山东省临沂市蒙阴县2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编：书面表达

山东省临沂市蒙阴县

2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编

书面表达

2023年山东省临沂市蒙阴县中考一模英语试题

七、书面表达（计15分）

同学们, 初中生活即将结束。这三年你一定收获满满。那么请你以“I have made great progress in the past three years. ”为题写一篇英文短文, 向大家介绍一下你在学习、生活、习惯等方面的进步。

注意：

1、可选取一个或多个方面写作。

2、字数不少于70词。

3、短文中不得出现任何与本人有关的真实人名、校名及其它相关信息, 否则不予评分。

I have made great progress in the past three years.

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2022年山东省临沂市蒙阴县中考一模英语试题

八、书面表达（计15分）

61．请以I Hope to Have a/an_______ 为题写一篇英文短文，描述你渴望拥有的一件东西。

提示要点：

1. What do you hope to have?

2. Why do you want to have it?

3. What can it be used to do?

要求：

1、先补全题目，如a book; a mountain bike或a pair of wings等。

2.、短文必须包含以上要点，并可适当发挥。不少于70词。

3、短文中,不得出现任何与考生本人有关的真实人名、校名及其它相关信息, 否则不予评分。

I Hope to Have a/an_______

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2021年山东省临沂市蒙阴县中考一模英语试题

九、书面表达(计15分)

49．时光飞逝，转眼之间你就要毕业了。初中三年，你在学习、生活等方面取得了很大的进步，这些成绩的背后有老师的教诲、家长的鼓励，同学的帮助，还有……。现在想来你一定很感谢他们。请选择一个人，根据要点提示和注意事项，写一篇英文日记，描述一下他或她。

要点提示：

1. What is he/she like?

2. What are his/her personalities?

3. What are his/her hobbies?

4. What makes you thank him/her so much?

注意事项：

1. 短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，并展开合理想象，做适当发挥；

2. 词数在70个左右；

3. 短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息，否则不与评分。

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答案：

2023年山东省临沂市蒙阴县中考一模英语试题

61．参考范文（一）:

I have made great progress in the past three years.

I used to be a shy girl who dare not exchange my ideas with my classmates, which is extremely bad for my study. After I entered the middle school, I made up my mind to become more outgoing. At first, it was tough for me to involve myself in the group discussion or to join in after-school activities. Luckily, with the encouragement from my friends, I managed to express my own thoughts and do some volunteering in my spare time. It seems that I am not that shy girl any more, which is definitely a great progress I have ever made.

Just as an old saying goes, a thousand-li journey begins with the first step. Where there is a will, there is a way.

参考范文（二）

I have made great progress in the past three years.

With the teacher’s help, I have made great progress in my English. Years ago when I began to learn English, I found it was difficult for me. Although I studied hard and spent lots of time on it, I couldn’t catch up with my classmates. My English teacher talked with me and gave a book on how to learn English. After that she often helped with my English after school. Now I am good at English and become one of the top students in my class. I also make great progress in how to get on well with others. I have made lots of friends.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇话题作文，围绕“过去三年取得的进步”展开；

②时态：一般过去时为主；

③提示：写作要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当补充发挥，注意语句的通顺；使用正确的词汇和句型，使得行文连贯，逻辑畅通。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写作意图，以“在中学生活取得重大进步”开头引出下文；

第二步，可选取人际交往方面的进步为例，展开描述自己的具体进步，注意时态应以一般过去时为主，也可适当补充自己在生活等当面的进步；

第三步，结尾从进步中感悟道理并总结文章，升华主题。

[亮点词汇]

①used to be曾经是

②be bad for对……有坏处

③manage to do sth成功做某事

④in my spare time在我的空闲时间

[高分句型]

①Where there is a will, there is a way.（谚语“有志者，事竟成”）

②It seems that I am not that shy girl any more, which is definitely a great progress I have ever made.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）

2022年山东省临沂市蒙阴县中考一模英语试题

61．参考范文

I Hope To Have an English-Chinese Dictionary

My birthday is coming, it’s on December 2nd. I’m looking forward to an English-Chinese dictionary because I’m not good at English, and I want to improve it. If I own a dictionary, I can usually look up the new words in it. I think I can get the dictionary from my parents, because they have promised me to give me a dictionary as my birthday gift. I can’t wait!

【详解】

1. 题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求以“I Hope to Have a/an_______ ”为题写一篇文章，文章内容要包括你想要什么以及想要它的原因，并且阐述它能用来做什么。

2. 写作指导：本文应该首先把标题补充完整，主要以第一人称展开叙述，时态以一般现在时为主。文章内容要包括要点提示内的三项内容，不要遗漏要点。写作时注意语言的准确性，不要有拼写和语法错误。

2021年山东省临沂市蒙阴县中考一模英语试题

49．范文：

May 7, 2021 Friday Sunny

Today, I would like to say “thank you” to my English teacher. He's a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us after school. He's humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. He's kind but strict with us. He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don't know. He often tells us that it's no use memorizing new words without understanding. My English has greatly improved with his help. I think he is the best in my mind. I will remember him forever.

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按日记格式写。在写作时要根据汉语提示的内容，写出想感谢的人是谁，并且写出被感谢的人的外貌、个性、爱好以及感谢的原因。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称为主来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在写作时，力求格式正确，语句通顺，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。