. Whenever you feel tired or depressed, spare some time to do some exercise with your family and friends. What’s more, making a schedule for your study and personal life is essential to our physical and mental health.Anyway, don’t push yourself too hard and I’m looking forward to hearing from you again!Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jim回复一封电子邮件，帮助Jim在繁忙的学习中保持良好的身体和精神状态，向他给出意见，并表达自己的祝愿。【详解】1.词汇积累做某事有困难：have trouble (in) doing sth.→ have difficulty (in) doing sth.重要的：important→ crucial/essential/significant照顾：take care of → look after另外：What’s more → In addition2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：The most important thing is to take care of your body and your mind.拓展句：The most important thing is that you should take care of your body and your mind.【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you have trouble keeping fit both physically and mentally in your life, I am writing to give you some advice. (运用了现在分词结构做状语和that引导的宾语从句)【高分句型2】Whenever you feel tired or depressed, spare some time to do some exercise with your family and friends. (运用了Whenever引导的时间状语从句)【高分句型3】What’s more, making a schedule for your study and personal life is essential to our physical and mental health. (运用了动名词结构做主语)8．Dear Jim,Hearing that you are coming to Beijing in the winter vacation, I am very glad to recommend some scenic spots in Beijing to make your visit worthwhile.For one thing, you can experience rich traditional Chinese culture in Beijing, which used to be the capital of Ming and Qing dynasties in ancient China. You can go to the Great Wall. You certainly know a saying that one who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero. For another, Beijing is also a moderm metropolis, hosting the 2008 olympic Games. I suggest you go to the water cube and the bird’s nest to have a look at the moderm stadiums. In addition to being familiar with these attractions on the Internet, you need to wear comfortable shoes before traveling.I believe that the trip, both interesting and rewarding, is bound to be a memorable experience for you. Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jim回信，对于Jim寒假要来北京旅行给出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的: glad→happy到达: reach→arrive at看一看: have a look at→take a look at建议: suggest→advise2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句: For another, Beijing is also a modern metropolis, hosting the 2008 Olympic Games.拓展句: For another, Beijing is also a modern metropolis, which hosted the 2008 Olympic Games.【点睛】[高分句型1]For one thing, you can experience rich traditional Chinese culture in Beijing, which used to be the capital of Ming and Qing Dynasties in ancient China.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]You certainly know a saying that one who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)9．Dear Chris,I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions may be helpful.First, I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible. Second, it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities, which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships. Lastly, faced with some tough problems, you might consider asking your teachers.I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you. If there is anything more I can do to help, please let me know.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“刚刚转学的英国笔友Chris不适应新学校，向你询问如何尽快融入新环境”一事回信，内容包括：1. 表示安慰；2. 提出解决问题的合理建议；3. 表示可以随时提供帮助。【详解】1.词汇积累有益的：helpful→beneficial首先：first→first of all参加：take part in→participate in困难的：tough→difficult2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Lastly, faced with some tough problems, you might consider asking your teachers.拓展句：Lastly, faced with some tough problems, you might consider asking your teachers, who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions.【点睛】【高分句型1】First, I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible. (运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句)【高分句型2】Second, it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities, which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)10．Dear Jim,I'm sorry to hear that you have trouble in taking Internet lessons. The neighbor's children are playing basketball outside your room. The noise seriously affects your attention. Don't worry. It's normal for us to have contradictions with each other. The key is to see how we solve them. Here is some advice for you.First of all, in the face of contradictions, you should be calm. Peace of mind can make you rational, which is beneficial to working out contradictions. Secondly, it is our parents who we can turn to for help. Finally, you need to be patient and stand in other people's shoes to think about the problem. By doing so, you can well understand each other.I hope these suggestions can be useful.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校交换生Jim回信，因他和邻居小孩产生矛盾而列举可能的解决方案并说出建议对方尝试方案的理由。【详解】词汇积累麻烦：trouble→ difficulty影响：affect →influence 对……有益：be beneficial to→ be of benefit to帮助某人：turn to sb for help→ ask sb for help2  句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：First of all, in the face of contradictions, you should be calm.拓展句：First of all, when you are in the face of contradictions, you should be calm.【点睛】【高分句型1】I'm sorry to hear that you have trouble in taking Internet lessons.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】 Peace of mind can make you rational, which is beneficial to working out contradictions. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）