04 建议信 --英语满分作文分类话题---应用文万能句型写作速成技能突破加模板与练习

  04  高中英语满分作文分类话题---万能句型写作速成技能突破加模板与练习

                   ——————建议信

【篇章结构】

      1. 问题陈述：根据信息点确定举行表达。

      2. 提出建议：使用多种句型，避免单一句型表达。

      3. 愿望或期望：写信的结尾套句。

【话题词汇】

1. beneficial  adj.有益的
2. advice  n. 建议;  ask sb. for advice 向某人征求意见 
3. beneficial adj. 有益的
4. suggest vt.建议 
5. make some suggestions提出一些建议 
6. view n.观点 
7. recommendation n.推荐；be highly recommended强烈建议
8. be addicted to 对……上瘾 
9. significant adj.有重大意义的 
10. propose v.建议 
11. give sb. some advice on给某人提关于……的建议 
12. concerning/regarding/as to/with regard to prep.关于 
13. express one's views on/concerning….表达某人对…… 
14. practical adj.实用的
15. prefer 更喜欢
16. personally就我个人而言
17. Chinese civilization 中华文明
18. learn a lot about了解许多关于…… 
19. moreover 此外,而且 
20. amazing 令人惊叹的 
21. well-known 著名的 
22. magnificent view壮丽的景观 
23. sightseeing spots 游览景点  
24. a better choice更好的选择 
25. have a good time 玩得愉快
26. take...into account/consideration 考虑……;
27. as w well as 也，和

【核心句型】

 一 凤头

1.  Having learnt that our library is planning to buy new books, I'm willing to recommend some books to you.

  得知我们图书馆准备买新书，我愿意向您推荐一些书。

2. Glad/Pleased/Delighted to know that you are traveling in Shanghai，I think it is a good choice to visit Huangpu River.

很高兴得知你在上海旅游，我认为参观黄浦江是个不错的选择。

3. I have learned that you have some trouble in... and would like to give/offer you the following suggestions.

我知道你在……方面有困难，因此我想给你提如下一些建议。

4.  When it comes to/As for..., the following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows.

当涉及/关于……，我的建议如下。

5.  I'm writing to give you some suggestions/give you a hand.

 我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。

6. I'm extremely delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life.

很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。

7. Here are my some suggestions.

  这有我的一些建议。

二 猪肚

1.  The reason why I recommend this book is that it emphasizes the importance of good habits.

我推荐这本书的原因是它强调好习惯的重要性。

2. It is a good way to broaden your mind, through which you can learn different cultures of the world.

这是一个很好的可以拓宽视野的方式。通过这种方式，你可以了解到世界上的不同文化。

3. First of all, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can after class.

首先，你应该认真听老师讲课。上课做好笔记，以便下课后可以及时复习。

4. I recommend it mainly for the following two reasons.

我推荐它主要有以下两个原因。

5. In my opinion/As far as I'm concerned/Personally, it would be wise to take the following action.

在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。

6. I think it would be of benefit/beneficial if you...

我认为如果……，将会受益。

7. Doing...is a good/great/better choice.

做……是一个好的/棒的/更好的选择。

8. It is also a good idea/also helps to do..., which can...

做……也不错，这能……

  三 豹尾

1. If you need further information, don't hesitate to contact me.

如果你需要更多信息，请联系我。 

2. I'll be more than happy if you can take my recommendation/ideas into consideration.

如果你能考虑我的建议/想法，我会非常高兴。

3.I hope that my suggestions/advice will be beneficial/of benefit to you.

我希望我的建议对你有益。 

4.I hope you will find my suggestions/advice helpful/useful/ practical/beneficial.

我希望你认为我的建议有帮助/有用/实用/有益的。

【话题词汇写一写】

1. 有益的______________
2. 建议n.___________; 向某人征求意见__________________ 
3. 有益的______________
4. 建议v.______________
5. 提出一些建议_________________ 
6. 观点________________ 
7. 推荐n.______________；强烈建议______________________
8. 对……上瘾_____________________ 
9. 有重大意义的________________________ 
10. 建议v.______________________ 
11. 给某人提出关于……的建议____________________________
12. 关于____________________________________________________ 
13. 表达某人对……____________________________________
14. 实用的___________________________________
15. 更喜欢___________________________________
16. 就我个人而言 ___________________________
17. 中华文明________________________________
18. 了解许多关于……_______________________ 
19. 此外,而且________________________________ 

21. 令人惊叹的______________________________ 
22. 著名的______________________________ 
23. 壮丽的景观 ______________________________
24. 游览景点 ______________________________ 
25. 更好的选择 ______________________________
26. 玩得愉快______________________________
27. 考虑……;______________________________
28. 也，和______________________________

【经典考题】

   假如你是李华。母亲节前夕,请你发表一篇约100词的班级公开信,提醒大家母亲节到了,并就如何庆祝母亲节给出你的建议。

注意:

1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 开头语和结束语已经给你写出。

Dear classmates,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

                                                                         Yours,

                                                                         Li Hua

【满分作文】

Dear classmates,

Have you realized Mother's Day is around the corner? And what ideas have you come up with to celebrate it?

In my view, how much you’ll spend for your mother does not matter; the essential issue is if it can convey our hearty love and gratitude to our mothers. So a bunch of flowers, a postcard or a hug is all acceptable in return for their devotion to us. But doing what they do for us every day, I think, is more significant in honor of them. Only in this way will we be overwhelmingly aware of how much mothers have given to us. I’ve made a plan to cook a meal for my mother that day, even though I never did it before.

My dear friends, have you kept a decision in place now?

                                                               Yours,

                                                               Li Hua

【习作点评】

1.   格式正确，语言流畅，用词准确，使用了不少高级句型和短语。

2.  必背句式：

  (1) around the corner即将到来

  (2) come with with提出

  (3) how much you’ll spend for your mother does not matter

   本句使用主语从句，谓语动词为高级词汇matter重要

(4)doing what they do for us every day, I think, is more significant in honor of them.

  做主语的动名词短语中包含what引导的宾语从句。

(5)  Only in this way will we be overwhelmingly aware of how much mothers have given to us.

  only用于句首时需要使用部分倒装。介词of后面用how引导的宾语从句。

【模板仿写】

Dear classmates,

Have you realized Mother's Day is ________________________________________即将到来? And what ideas have you_________________________________________  to celebrate it?

  In my view, how much you’ll spend for your mother _____________________________并不重要; the essential issue is if it can __________________________________表达我们衷心的爱和感激 to our mothers. So a bunch of flowers, a postcard or a hug is all acceptable _______________________________作为回报 their devotion to us. But doing what they do for us every day, I think, is more significant in honor of them. ___________________________________________只有这样will we be overwhelmingly aware of__________________________________母亲给了我们多少. I’ve made a plan to cook a meal for my mother that day, even though I never did it before.

My dear friends, _________________________________________你做好决定了吗?

                                                          Yours,

                                                          Li Hua          

【即时训练】　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

    假如你叫李华，你的英国朋友Andrew下个月要来你校学习两个月。他来信请你对他上学期间的交通方式提出建议。现在,请你用英语回一封信, 按以下各点注意:

1.建议骑自行车上学;

2.自行车是学生常用的交通工具;

3.骑自行车的一些好处;

4.骑自行车需注意的问题。

 注意:

1. 词数 100左右。

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Andrew,

__________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

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____________________________________________________________________________________________

                                                                        Yours sincerely,

                                                                         Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Andrew,

As for the question about the transportation to and from schoolId like to recommend your riding a bicycle. Here are some reasons.

Firstly, riding a bike to and from school is very common among the students,for buying or repairing a bicycle doesn’t cost a lot. Next, parking a bicycle is easy and convenient in our school.Actually/As a matter of fact,bicycle-riding is also a practical way to do exercise and protect the environment. What you should do carefully is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding and lock it after you’re off it.In this way,you’ll feel it simple and relaxing to ride a bicycle while you're here.

Hopefully,these tips could be helpful.

                                                    Yours sincerely,

                                                    Li Hua