06 道歉信 --英语满分作文分类话题---应用文万能句型写作速成技能突破加模板与练习

  06  高中英语满分作文分类话题---万能句型写作速成技能突破加模板与练习

                     —————道歉信

【篇章结构】

      1. 表明写作意图，对某事表示歉意

      2. 说明道歉的具体原因

      3. 再次表明歉意，请求谅解 并提出补救措施

【话题词汇】

      1. apologize  v.道歉 ， n. apology

      2. make an apology to sb. for sth. 因某事向某人道歉

      3. accept one's apology 接受某人的道歉

      4. trouble  n. 麻烦 

      5. forgive  v.原谅; forgiveness  n. 原谅 

      6. ask for one's forgiveness向某人寻求原谅

      7. sorry  adj. 抱歉的  

      8. regret  v. 后悔

      9. inconvenience  n. 不便 

      10. cause sb. inconvenience 给某人带来不便 

      11. cause  vt. 造成 

      12. embarrassed adj. 尴尬的 

      13. convey one's deepest apology to sb. 向某人表达深深 

      14. bother  v. 打扰 

      15. owe  v. 应该做;欠 

      16. misunderstanding  n. 误解 

      17. owe sb.an apology 应向某人道歉;

      18. put sb.into much trouble 给某人添了很多麻烦;

      19. be sorry for sth. 对某事表示歉意;

      20. express one's regret 表达某人的遗憾;

【核心句型】

 一 凤头

 1. I'm truly sorry to tell you that.…., and I’m writing to express/convey my deepest apology to you...

   很抱歉告诉你……，我写信向你表达我深深的歉意。

 2. I am writing to owe you an apology for being unable to...

   我没能……,我写信向你道歉。

 3. I am terribly sorry for what I did, but believe I didn't mean to...

   对于我做的事，我感到十分抱歉。但请你相信,我并非有意要……

 4. I apologize most sincerely for what I said that day. I didn't mean to hurt you.

   我诚挚地为那天我说的话向你道歉。我不是有意伤害你的。

 5. Please forgive me for not being able to inform you.

   请原谅我没能通知你。

 6. I owe you an apology for being unable to help you.

   我没能帮助你，应该向你道歉。

 7. I am indeed sorry for what I said, but believe I had no intention to...

   对于我说的话，我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信，我并非故意要......。

 8. Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.

   请原谅我说话欠妥。 

二 猪肚

1. I feel awfully sorry aboutit and I wonder if it's convenient for you to make it another time.

为此我感到非常抱歉，我想知道你是否方便另约时间。

2. Much to my regret, I was unable to.….and I wish that my apology could help to some extent.

很遗憾,我不能够……希望我的道歉在某种程度上能起到作用。

3. I’m afraid I have brought you too much trouble and I want you to know how regretful I am feeling.

恐怕我给你带来了太多麻烦，同时我也想让你知道对此我觉得很抱歉。

4. I just do not know what to say about the matter. 

关于这件事我不知该说些什么。

5. I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now.

我想让你知道现在我是多么遗憾。

6. I did not mean to hurt your feelings.

我不想伤害你的感情。

7. I feel you are displeased at my failing to keep my promise, but I hope you will forgive me.

恐怕你会因为我的失约而不高兴，但是希望你能原谅我。

  三 豹尾

   1.  Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused .

      对于造成的不便，我再次表示歉意。

   2.  I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apologies.

      我衷心希望你能理解我的处境,并接受我的道歉。

   3.  Please allow me to say sorry again

      请允许我再次表示歉意。

   4.  I'm sorry for all the inconvenience.

      我为引起的所有不便表示歉意。

   5.  Please accept my sincere apology once more for any inconvenience caused.

      对于任何带来的不便，请再次接受我真诚的道歉。

【话题词汇写一写】

 1. 道歉v.___________ ， n. ___________

 2. 因某事向某人道歉_______________________________

 3. 接受某人的道歉_________________________________

 4. 麻烦_______________ 

 5. 原谅v. ___________;  n._______________ 

 6. 向某人寻求原谅__________________________

 7. 抱歉的_________________  

 8. 后悔_______________

 9. 不便_______________

 10. 给某人带来不便______________________

 11. 造成______________________ 

 12. 尴尬的 ______________________

 13. 向某人表达深深______________________

 14. 打扰 ______________________

 15. 应该做;欠______________________

 16. 误解 ______________________

 17. 应向某人道歉;______________________

 18. 给某人添了很多麻烦;______________________

 19. 对某事表示歉意;______________________

 20. 表达某人的遗憾;______________________

【经典考题】

假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob 约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请他写封邮件，内容包括:

   1.表示歉意;

   2.说明原因;

   3.另约时间。

注意:

   1.词数100左右;

   2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Bob,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

                                                                          Yours,

                                                                          Li Hua

【满分作文】

 Dear Bob,

   I'm writing to express my sincere apologies to you for not going to the bookstore with you at our appointed time. I’m sorry for the inconvenience it may cause you.

   The reason why I won’t be available at that time is that my grandfather felt ill suddenly yesterday and now he is in hospital. My family are taking turns to take care of him in the hospital. So I have to stay with him that day. I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies. Meanwhile,I would appreciate it if you could allow me to fix another date. If it’s convenient for you, shall we meet at 8:00 am next Saturday? If not, please keep me informed in advance of what time suits you best.

   Sorry again for the inconvenience caused.                                 

                                                                                Yours,                                        

                                                                                Li Hua           

【习作点评】

    1.  格式正确，语言流畅，用词准确，使用了不少高级句型和短语。

2. 结构完整，开篇点题。所用语言非常委婉，表达出了诚意。所用句型不单一，长短句相结合。
3. 必背句式：

(1)      the inconvenience it may cause you.

(2)      The reason why I won’t be available at that time is that my grandfather feit ilI'll

本句主语为the reason为先行词，why引导定语从句，that引出名词性从句充当表语从句。

(3)      I would appreciate it if you could allow me to fix another...

(4)      本句使用it充当形式宾语，if引导真正的宾语从句，表示委婉的经典句型。

(5)      Sorry again for the inconvenience caused.句中caused为过去分词充当后置定语。

【模板仿写】

  Dear Bob,

   I'm writing to express my sincere apologies to you for ______________________________________ 未能去书店with you at our appointed time. I’m sorry for the inconvenience it may cause you.

   __________________________________________________________________________我届时会缺席的原因是因为my grandfather ________________________________________突然生病 yesterday and now he is in hospital. My family are taking turns to take care of him in the hospital. So I have to stay with him that day. ___________________________________________我真诚地希望 you can accept my apologies. Meanwhile, __________________________________________________我将感激不尽 if you could allow me to fix another date._____________________________________________________如果你方便的话, shall we meet at 8:00 am next Saturday? If not, please ___________________________________________________让我提前知道what time suits you best.

   Sorry again for the inconvenience ______________________________所引起的.                                 

                                                                                Yours,                                        

                                                                                Li Hua      r

【即时训练】　　　

　假如你是某校高三某班的李华。在一次课外打篮球时,因用力过猛撞倒了王飞,致使他大腿骨折。请你给他写一封信表示歉意,同时祝愿他早日康复,重返球场。

注意:

   1.词数100左右;

   2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

   3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear James,

   I am writing this letter to say sorry to you for my fault that got you injured.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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 Yours sincerely,

                                                                            Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear James,

   I am writing this letter to say sorry to you for my fault  that got you injured. It was more than I could expect the knock on you would have your leg broken when I tried to pass you on the basketball court. Although it happened accidentally, I do feel very terrible for this and blame myself. Anyway, it’s my roughness that

brought you so much hurt and trouble! How I wish I hadn’t rushed so quickly or knocked you down! I sincerely hope you will get better as soon as possible. If you forgive me and don’t mind enjoying playing basketball with me after your recovery,I will be happy.

   Please allow me to express my regret once again.

                                                                                     Yours,

                                                                                     Li Hua