天津市西青区2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编：书面表达+

天津市西青区

2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编

书面表达

2023年天津市西青区中考一模英语试题

九、书面表达（本大题共15分）

假设你是红光中学的李华, 你要给英国笔友Tom回信, 介绍今年元宵节期间勤工俭学的经历, 请根据以下提示信息完成：

1. 今年的元宵节非常热闹, 很多人出来赏灯；

2. 我想和同学们一起利用这个时机赚点儿钱；3. 爸爸妈妈非常支持我的想法；

4. 我们自己动手制作了很多灯笼, 还从网上挑选了一些, 在景区售卖；

5. 虽然赚钱不多, 但是我们得到了锻炼；

6. 我认为……

注意：①. 词数：80-100词, 短文的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数；

②. `短文需包括表中所有要点, 内容可适当发挥, 以使行文连贯；

参考词汇：灯笼lantern 景区 scenic area 锻炼 practice

Dear Tom,

I'm happy to hear from you. Let me tell you some experience during the Lantern Festival.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,

Li Hua

2022年天津市西青区中考一模英语试题

九、书面表达（本大题共15分）

86. 假设你是红光中学的李明，你听说你的好朋友Tony最近感到疲倦，对此你非常难过。请根据以下提示给Tony提一些建议。

1. 首先早晨吃早餐对你来说非常重要；

2. 每天花费半小时锻炼身体，如跑步，做操……

3. 早睡早起保证充足的睡眠；

4. 放松心情多听音乐等；

5. ……

注意：

①词数：80~100词，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

②短文需包括以上所有要点，内容可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tony,

I’m sorry to hear you always feel tired recently. Let me give you some advice.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Ming

2021年天津市西青区中考一模英语试题

九、书面表达（本大题共15分）

外教David想选择一位同学做助理（assistant）, 假如你是Lucy很想做David的助理。 请根据以下要点写一封自荐信申请这一工作。

1. 英语很好, 可以和外教流畅地交流；

2. 工作努力, 认真对待每一件事；

3. 主动帮助老师, 会用正确的方式解决问题；

4. 与同学关系融洽, 乐于助人。

5. 我相信 

注意：

①. 词数：80-100词, 短文的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数；

②. 短文需包括表中所有要点, 内容可适当发挥, 以使行文连贯；

③. 参考词汇： 申请apply for

Dear David,

I hear that you are looking for an assistant,  __________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best regards,

Lucy

答案：

2023年天津市西青区中考一模英语试题

Dear Tom,

I’m happy to hear from you. Let me tell you some experience during the Lantern Festival.

This year’s Lantern Festival is really busy. In the evening, people came out to enjoy the lanterns and visited their friends. I think it’s a good chance to make money with my classmates. To my surprise, my parents lent us some money when they heard about it. With the support of my parents, we made many lanterns by ourselves, and we also bought some online. Then we decided to sell them in scenic areas. The lanterns were so popular with children that we sold them all in several hours. Although we didn’t make much money, we are quite excited about the experience and practice we have got.

Thanks to this experience, I truly realized there are a lot of things that I need to learn about in the social life. Therefore, I will take part in more activities to get ready for the future life.

Yours，

Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”;

③提示：写作开头以及要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。[写作步骤]

第一步，开门见山，表达写作目的——介绍自己在元宵节的经历；

第二步，具体介绍自己的勤工俭学的经历；

第三步，书写结尾，介绍自己在这次勤工俭学中的收获。[亮点词汇]

①come out外出②a lot of大量的，许多的[高分句型]

①Although we didn't make much money, we gained practice. (Although引导的让步状语从句)②I think I can learn a lot of knowledge from it. (宾语从句)

2022年天津市西青区中考一模英语试题

【答案】例文

Dear Tony,

I’m sorry to hear you always feel tired recently. Let me give you some advice.

First of all, it’s very important for you to have breakfast in the morning. Secondly, try spending half an hour exercising, such as running, doing exercise and so on, which are good for your health. At the same time, as the proverb says, “Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.’’ so you’d better go to sleep before ten at night to make sure you can have enough energy. Finally, you should listen to the music to relax yourself.

I hope the above suggestions can do good to you. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已部分给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的信息，适当增加细节。

[写作步骤]

第一步，对Tony的近况表示难过并表明自己要给出建议；

第二步，逐条给出内容提示中的建议；

第三步，期望自己的建议能够帮助到Tony并期待回信。

[亮点词汇]

①such as例如

②be good for对……有好处

[高分句型]

①First of all, it’s very important for you to have breakfast in the morning.（it的固定句型，It is+adj+for sb+to do sth“对于某人来说做某事是怎么样的”）

②Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.（早睡早起身体好）

③I hope the above suggestions can do good to you.（省略that的宾语从句

2021年天津市西青区中考一模英语试题

86．例文：

Dear David,

I hear that you are looking for an assistant. I’d like to apply for the job.

Firstly, I’m good at English, especially spoken English, so I can communicate with you without any difficulties. Secondly, I work very hard, and when I do my work, I’m careful all the time. Besides, I always offer to help teachers and try to solve problems in the right way. Last but not least, I get on well with my classmates because I enjoy helping others a lot. It could be really helpful to you as well.

In short, I believe I’m the right person you are looking for and I promise I will do the work quite well if you choose me as your assistant.

Best regards,

Lucy

【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据所给信息写自荐信，申请做外教助理。要包含所有要点，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头和结尾衔接自然，使用第一人称来写自荐信，时态主要用一般现在时。要在包含所有要点的基础上，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。